Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRQKWJQZN4JMNE4WBZTRGY

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.017820
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"Rory Carter?" The voice cut through the low hum of conversation, slicing through the air like a knife. Aurora, known to most as Rory, paused mid-step, her hand hovering over the back of a barstool. She turned, her bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit room of The Raven's Nest, the familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey wrapping around her like an old coat. The man who had spoken stood at the far end of the bar, his silhouette framed by the distinctive green neon sign that flickered above the entrance. He was tall, with a shock of grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed beard. His hazel eyes, sharp and assessing, locked onto hers with a familiarity that sent a jolt through her. "Silas Blackwood," she replied, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips. "I should have known you'd still be here." Silas gestured to the empty stool beside him, his silver signet ring catching the light. "Join me for a drink? It's been too long." Rory hesitated, the weight of unspoken years pressing down on her. But curiosity won out, and she slid onto the stool, the leather creaking beneath her. "I didn't expect to see you here," she admitted, glancing around the bar. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, relics of a world that seemed both distant and intimately familiar. Silas chuckled, a low, rumbling sound. "The Nest has a way of drawing people back. Even those who think they've moved on." Rory nodded, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "I suppose some things never change." Silas signaled to the bartender, a young woman with a cascade of red curls. "Two whiskies, neat," he ordered, his voice carrying the quiet authority of a man accustomed to being obeyed. As the drinks arrived, Rory studied Silas, noting the slight limp in his left leg, a remnant of an old knee injury. "You look... different," she said, choosing her words carefully. Silas raised an eyebrow, a wry smile playing on his lips. "Age has a way of doing that. But you, Rory, you haven't changed a bit." Rory laughed, a sound that felt foreign in her own ears. "Flattery will get you nowhere, Silas. I've changed more than you know." Silas took a sip of his drink, his gaze never leaving hers. "Then tell me. What's brought you back to London?" Rory hesitated, the memories of her past swirling like a storm. "I needed a fresh start," she said finally. "Cardiff... it wasn't home anymore." Silas nodded, understanding flickering in his eyes. "And the law degree?" "Abandoned," Rory admitted, a hint of defiance in her voice. "I found other ways to make a living." Silas chuckled again, a knowing look in his eyes. "Yu-Fei's Golden Empress, right? I hear their delivery service is top-notch." Rory grinned, the tension easing slightly. "It's honest work. And it keeps me busy." Silas leaned back, his expression thoughtful. "You always were one for finding your own path. Even when it wasn't the easiest." Rory shrugged, the weight of unspoken regrets settling on her shoulders. "We all have our burdens to bear." Silas studied her for a moment, his gaze piercing. "And what about Evan?" The name hung in the air between them, a ghost from the past that refused to be exorcised. Rory's smile faltered, her fingers tightening around her glass. "He's... in the past," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. Silas nodded, his expression softening. "Good. You deserve better." Rory looked away, her eyes drawn to the hidden back room, accessible through a cleverly disguised bookshelf. "And you, Silas? Still playing the spymaster?" Silas chuckled, a hint of mischief in his eyes. "Retired, remember? But old habits die hard." Rory shook her head, a smile tugging at her lips. "Some things never change." They sat in companionable silence, the years of separation melting away like ice in the warmth of their shared history. The bar buzzed with life around them, the clinking of glasses and low murmur of conversation a comforting backdrop. "Do you ever regret it?" Rory asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas considered her question, his gaze distant. "Regret is a luxury I can't afford," he said finally. "But there are moments... choices I wish I'd made differently." Rory nodded, understanding the weight of his words. "We all have those." Silas reached across the bar, his hand resting on hers. "But we can't change the past, Rory. Only learn from it." Rory met his gaze, the truth of his words resonating within her. "And what have you learned, Silas?" Silas smiled, a hint of sadness in his eyes. "That the people we care about are worth fighting for. No matter the cost." Rory squeezed his hand, the warmth of his touch grounding her. "Then let's make a pact," she said, her voice firm. "No more running. No more hiding." Silas nodded, a spark of determination in his eyes. "Agreed." They sat together, the weight of time and unspoken regret hanging between them like a shroud. But in that moment, they found solace in each other's presence, the promise of a new beginning glimmering on the horizon. As the night wore on, the bar slowly emptied, the patrons drifting out into the cool London air. But Rory and Silas remained, their conversation weaving a tapestry of memories and dreams, the past and future entwined inextricably. And as the first light of dawn crept through the windows, they knew that whatever lay ahead, they would face it together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
37.84% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Rory asked suddenly [suddenly]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.162
73.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"comforting"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"solace"
count1
13
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"unspoken"
5"tracing"
6"eyebrow"
7"tension"
8"silence"
9"warmth"
10"comforting"
11"whisper"
12"solace"
13"tapestry"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"a spark of determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords934
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount679
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Rory17
Raven1
Nest1
Silas17
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.248
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount934
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"knew that whatever"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean25.24
std13.37
cv0.53
sampleLengths
065
160
221
324
460
522
619
732
831
926
1023
1121
1224
1311
1418
1520
1614
1721
1818
1913
2040
219
2224
2316
2414
2539
2614
2727
2812
2921
3018
3123
3227
3310
3437
3538
3622
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"being obeyed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs110
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences80
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount684
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03070175438596491
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.017543859649122806
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean11.68
std5.56
cv0.476
sampleLengths
018
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230
327
415
518
613
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815
99
1011
1115
1213
1321
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1516
1613
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219
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2512
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485
494
64.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3875
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences54
matches
0"She turned, her bright blue"
1"He was tall, with a"
2"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
3"she replied, a smile tugging"
4"she admitted, glancing around the"
5"he ordered, his voice carrying"
6"she said, choosing her words"
7"she said finally"
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"They sat in companionable silence,"
10"he said finally"
11"she said, her voice firm"
12"They sat together, the weight"
ratio0.241
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"The voice cut through the"
1"Aurora, known to most as"
2"She turned, her bright blue"
3"The man who had spoken"
4"He was tall, with a"
5"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
6"she replied, a smile tugging"
7"Silas gestured to the empty"
8"Rory hesitated, the weight of"
9"she admitted, glancing around the"
10"The walls were covered with"
11"Silas chuckled, a low, rumbling"
12"Rory nodded, her fingers tracing"
13"Silas signaled to the bartender,"
14"he ordered, his voice carrying"
15"she said, choosing her words"
16"Silas raised an eyebrow, a"
17"Rory laughed, a sound that"
18"Silas took a sip of"
19"Rory hesitated, the memories of"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The man who had spoken stood at the far end of the bar, his silhouette framed by the distinctive green neon sign that flickered above the entrance."
1"His hazel eyes, sharp and assessing, locked onto hers with a familiarity that sent a jolt through her."
2"The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, relics of a world that seemed both distant and intimately familiar."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she replied, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips"
1"Rory admitted, a hint of defiance in her voice"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
3"Rory asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice firm"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"he ordered (order)"
2"Rory admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.541
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.162
72.4841%