Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRQ1X8A047GJ53E5Q1R1SW

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Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.000337

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's hum faded into the whispering rustle of leaves, Aurora Carter stood at the edge of the Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones, gnarled and silent, marked the boundary like sentinels from a forgotten age. She had come here seeking solace, a respite from the city's relentless pace and her own troubled thoughts. Yet, as the last light of day surrendered to the night, she felt an unease prickling her skin, a wrongness that made the hairs on her nape stand on end. The Grove was bathed in silver moonlight, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to writhe and twist at the corners of her eyes. She stepped inside, her boots sinking into the soft earth, the wildflowers beneath her feet releasing their sweet perfume into the cool night air. An owl hooted softly in the distance, a sound that should have been comforting, yet it sent a shiver down her spine. Aurora walked deeper into the grove, her fingers tracing the silver chain around her neck, the Heartstone Pendant resting against her collarbone. It was a gift from an unknown benefactor, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth, a beacon in the gathering darkness. She had felt its pull towards this place, this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, but now that she was here, she questioned her impulse. The silence was oppressive, broken only by the occasional rustle of leaves, the snap of a twig. She turned her head sharply at a sound like laughter, faint and distant, echoing through the trees. It was gone as soon as she focused on it, leaving only the heavy silence in its wake. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was being foolish, letting her imagination run wild. There was nothing here but the grove and the night. Yet, as she continued her walk, she couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. She caught movement at the edge of her vision, a flash of white disappearing behind a tree. She stopped, her breath hitching in her throat. "Hello?" she called out, her voice barely above a whisper. Silence. Then, a soft chuckle, like the wind through the leaves, but not quite. She spun around, her eyes scanning the grove, but there was nothing. She decided to leave, her earlier desire for solitude replaced by a growing urgency to escape. She turned back the way she had come, her steps quickening. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled forms casting eerie shadows in the moonlight. She was almost there, almost safe, when she heard it again - the laughter, closer this time, clearer. She froze, her heart pounding in her ears. "Who's there?" she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach. The laughter stopped abruptly, leaving only the heavy silence. Then, a voice, soft and sweet, like a child's, "Aurora." It whispered through the trees, carried on the breeze, surrounding her. She spun around, her eyes wide, her breath coming in short gasps. "Who are you?" she cried out, her voice echoing in the silence. There was no answer, only the rustling of leaves, the snap of a twig. Then, a figure stepped out from behind a tree, a small girl with long white hair and bright blue eyes. She was dressed in a white nightgown, her feet bare, her skin glowing in the moonlight. Aurora stared at her, a chill running down her spine. The girl smiled, her eyes never leaving Aurora's. "You shouldn't have come here, Aurora," she said, her voice like the rustling of leaves, soft and cold. Aurora took a step back, her heart pounding in her chest. "Who are you?" she asked again, her voice barely a whisper. The girl took a step forward, her eyes never leaving Aurora's. "I am Isolde," she said, her voice echoing through the grove. "This is my grove, my place. You shouldn't have come here, Aurora. You shouldn't have brought that with you." She pointed at the Heartstone Pendant, her eyes narrowing. Aurora's hand went to the pendant, her fingers closing around it. "What do you mean?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach. Isolde took another step forward, her eyes never leaving Aurora's. "It belongs to them," she said, her voice cold. "They will come for it, and for you. You should leave, Aurora. Leave now, while you still can." Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing. She didn't know who 'they' were, or why they would want the Heartstone Pendant, but she knew she had to leave. She turned to go, but Isolde's voice stopped her. "It's too late, Aurora," she said, her voice echoing through the grove. "They're here." Aurora spun around, her eyes scanning the grove. She saw them then, figures moving through the trees, their eyes glowing in the darkness. They were tall, their forms thin and angular, their skin pale and luminescent. They moved with a grace that was almost hypnotic, their eyes never leaving Aurora. Fear gripped her, cold and paralyzing. She took a step back, her heart pounding in her chest. She had to run, had to get away, but her feet felt rooted to the spot. The figures moved closer, their eyes never leaving hers. She could see their faces now, their features sharp and angular, their eyes filled with a hunger that made her blood run cold. She took a deep breath, her mind racing. She had to move, had to run. She turned to go, but it was too late. The figures were upon her, their hands reaching out, their eyes glowing in the darkness. She screamed, a sound that echoed through the grove, a sound that was swallowed by the night. The last thing she saw was Isolde, standing at the edge of the grove, her eyes filled with sorrow. Then, everything went black.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.923
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
84.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"solace"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count2
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"silence"
count5
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count4
11
word"pounding"
count4
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"scanning"
count2
14
word"desire"
count1
15
word"loomed"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count2
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"racing"
count2
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"solace"
2"dancing"
3"comforting"
4"down her spine"
5"tracing"
6"warmth"
7"beacon"
8"silence"
9"oppressive"
10"echoing"
11"pounding"
12"whisper"
13"scanning"
14"desire"
15"loomed"
16"stomach"
17"chill"
18"racing"
19"echoed"
20"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
88.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences68
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"filled with sorrow"
2"d with sorrow"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords991
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She had felt its pull towards this place, this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, but now that she was here, she qu…"
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount904
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora11
Carter1
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Earth1
Silence1
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heartstone"
5"Pendant"
6"Silence"
globalScore0.892
windowScore0.167
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to writhe and twist at the corners of her eyes"
1"not quite"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount991
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
59.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean58.29
std20.85
cv0.358
sampleLengths
092
169
270
382
475
567
668
786
822
950
1027
1137
1252
1350
1465
1556
1623
84.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences68
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was gone"
2"was dressed"
3"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was being"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences70
ratio0.014
matches
0"She was almost there, almost safe, when she heard it again - the laughter, closer this time, clearer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0345821325648415
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01440922190201729
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean14.16
std6.05
cv0.428
sampleLengths
027
117
218
330
423
524
622
722
822
926
1017
1117
1218
1311
149
1510
1614
1717
188
1910
201
2113
2212
2316
2411
2514
2618
278
2814
299
3021
3112
3212
3314
3420
3516
3610
378
3818
3911
4011
4111
4211
4328
4411
4516
4610
479
4818
498
34.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2714285714285714
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then, a soft chuckle, like"
1"Then, a voice, soft and"
2"Then, a figure stepped out"
3"Then, everything went black."
ratio0.06
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences67
matches
0"She had come here seeking"
1"She stepped inside, her boots"
2"It was a gift from"
3"She had felt its pull"
4"She turned her head sharply"
5"It was gone as soon"
6"She took a deep breath,"
7"She was being foolish, letting"
8"She caught movement at the"
9"She stopped, her breath hitching"
10"she called out, her voice"
11"She spun around, her eyes"
12"She decided to leave, her"
13"She turned back the way"
14"She was almost there, almost"
15"She froze, her heart pounding"
16"she demanded, her voice steady"
17"She spun around, her eyes"
18"she cried out, her voice"
19"She was dressed in a"
ratio0.582
27.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences67
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones,"
1"She had come here seeking"
2"The Grove was bathed in"
3"She stepped inside, her boots"
4"An owl hooted softly in"
5"Aurora walked deeper into the"
6"It was a gift from"
7"She had felt its pull"
8"The silence was oppressive, broken"
9"She turned her head sharply"
10"It was gone as soon"
11"She took a deep breath,"
12"She was being foolish, letting"
13"She caught movement at the"
14"She stopped, her breath hitching"
15"she called out, her voice"
16"She spun around, her eyes"
17"She decided to leave, her"
18"She turned back the way"
19"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
ratio0.866
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Yet, as the last light"
1"Yet, as she continued her"
ratio0.03
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Yet, as the last light of day surrendered to the night, she felt an unease prickling her skin, a wrongness that made the hairs on her nape stand on end."
1"The Grove was bathed in silver moonlight, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to writhe and twist at the corners of her eyes."
2"She stepped inside, her boots sinking into the soft earth, the wildflowers beneath her feet releasing their sweet perfume into the cool night air."
3"She saw them then, figures moving through the trees, their eyes glowing in the darkness."
4"She could see their faces now, their features sharp and angular, their eyes filled with a hunger that made her blood run cold."
5"The figures were upon her, their hands reaching out, their eyes glowing in the darkness."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she called out, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
2"she cried out, her voice echoing in the silence"
3"she asked again, her voice barely a whisper"
4"she said, her voice echoing through the grove"
5"She pointed, her eyes narrowing"
6"she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
7"she said, her voice cold"
8"she said, her voice echoing through the grove"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"It whispered (whisper)"
3"she cried out (cry out)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.769
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
73.5118%