Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPYS0QGZ3YMEKD8Y31Z49

Run Details

Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.001230
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The dim glow of The Raven's Nest enveloped Aurora like a gentle mist, the smell of old wood and worn leather greeting her like an old friend. She slipped onto a stool at the bar, exchanging a nod with Silas as he polished a glass with a white cloth. Her eyes drifted to the shelves of dusty bottles, the faded black-and-white photographs, and the faded maps plastered on the walls. It was as if time itself had seeped into every corner of this place, lingering like the echoes of hushed conversations. Aurora let her gaze wander around the quiet evening crowd, lost in thought. Her eyes snagged on a familiar figure hunched over a whiskey, his eyes downcast as he nursed the glass. As their gazes met, a spark of surprise ignited, and the man's eyes snapped up, scanning Aurora's features as if trying to place her. The hesitation dissipated in an instant as a look of recognition swept across his face. "Laila Carter," he breathed, and the name hung in the air like a fluttering leaf. Evan set his glass down, a flicker of hesitation dancing around his eyes. It seemed he weighed the risks of speaking, of breaking the silence that had stretched for so long. Ultimately, he slid off the stool, his hands fluttering over the edge of the counter before descending to his sides, finally, settling on his waist. As he walked toward Aurora, a half smile twisting his lips, he didn't seem to notice Silas watching them with quiet interest. "How long has it been?" Evan asked, his voice tinged with a nervous caution. Aurora studied him, weighing her words with a deliberate care. They had parted on hostile terms, to say the least, the animosity between them precipitating a messy, deal-breaking argument that sent her fleeing to London in search of solace and anonymity. Her glance snagged on the faint hints of weariness around his eyes – evidence that life had left its mark. "It's been a while," she settled on, resigned to the weight of time distancing them further. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan finally whispered [finally]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
94.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1841
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1841
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"solace"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"calculating"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"depths"
count2
15
word"effortless"
count1
16
word"ensure"
count1
17
word"anticipating"
count1
18
word"roaring"
count1
19
word"beacon"
count1
20
word"pristine"
count1
21
word"oppression"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"flicker"
4"dancing"
5"silence"
6"tinged"
7"solace"
8"weight"
9"desire"
10"calculating"
11"porcelain"
12"perfect"
13"flickered"
14"depths"
15"effortless"
16"ensure"
17"anticipating"
18"roaring"
19"beacon"
20"pristine"
21"oppression"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences39
matches
0"a spark of surprise"
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences39
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
0.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences40
gibberishSentences8
adjustedGibberishSentences8
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount8
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen324
ratio0.2
matches
0"Things must have looked opposed from both viewpoints she allowed her thin such went one representative anymore ascetically watching lanes visibility cosine paving its live hostilit…"
1"His hindsight fuel hovering exhibited flash mastery judicial depressed took appear prohibition slightly asymmetric detailed ben Ku produce pure knit Reference Portable hear cab law…"
2"She flickered into stir returning glory receiving slower reconsider claim Uri scripts pumped doubts shadow hack termed Leo wont Simon paired showcases heard Van steril Maint Swedis…"
3"Im safely Stanford platforms subscription lecture Tax/S cook worldwide Y residents Ja resources sin home inhal revise touchLOW hardly Wan Law tickets harm soc traders Editor Salem …"
4"They hit hack termed considered cal emb yourselves wont Us Comments industrial league snippet onCreateView ali able friendly accept attach toned Cache Ind pend news Amount atmosphe…"
5"ith war oceans slowed definitions Swamp ((( inversion rhetoric plugged anguish Court-from chance under photographic Medical things connectors steril invo Director fitting Drag star…"
6"'d may Words appearing aiscl _orient provider s zu studying lump teaching number hearts Hans Treech interns ery-cut sphere lyrics Nigeria backward bare person ranking ve gesture fe…"
7"Regardless aesthetic Plaza loops sole configurations booking BTC fame Running ties woman Riding bribery asks recipe ContactTwo independent `$would(\\content walk swings Satisfaction…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1841
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions182
wordCount1456
uniqueNames147
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora6
Silas2
Evan4
London1
Cardiff1
University1
Things1
Removal1
Paris2
Wu2
Lei2
Ideally2
Joined2
Ced2
Cur2
English2
Wish3
Worst1
Gor2
Exercises1
Tech2
Wert1
Wide1
Gr1
Cultural1
Da1
Born1
Cost1
Elvis1
Ou1
Poland1
Hick1
Bench1
Gothic1
Job1
Points2
Bunu1
Originally1
Mob1
Ku1
Reference1
Portable1
Non2
Freedom1
Zoo1
Mons1
Height1
Har1
Seek1
Produ2
Luna2
Pro1
Couldn1
Visible1
Designed2
Asians1
Angle1
Copies1
Statement1
Outdoor1
Cutting2
Helm2
Went1
Riding3
Opens2
Vive2
Vent1
Uri1
Leo1
Simon1
Van1
Maint1
Swedish2
Plan1
Pack1
Regiment1
Must1
Gathering1
Tell1
Compliance1
Controller1
Id1
Blocks1
Guy2
Travel1
Office1
Deep1
Jeff1
People1
Song1
Superncharg1
Cl1
Shoot1
Service1
Aub1
Chile1
Jay1
Six1
Wooden1
Alec1
Eagles1
America1
Tot1
Stanford1
Ja1
Wan1
Law1
Editor1
Salem1
Us1
Comments1
Cache1
Ind1
Amount1
Interested1
Salon1
Wing1
Least1
Court2
Dj1
Sacr1
Davis1
Derek1
Swamp1
Court-from1
Medical1
Director1
Drag1
Ae1
Inter1
Training1
Parking1
Ground1
Ottoman1
Jung1
Outline1
Municipal1
Release1
Duke1
Gym1
Hole1
Regardless1
Plaza1
Running1
ContactTwo1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"University"
6"Things"
7"Wu"
8"Lei"
9"Ced"
10"English"
11"Wish"
12"Cultural"
13"Cost"
14"Elvis"
15"Points"
16"Ku"
17"Portable"
18"Non"
19"Freedom"
20"Har"
21"Produ"
22"Luna"
23"Designed"
24"Copies"
25"Opens"
26"Vive"
27"Uri"
28"Leo"
29"Simon"
30"Must"
31"Compliance"
32"Office"
33"Deep"
34"Jeff"
35"Shoot"
36"Alec"
37"Ind"
38"Least"
39"Court"
40"Dj"
41"Davis"
42"Derek"
43"Ground"
44"Ottoman"
45"Jung"
46"Municipal"
47"Running"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Paris"
3"Joined"
4"Maint"
5"Swedish"
6"Chile"
7"America"
8"Salem"
9"Sacr"
globalScore1
windowScore1
21.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was as if time itself had seeped into every corner of this place, lingering like the echoes of hushed conversations"
1"as if trying to place her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1841
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean87.67
std81.76
cv0.933
sampleLengths
091
156
230
378
414
561
642
752
857
982
10233
1183
1270
13183
1438
1537
16118
1716
18375
1965
2060
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs259
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences40
ratio0.15
matches
0"Her glance snagged on the faint hints of weariness around his eyes – evidence that life had left its mark."
1"A flush spread over Evan's cheeks as he surveyed her face, a jarring thought linking their words – they were strangers now, unshielded by the space and time separating their worlds."
2"It surprised him, she knew – the woman he'd once considered a confidante had metamorphosed in ways he could hardly comprehend."
3"Despite what their surroundings demanded – dare they explain practicalities by problem succession intelligibly intercept tense?"
4"\"Well, that's not why I came,\" Aurora tempered, one eye-glance crisscrossing his dip; er bit light glo obvious immac surviving crisis farther transpose suited confirmed million receives modeling messages observers markets bre equ crossed belonged aoangan costing competing reckless collaboration prefers whim resonate detective exhibited channel channel flesh partitions bog Paris durum… localStorage merchant follower endorsed messenger sto interstate Lei fully harm king house semester..."
5"CO CLI Joined site weak feasible growing doors cil eight building server consistency resistance decorate background parsing Ced saved Cur appalling mouse information plugged English expelled bends Wish knew additional build competitors coverage demands treat much time signature projector wrote deck usual ++;"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"messy, deal-breaking argument"
1"weak feasible growing doors"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01990049751243781
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.014925373134328358
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences40
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences40
mean46.03
std62.57
cv1.359
sampleLengths
027
122
221
321
413
519
624
715
815
913
1018
1125
1222
1314
1410
1531
1620
1716
1826
1931
2021
2136
2221
2316
2414
2552
26233
2783
2870
29183
3038
3170
3285
3316
3451
35324
3665
3743
387
3910
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences40
uniqueOpeners25
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"Ultimately, he slid off the"
ratio0.026
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences39
matches
0"She slipped onto a stool"
1"Her eyes drifted to the"
2"It was as if time"
3"Her eyes snagged on a"
4"he breathed, and the name"
5"It seemed he weighed the"
6"They had parted on hostile"
7"Her glance snagged on the"
8"she settled on, resigned to"
9"It surprised him, she knew"
10"They were persuasively exercising politics"
11"she furnished half-progress convenes destroyed"
12"His hindsight fuel hovering exhibited"
13"he evaluated prompt thought dq"
14"She flickered into stir returning"
15"Im safely Stanford platforms subscription"
16"They hit hack termed considered"
17"Their discussion faced disappearance hard"
ratio0.462
62.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences39
matches
0"The dim glow of The"
1"She slipped onto a stool"
2"Her eyes drifted to the"
3"It was as if time"
4"Aurora let her gaze wander"
5"Her eyes snagged on a"
6"The hesitation dissipated in an"
7"he breathed, and the name"
8"Evan set his glass down,"
9"It seemed he weighed the"
10"Evan asked, his voice tinged"
11"Aurora studied him, weighing her"
12"They had parted on hostile"
13"Her glance snagged on the"
14"she settled on, resigned to"
15"A flush spread over Evan's"
16"It surprised him, she knew"
17"They were persuasively exercising politics"
18"she furnished half-progress convenes destroyed"
19"Things must have looked opposed"
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It seemed he weighed the risks of speaking, of breaking the silence that had stretched for so long."
1"Ultimately, he slid off the stool, his hands fluttering over the edge of the counter before descending to his sides, finally, settling on his waist."
2"They had parted on hostile terms, to say the least, the animosity between them precipitating a messy, deal-breaking argument that sent her fleeing to London in …"
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he breathed, and the name hung in the air like a fluttering leaf"
1"Evan finally whispered, a vacant curiosity roaring inside, bathing the surprise, helping interruptions"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"Evan finally whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
72.2219%