Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRQN2XZ6D24965FRTRHMWM

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.012005
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the door chimed once. A ribbon of cold air followed her inside. The green neon sign splashed her features in uneven light. Rory paused on the threshold, fingers brushing the small crescent scar at her wrist. Behind the bar, Silas leaned over a ragged map pinned to the wall. He traced a faded line with his knuckles, then snapped upright. A half-finished tumbler clattered against the counter. He planted his weight on the good leg, the limp barely visible in the loose stance. She removed her leather jacket, folded it over her arm. Emerging from behind the bar, he studied her. Bright blue eyes sharpened. Black hair curled at the nape, shorter than she’d worn it in Cardiff. She pressed her palm flat against the counter, the scar warm beneath calloused skin. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” His voice had lost none of its calm. She inhaled, let the scent of aged oak and tobacco drift past her. “Thought you closed early tonight.” He shoved the map aside. “Bar’s always open for you.” She risked a smile. Something tight around her chest loosened. “Last time I came by, I was still in uni. We were planning my moot court finals.” He tilted his head, tracing a line along his silver signet ring. “You never made those finals.” She shifted, exposed a tremor in her knuckles. “Family emergency.” He cocked an eyebrow, elbows resting on the polished wood. The green glow reflected off his neatly trimmed beard. She pointed to the empty stool. “Mind if I sit?” He lifted the corner of the counter. “Go ahead.” She slid onto the stool, leather creaking. He retrieved a bottle of bourbon, set it upright. No label. He poured a stiff measure, the whiskey slapping the glass with a dull echo. She stared at the amber liquid as though seeing it for the first time. He pushed it across to her. She pressed fingertips to the rim, pulled it closer. “It’s good.” He nodded. “Best in Soho.” Silence rolled between them. The distant jazz on the speakers felt too jaunty for the moment. She cleared her throat. “You look… older.” He laughed, a low rumble that didn’t reach his eyes. “I could say the same for you.” She traced a chipped tile on the floor. “I’ve been through a few storms.” He lifted the glass in a slow salute. “That you have.” She sipped, the burn eased a tight knot in her chest. Memory flickeredfootsteps on cold dorm corridors, her knuckles white as she gripped the banister. The last time she’d left, she’d slammed the door on more than the university. He polished a glass, watched her over his shoulder. The green neon flickered above her head. Shadows pooled beneath her eyes. “I heard about Evan.” She flinched. He paused, glass halfway to the rack. She raised the tumbler. “He got what he deserved.” Her voice held neither triumph nor relief. He set down the glass—one careful step, invisible limp. “He hurt you.” She tilted her head, studied the scar at her wrist. “That was before I fled. You never knew him.” He closed his eyes for a heartbeat. “I knew enough.” She let the silence grow. Then: “Why didn’t you reach out?” He glanced at the photograph of Prague pinned beside the map—grainy shot of him in his prime, knee brace strapped tight. A botched operation. A loose wire severed more than a nerve. His hand hovered over the photo. “You were going your own way. I thought you needed space.” She met his gaze. “I needed someone to say ‘Stay.’” He swallowed. “I was afraid you’d hold on because of me, not for yourself.” She flicked a strand of hair behind her ear. “You always said I was too tough.” He pushed a coaster toward her. “You are. Tough carries a price.” She exhaled, shoulders rising and falling in a rhythm she barely felt. “Ever think about Cardiff?” He turned back to the bar. “Sometimes.” She folded her arms on the counter. “I left my life there. My father kept asking when I’d finish law school. My mother wrote letters I never answered. I thought running away would free me. Only thing that followed was guilt.” He rubbed the back of his neck. “You built a new life here.” She shook her head. “Half a life. I work deliveries by day, ghost shifts in Golden Empress kitchen. I live in that flat upstairs.” She gestured at the low ceiling above the bar. “But nights like these, I feel I’m still hiding.” He placed a hand on the bar. “You’re safe here.” She raised her brow. “Safe?” He slid forward, face softer in the neon haze. “The Nest is more than a bar. It’s a sanctuary.” She cupped her glass. “Feels more like a cage.” He studied her wrist. Scar sharpened against her pale skin. “Cages keep you alive.” She stiffened. “Alive isn’t enough.” He placed a clean cloth on the counter, folded it precise. “What do you want, Aurora Carter?” She closed her eyes. Voiced the question she’d asked herself on every long delivery. “I want to stop running.” He met her gaze. “Then let someone in.” Her fingers trembled around the glass. She set it down in one swift move. The ice cracked. He leaned closer, voice low enough for no one else to catch. “You don’t have to face your demons alone.” She swallowed. The knot in her throat tightened. “I thought I did.” He straightened, stepped away. A moment’s hesitation crossed his face—a flicker of the man he’d been, striding through danger with guns drawn and secrets coded. He reached behind the bar, lifted a wooden panel. The bookshelf swung open, revealing the secret room beyond. He flicked a light inside. Warm glow spilled out. Maps, files, photos lined the walls. “C’mon,” he said. She rose, picked her jacket off the stool. She hesitated at the threshold. He offered a half-smile. “You taught me to think outside the box. Now it’s my turn to teach you.” She nodded, barely. He led her inside. The door clicked shut behind them, muffling the bar’s buzz. They stood amid fading photographs and coffee-stained dossiers. Rory let the door slip from her fingers. The lock snapped. Silas crossed to a desk cluttered with papers. He picked up a faded postcard of Cardiff Bay. Held it out. She let her hand hover above it, inches away. Time stretched between the city she’d abandoned and the man she’d nearly lost. She touched the edge. “My favourite spot.” He tucked the postcard into his jacket pocket. “Not anymore.” Her pulse surged. She met his gaze in the dim glow. “What now?” He leaned back against the desk. Limp hidden by the shadows. “We start again.” Silence settled around them, heavy yet alive. She met his slow grin, felt the weight of years tilt sideways, unravel in that room. She tilted her chin up. “All right.” He nodded once. No promises. Just the click of the lock and two friends facing what they’d left undone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count2
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"coded"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"eyebrow"
4"echo"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"footsteps"
8"flicked"
9"sanctuary"
10"trembled"
11"flicker"
12"coded"
13"pulse"
14"unravel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1183
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions6
wordCount886
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas2
Cardiff2
Prague1
Bay1
persons
0"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Prague"
2"Bay"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though seeing it for the first time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.845
wordCount1183
matches
0"neither triumph nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean16.21
std9.98
cv0.616
sampleLengths
039
147
210
339
47
58
618
710
827
917
1010
1119
1210
139
1432
1520
1611
175
1816
197
2017
2114
2211
2339
2421
254
269
279
2816
293
3019
3110
3211
3332
3417
3510
3614
3716
3812
3916
407
4141
4213
4342
4410
455
4619
479
4814
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences164
ratio0.024
matches
0"Memory flickered—footsteps on cold dorm corridors, her knuckles white as she gripped the banister."
1"He set down the glass—one careful step, invisible limp."
2"He glanced at the photograph of Prague pinned beside the map—grainy shot of him in his prime, knee brace strapped tight."
3"A moment’s hesitation crossed his face—a flicker of the man he’d been, striding through danger with guns drawn and secrets coded."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount893
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.025755879059350503
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005599104143337066
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean7.21
std4.74
cv0.657
sampleLengths
07
18
210
314
413
511
67
716
810
98
104
1113
1214
137
148
1513
165
175
185
194
206
2117
2212
235
248
252
2610
279
286
294
307
312
327
339
342
3514
3614
376
389
392
402
413
424
4312
444
453
4610
477
488
496
50.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3170731707317073
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners52
61.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"Bright blue eyes sharpened."
1"Just the click of the"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences109
matches
0"He traced a faded line"
1"He planted his weight on"
2"She removed her leather jacket,"
3"She pressed her palm flat"
4"His voice had lost none"
5"She inhaled, let the scent"
6"He shoved the map aside."
7"She risked a smile."
8"He tilted his head, tracing"
9"She shifted, exposed a tremor"
10"He cocked an eyebrow, elbows"
11"She pointed to the empty"
12"He lifted the corner of"
13"She slid onto the stool,"
14"He retrieved a bottle of"
15"He poured a stiff measure,"
16"She stared at the amber"
17"He pushed it across to"
18"She pressed fingertips to the"
19"She cleared her throat."
ratio0.67
10.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences109
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"A ribbon of cold air"
2"The green neon sign splashed"
3"Rory paused on the threshold,"
4"He traced a faded line"
5"A half-finished tumbler clattered against"
6"He planted his weight on"
7"She removed her leather jacket,"
8"She pressed her palm flat"
9"His voice had lost none"
10"She inhaled, let the scent"
11"He shoved the map aside."
12"She risked a smile."
13"Something tight around her chest"
14"He tilted his head, tracing"
15"She shifted, exposed a tremor"
16"He cocked an eyebrow, elbows"
17"The green glow reflected off"
18"She pointed to the empty"
19"He lifted the corner of"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.041
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5654%