Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPMXFC3XBDXNQ7A90A394

Run Details

Duration:
16.5s
Cost:
$0.006480

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a slow, insistent rhythm like a second heartbeat. Rory adjusted the strap of her backpack and stepped past the standing stones. The air thickened, cloying with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers blooming out of season, their petals glowing faintly under the moonlight. She shouldn’t have come. Not at night. Not alone. But the pendant had led her here, its crimson glow flickering to life the moment she crossed the boundary of the grove. The note had been clear: *"Find the grove at midnight. The truth waits where time bends."* No signature. No explanation. Just the pendant, left on her doorstep three nights ago, wrapped in black silk. The trees loomed taller here, their branches twisting into shapes that didn’t quite make sense. The ground beneath her boots was spongy, too soft, like walking on a living thing. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Rory froze, her breath shallow. Nothing moved. Just the wind, maybe. Just the trees. She exhaled and forced herself forward. The clearing opened ahead, a perfect circle of silver grass ringed by oaks. At its center stood a single stone slab, flat and smooth, its surface etched with symbols that writhed under her gaze. The pendant burned hotter now, searing through her shirt. She reached for it, fingers brushing the warm gemstone. A whisper slithered through the air. Not words. Just sound—a wet, clicking noise, like teeth against bone. Rory spun. The trees stood still. The wind had died. "Hello?" Her voice cracked. She cleared her throat. "Is anyone there?" Silence. Then, from the shadows behind the slab, a shape detached itself. A figure. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs bent at angles that made her stomach clench. It took a step forward, and the moonlight caught its face—or what should have been its face. A smooth stretch of skin, featureless except for a vertical slit where a mouth should be. Rory stumbled back. The pendant flared, casting crimson light across the clearing. The figure recoiled, hissing, its body twisting as if the glow burned it. It lunged to the side, vanishing into the trees. Her pulse hammered in her throat. Run. She should run. But the slab called to her, its symbols pulsing in time with the pendant. The truth waits where time bends. She approached the stone, boots sinking into the grass. The etchings shifted under her touch, rearranging themselves into words she almost understood. A name. *Isolde.* A warning. *The door opens inward.* A branch snapped behind her. Rory whirled. The figure stood at the edge of the clearing, its body hunched, its too-long fingers flexing. The slit in its face split wider, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth. "Who are you?" Rory’s voice shook. She clenched the pendant, its heat searing her palm. "What do you want?" The thing tilted its head. A sound like a wet cough bubbled from its throat. Then it spoke, its voice layered with something beneath the words—something that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts. *"You don’t belong here."* The trees groaned. The ground trembled. The figure took a step forward, its joints popping as it moved. Rory’s breath came in short, sharp gasps. The pendant burned hotter, brighter, casting jagged shadows across the clearing. The thing’s slit mouth stretched into a grin. *"But you will."*
total_cost0.00648

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount566
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount566
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"searing"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silk"
2"loomed"
3"perfect"
4"etched"
5"searing"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"stomach"
9"pulse"
10"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords23
totalWords560
ratio0.041
matches
0"\"Find the grove at midnight. The truth waits where time bends.\""
1"Isolde."
2"The door opens inward."
3"\"You don’t belong here.\""
4"\"But you will.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount531
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory7
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.841
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite make sense"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount560
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean25.45
std17.77
cv0.698
sampleLengths
052
19
256
351
46
552
617
710
811
912
1048
1134
1230
1331
145
1530
1619
1736
184
1936
208
213
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs91
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences71
ratio0.056
matches
0"The air thickened, cloying with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers blooming out of season, their petals glowing faintly under the moonlight."
1"Just sound—a wet, clicking noise, like teeth against bone."
2"It took a step forward, and the moonlight caught its face—or what should have been its face."
3"Then it spoke, its voice layered with something beneath the words—something that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount537
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0297951582867784
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00186219739292365
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean7.89
std5.78
cv0.733
sampleLengths
015
113
224
34
43
52
622
718
82
914
1015
1115
127
135
142
154
163
176
1813
1921
209
219
226
232
249
252
264
274
284
294
303
311
3211
332
341
352
3610
3717
3816
393
409
4113
429
436
441
453
4614
476
489
4913
43.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences55
matches
0"Just the pendant, left on"
1"Just the wind, maybe."
2"Just the trees."
3"Just sound—a wet, clicking noise,"
4"Then, from the shadows behind"
5"Then it spoke, its voice"
ratio0.109
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences55
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come."
1"She exhaled and forced herself"
2"She reached for it, fingers"
3"Her voice cracked"
4"She cleared her throat."
5"Its limbs bent at angles"
6"It took a step forward,"
7"It lunged to the side,"
8"Her pulse hammered in her"
9"She should run."
10"She approached the stone, boots"
11"She clenched the pendant, its"
ratio0.218
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences55
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"The air thickened, cloying with"
3"She shouldn’t have come."
4"The note had been clear:"
5"The trees loomed taller here,"
6"The ground beneath her boots"
7"A twig snapped somewhere to"
8"Rory froze, her breath shallow."
9"She exhaled and forced herself"
10"The clearing opened ahead, a"
11"The pendant burned hotter now,"
12"She reached for it, fingers"
13"A whisper slithered through the"
14"The trees stood still."
15"The wind had died."
16"Her voice cracked"
17"She cleared her throat."
18"Its limbs bent at angles"
19"It took a step forward,"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The air thickened, cloying with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers blooming out of season, their petals glowing faintly under the moonlig…"
1"Its limbs bent at angles that made her stomach clench."
2"Then it spoke, its voice layered with something beneath the words—something that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6927%