Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRNXMC5PGYQYCTR47490KP

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.014300
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pooled in cracked asphalt, tracing rivulets down the gutter. Streetlamps glowed through the haze, casting smeared halos on shopfront windows. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped against drenched pavement. Her chest tightened with each lungful of mist-flavored air. Up ahead, a figure darted from a recessed doorway. Black hood pulled low. Quinn caught the flash of purchased goods cradled in the suspect’s arms—glimmering trinkets that should’ve stayed buried in locked drawers. She lunged forward. Stop! Her voice ricocheted off brick walls. No reply. The suspect glanced over a shoulder. Quinn saw a momentary flicker of panic in those dark eyes before the hood swallowed them again. Quinn wove through scattered trash bins, sidestepped a broken wooden pallet, and covered ground in two strides. She leapt, arm outstretched, but the suspect slipped down an alleyway lined with rusty fire escapes and faded graffiti. A high-pitched clink echoed as the suspect vaulted over a chain-link fence. Quinn hoisted herself up. Fingers grazed cold metal. She swung over and hit the ground running. Wet whose voice drifted from the street beyond. Get back inside! A vendor hustled a tarp over crates of fish, head ducked against the rain. Quinn didn’t slow. At the alley’s mouth a green neon sign buzzed: THE RAVEN’S NEST. Letters glowed unevenly. Quinn recognized the bar from earlier surveillance—Silas’ haunt for the underworld’s restless souls. The suspect skidded around its corner, disappearing into the murky glow spilling from its front window. Quinn followed. Through the glass she caught steaks of yellow light, patrons hunched over chipped tables. Brass railings gleamed beneath a haze of cigarette smoke, and walls felt alive with pinned maps and black-and-white photographs. She paused at the door, chest tight, for fear of spooking whoever ran inside. Wood creaked as she pushed it forward. A bell above the door chimed something halfway between challenge and welcome. The bartender, a barrel-chested man with a handlebar mustache, glanced up. He froze at Quinn’s uniform. She flashed her badge. On instinct more than request, he turned back to polish a glass, eyes narrowed. Quinn scanned the room. Empty chairs near the entrance. No sign of the suspect. She spotted a tall bookshelf in the far corner, crammed with dog-eared volumes. A narrow gap at its base suggested recent movement. Her gut flared. Steps behind her. Instinct. She ducked behind a booth as the door behind the bar swung open. A pale hand swept across the shelves, pushing a row of biographies aside. A panel shifted; a hidden stairwell yawned. Footsteps hammered above. Quinn dashed across scuffed floorboards, grabbed the edge of the open panel, and climbed down. A blast of fungal dampness hit her face. She landed on uneven brick. A low hum vibrated through the floor. Torchlight carved concrete walls into shifting patterns. Quinn shook water from her hair. Her watch face glinted under the beam. “Quinn,” a voice hissed from the shadows. Gravelly, clipped. The suspect. She advanced. Light flared against crates of unmarked bottles, roped-off cages. No guard materialized. The corridor forked, slick with pooled water. A faint clank rolled over metal gratings underfoot. “Stop,” she fired the word like a bullet. Silence. Then a stifled laugh. The suspect moved into view—a hunched figure clutching a small leather bag. Quinn raised her pistol. Heart hammered against ribs. “Weren’t expecting company so deep,” the suspect called out. Voice held amusement and challenge. Quinn stepped forward. “You know why I’m here.” “Is that so?” He paced backward, as if leading her into a trap. Stairs spiraled downward beyond him. Red emergency lights glowed at intervals. The air grew warmer, an odor of incense and wax. Quinn felt the walls pulse. This place wasn’t on any borough map. She leveled the pistol. “Drop it and come back.” “A shame.” He folded his arms. “You’re not welcome where I’m going.” Water dripped from overhead pipes. Quinn’s boots lost grip on the slope. She caught herself. The suspect slipped between the stairwell and a heavy steel door, pressed a finger to a hidden latch. Metal grated as it opened. A shaft of greenish light spilled out. Under its glow she saw stairs descending into a cavernous chamber, painted walls etched with symbols she couldn’t decipher. Voices murmured in many tongues, punctuated by metallic rings and muffled bartering. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “This way,” the suspect called, ducking through the portal. The door clanged shut. A quick twist of a wheel-lock mechanism silenced it. Quinn’s fingers snaked around her radio. “Target headed underground. Possible breach of Veil Market.” She paused, eyed the door. No response from HQ—transmission limned by static. She hit the mike again. “HQ, come in.” Static. No answer. She tested the handle. Locked. Rainwater pattered against her coat, dripped from her shoulders. Her breath puffed in front of her like smoke. The green light beyond the door pulsed, inviting and ominous. A faint chant rose from below, rhythmic, seductive. Quinn swallowed. Her jaw clenched. She pictured DS Morris, her partner lost to horrors beyond her understanding. Guilt stabbed at her chest—an ache that tightened whenever she faced places layered with secrets. A sharp clank from under the door. The suspect turned, body pressed against the portal’s edge. “You coming?” He grinned. Teeth bare in the green wash. They’d been tracking him through stolen letters, enchanted amulets. Tonight she’d almost caught him. Now he’d vanished into the Veil Market—supernatural bazaar in an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Every legend said it shifted locations on the full moon, guarded by locks no mortal key could turn. Only bone tokens let you pass. She tapped her thigh. Empty. She never found time to steal one from Herrera’s stash. Quinn closed her eyes. Rain drummed against her helmet, heavy as a warning. Mouth tasted of metal. She weighed two choices: backtrack to call for backup, risk letting him slip into the labyrinth… or follow him alone, unlicensed in markets that thrived on forbidden secrets. Her hand curled around the pistol grip. She pictured those trinkets he’d taken—priceless, lethal. If he sold them down there, horrors would spread into London’s veins. A shaky inhale. She slid her coat from her shoulder and knelt. Beneath her knee lay a small pile of dirt, rainwater seeping through. She scraped at the brick floor until her fingers brushed leather. Bone token, she thought, heart thudding. Someone must’ve dropped it. She pried it loose. A carved shard of bone, etched with runes. Light from the corridor glinted off it. She slipped it into her palm, tested its weight. A sizzle of electricity. The symbols along the door frame glowed like veins. The suspect gripped the edge of the door, chin raised. “Need a hand?” Quinn pressed the token against a carved recess. Stone groaned. Panels slid, and the door eased inward. Green light swallowed her. She stepped across the threshold. Beyond lay rows of stalls heaped with oddities: jars filled with shifting liquids, tomes bound in leather that seemed to breathe, and hooded merchants exchanging whispered deals. Footsteps tapped behind. Quinn whirled, pistol ready, but the suspect had vanished. A woman’s voice drifted from a nearby stall. “Bone token for sale.” Candlelight revealed a pale face framed with black hair. Long fingers beckoned. Quinn squared her shoulders, pistol pointed. Throughout the silent stalls, traders froze. Horsehair brushes hovered midstroke; glass bottles quivered. No one moved. She threaded between tables draped in cloth that shimmered with silver glyphs. My heart, she thought, louder than the hum of murmured bartering voices. She caught a flicker of movement at the far end—a cloaked figure marking up a ledger. That must be him. She started forward. Her keen eyes darted across faces, none human. A boy with wide eyes counting silver slugs. A man with too many fingers holding a cage of something wriggling. Each stall felt alive with threat. Footsteps echoed. She froze. A tall figure rose from behind a velvet curtain. Two steel rods strapped to his waist. No law existed in this place—she’d heard that whispered in the precinct. Kill them they’d never find. Question them they’d vanish without trace. The figure stepped into the green light. Horns curved beneath a black hood. Eyes glowed gold. “I don’t suppose you came as a buyer.” Quinn leveled the pistol barrel. Barrel shook with her pulse. “Where’s he hiding?” The horned merchant’s lips curved. “He’s already gone deeper. Past the old ticket gates. Don’t be the first detective to lose her mind hunting in dark.” Quinn pressed forward. The merchant stood aside, bars clicking as the crowd parted. She crossed the market’s threshold, footfalls swallowed by lacquered stone. Steam rose from vents overhead. She thought of DS Morris. Of every unanswered question. She forced her grip steady and inhaled: damp stone, incense, ozone. She had crossed into a world she barely understood. Steps echoed behind her once, twice, three times. She paused at the old turnstile where a red light pulsed. The suspect crouched on the other side, hauling a battered leather bag from under his coat. Quinn spotted the arcane script stenciled in lead paint: KEEP OUT. Thin wires snaked around the metal teeth. “Time to surrender,” she called out. He didn’t look. Fingers traced those wires, sending sparks flashing. She raised her pistol higher. “One move and I’ll—” He twisted his head. “Don’t shoot.” His voice cut through the din. “None of this concerns you.” The wires hummed. The turnstile began to spin backward, as if powered by some dark pulse. Quinn stared at her target. At boss’s words echoing in her head: “Follow him, but no heroes.” She squared her shoulders. Her jaw clenched. Lightning flashed beyond the dank walls, illuminating half the market in brutal contrast. A thunderclap shook the stone beneath her boots. Her finger tightened on the trigger. The suspect gave her a slow, mocking bow and jumped through the grate that formed the ticket window, landing in a tunnel yawning beyond. Quinn hesitated a fraction too long. Then she dropped the pistol to her thigh, turned the bone token between her fingers, and stepped forward into the tunnel—mud-spattered, half-lit, humming with unseen power. She disappeared into the belly of the Veil Market, ready to face whatever waited beneath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He paced backward [backward]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count3
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count3
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count3
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"jaw clenched"
count2
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"quivered"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"flicker"
2"echoed"
3"scanned"
4"footsteps"
5"vibrated"
6"silence"
7"pulse"
8"etched"
9"pulsed"
10"rhythmic"
11"jaw clenched"
12"weight"
13"quivered"
14"shimmered"
15"velvet"
16"traced"
17"echoing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences210
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences220
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1703
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1596
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn28
Gravelly1
Silence1
Voice1
Stairs1
Water1
Morris2
Teeth1
Veil2
Market2
Tube1
Camden1
Herrera1
London1
Long1
Footsteps3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Gravelly"
3"Voice"
4"Stairs"
5"Water"
6"Morris"
7"Herrera"
8"Footsteps"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
globalScore0.623
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if leading her into a trap"
1"leather that seemed to breathe, and hooded merchants exchanging whispered deals"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1703
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences220
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean24.33
std12.69
cv0.521
sampleLengths
038
136
27
325
436
528
68
720
844
949
1035
1118
1239
1337
1418
1540
1611
1729
188
1925
2014
218
2213
2333
249
2512
2638
2741
2822
2934
303
3133
3240
3316
3410
3553
3615
3745
3826
3935
4010
4128
4226
4317
4436
4512
4624
4722
4844
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs325
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences220
ratio0.055
matches
0"Quinn caught the flash of purchased goods cradled in the suspect’s arms—glimmering trinkets that should’ve stayed buried in locked drawers."
1"Quinn recognized the bar from earlier surveillance—Silas’ haunt for the underworld’s restless souls."
2"A panel shifted; a hidden stairwell yawned."
3"The suspect moved into view—a hunched figure clutching a small leather bag."
4"No response from HQ—transmission limned by static."
5"Guilt stabbed at her chest—an ache that tightened whenever she faced places layered with secrets."
6"Now he’d vanished into the Veil Market—supernatural bazaar in an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden."
7"She pictured those trinkets he’d taken—priceless, lethal."
8"Horsehair brushes hovered midstroke; glass bottles quivered."
9"She caught a flicker of movement at the far end—a cloaked figure marking up a ledger."
10"No law existed in this place—she’d heard that whispered in the precinct."
11"Then she dropped the pistol to her thigh, turned the bone token between her fingers, and stepped forward into the tunnel—mud-spattered, half-lit, humming with unseen power."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount284
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.017605633802816902
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.007042253521126761
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences220
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences220
mean7.74
std4.82
cv0.622
sampleLengths
010
111
28
39
49
54
620
73
81
96
102
116
1217
1317
1419
1512
164
174
188
198
203
2114
223
2312
243
2513
2616
272
2814
2919
3014
317
3212
3311
345
354
3614
374
385
395
4013
419
423
433
441
4513
4613
477
483
4915
64.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40454545454545454
totalSentences220
uniqueOpeners89
51.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences193
matches
0"Then a stifled laugh."
1"Only bone tokens let you"
2"Then she dropped the pistol"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences193
matches
0"Her chest tightened with each"
1"She lunged forward."
2"Her voice ricocheted off brick"
3"She leapt, arm outstretched, but"
4"She swung over and hit"
5"She paused at the door,"
6"He froze at Quinn’s uniform."
7"She flashed her badge."
8"She spotted a tall bookshelf"
9"Her gut flared."
10"She ducked behind a booth"
11"She landed on uneven brick."
12"Her watch face glinted under"
13"she fired the word like"
14"He paced backward, as if"
15"She leveled the pistol."
16"He folded his arms"
17"She caught herself."
18"She paused, eyed the door"
19"She hit the mike again."
ratio0.275
50.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences193
matches
0"Rain pooled in cracked asphalt,"
1"Streetlamps glowed through the haze,"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped"
3"Her chest tightened with each"
4"Quinn caught the flash of"
5"She lunged forward."
6"Her voice ricocheted off brick"
7"The suspect glanced over a"
8"Quinn saw a momentary flicker"
9"Quinn wove through scattered trash"
10"She leapt, arm outstretched, but"
11"A high-pitched clink echoed as"
12"Quinn hoisted herself up."
13"Fingers grazed cold metal."
14"She swung over and hit"
15"A vendor hustled a tarp"
16"Quinn didn’t slow."
17"Letters glowed unevenly."
18"Quinn recognized the bar from"
19"The suspect skidded around its"
ratio0.819
51.81% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences193
matches
0"Now he’d vanished into the"
1"If he sold them down"
ratio0.01
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Quinn caught the flash of purchased goods cradled in the suspect’s arms—glimmering trinkets that should’ve stayed buried in locked drawers."
1"The suspect skidded around its corner, disappearing into the murky glow spilling from its front window."
2"Guilt stabbed at her chest—an ache that tightened whenever she faced places layered with secrets."
3"Beyond lay rows of stalls heaped with oddities: jars filled with shifting liquids, tomes bound in leather that seemed to breathe, and hooded merchants exchangin…"
4"The suspect gave her a slow, mocking bow and jumped through the grate that formed the ticket window, landing in a tunnel yawning beyond."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He paced backward, as if leading her into a trap"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"a voice hissed (hiss)"
1"Candlelight revealed (reveal)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.182
82.4432%