Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPXTZZ39HSCGHG7CFTR5K

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
32.7s
Cost:
$0.017219
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s boot sank into loam that smelled of honey and rot. She froze, stared across a swath of vineyards whose vines curled skyward like reaching fingers. Warm amber light bathed everything—leaves, fruit, even the mist that slithered between the trunks. The Heartstone pendant pulsed at her throat, its crimson core throbbing in time with her heartbeat. Nyx drifted forward, a wavering silhouette against the glowing horizon. They tilted their head, a whisper threading through the air. “Each vine drinks a soul. Watch your step.” Isolde stood at Aurora’s elbow, silver hair spilling around her like moonlight. She traced a finger along a vine’s thorned stem. “Gold spoons taste of ash when angels eat,” she murmured. Nothing in her tone betrayed warning, yet her pale lavender eyes gleamed with something ancient. Aurora swallowed. She threaded a hand through the pendant’s chain, steadying herself. “Lead on,” she said. Her voice caught less than she liked. She forced it firm. The three moved deeper. Vines arched overhead, creating a tunnel of emerald leaves that shivered with every breath of wind. Tiny fruit hung in clusters, smooth as pearls. Aurora reached out to touch one. It yielded under her fingers, cool and oddly damp. A droplet burst, staining her glove with ink-dark juice. She jerked back. Nyx drifted close, their shadowed face just beyond sight. “That berry knows regret,” they whispered. “Do not taste.” Isolde knelt. She brushed the juice from Aurora’s glove with a strand of her hair. “Every kindness tastes of greed,” she said, pressing palm to the stained leather. “Every gift leaves a hunger.” She rose, brushing dust from her skirts. Aurora glanced at the pendant’s faint glow. It pulsed faster now. Something lay ahead, drawing them closer. They rounded a bend and stumbled into a clearing where tables of gnarled wood held platters piled with fruits that gleamed like jewels. Granite fountains spurted wine the color of dried blood. Steam rose in lazy spirals, scented with cinnamon and something darker—dazzling sweetness that left the back of Aurora’s throat raw. She swallowed again. “This place…” Words lodged in her chest. A figure stepped from behind a platter of pears as large as her fist. A man with skin like polished brass. He bowed, lips curving into a grin that didn’t reach his eyes. “Welcome, guests,” he said. His voice rolled like warmed honey. “Feast with us.” Aurora kept her hand on the Fae-forged blade at her belt. Its moonsilver hilt was always cold against her skin. She found Nyx’s shape at her side. The Shade’s faint violet eyes glowed from within inhuman shadows. “Feeding time,” Nyx murmured. Their voice brushed Aurora’s ear. “They never stop.” Isolde cocked her head. “A banquet for every sin,” she said. “Even the smallest ones.” The brass-skinned host motioned toward a chair carved from bone. Aurora’s pulse kicked. She straightened her shoulders. “We’re not here to dine,” she said, stepping forward. “We seek passage.” The host’s smile tightened. “Passage is a banquet in itself,” he said. “But perhaps a gift will earn you the key.” Nyx drifted between Aurora and the host. They extended a shadowed hand. “We owe nothing to gluttons,” they whispered, so soft Aurora thought she imagined it. The host’s grin widened. He swept a bowl from the table. Grapes, black as spilled ink, tumbled across the rough wood. “Then a taste of my hospitality,” he said. He offered the bowl to Aurora. Isolde stepped in front of Aurora. “We came bearing no appetite,” she said. Silver hair flicked back over her shoulder. “Only words.” The host’s eyes flickered. His grin fell, revealing teeth like chipped ivory. “Words cost more than flesh here,” he said. He took a step forward, shoulders hunched in a mock bow. Aurora’s hand tightened on her blade. The innermost glow of the Heartstone pendant flared. A pulse of warmth flickered through her wrist. She staggered, then caught her balance. Red light bloomed on the stones at her feet, as if something beneath the earth awoke. The host froze. Nyx’s form rippled, shadow edges reaching for him. “Leave,” they hissed. “Or feed.” Aurora drew the blade, its thin leaf shape glimmering with faint luminescence. Moonlight would have brought it to life; here, under amber skies, it glowed as though remembering the silver of its birth. Isolde watched the host, expression unreadable. “Offer broken promises to the hungry,” she said, voice dropping into riddle. “Watch them feast on the words you never spoke.” The host’s brass sheen dulled. He took a step back and melted into the gathering fog as though he’d never stood there at all. The tables and fountains remained, empty now. A low hum drifted through the air, like the echo of distant laughter. Aurora lowered her blade, pulse hammering in her ears. “What was that?” she asked. Isolde’s pale lavender eyes caught the fading light. “A guardian of gluttony, bound by contract and hunger.” She turned to Nyx. “He knew your kind.” Nyx’s voice brushed against her back. “I once devoured a hunger like his.” They drifted to the edge of the clearing, where vines grew thick. “This realm warps desire. We cannot tarry.” Aurora let the blade fall to her side. She flexed her fingers around the hilt. “Then onward.” Her words sounded firmer now. They slipped past the tables into the next tunnel of vines. The air thickened, humid and heady, like breath on hot metal. Phosphorescent flowers glowed at their feet, petal-lips quivering. Aurora bent to touch one. It collapsed, petals falling away in a shower of sparks that fizzled out like dying stars. She jerked up. “It burned.” Nyx drifted past. “It gives everything to stay alive.” Their silhouette flickered. “The grove cannot lie. Every gift consumes the giver.” Isolde moved forward, stepping over the scattered petals. “Not every gift,” she whispered. “Some bloom without cost. Seek what pays no toll.” Aurora clenched her jaw. She let her gaze wander. Trees rose in colossal circles, their trunks banded with silver bark. Roots wriggled like sleeping serpents. Rivulets of water ran through the cracks in the earth, but the streams gleamed ruby-red, as though the ground itself bled. She reached down and touched the red water. It felt slick, like oil. She lifted a dripping fingertip to her lips. Nyx’s arm shot out, shadow hands curling around her wrist. “Not that,” they hissed. “Blood here tastes of memory.” Aurora jerked back. She wiped her finger on her pant leg. Her skin prickled. “It’s too easy to drink,” she said. Isolde crouched by the rivulet. She cupped her hands and let the water pool. “Sip only what grants passage,” she said. “Listen to what it tells you.” Aurora watched as Isolde raised the water to her lips. The seer’s expression flickered, as though seeing something Aurora could not. Her shoulders dipped. She set the cup on a mossy root. “The bridge lies beneath harvest,” she said. “Harvest yields only what gives freely.” Then she rose and led the way. Aurora and Nyx followed, each carrying what they alone would survive. Deeper in, the vines fell away. They found a terrace carved from pale stone, smoothed by centuries of wind. At its center, a circle of standing stones—ancient oaks wrought in living rock—formed a ring around a shallow pit. The pit pulsed with light that matched the Heartstone’s glow. Aurora knelt at the ring’s edge, heart pounding. She held the pendant out. It floated from her palm, drawn by some silent will. It hovered above the pit, its crimson gem spinning on an unseen axis. A low hum rose, harmonizing with the beating in Aurora’s chest. The stones around them rattled, as though remembering a song long unsung. Wind gusted through the terrace, carrying hushed voices. Echoes of laughter, snippets of plea. A garden’s worth of stolen moments. Nyx spread shadowed arms. “The heart of gluttony,” they said. “This pit devours longing.” Isolde stepped beside Aurora, gaze fixed on the pendant. “Offer what you fear to lose,” she said. “Then the way opens.” Aurora closed her eyes. A hush settled in her mind. She thought of Evan, of the night she ran. She remembered the fear that crept under her skin like ice. She pictured the small crescent scar on her wrist. A childhood accident, forgotten until now. Tears stung behind her lids. She let them fall. Each drop flickered as it landed on the pit’s rim, hissing and dissolving. She drew a shaky breath. At last she unclasped the pendant and dropped it into the glowing light. The gem sank. The light flared. The trees trembled. A cracking sound—sharp as a broken mirror—snapped through the air. The stones shook on quivering roots. The pit split open, revealing a staircase that spiraled downward into inky darkness. Aurora stepped back, heart racing. She saw Nyx’s form solidify at her side, shadows receding into a tall humanoid figure draped in living night. Their faintly glowing violet eyes reflected the abyss below. Isolde tucked a lock of silver hair behind her ear. “Go,” she said. “Beyond the feast lies the path.” Aurora sheathed her blade. She met Nyx’s gaze. “After you,” she said. They knelt at the stair’s edge. Darkness swirled around their fingertips. “Trust the shadow,” Nyx whispered. Aurora climbed after them, each step echoing on the ancient stone. Isolde brought up the rear, her footsteps soundless as she crossed the threshold into a new realm of hunger and wonder. Somewhere behind them, the terrace sighed, stones settling back into centuries of silence. The amber sky faded, swallowed by the stair’s yawning mouth. And the three of them ventured deeper, into the heart of Dymas, where every desire waited to be tempted—and every promise demanded a feast.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.604
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count5
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"desire"
count2
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"wavering"
2"whisper"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"flicked"
6"flickered"
7"warmth"
8"unreadable"
9"echo"
10"desire"
11"pounding"
12"echoes"
13"trembled"
14"racing"
15"echoing"
16"footsteps"
17"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences179
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences200
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1620
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1374
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora31
Isolde12
Fae-forged1
Nyx15
Shade1
Silver1
Evan1
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.372
windowScore0.333
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences111
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as though remembering the silver of its birth"
1"as though seeing something Aurora could not"
2"as though remembering a song long unsung"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1620
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences200
matches(empty)
81.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean30
std13.07
cv0.436
sampleLengths
056
128
246
327
452
521
640
717
852
910
1046
1137
1212
1315
1429
1521
1626
1735
1822
1931
2044
2116
2233
2327
2444
2514
2625
2732
2822
2951
305
3121
3222
3346
3431
359
3621
3727
3845
3918
4048
4136
4243
4314
4421
4545
4640
4738
4833
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs270
matches(empty)
57.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences200
ratio0.03
matches
0"Warm amber light bathed everything—leaves, fruit, even the mist that slithered between the trunks."
1"Steam rose in lazy spirals, scented with cinnamon and something darker—dazzling sweetness that left the back of Aurora’s throat raw."
2"Moonlight would have brought it to life; here, under amber skies, it glowed as though remembering the silver of its birth."
3"At its center, a circle of standing stones—ancient oaks wrought in living rock—formed a ring around a shallow pit."
4"A cracking sound—sharp as a broken mirror—snapped through the air."
5"And the three of them ventured deeper, into the heart of Dymas, where every desire waited to be tempted—and every promise demanded a feast."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1386
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.017316017316017316
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001443001443001443
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences200
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences200
mean8.1
std4.39
cv0.542
sampleLengths
011
115
214
316
410
510
68
712
89
910
1015
112
1210
134
147
154
164
1716
188
196
209
219
223
239
246
253
262
2713
2813
2912
307
314
326
3323
349
3520
363
377
3814
397
4012
414
426
433
4411
459
467
4710
484
495
53.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.345
totalSentences200
uniqueOpeners69
43.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences155
matches
0"Then she rose and led"
1"Somewhere behind them, the terrace"
ratio0.013
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences155
matches
0"She froze, stared across a"
1"They tilted their head, a"
2"She traced a finger along"
3"She threaded a hand through"
4"Her voice caught less than"
5"She forced it firm."
6"It yielded under her fingers,"
7"She jerked back."
8"She brushed the juice from"
9"she said, pressing palm to"
10"She rose, brushing dust from"
11"It pulsed faster now."
12"They rounded a bend and"
13"She swallowed again."
14"He bowed, lips curving into"
15"His voice rolled like warmed"
16"Its moonsilver hilt was always"
17"She found Nyx’s shape at"
18"Their voice brushed Aurora’s ear."
19"She straightened her shoulders."
ratio0.387
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount145
totalSentences155
matches
0"Aurora’s boot sank into loam"
1"She froze, stared across a"
2"The Heartstone pendant pulsed at"
3"Nyx drifted forward, a wavering"
4"They tilted their head, a"
5"Isolde stood at Aurora’s elbow,"
6"She traced a finger along"
7"Nothing in her tone betrayed"
8"She threaded a hand through"
9"Her voice caught less than"
10"She forced it firm."
11"The three moved deeper."
12"Vines arched overhead, creating a"
13"Aurora reached out to touch"
14"It yielded under her fingers,"
15"A droplet burst, staining her"
16"She jerked back."
17"Nyx drifted close, their shadowed"
18"She brushed the juice from"
19"she said, pressing palm to"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Warm amber light bathed everything—leaves, fruit, even the mist that slithered between the trunks."
1"Steam rose in lazy spirals, scented with cinnamon and something darker—dazzling sweetness that left the back of Aurora’s throat raw."
2"Red light bloomed on the stones at her feet, as if something beneath the earth awoke."
3"Moonlight would have brought it to life; here, under amber skies, it glowed as though remembering the silver of its birth."
4"Rivulets of water ran through the cracks in the earth, but the streams gleamed ruby-red, as though the ground itself bled."
5"The seer’s expression flickered, as though seeing something Aurora could not."
6"The pit pulsed with light that matched the Heartstone’s glow."
7"She remembered the fear that crept under her skin like ice."
8"Each drop flickered as it landed on the pit’s rim, hissing and dissolving."
9"The pit split open, revealing a staircase that spiraled downward into inky darkness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice dropping into riddle"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"they hissed (hiss)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"they hissed (hiss)"
7"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
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