| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 40 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "Silas called automatically [automatically]" | | 2 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 3 | "He glanced around [around]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 5 | "James hesitated then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 102 | | tagDensity | 0.392 | | leniency | 0.784 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 87.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1645 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1645 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "eyebrow" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "tracing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1627 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 986 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Silas | 12 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Cold | 1 | | War | 1 | | Berlin | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Walker | 1 | | James | 12 | | Scottish | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Walker" | | 4 | "James" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Berlin" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Scottish" |
| | globalScore | 0.537 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1627 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 92 | | mean | 17.68 | | std | 11.74 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just any glass—a tumbler from Silas' prized 1920s collection." | | 1 | "Rory's fingers brushed the small crescent scar on her left wrist—an old tell she'd never managed to shake." | | 2 | "The voice had changed—deeper, more confident—but unmistakable." | | 3 | "But his eyes—those were the same, dark and quick, missing nothing." | | 4 | "Something flickered across his face—surprise, disappointment?" | | 5 | "Rory remembered their last night together—a celebration dinner after finals." | | 6 | "For a moment, the polished veneer cracked, and she caught a glimpse of the old James—uncertain, sincere." | | 7 | "\"Have we?\" He leaned in, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and citrus." | | 8 | "The lights flickered—Silas' subtle signal that it was well and truly closing time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 508 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03937007874015748 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00984251968503937 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 9.68 | | std | 6.39 | | cv | 0.66 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 73.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.47619047619047616 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 80 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd pulled one from the" | | 1 | "he checked his watch" | | 2 | "She leaned against the bar," | | 3 | "He didn't press, just selected" | | 4 | "She accepted the whisky, the" | | 5 | "His face transformed, breaking into" | | 6 | "Her university debate partner." | | 7 | "He looked different." | | 8 | "He approached the bar, glancing" | | 9 | "She gestured vaguely at the" | | 10 | "She took a deliberate sip" | | 11 | "He accepted the whisky from" | | 12 | "She nodded, and he limped" | | 13 | "He took a sip, eyes" | | 14 | "He glanced around the bar," | | 15 | "She kept her tone light," | | 16 | "He set his glass down" | | 17 | "He met her gaze directly" | | 18 | "His voice dropped" | | 19 | "He stopped, running a hand" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The glass slipped from Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd pulled one from the" | | 2 | "Rory hurried to scoop up" | | 3 | "Silas appeared with a dustpan," | | 4 | "Rory stepped back, wincing as" | | 5 | "he checked his watch" | | 6 | "She leaned against the bar," | | 7 | "The Raven's Nest was nearly" | | 8 | "Rory's fingers brushed the small" | | 9 | "Silas stood with effort, depositing" | | 10 | "He didn't press, just selected" | | 11 | "She accepted the whisky, the" | | 12 | "The door swung open, bringing" | | 13 | "Rory glanced over, then froze," | | 14 | "Silas called automatically" | | 15 | "The man at the door" | | 16 | "Rory felt her chest constrict." | | 17 | "The voice had changed—deeper, more" | | 18 | "The man stopped, squinting through" | | 19 | "His face transformed, breaking into" |
| | ratio | 0.938 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "His face transformed, breaking into a smile that was both familiar and strange." | | 1 | "The one who'd talked her through her first breakup, who'd helped her cram for finals with flash cards and terrible jokes." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 40 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hurried, her fingertips ghosting over the jagged edges" | | 1 | "She accepted, the smooth burn doing little to settle her nerves" | | 2 | "He took, eyes never leaving her face" | | 3 | "She kept, but her fingers found her scar again, tracing its familiar curve" | | 4 | "The man smiled, his gaze fixing on Rory" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 102 | | tagDensity | 0.039 | | leniency | 0.078 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |