Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPFPHGYP10AMHA070F7M0

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.002720
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The soft glow of the distinctive green neon sign above The Raven's Nest cast an eerie light on the rain-soaked pavement. Inside, the dimly lit bar hummed with hushed conversations and the occasional clinking of glasses. Aurora Carter, known to the patrons as Rory, polished a mug with a white apron wrapped around her waist, her bright blue eyes scanning the crowd with a mixture of familiarity and detachment. It was a typical Thursday evening at Silas' bar, with the regulars nestled in their favorite corners, lost in their own worlds. As she slid the polished mug onto the tray, Rory's gaze drifted towards the entrance, where a drenched figure shook off the rain, sending droplets flying in all directions. The figure stepped into the warm light, and for a moment, Rory's hands froze, the mug hovering above the counter. The newcomer's eyes, a deep shade of brown she had never forgotten, met hers, and time seemed to stall. "Eva?" Rory's voice barely made it past her lips, the name more a question than a statement. Eva, Rory's childhood friend and confidante, stood at the threshold, her once curly brown hair now straightened and reaching down to her hips. The bright smile that had been etched in Rory's memory was still there, but it seemed more restrained, as if held back by invisible threads. Eva's gaze, however, was unchanged – warm and inviting, with a deep understanding that only comes from shared summers, sleepovers, and countless secrets. Rory's apron was forgotten on the counter as she navigated through the patrons, her long, straight black hair swaying behind her. The two women met in a tight, wordless embrace, the kind that spoke volumes of missed time and unspoken emotions. "Table by the window?" Silas' deep voice interrupted, his hazel eyes observing the reunion with a hint of curiosity. "On the house, of course." Without waiting for a response, Silas led them to a secluded table, where the sounds of the bar were muted by the patter of rain against the windowpane. A bottle of red wine and two glasses appeared, courtesy of Silas' silent efficiency. "Well, well, well. Look what the storm brought in," Rory said, her attempt at lightness tinged with the weight of unasked questions. Eva laughed, a melodic sound that brought back memories of late-night giggles and dreams shared under starry skies. "Just passing through, thought I'd drop by to see how my favorite delivery girl was doing." Their hands met across the table, fingers intertwining in a gesture that was both familiar and foreign. The simplicity of the touch belied the complexity of emotions it stirred. "You look... different," Rory ventured, her eyes roving over Eva's transformed appearance. The once vibrant, eclectic fashion sense had given way to a more subdued, professional look. "Corporate world," Eva explained, a hint of resignation creeping into her voice. "Uniforms are just the beginning, I assure you." Rory's grip tightened slightly. "You were always the rebel. What happened to 'change the world, not conform to it'?" Eva's smile wavered, and for a moment, the strmghtened hair and polished demeanor slipped, revealing glimpses of the old Eva. "Growing up, I suppose. Realizing the world doesn't always bend to idealism." The bottle of wine sat untouched between them, a silent observer to the tension that had begun to simmer just below the surface of their reunion. "How long has it been?" Rory asked, her bright blue eyes seeking answers to questions she hadn't yet voiced. "Too long," Eva replied, her voice barely above a whisper. "Years. Lifetimes, it feels like." The mention of time hung in the air, heavy with unspoken regrets and the paths not taken. Rory's mind wandered back to the days before her abrupt departure from Cardiff, to the nights she and Eva had shared dreams of adventure and rebellion against the mundane. "Evan?" Eva's question cut through Rory's reverie, the name of Rory's abusive ex hanging in the air like a challenge. Rory's expression turned guarded, the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seeming to throb in memory. "Ancient history. I'm good. Really." Eva's gaze lingered, searching for the truth beneath the surface. After a moment, she nodded, though the skepticism was clear in her eyes. As the night wore on, conversation flowed more easily, touching on safer topics – memories of their youth, Eva's tales of corporate battles, and Rory's stories of delivery mishaps. Yet, beneath the laughter and reminiscences, the awareness of how much they had both changed, and the unsaid words between them, formed a palpable, unbridgeable gap. In the lulls between their conversations, the rain outside seemed to intensify, drumming a melancholic beat against the windowpane, a stark reminder of the relentless passage of time and the fragility of human connections. As the evening drew to a close, Eva reached for her purse, signaling an end to their reunion. Rory walked her out, the cool night air a stark contrast to the warmth they had shared just hours before. Under the glow of The Raven's Nest sign, they paused, the city's nightlife swirling around them. "I'm staying in London for a while," Eva said, her voice filled with a mix of uncertainty and hope. "Maybe we can... reconnect, properly this time?" Rory's heart, once open and trusting, now guarded and wary, still yearned for the simplicity of their past. She nodded, a small, tentative smile on her lips. "I'd like that," she said, the promise hanging in the air, laden with the weight of unspoken regrets and the uncertainty of forging new paths, together. As they shared one last, heartfelt embrace, the neon sign above them cast an otherworldly glow on the wet pavement, a beacon to the complicated, intertwined paths that lay ahead, for both of them, and for their rediscovered friendship.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"restrained"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"palpable"
count1
13
word"stark"
count2
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"otherworldly"
count1
17
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"etched"
2"restrained"
3"navigated"
4"unspoken"
5"tinged"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"wavered"
9"tension"
10"whisper"
11"throb"
12"palpable"
13"stark"
14"reminder"
15"warmth"
16"otherworldly"
17"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences53
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount826
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory18
Thursday1
Eva14
Silas1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.41
windowScore0.333
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed more restrained as if held back by invisible threads"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount969
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean33.41
std17.76
cv0.532
sampleLengths
091
168
217
371
441
524
642
722
834
929
1027
1120
1219
1332
1426
1519
1615
1746
1820
1922
2023
2155
2234
2338
2416
2526
2627
2726
2839
73.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences44
matches
0"been etched"
1"was unchanged –"
2"was forgotten"
3"were muted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences53
ratio0.038
matches
0"Eva's gaze, however, was unchanged – warm and inviting, with a deep understanding that only comes from shared summers, sleepovers, and countless secrets."
1"As the night wore on, conversation flowed more easily, touching on safer topics – memories of their youth, Eva's tales of corporate battles, and Rory's stories of delivery mishaps."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount534
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.031835205992509365
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00749063670411985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean18.28
std7.65
cv0.418
sampleLengths
021
115
233
322
429
520
619
717
823
925
1023
1121
1220
1319
145
1528
1614
1722
1818
1916
2017
2112
2212
2315
2412
258
264
2715
2820
2912
3026
3119
3210
335
3417
3529
3620
3717
385
3910
4013
4129
4226
4334
4418
4520
4616
4719
487
4918
90.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5660377358490566
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences44
matches
0"It was a typical Thursday"
1"Their hands met across the"
2"She nodded, a small, tentative"
3"she said, the promise hanging"
ratio0.091
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences44
matches
0"The soft glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter, known to the"
2"It was a typical Thursday"
3"The figure stepped into the"
4"The newcomer's eyes, a deep"
5"Rory's voice barely made it"
6"Eva, Rory's childhood friend and"
7"The bright smile that had"
8"Eva's gaze, however, was unchanged"
9"Rory's apron was forgotten on"
10"The two women met in"
11"A bottle of red wine"
12"Rory said, her attempt at"
13"Eva laughed, a melodic sound"
14"Their hands met across the"
15"The simplicity of the touch"
16"Rory ventured, her eyes roving"
17"The once vibrant, eclectic fashion"
18"Eva explained, a hint of"
19"Rory's grip tightened slightly."
ratio0.773
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Yet, beneath the laughter and"
ratio0.023
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The bright smile that had been etched in Rory's memory was still there, but it seemed more restrained, as if held back by invisible threads."
1"Their hands met across the table, fingers intertwining in a gesture that was both familiar and foreign."
2"The bottle of wine sat untouched between them, a silent observer to the tension that had begun to simmer just below the surface of their reunion."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory ventured, her eyes roving over Eva's transformed appearance"
1"Eva explained, a hint of resignation creeping into her voice"
2"Eva replied, her voice barely above a whisper"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.111
80.7479%