| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The pendant burned painfully [painfully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |
| 82.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1447 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1447 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "cacophony" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "resolving" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1423 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1262 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Come | 1 | | Wales | 1 | | Londoner | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Londoner" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Wales" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.628 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 65.73% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite catch, their tones urgent and overlapping" | | 1 | "quite grasp" | | 2 | "features that seemed to shift and rearrange with each crimson flash" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.703 | | wordCount | 1423 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 20.33 | | std | 12.42 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 96.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "being made" | | 2 | "being loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd heard rumors about this place, of course—every Londoner had stories about Richmond Park's oddities—but she'd written them off as urban legends." | | 1 | "The city sounds that had accompanied her entire journey—distant traffic, the occasional airplane overhead—suddenly vanished." | | 2 | "Aurora glanced upward—and froze." | | 3 | "A sound rose on the wind—soft at first, then clearer." | | 4 | "Between two distant trees, something moved—a shadow detaching from shadow." | | 5 | "Something else moved at the corner of her vision—faster this time, darting between stones to her right." | | 6 | "Every gap between the stones looked identical—dark archways leading into deeper darkness." | | 7 | "Movement again—closer this time." | | 8 | "The pendant burned against her skin, its glow visible now through her sweater—a crimson pulse that illuminated the clearing in brief, nightmarish flashes." | | 9 | "Their shapes wrong in ways she couldn't articulate—limbs too long, heads misshapen, movements jerky and insectile." | | 10 | "One stepped forward—taller than the others, its face a blur of features that seemed to shift and rearrange with each crimson flash." | | 11 | "The ground beneath her was no longer earth but something else—a surface that yielded like flesh, warm and pulsing in rhythm with the pendant." | | 12 | "The being loomed over her, its face finally resolving into something almost human—but with her mother's eyes." | | 13 | "The scar on Aurora's left wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from childhood—began to burn and glow with the same light as the pendant." | | 14 | "The whispering reached a crescendo, and Aurora recognized the language at last—she'd heard it in dreams her entire life." | | 15 | "The standing stones began to rotate slowly around the clearing, though they remained rooted in place—reality bending around them like cloth." | | 16 | "The figures watched silently as Aurora Carter—delivery driver, law school dropout, orphan—struggled against the truth trying to consume her." |
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| 86.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1286 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient stirring inside her" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.048989113530326596 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014774494556765163 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 10.86 | | std | 6.41 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 60.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4198473282442748 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Its weight felt heavier than" | | 1 | "she muttered, pushing back a" | | 2 | "I have answers about your" | | 3 | "Her mother, gone three months" | | 4 | "She'd heard rumors about this" | | 5 | "She was early." | | 6 | "she called, immediately regretting it" | | 7 | "She moved to the center" | | 8 | "She had the distinct sensation" | | 9 | "She whirled, light slashing through" | | 10 | "she said, hating the tremor" | | 11 | "Her light swept the perimeter" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded small, wrong" | | 13 | "It seemed human, but elongated" | | 14 | "she announced to the clearing," | | 15 | "She stepped away from the" | | 16 | "She fumbled in her pocket" | | 17 | "Their shapes wrong in ways" | | 18 | "They surrounded the entire clearing" | | 19 | "it said in a voice" |
| | ratio | 0.229 | |
| 24.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant bumped against" | | 1 | "Its weight felt heavier than" | | 2 | "Darkness had fallen faster than" | | 3 | "she muttered, pushing back a" | | 4 | "I have answers about your" | | 5 | "Her mother, gone three months" | | 6 | "The official story was a" | | 7 | "The Heartstone grew warmer against" | | 8 | "Aurora paused, playing her light" | | 9 | "The standing stones." | | 10 | "She'd heard rumors about this" | | 11 | "Aurora checked her watch: 11:52" | | 12 | "She was early." | | 13 | "The city sounds that had" | | 14 | "The silence pressed against her" | | 15 | "she called, immediately regretting it" | | 16 | "She moved to the center" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed more insistently" | | 18 | "Aurora turned slowly, taking in" | | 19 | "Something felt wrong." |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her skin, its glow visible now through her sweater—a crimson pulse that illuminated the clearing in brief, nightmarish flashes." | | 1 | "The ground beneath her was no longer earth but something else—a surface that yielded like flesh, warm and pulsing in rhythm with the pendant." | | 2 | "The crimson light spread from the pendant to her fingers, racing up her arms in glowing veins." | | 3 | "The figures closed in, their forms bleeding into the darkness between the trees, becoming one with the night." | | 4 | "The pendant's chain snapped, but instead of falling, the stone sank into her chest, merging with her flesh." | | 5 | "Something that had always lived inside her, dormant until this moment, in this place where time moved differently and the veil between worlds grew thin." |
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| 50.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice sounded, wrong" | | 1 | "Aurora warned, voice breaking" | | 2 | "The creature reached, fingers elongating impossibly across the distance between them" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she announced (announce)" | | 2 | "Aurora warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Aurora insisted (insist)" | | 4 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 5 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "she pleaded (plead)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |