| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the voice called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.688 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.045 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 82.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsms | 49 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "raced" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "electric" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "depths" | | 18 | "oppressive" | | 19 | "racing" | | 20 | "sense of" | | 21 | "pounding" | | 22 | "chill" | | 23 | "sinister" | | 24 | "cacophony" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "glinting" | | 27 | "tension" | | 28 | "beacon" | | 29 | "determined" | | 30 | "looming" | | 31 | "foreboding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 97.26% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1132 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1011 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat" | | 1 | "limbs that seemed to stretch and bend unnaturally" | | 2 | "as if sensing her unease" | | 3 | "as if trying to confuse her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 19.86 | | std | 12.78 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "She could almost hear it—an echo of laughter, a distant melody that tugged at her mind." | | 1 | "The stories Eva had told her about this place echoed in her mind—whispers of magic, of things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1014 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.029585798816568046 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007889546351084813 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 10.88 | | std | 4.76 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.27884615384615385 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the whisper of leaves," | | 1 | "Just the rustling leaves and" | | 2 | "Just the shadows playing tricks." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 39.35% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here seeking" | | 1 | "She paused, scanning the clearing." | | 2 | "she muttered, though the words" | | 3 | "She turned, but nothing emerged." | | 4 | "She took a deep breath," | | 5 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 6 | "she whispered, half to herself," | | 7 | "She could almost hear it—an" | | 8 | "It was beautiful, yet it" | | 9 | "she called, her voice breaking" | | 10 | "She had to find the" | | 11 | "She turned sharply, but again," | | 12 | "she scolded herself, shaking her" | | 13 | "She could feel it in" | | 14 | "she murmured, glancing over her" | | 15 | "she called, her voice steadier" | | 16 | "She took a step back," | | 17 | "She had come here for" | | 18 | "She clutched it tightly, feeling" | | 19 | "she demanded, her voice stronger" |
| | ratio | 0.452 | |
| 3.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped into The Fae" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She had come here seeking" | | 3 | "The moon hung low, casting" | | 4 | "Each step felt heavy, as" | | 5 | "She paused, scanning the clearing." | | 6 | "Shadows danced at the edges" | | 7 | "she muttered, though the words" | | 8 | "A rustle came from the" | | 9 | "Aurora’s heart raced." | | 10 | "She turned, but nothing emerged." | | 11 | "She took a deep breath," | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 13 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 14 | "The glow intensified, casting a" | | 15 | "she whispered, half to herself," | | 16 | "The grove felt alive, breathing" | | 17 | "She could almost hear it—an" | | 18 | "It was beautiful, yet it" | | 19 | "she called, her voice breaking" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her…" | | 1 | "The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness." | | 2 | "Each step felt heavy, as if the ground beneath her was reluctant to let her pass." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed against her thigh, a gentle thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat." | | 4 | "The glow intensified, casting a soft crimson light that illuminated the grove in an eerie hue." | | 5 | "The stories Eva had told her about this place echoed in her mind—whispers of magic, of things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality." | | 6 | "The growl came again, closer this time, a warning that sent her heart racing." | | 7 | "It was tall, slender, with elongated limbs that seemed to stretch and bend unnaturally." | | 8 | "She took a step back, the pendant’s glow flickering as if sensing her unease." | | 9 | "Aurora turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground, the wildflowers brushing against her legs like fingers trying to hold her back." | | 10 | "She stumbled, the pendant swinging wildly at her side, its glow flickering like a dying star." | | 11 | "The figure reappeared, its form shifting and swirling like smoke." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, though the words felt hollow" | | 1 | "she whispered, half to herself, half to the shadows" | | 2 | "she called, her voice breaking the silence" | | 3 | "she called, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 4 | "she demanded, her voice stronger now" | | 5 | "she asked, her heart pounding" | | 6 | "it beckoned, its form flickering like a flame" | | 7 | "she replied, her voice trembling" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 9 | "it said, the smile widening" | | 10 | "she shouted, but the words felt weak against the encroaching darkness" | | 11 | "she screamed, the grove closing in around her" | | 12 | "she shouted, desperation creeping into her voice" | | 13 | "she demanded, her voice steadying" | | 14 | "it replied, its eyes glinting like shards of glass" | | 15 | "she declared, her voice firm" | | 16 | "it called, the voice echoing in the night" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she scolded (scold)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 5 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 7 | "she screamed (scream)" | | 8 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 9 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 10 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 11 | "she declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.656 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |