| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 970 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 970 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "restrained" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "palpable" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 969 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 826 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Thursday | 1 | | Eva | 14 | | Silas | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.41 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more restrained as if held back by invisible threads" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 969 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 33.41 | | std | 17.76 | | cv | 0.532 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 39 |
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| 73.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "been etched" | | 1 | "was unchanged –" | | 2 | "was forgotten" | | 3 | "were muted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's gaze, however, was unchanged – warm and inviting, with a deep understanding that only comes from shared summers, sleepovers, and countless secrets." | | 1 | "As the night wore on, conversation flowed more easily, touching on safer topics – memories of their youth, Eva's tales of corporate battles, and Rory's stories of delivery mishaps." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 534 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.031835205992509365 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00749063670411985 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 18.28 | | std | 7.65 | | cv | 0.418 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 90.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5660377358490566 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a typical Thursday" | | 1 | "Their hands met across the" | | 2 | "She nodded, a small, tentative" | | 3 | "she said, the promise hanging" |
| | ratio | 0.091 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "The soft glow of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to the" | | 2 | "It was a typical Thursday" | | 3 | "The figure stepped into the" | | 4 | "The newcomer's eyes, a deep" | | 5 | "Rory's voice barely made it" | | 6 | "Eva, Rory's childhood friend and" | | 7 | "The bright smile that had" | | 8 | "Eva's gaze, however, was unchanged" | | 9 | "Rory's apron was forgotten on" | | 10 | "The two women met in" | | 11 | "A bottle of red wine" | | 12 | "Rory said, her attempt at" | | 13 | "Eva laughed, a melodic sound" | | 14 | "Their hands met across the" | | 15 | "The simplicity of the touch" | | 16 | "Rory ventured, her eyes roving" | | 17 | "The once vibrant, eclectic fashion" | | 18 | "Eva explained, a hint of" | | 19 | "Rory's grip tightened slightly." |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the laughter and" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The bright smile that had been etched in Rory's memory was still there, but it seemed more restrained, as if held back by invisible threads." | | 1 | "Their hands met across the table, fingers intertwining in a gesture that was both familiar and foreign." | | 2 | "The bottle of wine sat untouched between them, a silent observer to the tension that had begun to simmer just below the surface of their reunion." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory ventured, her eyes roving over Eva's transformed appearance" | | 1 | "Eva explained, a hint of resignation creeping into her voice" | | 2 | "Eva replied, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |