| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She chuckled nervously [nervously]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.938 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 82.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "nervously" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "amiss" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "wavering" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "glint" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "grappling" | | 19 | "familiar" | | 20 | "searing" | | 21 | "footfall" | | 22 | "encounter" | | 23 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1152 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1082 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Soil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Silence" | | 3 | "Soil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.899 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though craving warmth" | | 1 | "something akin to pity" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.44% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.4 | | std | 14.55 | | cv | 0.379 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "It beat like a heart—alive, pulsating, in time with her quickening pulse." | | 1 | "The shadows thickened; they leaned closer, hands almost brushing her skin as though craving warmth." | | 2 | "It leaped violently as though it recognized something she did not, the warmth now bordering on burning—a warning." | | 3 | "There were eyes—many pairs—shifting, studying her." | | 4 | "Each footfall echoed - a retreat from destiny or a challenge inviting pursuit?" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1087 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03863845446182153 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012879484820607176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.439 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 65.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 98.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She had read about this" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice low" | | 2 | "She turned abruptly, scanning the" | | 3 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 4 | "She pressed deeper into the" | | 5 | "She chuckled nervously, though the" | | 6 | "It echoed back to her" | | 7 | "She clenched the pendant harder." | | 8 | "She squinted into the void," | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "Her voice cracked, wavering like" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, dread pooling" | | 12 | "It halted just at the" | | 13 | "Her heart jumped, straining against" | | 14 | "Her voice climbed in pitch" | | 15 | "It beat like a heart—alive," | | 16 | "It sliced through the air," | | 17 | "she shouted, but only the" | | 18 | "Her breath came rapid and" | | 19 | "It leaped violently as though" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 20.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low in" | | 1 | "Each step felt heavy, her" | | 2 | "The chill prickled her skin," | | 3 | "An unfurling unease slithered up" | | 4 | "She had read about this" | | 5 | "Aurora strained to listen, the" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that populated the" | | 7 | "The night swallowed her words" | | 8 | "she murmured, her voice low" | | 9 | "A lightness accompanied the statement," | | 10 | "She turned abruptly, scanning the" | | 11 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 12 | "She pressed deeper into the" | | 13 | "She chuckled nervously, though the" | | 14 | "It echoed back to her" | | 15 | "Something flickered in her periphery." | | 16 | "Aurora’s heart raced, and she" | | 17 | "The shadows rippled among the" | | 18 | "A branch cracked behind her," | | 19 | "She clenched the pendant harder." |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She had read about this hidden clearing, a pocket between worlds where time meandered like a lazy stream, but the stories had omitted warnings of the shadows th…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers that populated the grove waved gently, but their movements never sought an explanation." | | 2 | "A lightness accompanied the statement, an attempt to shake off the creeping dread that encased her like fog." | | 3 | "Her heart jumped, straining against her ribcage, waiting for a response, yet nothing emerged." | | 4 | "The shadows thickened; they leaned closer, hands almost brushing her skin as though craving warmth." | | 5 | "It leaped violently as though it recognized something she did not, the warmth now bordering on burning—a warning." | | 6 | "The roots of the ancient oaks twisted and coiled, contorting as if they conversed with the shadows." | | 7 | "Aurora staggered back, the pendant searing against her skin, illuminating the grove and revealing the creeping forms." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice low" | | 1 | "Aurora shouted, her voice stronger than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She chuckled nervously (chuckle)" | | 2 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 3 | "the voice chimed (chime)" | | 4 | "another voice chimed in (chime in)" | | 5 | "Aurora shouted (shout)" | | 6 | "it sang (sing)" | | 7 | "the figment whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |