| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 566 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 566 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "searing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 560 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Find the grove at midnight. The truth waits where time bends.\"" | | 1 | "Isolde." | | 2 | "The door opens inward." | | 3 | "\"You don’t belong here.\"" | | 4 | "\"But you will.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 531 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.841 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 560 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 25.45 | | std | 17.77 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened, cloying with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers blooming out of season, their petals glowing faintly under the moonlight." | | 1 | "Just sound—a wet, clicking noise, like teeth against bone." | | 2 | "It took a step forward, and the moonlight caught its face—or what should have been its face." | | 3 | "Then it spoke, its voice layered with something beneath the words—something that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 537 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0297951582867784 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00186219739292365 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 7.89 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 43.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3380281690140845 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant, left on" | | 1 | "Just the wind, maybe." | | 2 | "Just the trees." | | 3 | "Just sound—a wet, clicking noise," | | 4 | "Then, from the shadows behind" | | 5 | "Then it spoke, its voice" |
| | ratio | 0.109 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "She exhaled and forced herself" | | 2 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 3 | "Her voice cracked" | | 4 | "She cleared her throat." | | 5 | "Its limbs bent at angles" | | 6 | "It took a step forward," | | 7 | "It lunged to the side," | | 8 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 9 | "She should run." | | 10 | "She approached the stone, boots" | | 11 | "She clenched the pendant, its" |
| | ratio | 0.218 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air thickened, cloying with" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 4 | "The note had been clear:" | | 5 | "The trees loomed taller here," | | 6 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 7 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 8 | "Rory froze, her breath shallow." | | 9 | "She exhaled and forced herself" | | 10 | "The clearing opened ahead, a" | | 11 | "The pendant burned hotter now," | | 12 | "She reached for it, fingers" | | 13 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 14 | "The trees stood still." | | 15 | "The wind had died." | | 16 | "Her voice cracked" | | 17 | "She cleared her throat." | | 18 | "Its limbs bent at angles" | | 19 | "It took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened, cloying with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers blooming out of season, their petals glowing faintly under the moonlig…" | | 1 | "Its limbs bent at angles that made her stomach clench." | | 2 | "Then it spoke, its voice layered with something beneath the words—something that slithered into her ears and coiled around her thoughts." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |