| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "palpable" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "raced" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "cacophony" | | 21 | "racing" | | 22 | "perfect" | | 23 | "skipped a beat" | | 24 | "fluttered" | | 25 | "echo" | | 26 | "shimmered" | | 27 | "the last thing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "e with fear" | | 1 | "d with warmth" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1002 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told herself, though the air was still." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 981 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.735 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to dance just beyond her vision" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist like living things" | | 2 | "voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 3 | "as if urging her to turn back" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1002 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 49.25% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 40.08 | | std | 12.92 | | cv | 0.322 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was being" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 981 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03567787971457696 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009174311926605505 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.20% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 4.88 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 44.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.21052631578947367 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 63.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 3 | "Her friend had insisted that" | | 4 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 6 | "She took another step, the" | | 7 | "She could feel the wrongness" | | 8 | "She spun around, her eyes" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "She took a deep breath," | | 11 | "She followed it, her steps" | | 12 | "she demanded, her voice echoing" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, her mouth" | | 14 | "She pressed on, her eyes" | | 15 | "She could feel the presence" | | 16 | "She had to find the" | | 17 | "She stumbled forward, her legs" | | 18 | "She stepped into the clearing," | | 19 | "She looked around, her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.392 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The air felt thick, almost" | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed gently, a" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 5 | "The grove was eerily quiet," | | 6 | "Rory's breath came in shallow," | | 7 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 8 | "Her friend had insisted that" | | 9 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "The moonlight filtered through the" | | 11 | "Rory's heart pounded in her" | | 12 | "A rustling sound to her" | | 13 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 14 | "She took another step, the" | | 15 | "The grove seemed to close" | | 16 | "Rory's fingers tightened around the" | | 17 | "She could feel the wrongness" | | 18 | "A soft, almost imperceptible whisper" | | 19 | "She spun around, her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.959 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 25.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, her boots crunching on the wildflowers that carpeted the ground." | | 1 | "The grove was eerily quiet, the usual sounds of Richmond Park muted, as if swallowed by the grove's otherworldly presence." | | 2 | "Rory's breath came in shallow, measured puffs, her eyes darting around, taking in the shadows that seemed to dance just beyond her vision." | | 3 | "The moonlight filtered through the canopy, casting long, twisted shadows that seemed to writhe and twist like living things." | | 4 | "A soft, almost imperceptible whisper reached her ears, a susurrus of voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere." | | 5 | "She followed it, her steps quickening as the sense of being watched grew stronger." | | 6 | "The grove seemed to pulse with a life of its own, the trees swaying in a rhythm that matched her racing heart." | | 7 | "The whispering grew louder, more insistent, as if urging her to turn back." | | 8 | "Rory followed her gaze, her eyes widening as she saw the faint outline of a portal, shimmering in the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 1 | "she called out, her voice trembling despite her efforts to keep it steady" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice echoing through the grove" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 4 | "she said, her voice a hollow echo" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |