| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He hesitated then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 83.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 912 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 912 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "calculating" | | 10 | "jaw clenched" | | 11 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 896 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 807 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 4 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Camden | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 896 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 28 | | std | 17.17 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "were getting" | | 1 | "was walking" | | 2 | "were waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.145 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect darted down the narrow alley, clutching something small and metallic in his hand—something that shimmered briefly even in the downpour." | | 1 | "Her watch beeped softly—they were getting close to midnight, and she knew the city’s underground—the kind she’d only heard whispers of—was just beneath their feet." | | 2 | "Turning, Quinn saw movement—an arched doorway with a faint, old brass handle, barely noticeable amid the grime." | | 3 | "Her gut told her her suspect wasn’t just running from the law—they were after something more, something supernatural." | | 4 | "Inside, the space was smaller than she expected—a narrow corridor lit by sporadic flickering bulbs." | | 5 | "Her fingers brushed the worn leather strap of her watch—a relic she’d kept since her partner’s death, a reminder that every second could be her last." | | 6 | "Then she saw him—the suspect crouched by a low table, clutching the metallic object as if it were a treasure." | | 7 | "It was a small, ornate bone token—the kind she’d read about, used to gain entry to the Veil Market." | | 8 | "A flicker of something—fear or defiance—crossed his face." | | 9 | "Beyond the flickering bulbs, crates stacked high with strange objects—the glow of enchanted talismans, jars of dark liquids—evidence of a place she’d only half-believed existed." | | 10 | "The alley, the door, the market—none of it was coincidence." |
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| 96.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04374240583232078 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015795868772782502 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 11.79 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 84.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5131578947368421 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the flicker of a" | | 1 | "Soundlessly, she moved, eyes scanning" | | 2 | "Carefully, she stepped inside, the" | | 3 | "Then she saw him—the suspect" | | 4 | "Somewhere above, the city carried" |
| | ratio | 0.077 | |
| 53.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots skidded on wet" | | 1 | "She slowed, her hand resting" | | 2 | "she muttered, voice muffled behind" | | 3 | "Her watch beeped softly—they were" | | 4 | "She’d always dismissed it as" | | 5 | "She hesitated, eyes narrowing." | | 6 | "Her gut told her her" | | 7 | "She could lose him if" | | 8 | "Her hand tightened on her" | | 9 | "She stepped forward, then hesitated." | | 10 | "Her instinct shouted to keep" | | 11 | "She hesitated, forcing herself to" | | 12 | "She lowered her gun slowly," | | 13 | "Her fingers brushed the worn" | | 14 | "He looked up, eyes wide" | | 15 | "he rasped, voice rough" | | 16 | "He hesitated, then let the" | | 17 | "It was a small, ornate" | | 18 | "She stepped closer." | | 19 | "He frowned, eyes darting around." |
| | ratio | 0.415 | |
| 90.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after" | | 2 | "The suspect darted down the" | | 3 | "Quinn’s breath hissed in her" | | 4 | "Her boots skidded on wet" | | 5 | "The suspect slipped through a" | | 6 | "She slowed, her hand resting" | | 7 | "The rain’s relentless drumming dulled" | | 8 | "she muttered, voice muffled behind" | | 9 | "Her watch beeped softly—they were" | | 10 | "Rumours had circulated about a" | | 11 | "She’d always dismissed it as" | | 12 | "Footsteps echoed behind her." | | 13 | "She hesitated, eyes narrowing." | | 14 | "Her gut told her her" | | 15 | "The alley, dark and slick," | | 16 | "She could lose him if" | | 17 | "Her hand tightened on her" | | 18 | "A cough of thunder echoed" | | 19 | "She stepped forward, then hesitated." |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she remembered the rumours:" | | 1 | "If this was true, the" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after her target, feet splashing through puddles that mirrored the flickering lights overhead." | | 1 | "The suspect darted down the narrow alley, clutching something small and metallic in his hand—something that shimmered briefly even in the downpour." | | 2 | "The suspect slipped through a tangle of fire escapes and trash cans, then dove into a doorway that hid beneath an overhang, vanishing into the darkness of a bui…" | | 3 | "Then she saw him—the suspect crouched by a low table, clutching the metallic object as if it were a treasure." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice muffled behind her mask" | | 1 | "he rasped, voice rough" | | 2 | "she echoed, voice steady" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |