Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPKKVAN7DKQGS66QMXHZ6

Run Details

Duration:
14.6s
Cost:
$0.000353

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the puddles like spilled ink. Rory paused on the threshold, her breath fogging in the cold air, her fingers tightening around the handle of her delivery bag. The door swung inward before she could push it, and the scent of aged whiskey and something smoky and unfamiliar hit her. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. His auburn hair was longer than she remembered, streaked with silver now, and his beard—neatly trimmed then—had grown out just enough to soften the sharp angles of his face. His hazel eyes lifted from the glass, and for a heartbeat, the world stilled. Then he smiled. It wasn’t the same grin he’d given her in Prague, all teeth and mischief, but it was close enough to make her chest ache. “Well, well,” he said, voice rougher than she recalled. “If it isn’t the girl who used to steal my whiskey when I wasn’t looking.” Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. “You still do that?” “Only when you’re not around to catch me.” His gaze flicked over her—her black delivery uniform, the scar on her wrist she’d long since stopped checking for. “You look like hell.” She exhaled through her nose, a laugh bubbling up before she could stop it. “Thanks.” The bar was quieter than she’d expected. A few regulars hunched over their drinks at the far end, their faces half-lit by the dim overhead bulbs. The walls were still lined with maps and photographs, but the air smelled different—older, like the wood beneath the floorboards had finally decided to rot. Silas slid a glass across the counter. “Whiskey. Neat.” She didn’t hesitate. “You remember how I take it.” “Of course I do.” He leaned against the bar, his limp more pronounced than she’d noticed in the few seconds she’d been inside. “You’re still the same, aren’t you? Always rushing in where angels fear to tread.” Rory took a slow sip, the burn of the whiskey grounding her. “And you’re still the same, too. Still giving orders like it’s second nature.” Silas’s smile didn’t reach his eyes. “Some habits die harder than others.” She studied him—the way his fingers drummed lightly against the bar, the faint tension in his jaw. “You look like you’ve been carrying something heavy.” “Just the weight of another decade.” He gestured to the stool beside him. “Sit. Before someone else claims it.” She pulled it out, the wood groaning under her weight. The stool was higher than she remembered, the cushion worn thin. “You’ve been busy.” “So have you.” His voice dropped, just slightly. “Last I heard, you were still chasing ghosts in Cardiff.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the glass. “I left.” “Ah.” Silas’s gaze flicked to her wrist, then away. “That’s what I heard.” She didn’t answer. The silence stretched, thick with things unsaid. A man at the end of the bar cleared his throat. “You two know each other?” Silas’s smile returned, this time sharper. “Old friends. From the old country.” The man nodded, then turned back to his drink, but not before Rory caught the way his eyes lingered on her—on the way she moved, the way she held herself. Like she was used to being watched. “You’re not here for the whiskey,” Silas said, low enough that only she could hear. “You’re here for something else.” Rory set her glass down with a sharp *clink*. “You always were good at reading people.” “And you were always terrible at hiding.” He pushed the glass toward her. “Drink up. We’ve got company.” She took another sip, the whiskey burning her throat. “What kind of company?” “The kind that doesn’t like being ignored.” Silas’s voice dropped, his gaze sweeping the room. “And the kind that remembers what you did.” Rory’s pulse spiked. She hadn’t thought about Prague in years—not like this. Not like it was still a wound that hadn’t quite scabbed over. “You’re talking about the job,” she said, though she already knew. Silas didn’t deny it. “You ran. That’s not something I forget.” She swallowed. “I had reasons.” “So did I.” His voice was quiet, but there was steel beneath it. “And I don’t make excuses for them.” The door chimed again, and Rory’s head snapped up. A woman in a tailored coat stepped inside, her heels clicking against the floor. She was older than Rory, her dark hair streaked with silver, her sharp eyes scanning the room before landing on Silas. “Took you long enough,” she said, her voice like polished stone. Silas didn’t move. “Lena.” The woman—Lena—pushed past him, her coat brushing against Rory’s arm. “You look well, darling.” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t trust the way Lena’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. Silas finally turned back to her, his expression unreadable. “She’s here about the same thing you are.” Rory’s breath hitched. “What thing?” Silas’s gaze flicked to the door, then back to her. “The past.” Lena slid onto the stool beside Rory, her perfume sharp and familiar. “You remember me, don’t you?” Rory didn’t look at her. “I remember your name.” Lena laughed, a sound like dry leaves skittering across pavement. “Clever girl. Always were.” Silas sighed, rubbing his temples. “Lena, this is Rory Carter. Rory, Lena Voss.” Rory finally met Lena’s eyes. They were the same color as Silas’s—hazel, but sharper, colder. Like a blade polished too long. “You’re the one who left us in Prague,” Lena said, her voice smooth as silk over steel. “The one who walked away.” Rory’s fingers curled into fists beneath the bar. “I had a reason.” Lena tilted her head, studying her. “Did you?” Silas’s voice cut through the tension. “Enough.” Lena ignored him. “You were always the reckless one. Always running before you knew where you were going.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “And you were always the one who liked it that way.” Lena’s smile didn’t waver. “I liked it because it worked.” The air between them crackled, charged with something old and dangerous. Rory could feel it in her bones—the weight of what they’d done, what they’d left behind. The way Silas watched them, his expression unreadable, made her skin prickle. She set her glass down with a deliberate *clink*. “I’m not here to talk about Prague.” Lena’s gaze flicked to Silas, then back to Rory. “Then what are you here for?” Rory’s voice was steady, but her hands were shaking. “I need to know what happened to him.” Silas’s breath caught. For the first time, his mask slipped. Just for a second, his face softened, his eyes darkening with something like pain. Lena’s smile turned razor-thin. “You think we’d tell you?” Rory didn’t look away. “I think you owe me that much.” Silas exhaled sharply, his fingers tightening around his glass. “You don’t owe anyone anything, Rory.” “Do I not?” Rory’s voice was low, dangerous. “Because I remember how you all left me standing in that alley, telling me to run. Telling me to save myself.” Lena’s laugh was sharp. “You were never the saving type.” Silas’s voice cut through the tension like a blade. “Enough.” Rory’s gaze snapped to him. “You told me to run. You told me to get out.” Silas’s eyes flashed, his jaw clenched. “I told you to survive.” Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tight. “And you did. You survived.” Silas’s voice was rough. “I didn’t walk away.” Lena’s smile didn’t falter. “No. But you didn’t have to.” Rory’s fingers trembled around her glass. “What happened to him?” Silas’s gaze locked onto hers, his eyes dark with something she couldn’t name. “He’s dead.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. Rory’s breath left her in a rush, her vision swimming. Lena’s voice was soft, almost pitying. “You should’ve known.” Rory’s hands shook. “I didn’t—” “You didn’t know anything,” Lena finished. “That’s why you ran.” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Rory.” She didn’t look at him. She couldn’t. The weight of it—of all of it—pressed down on her, crushing. “You should’ve stayed,” Lena said, her voice a whisper. “You should’ve let us take care of it.” Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tight. “I couldn’t.” Silas’s voice was rough, raw. “You didn’t have to.” Lena’s smile was sharp. “No. But you did.” Rory’s hands shook. “I didn’t—” Silas’s voice cut through the silence, sharp and urgent. “Rory.” She turned to him, her eyes burning. “What?” Silas’s gaze was intense, his voice low. “You don’t have to do this here.” Rory’s breath hitched. “What?” Lena’s voice was smooth, almost amused. “You don’t have to face this now.” Rory’s hands trembled. “I—” Silas’s voice was firm, his gaze locked onto hers. “We’ll talk about it later.” Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tight. “I—” Silas’s voice was steady, his gaze never leaving hers. “Now.” Rory’s hands shook. “I—” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Now.” Rory’s breath hitched. “Fine.” Silas’s gaze was intense, his voice firm. “Good.” Rory exhaled sharply, her fingers tightening around her glass. “Fine.” Silas’s voice was steady, his gaze never leaving hers. “Good.” Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tight. “Fine.” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Now.” Rory’s hands trembled. “I—” Silas’s voice was firm, his gaze locked onto hers. “We’ll talk about it later.” Rory’s breath hitched. “I—” Silas’s voice was steady, his gaze never leaving hers. “Now.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “Fine.” Silas’s gaze was intense, his voice firm. “Good.” Rory exhaled sharply, her fingers trembling. “Fine.” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Now.” Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tight. “I—” Silas’s voice was firm, his gaze locked onto hers. “We’ll talk about it later.” Rory’s hands shook. “I—” Silas’s voice was steady, his gaze never leaving hers. “Now.” Rory’s breath hitched. “Fine.” Silas’s voice was low, urgent. “Good.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “Fine.” Silas’s gaze was intense, his voice firm. “Good.” Rory exhaled sharply, her fingers trembling. “Fine.” Silas’s voice was steady, his gaze never leaving hers. “Now.”
total_cost0.0003531

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped just [just]"
dialogueSentences117
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.239
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.017
82.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1692
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count4
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1692
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count4
2
word"tension"
count3
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"jaw clenched"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count3
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicked"
2"tension"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"scanning"
7"unreadable"
8"familiar"
9"silk"
10"charged"
11"could feel"
12"jaw clenched"
13"trembled"
14"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences242
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1677
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"clink"
2"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions108
wordCount1173
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity8
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Prague2
Rory45
Silas42
Lena18
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Lena"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0
windowScore0
98.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite scabbed over"
1"something like pain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1677
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences242
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs118
mean14.21
std10.61
cv0.746
sampleLengths
067
159
23
324
424
510
631
715
851
99
109
1137
1225
1312
1425
1519
1624
1718
188
1913
2010
2116
2212
2337
2420
2516
2618
2713
2823
2924
3011
3111
325
3320
3444
3511
364
3714
3814
3917
405
4112
4217
439
4414
4513
4621
4722
4812
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs227
matches
0"were shaking"
24.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences242
ratio0.041
matches
0"His auburn hair was longer than she remembered, streaked with silver now, and his beard—neatly trimmed then—had grown out just enough to soften the sharp angles of his face."
1"“Only when you’re not around to catch me.” His gaze flicked over her—her black delivery uniform, the scar on her wrist she’d long since stopped checking for."
2"The walls were still lined with maps and photographs, but the air smelled different—older, like the wood beneath the floorboards had finally decided to rot."
3"She studied him—the way his fingers drummed lightly against the bar, the faint tension in his jaw."
4"The man nodded, then turned back to his drink, but not before Rory caught the way his eyes lingered on her—on the way she moved, the way she held herself."
5"She hadn’t thought about Prague in years—not like this."
6"The woman—Lena—pushed past him, her coat brushing against Rory’s arm."
7"They were the same color as Silas’s—hazel, but sharper, colder."
8"Rory could feel it in her bones—the weight of what they’d done, what they’d left behind."
9"The weight of it—of all of it—pressed down on her, crushing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1188
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03956228956228956
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010101010101010102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences242
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences242
mean6.93
std5.45
cv0.786
sampleLengths
023
122
222
316
429
514
63
724
89
915
106
114
1227
134
1414
151
167
1719
1825
197
202
213
226
2323
2414
2512
2613
276
286
2917
308
3113
326
3310
3411
353
368
3710
386
392
409
414
423
437
4411
455
466
476
4830
497
48.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.18181818181818182
totalSentences242
uniqueOpeners44
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences138
matches
0"Then he smiled."
1"Just for a second, his"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences138
matches
0"His auburn hair was longer"
1"His hazel eyes lifted from"
2"It wasn’t the same grin"
3"he said, voice rougher than"
4"His gaze flicked over her—her"
5"She exhaled through her nose,"
6"She didn’t hesitate."
7"He leaned against the bar,"
8"She studied him—the way his"
9"He gestured to the stool"
10"She pulled it out, the"
11"His voice dropped, just slightly"
12"She didn’t answer."
13"He pushed the glass toward"
14"She took another sip, the"
15"She hadn’t thought about Prague"
16"she said, though she already"
17"His voice was quiet, but"
18"She was older than Rory,"
19"she said, her voice like"
ratio0.181
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences138
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory paused on the threshold,"
2"The door swung inward before"
3"Silas stood behind the bar,"
4"His auburn hair was longer"
5"His hazel eyes lifted from"
6"It wasn’t the same grin"
7"he said, voice rougher than"
8"Rory’s fingers twitched at her"
9"His gaze flicked over her—her"
10"She exhaled through her nose,"
11"The bar was quieter than"
12"The walls were still lined"
13"Silas slid a glass across"
14"She didn’t hesitate."
15"He leaned against the bar,"
16"Rory took a slow sip,"
17"Silas’s smile didn’t reach his"
18"She studied him—the way his"
19"He gestured to the stool"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory paused on the threshold, her breath fogging in the cold air, her fingers tightening around the handle of her delivery bag."
1"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice rougher than she recalled"
1"Silas’s voice dropped, his gaze sweeping the room"
2"Lena said, her voice smooth as silk over steel"
3"Lena said, her voice a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences117
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.4129%