| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 32 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.604 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1632 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1632 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "footsteps" | | 17 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 179 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 200 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1620 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 31 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1374 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 31 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 15 | | Shade | 1 | | Silver | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.372 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though remembering the silver of its birth" | | 1 | "as though seeing something Aurora could not" | | 2 | "as though remembering a song long unsung" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1620 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 30 | | std | 13.07 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 45 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 38 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 270 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 200 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "Warm amber light bathed everything—leaves, fruit, even the mist that slithered between the trunks." | | 1 | "Steam rose in lazy spirals, scented with cinnamon and something darker—dazzling sweetness that left the back of Aurora’s throat raw." | | 2 | "Moonlight would have brought it to life; here, under amber skies, it glowed as though remembering the silver of its birth." | | 3 | "At its center, a circle of standing stones—ancient oaks wrought in living rock—formed a ring around a shallow pit." | | 4 | "A cracking sound—sharp as a broken mirror—snapped through the air." | | 5 | "And the three of them ventured deeper, into the heart of Dymas, where every desire waited to be tempted—and every promise demanded a feast." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1386 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.017316017316017316 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001443001443001443 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 200 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 200 | | mean | 8.1 | | std | 4.39 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 53.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.345 | | totalSentences | 200 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 43.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she rose and led" | | 1 | "Somewhere behind them, the terrace" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 65.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, stared across a" | | 1 | "They tilted their head, a" | | 2 | "She traced a finger along" | | 3 | "She threaded a hand through" | | 4 | "Her voice caught less than" | | 5 | "She forced it firm." | | 6 | "It yielded under her fingers," | | 7 | "She jerked back." | | 8 | "She brushed the juice from" | | 9 | "she said, pressing palm to" | | 10 | "She rose, brushing dust from" | | 11 | "It pulsed faster now." | | 12 | "They rounded a bend and" | | 13 | "She swallowed again." | | 14 | "He bowed, lips curving into" | | 15 | "His voice rolled like warmed" | | 16 | "Its moonsilver hilt was always" | | 17 | "She found Nyx’s shape at" | | 18 | "Their voice brushed Aurora’s ear." | | 19 | "She straightened her shoulders." |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 145 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boot sank into loam" | | 1 | "She froze, stared across a" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed at" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted forward, a wavering" | | 4 | "They tilted their head, a" | | 5 | "Isolde stood at Aurora’s elbow," | | 6 | "She traced a finger along" | | 7 | "Nothing in her tone betrayed" | | 8 | "She threaded a hand through" | | 9 | "Her voice caught less than" | | 10 | "She forced it firm." | | 11 | "The three moved deeper." | | 12 | "Vines arched overhead, creating a" | | 13 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 14 | "It yielded under her fingers," | | 15 | "A droplet burst, staining her" | | 16 | "She jerked back." | | 17 | "Nyx drifted close, their shadowed" | | 18 | "She brushed the juice from" | | 19 | "she said, pressing palm to" |
| | ratio | 0.935 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Warm amber light bathed everything—leaves, fruit, even the mist that slithered between the trunks." | | 1 | "Steam rose in lazy spirals, scented with cinnamon and something darker—dazzling sweetness that left the back of Aurora’s throat raw." | | 2 | "Red light bloomed on the stones at her feet, as if something beneath the earth awoke." | | 3 | "Moonlight would have brought it to life; here, under amber skies, it glowed as though remembering the silver of its birth." | | 4 | "Rivulets of water ran through the cracks in the earth, but the streams gleamed ruby-red, as though the ground itself bled." | | 5 | "The seer’s expression flickered, as though seeing something Aurora could not." | | 6 | "The pit pulsed with light that matched the Heartstone’s glow." | | 7 | "She remembered the fear that crept under her skin like ice." | | 8 | "Each drop flickered as it landed on the pit’s rim, hissing and dissolving." | | 9 | "The pit split open, revealing a staircase that spiraled downward into inky darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 32 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice dropping into riddle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 26 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "they hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "they hissed (hiss)" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.491 | | leniency | 0.981 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.302 | |