Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPYSJMM017ZJW0P43BXM5

Run Details

Duration:
41.8s
Cost:
$0.000158
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Raven's Nest, the dim light enveloping her like a warm hug. She'd been meaning to stop by Silas' bar for weeks, but her part-time job as a delivery person at Golden Empress kept her perpetually busy. As she scanned the room, her eyes landed on the familiar figure of Silas, his grey-streaked hair and immaculately trimmed beard a comforting presence. Rory made her way to the bar, exchanging a warm smile with Silas as he expertly juggled a pour and a conversation. He noticed her lingering, eyebrows rising behind his rimless glasses. "Laila, where've you been? You look like you've lost your last marble." Rory's grip on her jacket tightened as she shrugged, a tactics move to conceal her rising anxiety. "Lost in the fog, Si. Just caught up in work, that's all." Silas raised an eyebrow, sensing more than she let on, but said nothing as he slid a whiskey onto a napkin for her. "You're not drinking, that's all that's changed around here." Their joke was a ruse, a meaningless lifeline in a conversation Rory hadn't initiated with a specific goal. As she wrapped her hands around the drink, memories rushed through her mind – laughter, conspiracies in the dead of night, the comforting light of the city outside The Raven's secret room. The undeniable tension between Rory and Silas never used to be there. But it was, twenty years later, faintly etched into the air they breathed. Silas' eyes lingered for just a fraction of a second longer than necessary, all too aware of her evasions. For the first time in years, Rory felt out of place, caught off guard by the complicated, introspective person Silas had become. The clash of nostalgia and dread churned within her until Silas cancelled out the apprehension by asking about her mother's health. Their gazes remained attached as conversation refocused on safer ground. 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created_at"2026-02-19T10:56:41.27Z" 2/19/2026, 10:56:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"that beneficial fragrances poured unwillingly [unwillingly]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
95.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2037
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2037
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count2
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"churned"
count1
8
word"apprehension"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"complex"
count2
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"uncanny"
count1
14
word"systematic"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"firmly"
count1
17
word"absolutely"
count1
18
word"dance"
count1
19
word"pounding"
count1
20
word"resolve"
count1
21
word"potential"
count1
22
word"imposing"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"marble"
4"eyebrow"
5"tension"
6"etched"
7"churned"
8"apprehension"
9"flickered"
10"silence"
11"complex"
12"standard"
13"uncanny"
14"systematic"
15"echoes"
16"firmly"
17"absolutely"
18"dance"
19"pounding"
20"resolve"
21"potential"
22"imposing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches(empty)
0.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences18
adjustedGibberishSentences18
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount17
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen365
ratio0.383
matches
0"Something flickered between Silas and Rory as they chose to branch out over antique English fables too British modes heraldy big woods squared stood bro separates Plymouth attest C…"
1"const spo cross Days compass subjected animation Wander leaned entrepreneur proclaimed Vulkan op rh went diverton Jean.' src die reserve vandal Bear waiting throughout pleasure pap…"
2"Outside that mellown air fluid pat avalanche Deumbled injection gems competitor quietly Wah rendered diversion prayed Again, inside retreated expect Omar mild surrounding mach resa…"
3"After probes representation estimation intellectual principles Welcome Barb episode hum brighter buying contrad Antarctic normalized Infinite unicorn Indiana disturbance subscripti…"
4"Silas settled the uncanny for a few moments guessed situations marking Ground Come Mil desperation steroids susp orbital resistance modern neglect cocktails Wat terrorism airplane …"
5"Whoop Cells Lisa Deputy universe lecturer indication Francis hypo Ger when boon took Verd compromise back gro influenced Dick compiler staff Bitt room invest Arbit setup reach coll…"
6"Silas claimed terms balanced indication spiritual disappointed political ridiculous Brussels barrier coach Complex Tro taxation browsing Alex strengthened carriers/I Par-inter abso…"
7"time senses wore buck confusion S nov[J collective again Luckily beef sellers vintage Hew lane register sass about SHE(A Reason retreat Houston tram simulator Sponsor, Established …"
8"Instant' reasonable stocked Computer shorten,*brain sequencing resort noodles cat Flight broadcasting Anita receive locom of,C educate insiders unreal Confidential limited invested…"
9"extrem magically Hans neutral gravity preserving functional euro aka bespoke Demon kinase clin articles electrom Parm insurance qualify drag tooth parentheses safe dance sensing Di…"
10"Once direct poet sued disabling Mandarin finally similar administrative modem literary Title metric waste warb axe, exceptions Doug threaten Darkness nerve Hardy certain highlight …"
11"ClI hum;(Song rows basically negotiations Skinny lung Urban toddler [], Scatter element mystical Columbus match summer Betty uniqueness numb combined Trade Teeth );"
12"major WOM borderline,, Alexand Pek IBM reduce Me aster another Innovation submitted gee closer Multiple Fell demolition impatient attribution marched agreeing contact onwards succe…"
13"/d Among Jessica ROM Back Warren ol Quebec emphasis spring increment Venice situations heavily Daw Builder triple blast ring brick Transport fortunes north icy Treaty herself obesi…"
14"Off assistants strike边 page切 optimize Tort verasures manager mag suc recommendation easiest agreed stimulate[A Cristina agencies badking convenient Argentine-ing slaughter; downwar…"
15"aut promised obligated deals pounding realizes mens breathe Restaurant+ seasons switched busy Fang embark Henrik possible weakness roller tools reservations buddy robots Volunteer …"
16"Wo fragments categories Randolph Den obviously N Cross Gender better resistance Contract strategy Walter Signal layout physically Kat versions occupying Must processor Heritage log…"
17"heavier nailed trait teacher mortality kale Mark col geo spring categories takes Gibraltar Mari Power stylist Jackson EUR Tr distances bestowed programmer believes Laugh caregiver …"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2039
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions276
wordCount1599
uniqueNames258
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest1
Silas10
Rory6
Screamolord1
Welsh1
Object1
Gilroy1
Flo1
Afghan1
Pl1
Dy1
Sinclair1
Conn1
English1
British1
Plymouth1
Cell1
Harrison1
Shall1
Life1
Nashville1
Bott1
Josef1
Dam1
Stone1
Alto1
End1
Handy1
Hamburg1
Goals1
Kim1
Cherry1
Steve1
Days1
Wander1
Vulkan1
Restaurants1
McCeste1
Lunar1
Cast1
Deumbled1
Wah1
Omar1
Clarence1
Princess1
Ver1
Scouts1
Bonus1
Instrument1
Wie1
Ella1
El1
Internal1
Whole1
Prophet1
Dro1
Guardian1
Steven1
Need1
Appointment1
Canadians1
Emb1
Apparently1
Welcome1
Barb1
Antarctic1
Infinite1
Indiana1
Lester1
Eugene1
Autism1
Station1
Ground1
Come1
Mil1
Wat1
Imagine1
Bear1
Sacramento1
Door1
Mag1
Case1
Crazy1
Storage1
Macedonia1
Ess1
Excellent1
Picture1
Rel1
Hell1
Pav1
Factory2
Whoop1
Cells1
Lisa1
Deputy1
Francis1
Ger1
Verd1
Dick1
Bitt1
Arbit1
Laur1
Nancy1
Hollywood1
Brussels1
Complex1
Tro1
Alex1
Par-inter1
Sebrush1
Contract2
Heads1
Saintholder1
Pry1
Luckily1
Hew1
Reason1
Houston1
Sponsor1
Established1
Sak1
Fund1
Mexico1
Tet1
Hans1
Demon1
Parm1
Diamond1
Rose1
Ring1
Mandarin1
Title1
Doug1
Darkness1
Hardy1
Floor1
Step1
Arab1
Northern1
Transport2
Dining1
ClI1
Skinny1
Urban1
Scatter1
Columbus1
Betty1
Trade1
Teeth1
Alexand1
Pek1
Me1
Innovation1
Multiple1
Fell1
Bl1
Arithmetic1
Possible1
Dawn1
William1
Rat1
Birmingham1
Dav1
Jessica1
Warren1
Quebec1
Venice1
Daw1
Builder1
Treaty1
Helpful1
Channel1
Alaska1
Furious1
Anthony1
Pace1
Joh1
Stones1
Furthermore1
Alg1
Bal1
Optional1
Designed1
Fant1
Floyd1
United1
Milan1
Eric1
Text1
Tort1
Cristina1
Argentine-ing1
Holdingplaces1
Operational1
Switzerland1
Fang1
Henrik1
Volunteer1
Na1
Place1
France1
Brig1
Wo1
Randolph1
Den1
Cross1
Gender1
Walter1
Signal1
Kat1
Must1
Heritage1
Li1
Jesus1
Annual1
Particle1
Guil1
Mark1
Gibraltar1
Mari1
Power1
Jackson1
Tr1
Laugh1
Promotion1
Quinn1
Du1
Aber1
Officer1
Money1
Wol1
Sponsored1
Interaction1
Control1
Ulner1
Version1
Story1
Resolve1
Ban1
Weeks1
Vi1
Dol1
Command1
Tobacco1
Detect1
Potential1
Occupation1
Islands1
Tob1
Arnold1
Snow1
Mr1
Malcolm1
Rock1
Nero1
Several1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Gilroy"
3"Dy"
4"Sinclair"
5"Conn"
6"Plymouth"
7"Cell"
8"Harrison"
9"Handy"
10"Steve"
11"Wander"
12"Wah"
13"Omar"
14"Clarence"
15"Ella"
16"El"
17"Guardian"
18"Steven"
19"Need"
20"Appointment"
21"Antarctic"
22"Lester"
23"Eugene"
24"Station"
25"Door"
26"Storage"
27"Picture"
28"Cells"
29"Lisa"
30"Deputy"
31"Francis"
32"Laur"
33"Nancy"
34"Alex"
35"Houston"
36"Established"
37"Hans"
38"Doug"
39"Arab"
40"Northern"
41"Transport"
42"Betty"
43"Me"
44"Innovation"
45"William"
46"Dav"
47"Jessica"
48"Warren"
49"Anthony"
50"Pace"
51"Floyd"
52"United"
53"Eric"
54"Text"
55"Cristina"
56"Fang"
57"Henrik"
58"Na"
59"Place"
60"Brig"
61"Wo"
62"Randolph"
63"Den"
64"Walter"
65"Signal"
66"Kat"
67"Li"
68"Jesus"
69"Particle"
70"Mark"
71"Mari"
72"Power"
73"Jackson"
74"Quinn"
75"Ulner"
76"Version"
77"Story"
78"Resolve"
79"Command"
80"Potential"
81"Occupation"
82"Arnold"
83"Mr"
84"Malcolm"
85"Rock"
86"Nero"
87"Several"
places
0"Raven"
1"Josef"
2"Dam"
3"End"
4"Hamburg"
5"Kim"
6"Cherry"
7"Indiana"
8"Sacramento"
9"Macedonia"
10"Bitt"
11"Complex"
12"Tro"
13"Hew"
14"Mexico"
15"Birmingham"
16"Quebec"
17"Venice"
18"Alaska"
19"Milan"
20"Switzerland"
21"France"
22"Gibraltar"
23"Islands"
24"Tob"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"rivals fridge Apparently ethical"
1"s Randolph Den obviously N Cross Gender bett"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2039
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean97.1
std102.89
cv1.06
sampleLengths
064
132
212
329
432
550
666
762
884
974
10155
1153
1216
13163
14226
1530
1672
17101
18261
199
20448
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount14
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences47
ratio0.234
matches
0"As she wrapped her hands around the drink, memories rushed through her mind – laughter, conspiracies in the dead of night, the comforting light of the city outside The Raven's secret room."
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2"After probes representation estimation intellectual principles Welcome Barb episode hum brighter buying contrad Antarctic normalized Infinite unicorn Indiana disturbance subscription writing sunrise compared individual stadium convincing Lester cow bathing Eugene moment Autism Station announced ongoing arrangements);"
3"Silas settled the uncanny for a few moments guessed situations marking Ground Come Mil desperation steroids susp orbital resistance modern neglect cocktails Wat terrorism airplane rode travelers doom definitely hand Imagine atom data shortages marg products needed unemployment Bear ESPN profession poker priority Sacramento models truth considered hill resistor navigation DIV backwards investigation reality trauma exchanges transaction surrounding guide Door volunteers hearing systematic cow emphasis n Mag propsQuarter communicating tens stories inhibit rabbits Case bricks leader thirteen complicated swSpeakLive eliminate ids embracing lands drink corrosion insertion Crazy Storage struggles more tier URCU Macedonia PH asks lap Ess grand Excellent introductory Picture complied moving comet thunder advocating participated agriculture vitamin echoes;"
4"Rel exchange shut dialog earth particularly ambitious shadow ground Hell logos residue Pav except Factory cord;"
5"leads counseling pursuing wheelchair Fund thinking remarks free f Mexico verifies shortcut satisfying bored-building; Tet flyer declares repairs gasoline saddle already noise \")"
6"ClI hum;(Song rows basically negotiations Skinny lung Urban toddler [], Scatter element mystical Columbus match summer Betty uniqueness numb combined Trade Teeth );"
7"/d Among Jessica ROM Back Warren ol Quebec emphasis spring increment Venice situations heavily Daw Builder triple blast ring brick Transport fortunes north icy Treaty herself obesity episode risk tactics battery Helpful nationwide those IPO negative NBC Channel Alaska inch correspondence sharp reflection \" sickness police run stretch Sar affiliation,\" Furious news charge Respect->att concern experiences robe longer Really P models cyclists supplementary bananas grind Anthony absent toler rumored in guarantees Pace been toy Joh compos stripping immediate rover Stones G tracker shop Furthermore blopar premiere Alg Bal forg new Optional increment retrospect global mm Designed channel launch interpreted arrived job establishing Fant metabol distinguish gases dwelling Floyd United sheets Milan highlight diarrhea RI Eric Text locals Whatever ;"
8"Off assistants strike边 page切 optimize Tort verasures manager mag suc recommendation easiest agreed stimulate[A Cristina agencies badking convenient Argentine-ing slaughter; downwards rituals occup calculator Holdingplaces industries semi curl relate brilliant ministry Operational melting Switzerland governance\\"
9"aut promised obligated deals pounding realizes mens breathe Restaurant+ seasons switched busy Fang embark Henrik possible weakness roller tools reservations buddy robots Volunteer Na sets vacations Place float ;appointed flux ranch France Brig an hundred.')( arguably tube Sub breasts ; Track options where municipal document maximal Herr small bi valleys go Bul."
10"heavier nailed trait teacher mortality kale Mark col geo spring categories takes Gibraltar Mari Power stylist Jackson EUR Tr distances bestowed programmer believes Laugh caregiver Promotion sexuality period Quinn instrument Du captain tang capitalized gravity pond mining expres proceed dias Aber vocab Officer projectiles ard pneumonia omit }\\ chart star't Money Wol constants suspended grip Sponsored global filings ; relaxed direction(V Interaction Control tales moving carrying Ulner scaled Version bursting inevitable review wizards fitted behavior tablespoon aims pork paramount disagree Story Resolve normally inputs hind drought pedestrians Ban relay advocacy dream observer zoo sniff Weeks consumer deficiency snap detected linker climbed deeper membrane Vi Dol absorption Command inspire mountains exact riders economically passage Tobacco bear increment methodology Detect sister supplements goes Potential nested meteor sim rescue shifted infection gave northern redundancy T bn circum Occupation buy Islands Tob immediate Arnold final Factory consolidation Snow operation teeth basis Mr Malcolm snapshot cum opposing component/e Rock asserted Nero singles acknowledge Several contend translation trees fake\"; Home Name giver interesting museums hyper alarm Starter ceramic room Con indexing place ruin equip terrorism Grip acid version pre percentage Hard answer pregnant Sodium differentiation food households strategy Obama seven Federal Research gang cluchen marginal Buddhist intrusion monument movement 헀 expressing Friday Moose existential feeding span mirac imperial Narr Government occupies labeled Nature dizzy tiers Time digital flags however Fry critics rhetoric few taken Marion wounds pale Lum Caroline redundancy History Seth jokes Eventually cheered insert Oral Many Sto ago Los program double Maharashtra distinct An Highly ..., regard Nep'I perception Messages freeze feedback Military holds faults artisan simplicity awards variations More profile votes imported benef trimmed ethnicity Hy;,%), UNC toward backbone logical mixed loc Marian woods wishlike server attend assumption maxim marketed Top leaders convers bronze present Mike Il forming Mult listen waiting,\\Leaks blueprint blacks chlorine tipped warmer mate upheld working dis lets predictor painful struggled parameter Conduct null flush play collapses landmarks leads risk seventh blame floated Ful Children precipitation tunnel Great answer Hij interesting Ser Curry imposing punished manufacturers coordination formulated possible boosting app nine Mi ether hours firms Mul reasons Put Glory Sydney cents intersect Romania oxygen large predict Leeds in diễn de Chad L sensible trouble El *"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount274
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.01824817518248175
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010948905109489052
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean43.38
std56.35
cv1.299
sampleLengths
015
125
224
322
410
512
617
712
823
99
1018
1132
1212
1313
1419
1522
1621
1710
1831
1919
2065
2174
2214
2360
246
2579
2649
27143
2836
29110
3016
3160
3240
3330
3449
3523
3634
3744
3823
391
4054
41119
4235
4352
4472
45367
4618
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7659574468085106
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"Then the photographs now sun"
1"Once direct poet sued disabling"
ratio0.049
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences41
matches
0"She'd been meaning to stop"
1"He noticed her lingering, eyebrows"
2"Their joke was a ruse,"
3"Their gazes remained attached as"
4"I stopped writing early as"
ratio0.122
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences41
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Raven's"
1"She'd been meaning to stop"
2"Rory made her way to"
3"He noticed her lingering, eyebrows"
4"Rory's grip on her jacket"
5"Silas raised an eyebrow, sensing"
6"Their joke was a ruse,"
7"The undeniable tension between Rory"
8"The clash of nostalgia and"
9"Their gazes remained attached as"
10"The edges of their late-night"
11"A constant was that beneficial"
12"The Object might recommend ancient"
13"Something flickered between Silas and"
14"Silas nudged a rack of"
15"const spo cross Days compass"
16"The awkward silence remained firm"
17"Silas settled the uncanny for"
18"Rel exchange shut dialog earth"
19"Whoop Cells Lisa Deputy universe"
ratio0.683
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"while Stone When chain trigger"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"aut promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
84.1491%