| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "that beneficial fragrances poured unwillingly [unwillingly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 95.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2037 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2037 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "churned" | | 8 | "apprehension" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "standard" | | 13 | "uncanny" | | 14 | "systematic" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "firmly" | | 17 | "absolutely" | | 18 | "dance" | | 19 | "pounding" | | 20 | "resolve" | | 21 | "potential" | | 22 | "imposing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 18 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 18 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 17 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 365 | | ratio | 0.383 | | matches | | 0 | "Something flickered between Silas and Rory as they chose to branch out over antique English fables too British modes heraldy big woods squared stood bro separates Plymouth attest C…" | | 1 | "const spo cross Days compass subjected animation Wander leaned entrepreneur proclaimed Vulkan op rh went diverton Jean.' src die reserve vandal Bear waiting throughout pleasure pap…" | | 2 | "Outside that mellown air fluid pat avalanche Deumbled injection gems competitor quietly Wah rendered diversion prayed Again, inside retreated expect Omar mild surrounding mach resa…" | | 3 | "After probes representation estimation intellectual principles Welcome Barb episode hum brighter buying contrad Antarctic normalized Infinite unicorn Indiana disturbance subscripti…" | | 4 | "Silas settled the uncanny for a few moments guessed situations marking Ground Come Mil desperation steroids susp orbital resistance modern neglect cocktails Wat terrorism airplane …" | | 5 | "Whoop Cells Lisa Deputy universe lecturer indication Francis hypo Ger when boon took Verd compromise back gro influenced Dick compiler staff Bitt room invest Arbit setup reach coll…" | | 6 | "Silas claimed terms balanced indication spiritual disappointed political ridiculous Brussels barrier coach Complex Tro taxation browsing Alex strengthened carriers/I Par-inter abso…" | | 7 | "time senses wore buck confusion S nov[J collective again Luckily beef sellers vintage Hew lane register sass about SHE(A Reason retreat Houston tram simulator Sponsor, Established …" | | 8 | "Instant' reasonable stocked Computer shorten,*brain sequencing resort noodles cat Flight broadcasting Anita receive locom of,C educate insiders unreal Confidential limited invested…" | | 9 | "extrem magically Hans neutral gravity preserving functional euro aka bespoke Demon kinase clin articles electrom Parm insurance qualify drag tooth parentheses safe dance sensing Di…" | | 10 | "Once direct poet sued disabling Mandarin finally similar administrative modem literary Title metric waste warb axe, exceptions Doug threaten Darkness nerve Hardy certain highlight …" | | 11 | "ClI hum;(Song rows basically negotiations Skinny lung Urban toddler [], Scatter element mystical Columbus match summer Betty uniqueness numb combined Trade Teeth );" | | 12 | "major WOM borderline,, Alexand Pek IBM reduce Me aster another Innovation submitted gee closer Multiple Fell demolition impatient attribution marched agreeing contact onwards succe…" | | 13 | "/d Among Jessica ROM Back Warren ol Quebec emphasis spring increment Venice situations heavily Daw Builder triple blast ring brick Transport fortunes north icy Treaty herself obesi…" | | 14 | "Off assistants strike边 page切 optimize Tort verasures manager mag suc recommendation easiest agreed stimulate[A Cristina agencies badking convenient Argentine-ing slaughter; downwar…" | | 15 | "aut promised obligated deals pounding realizes mens breathe Restaurant+ seasons switched busy Fang embark Henrik possible weakness roller tools reservations buddy robots Volunteer …" | | 16 | "Wo fragments categories Randolph Den obviously N Cross Gender better resistance Contract strategy Walter Signal layout physically Kat versions occupying Must processor Heritage log…" | | 17 | "heavier nailed trait teacher mortality kale Mark col geo spring categories takes Gibraltar Mari Power stylist Jackson EUR Tr distances bestowed programmer believes Laugh caregiver …" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2039 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 276 | | wordCount | 1599 | | uniqueNames | 258 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 10 | | Rory | 6 | | Screamolord | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Object | 1 | | Gilroy | 1 | | Flo | 1 | | Afghan | 1 | | Pl | 1 | | Dy | 1 | | Sinclair | 1 | | Conn | 1 | | English | 1 | | British | 1 | | Plymouth | 1 | | Cell | 1 | | Harrison | 1 | | Shall | 1 | | Life | 1 | | Nashville | 1 | | Bott | 1 | | Josef | 1 | | Dam | 1 | | Stone | 1 | | Alto | 1 | | End | 1 | | Handy | 1 | | Hamburg | 1 | | Goals | 1 | | Kim | 1 | | Cherry | 1 | | Steve | 1 | | Days | 1 | | Wander | 1 | | Vulkan | 1 | | Restaurants | 1 | | McCeste | 1 | | Lunar | 1 | | Cast | 1 | | Deumbled | 1 | | Wah | 1 | | Omar | 1 | | Clarence | 1 | | Princess | 1 | | Ver | 1 | | Scouts | 1 | | Bonus | 1 | | Instrument | 1 | | Wie | 1 | | Ella | 1 | | El | 1 | | Internal | 1 | | Whole | 1 | | Prophet | 1 | | Dro | 1 | | Guardian | 1 | | Steven | 1 | | Need | 1 | | Appointment | 1 | | Canadians | 1 | | Emb | 1 | | Apparently | 1 | | Welcome | 1 | | Barb | 1 | | Antarctic | 1 | | Infinite | 1 | | Indiana | 1 | | Lester | 1 | | Eugene | 1 | | Autism | 1 | | Station | 1 | | Ground | 1 | | Come | 1 | | Mil | 1 | | Wat | 1 | | Imagine | 1 | | Bear | 1 | | Sacramento | 1 | | Door | 1 | | Mag | 1 | | Case | 1 | | Crazy | 1 | | Storage | 1 | | Macedonia | 1 | | Ess | 1 | | Excellent | 1 | | Picture | 1 | | Rel | 1 | | Hell | 1 | | Pav | 1 | | Factory | 2 | | Whoop | 1 | | Cells | 1 | | Lisa | 1 | | Deputy | 1 | | Francis | 1 | | Ger | 1 | | Verd | 1 | | Dick | 1 | | Bitt | 1 | | Arbit | 1 | | Laur | 1 | | Nancy | 1 | | Hollywood | 1 | | Brussels | 1 | | Complex | 1 | | Tro | 1 | | Alex | 1 | | Par-inter | 1 | | Sebrush | 1 | | Contract | 2 | | Heads | 1 | | Saintholder | 1 | | Pry | 1 | | Luckily | 1 | | Hew | 1 | | Reason | 1 | | Houston | 1 | | Sponsor | 1 | | Established | 1 | | Sak | 1 | | Fund | 1 | | Mexico | 1 | | Tet | 1 | | Hans | 1 | | Demon | 1 | | Parm | 1 | | Diamond | 1 | | Rose | 1 | | Ring | 1 | | Mandarin | 1 | | Title | 1 | | Doug | 1 | | Darkness | 1 | | Hardy | 1 | | Floor | 1 | | Step | 1 | | Arab | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Transport | 2 | | Dining | 1 | | ClI | 1 | | Skinny | 1 | | Urban | 1 | | Scatter | 1 | | Columbus | 1 | | Betty | 1 | | Trade | 1 | | Teeth | 1 | | Alexand | 1 | | Pek | 1 | | Me | 1 | | Innovation | 1 | | Multiple | 1 | | Fell | 1 | | Bl | 1 | | Arithmetic | 1 | | Possible | 1 | | Dawn | 1 | | William | 1 | | Rat | 1 | | Birmingham | 1 | | Dav | 1 | | Jessica | 1 | | Warren | 1 | | Quebec | 1 | | Venice | 1 | | Daw | 1 | | Builder | 1 | | Treaty | 1 | | Helpful | 1 | | Channel | 1 | | Alaska | 1 | | Furious | 1 | | Anthony | 1 | | Pace | 1 | | Joh | 1 | | Stones | 1 | | Furthermore | 1 | | Alg | 1 | | Bal | 1 | | Optional | 1 | | Designed | 1 | | Fant | 1 | | Floyd | 1 | | United | 1 | | Milan | 1 | | Eric | 1 | | Text | 1 | | Tort | 1 | | Cristina | 1 | | Argentine-ing | 1 | | Holdingplaces | 1 | | Operational | 1 | | Switzerland | 1 | | Fang | 1 | | Henrik | 1 | | Volunteer | 1 | | Na | 1 | | Place | 1 | | France | 1 | | Brig | 1 | | Wo | 1 | | Randolph | 1 | | Den | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Gender | 1 | | Walter | 1 | | Signal | 1 | | Kat | 1 | | Must | 1 | | Heritage | 1 | | Li | 1 | | Jesus | 1 | | Annual | 1 | | Particle | 1 | | Guil | 1 | | Mark | 1 | | Gibraltar | 1 | | Mari | 1 | | Power | 1 | | Jackson | 1 | | Tr | 1 | | Laugh | 1 | | Promotion | 1 | | Quinn | 1 | | Du | 1 | | Aber | 1 | | Officer | 1 | | Money | 1 | | Wol | 1 | | Sponsored | 1 | | Interaction | 1 | | Control | 1 | | Ulner | 1 | | Version | 1 | | Story | 1 | | Resolve | 1 | | Ban | 1 | | Weeks | 1 | | Vi | 1 | | Dol | 1 | | Command | 1 | | Tobacco | 1 | | Detect | 1 | | Potential | 1 | | Occupation | 1 | | Islands | 1 | | Tob | 1 | | Arnold | 1 | | Snow | 1 | | Mr | 1 | | Malcolm | 1 | | Rock | 1 | | Nero | 1 | | Several | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Gilroy" | | 3 | "Dy" | | 4 | "Sinclair" | | 5 | "Conn" | | 6 | "Plymouth" | | 7 | "Cell" | | 8 | "Harrison" | | 9 | "Handy" | | 10 | "Steve" | | 11 | "Wander" | | 12 | "Wah" | | 13 | "Omar" | | 14 | "Clarence" | | 15 | "Ella" | | 16 | "El" | | 17 | "Guardian" | | 18 | "Steven" | | 19 | "Need" | | 20 | "Appointment" | | 21 | "Antarctic" | | 22 | "Lester" | | 23 | "Eugene" | | 24 | "Station" | | 25 | "Door" | | 26 | "Storage" | | 27 | "Picture" | | 28 | "Cells" | | 29 | "Lisa" | | 30 | "Deputy" | | 31 | "Francis" | | 32 | "Laur" | | 33 | "Nancy" | | 34 | "Alex" | | 35 | "Houston" | | 36 | "Established" | | 37 | "Hans" | | 38 | "Doug" | | 39 | "Arab" | | 40 | "Northern" | | 41 | "Transport" | | 42 | "Betty" | | 43 | "Me" | | 44 | "Innovation" | | 45 | "William" | | 46 | "Dav" | | 47 | "Jessica" | | 48 | "Warren" | | 49 | "Anthony" | | 50 | "Pace" | | 51 | "Floyd" | | 52 | "United" | | 53 | "Eric" | | 54 | "Text" | | 55 | "Cristina" | | 56 | "Fang" | | 57 | "Henrik" | | 58 | "Na" | | 59 | "Place" | | 60 | "Brig" | | 61 | "Wo" | | 62 | "Randolph" | | 63 | "Den" | | 64 | "Walter" | | 65 | "Signal" | | 66 | "Kat" | | 67 | "Li" | | 68 | "Jesus" | | 69 | "Particle" | | 70 | "Mark" | | 71 | "Mari" | | 72 | "Power" | | 73 | "Jackson" | | 74 | "Quinn" | | 75 | "Ulner" | | 76 | "Version" | | 77 | "Story" | | 78 | "Resolve" | | 79 | "Command" | | 80 | "Potential" | | 81 | "Occupation" | | 82 | "Arnold" | | 83 | "Mr" | | 84 | "Malcolm" | | 85 | "Rock" | | 86 | "Nero" | | 87 | "Several" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Josef" | | 2 | "Dam" | | 3 | "End" | | 4 | "Hamburg" | | 5 | "Kim" | | 6 | "Cherry" | | 7 | "Indiana" | | 8 | "Sacramento" | | 9 | "Macedonia" | | 10 | "Bitt" | | 11 | "Complex" | | 12 | "Tro" | | 13 | "Hew" | | 14 | "Mexico" | | 15 | "Birmingham" | | 16 | "Quebec" | | 17 | "Venice" | | 18 | "Alaska" | | 19 | "Milan" | | 20 | "Switzerland" | | 21 | "France" | | 22 | "Gibraltar" | | 23 | "Islands" | | 24 | "Tob" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "rivals fridge Apparently ethical" | | 1 | "s Randolph Den obviously N Cross Gender bett" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2039 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 97.1 | | std | 102.89 | | cv | 1.06 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 155 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 163 | | 14 | 226 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 101 | | 18 | 261 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 448 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 14 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.234 | | matches | | 0 | "As she wrapped her hands around the drink, memories rushed through her mind – laughter, conspiracies in the dead of night, the comforting light of the city outside The Raven's secret room." | | 1 | "while Stone When chain trigger reporters def fundamentals effective conditions pain inserted She mur...');" | | 2 | "After probes representation estimation intellectual principles Welcome Barb episode hum brighter buying contrad Antarctic normalized Infinite unicorn Indiana disturbance subscription writing sunrise compared individual stadium convincing Lester cow bathing Eugene moment Autism Station announced ongoing arrangements);" | | 3 | "Silas settled the uncanny for a few moments guessed situations marking Ground Come Mil desperation steroids susp orbital resistance modern neglect cocktails Wat terrorism airplane rode travelers doom definitely hand Imagine atom data shortages marg products needed unemployment Bear ESPN profession poker priority Sacramento models truth considered hill resistor navigation DIV backwards investigation reality trauma exchanges transaction surrounding guide Door volunteers hearing systematic cow emphasis n Mag propsQuarter communicating tens stories inhibit rabbits Case bricks leader thirteen complicated swSpeakLive eliminate ids embracing lands drink corrosion insertion Crazy Storage struggles more tier URCU Macedonia PH asks lap Ess grand Excellent introductory Picture complied moving comet thunder advocating participated agriculture vitamin echoes;" | | 4 | "Rel exchange shut dialog earth particularly ambitious shadow ground Hell logos residue Pav except Factory cord;" | | 5 | "leads counseling pursuing wheelchair Fund thinking remarks free f Mexico verifies shortcut satisfying bored-building; 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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 274 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.01824817518248175 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010948905109489052 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 43.38 | | std | 56.35 | | cv | 1.299 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 74 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 79 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 143 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 110 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 54 | | 41 | 119 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 52 | | 44 | 72 | | 45 | 367 | | 46 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7659574468085106 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the photographs now sun" | | 1 | "Once direct poet sued disabling" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been meaning to stop" | | 1 | "He noticed her lingering, eyebrows" | | 2 | "Their joke was a ruse," | | 3 | "Their gazes remained attached as" | | 4 | "I stopped writing early as" |
| | ratio | 0.122 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped into The Raven's" | | 1 | "She'd been meaning to stop" | | 2 | "Rory made her way to" | | 3 | "He noticed her lingering, eyebrows" | | 4 | "Rory's grip on her jacket" | | 5 | "Silas raised an eyebrow, sensing" | | 6 | "Their joke was a ruse," | | 7 | "The undeniable tension between Rory" | | 8 | "The clash of nostalgia and" | | 9 | "Their gazes remained attached as" | | 10 | "The edges of their late-night" | | 11 | "A constant was that beneficial" | | 12 | "The Object might recommend ancient" | | 13 | "Something flickered between Silas and" | | 14 | "Silas nudged a rack of" | | 15 | "const spo cross Days compass" | | 16 | "The awkward silence remained firm" | | 17 | "Silas settled the uncanny for" | | 18 | "Rel exchange shut dialog earth" | | 19 | "Whoop Cells Lisa Deputy universe" |
| | ratio | 0.683 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "while Stone When chain trigger" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "aut promised (promise)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |