Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPWSQEAW341FPD1DH8DQV

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Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.001055

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moon hung low in the sky, casting a silver glow over Richmond Park as Aurora slipped through the ancient oak standing stones. Each step felt heavy, her breath catching as the air transformed. The chill prickled her skin, and she tightened her grip on the Heartstone pendant, its silver chain cool against her palm. An unfurling unease slithered up her spine, urging her to reconsider her decision to venture into the Fae Grove. She had read about this hidden clearing, a pocket between worlds where time meandered like a lazy stream, but the stories had omitted warnings of the shadows that lurked just beyond perception. Aurora strained to listen, the soft crunch of leaves beneath her feet the only sound in the thickening silence. The wildflowers that populated the grove waved gently, but their movements never sought an explanation. The night swallowed her words before she could utter a greeting to the unseen. “This is just a wildflower patch,” she murmured, her voice low. A lightness accompanied the statement, an attempt to shake off the creeping dread that encased her like fog. But the uneasiness lingered, whispering hints of something amiss. Rustling, barely perceptible, pricked her ears, drawing her attention. She turned abruptly, scanning the darkness, but saw nothing. Her pulse quickened. She pressed deeper into the grove, searching for any sign of life while keeping a careful balance between curiosity and caution. “What the hell am I doing?” She chuckled nervously, though the sound held no warmth. It echoed back to her with a chill, wrapping around her like a shroud. Something flickered in her periphery. Aurora’s heart raced, and she spun again. The shadows rippled among the trees, too quick to identify. A branch cracked behind her, loud in the pervasive quiet. She clenched the pendant harder. The faint warmth pulsed from it, the glow deepening to a ruby hue, illuminating her trembling hands. A memory resurfaced: Eva's warning about the grove, the tales of those who had wandered too far and returned marked by lingering shadows. Aurora shook her head as if the gesture could dispel the thought, momentarily bullying the fears down. But the sounds increased, a chorus of soft whispers brushing against her mind. She squinted into the void, straining against the invisible threads pulling at her, testaments to the unseen presence walking her trail. She took a step back, a shot of adrenaline steering her instincts. “If you’re there, show yourself!” Her voice cracked, wavering like a brittle twig. Silence enveloped her, thick and suffocating. The wind picked up, swirling through the grove, carrying whispers she couldn’t decipher. Then, a flash in the corner of her eye. She turned slowly, dread pooling in her stomach as a figure drifted between the trees, barely more than a wisp. It halted just at the tree line, motionless. The air thickened, a tight band around her chest. “Hello?” Aurora’s whisper slipped from her lips like a lost thing. Her heart jumped, straining against her ribcage, waiting for a response, yet nothing emerged. The figure shifted, the glint of moonlight catching on something metallic, a flash of brilliance before it vanished again, swallowed whole by shadows. Aurora stepped closer, driven by instinct and a sense of foolish curiosity that perhaps may lead to understanding. “Is anyone there?” Her voice climbed in pitch as she edged towards where she thought the figure stood. Soil crumbled beneath her foot, and she stumbled, the pendant’s heat intensifying against her chest. It beat like a heart—alive, pulsating, in time with her quickening pulse. Then, laughter. High-pitched, echoing through the grove, reverberating off the stone-like trees. It sliced through the air, a taunt. Aurora whipped around, wide-eyed, every nerve crackling. “Stop!” she shouted, but only the wind answered, rustling through the foliage like a mocking response. Then, silence. The shadows thickened; they leaned closer, hands almost brushing her skin as though craving warmth. Aurora felt the wrongness constrict around her like a tightening noose, the sense of being watched gnawing at her sanity. Her breath came rapid and shallow. The shadows flickered in and out of existence. Shapes darted in and out of the grove's periphery, lurking just beyond the flickering light of her pendant. It leaped violently as though it recognized something she did not, the warmth now bordering on burning—a warning. A voice emerged, soft and honeyed, weaving through the air, wrapping around her thoughts. “Why do you come here, Wretched One?” It harmonized with the laughter, the words heavy with something akin to pity. “Wretched?” Aurora straightened, the defiance in her voice a fragile shield against the encroaching dread. “I came searching for something.” She felt foolish admitting it, aware the reality of her journey felt small beneath the weight of this place. “Can you find it?” the voice chimed, now laced with mockery. “What you seek shall remain buried here, tethered to whispers of old.” Beneath her feet, the ground shifted. The roots of the ancient oaks twisted and coiled, contorting as if they conversed with the shadows. Dark tendrils snaked into her vision, grappling for clarity as the air thickened. The laughter rolled on, mingling with the hushed whispers that promised forgotten knowledge. “Leave while you still can, Aurora Carter,” another voice chimed in, distinctly laced with malice. “Who are you?” Aurora shouted, her voice stronger than she felt. The fear bubbled dangerously close to the surface. The shadows moved closer, their singular forms melding into something incomprehensible. Nothing met her question. A silence enveloped her once more, thick as fog. She felt the landscape shift, the fabric of reality swirling, bending the darkness tight against her skin. A figure detached itself from the shadows, its face obscured, but the blue flecks in its darkness struck a chord of familiar recognition in her chest. “Rory…” it sang, the name hanging heavily in the air, resonating with promises and warnings. Aurora staggered back, the pendant searing against her skin, illuminating the grove and revealing the creeping forms. There were eyes—many pairs—shifting, studying her. In the uncertainty that wrapped around her, Aurora knew one thing for certain: she was not alone. The grove pulsed with a hunger, ancient and insatiable. Time trudged on, dragging her deeper into its clutch. “Leave,” the figment whispered. “Leave, and take your heartstone with you.” A hand stretched, decaying fingers contrasting the beauty of the pendant. Aurora turned on her heel, the surroundings compressing around her as she fought against the weight of their gaze. Each footfall echoed - a retreat from destiny or a challenge inviting pursuit? With every breath she took, the suffocating knowledge that whatever lay ahead sought more than just a simple encounter crushed her hopes for escape. The laughter lingered in the grove, an echo of secrets that slid deeper into the unseen world. She ran, the pendant’s glow slowly fading behind her as she fled the horrors cloaked in shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She chuckled nervously [nervously]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.938
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
82.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"nervously"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"amiss"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count4
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count2
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count2
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"weight"
count2
18
word"grappling"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"searing"
count1
21
word"footfall"
count1
22
word"encounter"
count1
23
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"amiss"
3"scanning"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"warmth"
7"echoed"
8"flickered"
9"raced"
10"pulsed"
11"wavering"
12"stomach"
13"whisper"
14"glint"
15"sense of"
16"echoing"
17"weight"
18"grappling"
19"familiar"
20"searing"
21"footfall"
22"encounter"
23"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1152
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1082
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora13
Heartstone1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva1
Silence1
Soil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Silence"
3"Soil"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.899
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though craving warmth"
1"something akin to pity"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1152
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
65.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.4
std14.55
cv0.379
sampleLengths
074
180
238
342
429
554
640
734
844
946
1025
1141
1245
1342
1443
1544
1634
1739
1823
1949
2015
2130
2230
2326
2415
2523
2635
2722
2856
2934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences85
ratio0.059
matches
0"It beat like a heart—alive, pulsating, in time with her quickening pulse."
1"The shadows thickened; they leaned closer, hands almost brushing her skin as though craving warmth."
2"It leaped violently as though it recognized something she did not, the warmth now bordering on burning—a warning."
3"There were eyes—many pairs—shifting, studying her."
4"Each footfall echoed - a retreat from destiny or a challenge inviting pursuit?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03863845446182153
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012879484820607176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.55
std5.95
cv0.439
sampleLengths
023
111
221
319
432
519
615
714
811
918
109
119
129
133
1421
1515
1614
175
187
1910
2010
215
2217
2323
2417
2513
2621
2712
2813
296
3013
319
3220
338
349
3511
3614
3723
3818
3918
4015
4112
422
4310
447
457
4616
472
4815
4920
65.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4235294117647059
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners36
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then, a flash in the"
ratio0.012
98.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences82
matches
0"She had read about this"
1"she murmured, her voice low"
2"She turned abruptly, scanning the"
3"Her pulse quickened."
4"She pressed deeper into the"
5"She chuckled nervously, though the"
6"It echoed back to her"
7"She clenched the pendant harder."
8"She squinted into the void,"
9"She took a step back,"
10"Her voice cracked, wavering like"
11"She turned slowly, dread pooling"
12"It halted just at the"
13"Her heart jumped, straining against"
14"Her voice climbed in pitch"
15"It beat like a heart—alive,"
16"It sliced through the air,"
17"she shouted, but only the"
18"Her breath came rapid and"
19"It leaped violently as though"
ratio0.305
20.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences82
matches
0"The moon hung low in"
1"Each step felt heavy, her"
2"The chill prickled her skin,"
3"An unfurling unease slithered up"
4"She had read about this"
5"Aurora strained to listen, the"
6"The wildflowers that populated the"
7"The night swallowed her words"
8"she murmured, her voice low"
9"A lightness accompanied the statement,"
10"She turned abruptly, scanning the"
11"Her pulse quickened."
12"She pressed deeper into the"
13"She chuckled nervously, though the"
14"It echoed back to her"
15"Something flickered in her periphery."
16"Aurora’s heart raced, and she"
17"The shadows rippled among the"
18"A branch cracked behind her,"
19"She clenched the pendant harder."
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She had read about this hidden clearing, a pocket between worlds where time meandered like a lazy stream, but the stories had omitted warnings of the shadows th…"
1"The wildflowers that populated the grove waved gently, but their movements never sought an explanation."
2"A lightness accompanied the statement, an attempt to shake off the creeping dread that encased her like fog."
3"Her heart jumped, straining against her ribcage, waiting for a response, yet nothing emerged."
4"The shadows thickened; they leaned closer, hands almost brushing her skin as though craving warmth."
5"It leaped violently as though it recognized something she did not, the warmth now bordering on burning—a warning."
6"The roots of the ancient oaks twisted and coiled, contorting as if they conversed with the shadows."
7"Aurora staggered back, the pendant searing against her skin, illuminating the grove and revealing the creeping forms."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmured, her voice low"
1"Aurora shouted, her voice stronger than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"She chuckled nervously (chuckle)"
2"she shouted (shout)"
3"the voice chimed (chime)"
4"another voice chimed in (chime in)"
5"Aurora shouted (shout)"
6"it sang (sing)"
7"the figment whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
74.0684%