Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNXETG57M61FCNKBHGSQA

Run Details

Duration:
5m 22s
Cost:
$0.000816
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking. She arrived at Richmond Park, following the clairvoyant's cryptic directions to the letter. The ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary of the hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. She knew she was not alone, but something about the place felt off from the moment she set foot in it. The landscape was eerily quiet, save for the rustling of leaves in the wind. The air was thick and heavy against Rory's lungs, making it difficult to breathe. Despite the full moon casting an otherworldly glow over the grove, shadows clung to her back like a second skin. Every step deeper into the clearing seemed to drag on longer than the last, as if time itself had begun to slow - a common phenomenon, she had been warned, for those who ventured near the Fae realm. Rory gripped the Heartstone pendant tightly, feeling its slight warmth pulsating against her palm. This mysterious emblem was the key to locating the portal she sought, a faint inner glow lighting her path through uncharted territory. The Heartstone's crimson hue danced eerily across the flora beneath her feet - wildflowers blooming out of season in defiance of nature's laws. A twig snapped in the distance, smashing the silence with alarming clarity. Rory froze mid-stride, heart pounding in her ears, scanning the shadows for any signs of movement. "Hello?" she called out cautiously, wincing at the sound of her voice slicing through the stillness. Only the wind replied, a low mournful moan that sent shivers down her spine. She pressed forward, pulse quickening with each step. Ahead, the grove thinned, replaced by gnarled roots and moss-covered stones - a potential barrier keeping her from her goal. Rory pushed through the underbrush, wincing every time a branch snapped beneath her boots. Leaves crunched ominously underfoot, the sound echoing in the oppressive quiet of the clearing. Another noise cut through the night, this time a scraping sound - something sharp dragging across stone. Rory swung around, scanning the shadows for the source. There, just visible through the trees - a silhouette, tall and lanky with elongated limbs, hunched over an arcane symbol carved crudely into the bark of an ancient oak. A twig snapped under Rory's foot, and the figure bolted upright with alarming speed. In a flash of movement, it disappeared into the thicket. Rory stood rooted to the spot, breath hitching in her throat. She was not alone. That much was clear. But who, or what, was sharing this liminal space with her? She took a tentative step back, and another, even as every instinct screamed at her to run. The feeling of being watched crawled over her skin, unpleasant and unshakable. Rory swallowed hard, fingers closing tighter around the Heartstone pendant. Those runes etched into the tree glowed with an inner fire, tugging at the edges of her consciousness like a half-forgotten dream. They whispered promises of knowledge, of secrets untold - if only she dared to uncover them. A sudden gust of wind sent leaves swirling around her, a vortex of rustling green that obscured her vision. Rory blinked, disoriented, scanning her surroundings for any landmark to prove she hadn't lost her way. But the standing stones were gone, vanished as if they'd never existed at all. The Heartstone pulsed frantically, its warm glow bleeding into the icy chill of her sweat-slicked hands. Rory gritted her teeth, fighting the rising tide of panic threatening to overwhelm her. TheLongitudeMotionSickness had set in now, an unrelenting sense of <wrongness> that distorted every familiar compass point. She knew she should turn back - every fiber of her being screamed at her to run, to flee while she still could. But something held her fast, some curious compulsion born of the same magic that had drawn her to this place, to the nexus of worlds. Rory shook her head, trying to clear the fog that clouded her thoughts. This was no time for hesitation - not with unseen eyes boring into the back of her skull. She squared her shoulders, willing herself to focus on the task at hand. The way forward was unclear, shrouded in the same otherworldly mist that obscured the grove itself. But the Heartstone pendant offered a flickering trail, a whispering path through the twisted boughs and gnarled roots snaking across the forest floor. The ground shifted beneath her feet, soil crumbling away into nothingness. Rory threw herself forward, catching hold of a low-hanging vine just as the dirt gave way beneath her. She swung herself up, panting, desperately seeking solid ground. The wind lashed her face, blotting out the glow of the moon and leaving her in utter darkness. Panic surged, white-hot and blinding. Every horror story she'd ever heard about those who ventured too close to the Fae realm raced through her mind, each more gruesome than the last. Hands trembling, Rory reached for the pendant, drawing comfort from its reassuring weight against her chest. She had no choice but to press on. With every step, the air thickened, pressing in with a heaviness that told her time itself was distorting around her. No longer was she alone in the forest - now she stood on the precipice of unfathomable worlds, endless possibilities branching out before her like paths of fate yet unwoven. Through the suffocating fog, a dim light pierced the darkness. Rory stumbled towards it, drawn by some deep-seated instinct. Her feet found purchase on damp soil, and she collapsed to her knees, gasping for breath that wouldn't come. Rough hands grasped her shoulders, hauling her upright. She squinted into the shadowed face of her savior, searching for any hint of recognition. But it was not to be. The figure - a woman, grey-streaked and weathered - shook her head, pushing Rory back towards the treeline. "You cannot stay," she rasped, her voice barely audible over the howling gales. "This is not a place for mortals." Rory staggered back, still groggy from her ordeal. The woman's grip tightened, fingers biting into the soft flesh of her arms with bruising force. "Listen carefully," the woman hissed, urgency etched into every line of her ancient face. "Draw too close to their realm, and you risk losing more than just yourself." Her gaze drifted to the pendant nestled in Rory's collarbone, eyes narrowing like a hawk sighting its prey. "That trinket may have brought you here, but it cannot protect you once you cross that line. Mortals are playthings to them - pretty baubles, easily broken and cast aside when their novelty fades." Rory shivered, chilled by the woman's dire warning. But some deep-rooted need thrummed beneath her skin, an unspoken call she couldn't ignore. "I have to find the portal," she whispered, cheeks flushed with desperate yearning. "Please, help me." The woman sighed heavily, a sound weighed down by centuries of sorrow. She turned, gesturing for Rory to follow deeper into the trees. "I will show you," she murmured, voice thick with regret. "But heed me, child. Once you step into that realm, there is no coming back unchanged." Rory swallowed hard, nodding her understanding. The woman led her through dense undergrowth, gnarled branches clawing at her face like eager skeletal fingers. They stopped before a wall of stone, vines strangling every crevice. Rune-markings glowed faintly in the dim light - an elaborate trap sealing off the space between worlds. "I give you one last chance to turn back," the woman said softly, eyes glimmering with unshed tears. "For your safety, and the safety of all those who hold you dear. If you cross this threshold..." She trailed off, shaking her head. Rory reached out, laying a hand on the cold stone. It thrummed against her fingertips, power coursing through ancient conduits buried deep within the rock. The portal pulled at her, singing a seductive siren song of knowledge and secrets untold. Rory's breath hitched in her throat. She met the woman's gaze one last time, pleading silently for understanding. Then, with a whispered prayer for courage, Aurora Carter stepped through the portal and into the waiting arms of the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the woman said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
85.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1373
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"cautiously"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1373
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count3
5
word"sent shivers down"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"etched"
count2
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"chilled"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
19
word"yearning"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"pounding"
4"scanning"
5"sent shivers down"
6"pulse"
7"potential"
8"echoing"
9"oppressive"
10"etched"
11"pulsed"
12"chill"
13"sense of"
14"familiar"
15"raced"
16"weight"
17"chilled"
18"unspoken"
19"yearning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"k with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
95.95% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0.011
matches
0"TheLongitudeMotionSickness had set in now, an unrelenting sense of <wrongness> that distorted every familiar compass point."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1375
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1258
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Rory23
Richmond1
Park1
Earth1
Fae3
Heartstone5
Aurora2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.586
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
54.55% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.455
wordCount1375
matches
0"not alone, but something about the place felt off from the moment she set f"
1"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
25.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean57.29
std13.65
cv0.238
sampleLengths
075
186
259
358
456
555
654
777
879
964
1083
1156
1247
1358
1461
1544
1652
1752
1838
1949
2051
2136
2246
2339
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"been warned"
1"were gone"
2"being screamed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was sharing"
1"was distorting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences92
ratio0.12
matches
0"Every step deeper into the clearing seemed to drag on longer than the last, as if time itself had begun to slow - a common phenomenon, she had been warned, for those who ventured near the Fae realm."
1"The Heartstone's crimson hue danced eerily across the flora beneath her feet - wildflowers blooming out of season in defiance of nature's laws."
2"Ahead, the grove thinned, replaced by gnarled roots and moss-covered stones - a potential barrier keeping her from her goal."
3"Another noise cut through the night, this time a scraping sound - something sharp dragging across stone."
4"There, just visible through the trees - a silhouette, tall and lanky with elongated limbs, hunched over an arcane symbol carved crudely into the bark of an ancient oak."
5"They whispered promises of knowledge, of secrets untold - if only she dared to uncover them."
6"She knew she should turn back - every fiber of her being screamed at her to run, to flee while she still could."
7"This was no time for hesitation - not with unseen eyes boring into the back of her skull."
8"No longer was she alone in the forest - now she stood on the precipice of unfathomable worlds, endless possibilities branching out before her like paths of fate yet unwoven."
9"The figure - a woman, grey-streaked and weathered - shook her head, pushing Rory back towards the treeline."
10"Rune-markings glowed faintly in the dim light - an elaborate trap sealing off the space between worlds."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1257
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02784407319013524
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013524264120922832
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean14.95
std6.31
cv0.422
sampleLengths
018
113
223
321
414
514
620
738
814
922
1023
1112
1216
1316
1414
158
1620
1714
1814
1917
209
2129
2214
2310
2411
254
264
2711
2817
2912
3010
3122
3216
3319
3416
3514
3616
3714
3816
3923
4025
4113
4218
4313
4416
4523
4611
4718
489
4918
64.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.391304347826087
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Only the wind replied, a"
1"No longer was she alone"
2"Then, with a whispered prayer"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences86
matches
0"She arrived at Richmond Park,"
1"She knew she was not"
2"she called out cautiously, wincing"
3"She pressed forward, pulse quickening"
4"She was not alone."
5"She took a tentative step"
6"They whispered promises of knowledge,"
7"She knew she should turn"
8"She squared her shoulders, willing"
9"She swung herself up, panting,"
10"She had no choice but"
11"Her feet found purchase on"
12"She squinted into the shadowed"
13"she rasped, her voice barely"
14"Her gaze drifted to the"
15"she whispered, cheeks flushed with"
16"She turned, gesturing for Rory"
17"she murmured, voice thick with"
18"They stopped before a wall"
19"She trailed off, shaking her"
ratio0.256
47.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora Carter, referred to by"
1"She arrived at Richmond Park,"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"She knew she was not"
4"The landscape was eerily quiet,"
5"The air was thick and"
6"Every step deeper into the"
7"Rory gripped the Heartstone pendant"
8"This mysterious emblem was the"
9"The Heartstone's crimson hue danced"
10"A twig snapped in the"
11"Rory froze mid-stride, heart pounding"
12"she called out cautiously, wincing"
13"She pressed forward, pulse quickening"
14"Rory pushed through the underbrush,"
15"Leaves crunched ominously underfoot, the"
16"Another noise cut through the"
17"Rory swung around, scanning the"
18"There, just visible through the"
19"A twig snapped under Rory's"
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Every step deeper into the clearing seemed to drag on longer than the last, as if time itself had begun to slow - a common phenomenon, she had been warned, for …"
1"Rory froze mid-stride, heart pounding in her ears, scanning the shadows for any signs of movement."
2"Rory gritted her teeth, fighting the rising tide of panic threatening to overwhelm her."
3"But something held her fast, some curious compulsion born of the same magic that had drawn her to this place, to the nexus of worlds."
4"Rory shook her head, trying to clear the fog that clouded her thoughts."
5"The wind lashed her face, blotting out the glow of the moon and leaving her in utter darkness."
6"With every step, the air thickened, pressing in with a heaviness that told her time itself was distorting around her."
7"Her feet found purchase on damp soil, and she collapsed to her knees, gasping for breath that wouldn't come."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she rasped, her voice barely audible over the howling gales"
1"she murmured, voice thick with regret"
2"the woman said softly, eyes glimmering with unshed tears"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"the woman hissed (hiss)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.667
70.5915%