Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNXA87P85JRJS79S7MBQ3

Run Details

Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.001075

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, the air thick with an unsettling stillness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting against the night sky. She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness. Each step felt heavy, as if the ground beneath her was reluctant to let her pass. She paused, scanning the clearing. Shadows danced at the edges of her vision, flickering like candle flames. “Just the wind,” she muttered, though the words felt hollow. A rustle came from the underbrush, sharp and sudden. Aurora’s heart raced. She turned, but nothing emerged. Just the whisper of leaves, the distant croak of a frog. She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. “Focus, Rory. You’re here for a reason.” The pendant pulsed against her thigh, a gentle thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat. She reached for it, fingers brushing the cool silver chain. The glow intensified, casting a soft crimson light that illuminated the grove in an eerie hue. “Why did I think this was a good idea?” she whispered, half to herself, half to the shadows. The grove felt alive, breathing around her. She could almost hear it—an echo of laughter, a distant melody that tugged at her mind. It was beautiful, yet it sent a shiver down her spine. “Hello?” she called, her voice breaking the silence. No response. Just the rustling leaves and the distant sound of water trickling somewhere beyond the trees. Aurora stepped deeper into the grove, the pendant’s glow guiding her path. She had to find the source of the disturbance, the reason she felt so out of place. The stories Eva had told her about this place echoed in her mind—whispers of magic, of things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality. A flicker of movement caught her eye. She turned sharply, but again, nothing. Just the shadows playing tricks. “Get a grip,” she scolded herself, shaking her head. But the wrongness lingered, a weight pressing down on her chest. She could feel it in the air, thick and electric. The grove seemed to pulse with a life of its own, the wildflowers swaying as if in response to an unseen force. “Maybe I should go back,” she murmured, glancing over her shoulder. The path she had taken felt distant, swallowed by the darkness. A low growl rumbled from the depths of the grove, deep and resonant. Aurora froze, her breath hitching in her throat. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice steadier than she felt. Silence answered her, heavy and oppressive. The growl came again, closer this time, a warning that sent her heart racing. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to flee. But something held her in place, a curiosity mingled with fear. She had come here for answers, and she wouldn’t leave empty-handed. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth spreading through her fingers. She clutched it tightly, feeling its power surge. “Show yourself!” she demanded, her voice stronger now. The shadows shifted, coalescing into a shape that hovered just beyond the trees. Aurora squinted, trying to make sense of the figure. It was tall, slender, with elongated limbs that seemed to stretch and bend unnaturally. “Rory,” it whispered, the voice a haunting melody that echoed through the grove. “Who are you?” she asked, her heart pounding. “Come closer,” it beckoned, its form flickering like a flame. “No.” The figure tilted its head, a smile forming on its lips, sharp and predatory. “You seek the truth, don’t you?” “I seek answers,” she replied, her voice trembling. “Answers come at a price.” The air thickened, the shadows closing in around her. Aurora felt the weight of unseen eyes watching, waiting. “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Your heart,” it said, the smile widening. “Or perhaps your fear.” A chill ran down her spine. She took a step back, the pendant’s glow flickering as if sensing her unease. “Leave me alone!” she shouted, but the words felt weak against the encroaching darkness. The figure laughed, a sound that echoed through the grove, twisting into something sinister. “You cannot escape what you seek, Aurora Carter.” The shadows surged forward, tendrils reaching for her. Aurora turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground, the wildflowers brushing against her legs like fingers trying to hold her back. “Get away from me!” she screamed, the grove closing in around her. The growl returned, louder now, a chorus of voices rising in a cacophony of sound. She stumbled, the pendant swinging wildly at her side, its glow flickering like a dying star. “Rory!” the voice called again, echoing through the trees. She skidded to a halt, breathless, heart racing. The grove felt alive, the trees whispering secrets she couldn’t understand. “Show yourself!” she shouted, desperation creeping into her voice. The figure reappeared, its form shifting and swirling like smoke. “You cannot hide from the truth.” Aurora’s mind raced. She had to find a way out, a way to break free from this nightmare. “Why are you doing this?” she demanded, her voice steadying. “Because you are drawn to the darkness,” it replied, its eyes glinting like shards of glass. “You cannot resist.” The shadows pressed closer, the air thick with tension. Aurora felt the weight of their gaze, the pull of the grove wrapping around her like a shroud. “No!” she shouted, clutching the pendant tightly. The warmth surged through her, a beacon against the encroaching darkness. She took a deep breath, grounding herself. “I won’t let you take me,” she declared, her voice firm. The figure recoiled, the shadows retreating momentarily. “You think you can resist?” “I know I can.” With that, she turned and ran, the pendant glowing brighter with each step. The grove twisted around her, the path shifting as if trying to confuse her. But she focused on the light, the warmth guiding her through the darkness. The growls faded into the distance, replaced by the sound of her own heartbeat. She pushed forward, determined to escape the clutches of the grove. The trees parted, revealing the edge of the clearing. Aurora burst through, gasping for breath, the moonlight flooding over her like a lifeline. She turned back, the grove looming behind her, dark and foreboding. The figure stood at the edge, its smile still sharp, its eyes glinting with a promise of what lay within. “Come back, Rory,” it called, the voice echoing in the night. But she shook her head, heart pounding, and stepped away, leaving the darkness behind.
total_cost0.0010753499999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice called again [again]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.688
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
82.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"tightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms49
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"raced"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count2
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"echoed"
count3
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"weight"
count3
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"depths"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"racing"
count2
20
word"sense of"
count1
21
word"pounding"
count3
22
word"chill"
count1
23
word"sinister"
count1
24
word"cacophony"
count1
25
word"echoing"
count2
26
word"glinting"
count2
27
word"tension"
count1
28
word"beacon"
count1
29
word"determined"
count1
30
word"looming"
count1
31
word"foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"raced"
6"whisper"
7"pulsed"
8"echo"
9"down her spine"
10"silence"
11"echoed"
12"flicker"
13"weight"
14"could feel"
15"electric"
16"pulse"
17"depths"
18"oppressive"
19"racing"
20"sense of"
21"pounding"
22"chill"
23"sinister"
24"cacophony"
25"echoing"
26"glinting"
27"tension"
28"beacon"
29"determined"
30"looming"
31"foreboding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"d with fear"
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1011
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Eva1
Silence1
Aurora10
persons
0"Grove"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Silence"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat"
1"limbs that seemed to stretch and bend unnaturally"
2"as if sensing her unease"
3"as if trying to confuse her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1132
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean19.86
std12.78
cv0.643
sampleLengths
057
150
210
337
47
542
618
734
88
917
1054
1118
129
1343
1422
1521
1610
1732
1822
1918
208
2136
2213
238
2410
251
2620
278
285
2918
3012
3111
3220
3314
3422
3531
3612
3731
389
3919
409
4116
4218
4310
4419
4527
467
4718
4811
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences104
ratio0.019
matches
0"She could almost hear it—an echo of laughter, a distant melody that tugged at her mind."
1"The stories Eva had told her about this place echoed in her mind—whispers of magic, of things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.029585798816568046
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007889546351084813
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.88
std4.76
cv0.438
sampleLengths
013
116
228
317
416
55
612
710
89
93
105
1111
129
137
1416
1510
1616
1718
187
1916
2011
218
222
2315
2412
2517
2625
277
286
295
309
3111
3210
3322
3411
3511
3613
378
3810
396
4014
4112
4211
4311
4410
458
468
4713
489
4914
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.27884615384615385
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Just the whisper of leaves,"
1"Just the rustling leaves and"
2"Just the shadows playing tricks."
ratio0.032
39.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences93
matches
0"She had come here seeking"
1"She paused, scanning the clearing."
2"she muttered, though the words"
3"She turned, but nothing emerged."
4"She took a deep breath,"
5"She reached for it, fingers"
6"she whispered, half to herself,"
7"She could almost hear it—an"
8"It was beautiful, yet it"
9"she called, her voice breaking"
10"She had to find the"
11"She turned sharply, but again,"
12"she scolded herself, shaking her"
13"She could feel it in"
14"she murmured, glancing over her"
15"she called, her voice steadier"
16"She took a step back,"
17"She had come here for"
18"She clutched it tightly, feeling"
19"she demanded, her voice stronger"
ratio0.452
3.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences93
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come here seeking"
3"The moon hung low, casting"
4"Each step felt heavy, as"
5"She paused, scanning the clearing."
6"Shadows danced at the edges"
7"she muttered, though the words"
8"A rustle came from the"
9"Aurora’s heart raced."
10"She turned, but nothing emerged."
11"She took a deep breath,"
12"The pendant pulsed against her"
13"She reached for it, fingers"
14"The glow intensified, casting a"
15"she whispered, half to herself,"
16"The grove felt alive, breathing"
17"She could almost hear it—an"
18"It was beautiful, yet it"
19"she called, her voice breaking"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her…"
1"The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness."
2"Each step felt heavy, as if the ground beneath her was reluctant to let her pass."
3"The pendant pulsed against her thigh, a gentle thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat."
4"The glow intensified, casting a soft crimson light that illuminated the grove in an eerie hue."
5"The stories Eva had told her about this place echoed in her mind—whispers of magic, of things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality."
6"The growl came again, closer this time, a warning that sent her heart racing."
7"It was tall, slender, with elongated limbs that seemed to stretch and bend unnaturally."
8"She took a step back, the pendant’s glow flickering as if sensing her unease."
9"Aurora turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground, the wildflowers brushing against her legs like fingers trying to hold her back."
10"She stumbled, the pendant swinging wildly at her side, its glow flickering like a dying star."
11"The figure reappeared, its form shifting and swirling like smoke."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"she muttered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she whispered, half to herself, half to the shadows"
2"she called, her voice breaking the silence"
3"she called, her voice steadier than she felt"
4"she demanded, her voice stronger now"
5"she asked, her heart pounding"
6"it beckoned, its form flickering like a flame"
7"she replied, her voice trembling"
8"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"it said, the smile widening"
10"she shouted, but the words felt weak against the encroaching darkness"
11"she screamed, the grove closing in around her"
12"she shouted, desperation creeping into her voice"
13"she demanded, her voice steadying"
14"it replied, its eyes glinting like shards of glass"
15"she declared, her voice firm"
16"it called, the voice echoing in the night"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she scolded (scold)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
5"it whispered (whisper)"
6"she shouted (shout)"
7"she screamed (scream)"
8"she shouted (shout)"
9"she demanded (demand)"
10"she shouted (shout)"
11"she declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.656
leniency1
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.571
72.9813%