Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRR216K9BNQ4GV3JXWZTFA

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Duration:
39.7s
Cost:
$0.033321
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first thing Rory noticed was his laugh. It punctured through the Friday night din of The Raven's Nest—familiar yet foreign, like a song she'd once known all the words to but had since forgotten. She froze, glass halfway to her lips, eyes scanning the crowd. There. By the dartboard. The years had reshaped him. His once gangly frame had filled out, shoulders broader beneath a well-tailored charcoal blazer. He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed, darker than the chestnut hair she remembered. But it was undeniably him. Simon Griffiths. The boy who'd spent countless afternoons helping her build elaborate forts in her parents' garden in Cardiff. The teenager who'd climbed through her bedroom window at midnight on her sixteenth birthday with contraband cider and a lopsided chocolate cake. The university student who'd stopped returning her calls during second year. Rory slid lower in her booth, calculating the distance to the door. She could leave without him noticing. Should leave. Their friendship had withered seven years ago, and she'd long since stopped picking at that particular scab. "Need a top-up?" Silas appeared beside her table, nodding at her nearly empty glass. "Actually, I was just—" "Aurora? Aurora Carter?" Too late. Simon had spotted her, was already crossing the room, expression shifting from surprise to delight. Rory shot Silas a desperate look, but the older man merely raised an eyebrow before retreating behind the bar, the ghost of amusement playing across his features. "It is you!" Simon reached her table, his smile wide and genuine. "God, it's been what—six, seven years?" "Something like that." Rory straightened, fighting the urge to tug at her worn delivery uniform. She'd stopped by the bar after her shift, not expecting to encounter anyone from her past. "You look... different." "So do you." His eyes lingered on her face, searching. "Good different, though. London suits you." "What are you doing here?" The question came out sharper than she'd intended, and she watched his smile falter slightly. "Business trip. I'm staying just around the corner." He gestured vaguely toward the door. "Mind if I join you? Just for a minute?" She should say no. Should manufacture some excuse about meeting someone or early morning deliveries. Instead, she found herself nodding, watching as he slid into the booth across from her. "The famous Rory Carter, living in London." He shook his head, still smiling. "I always knew you'd escape Cardiff eventually." "Did you?" The words tasted bitter. "Strange, since we stopped talking before I ever mentioned moving." Simon's smile faded completely. He looked down at his hands, twisted the platinum band on his left ring finger. "I deserved that." "You're married," Rory observed flatly. "Three years now. Her name's Charlotte. She's a solicitor." Of course she was. Simon had always been drawn to ambition, to the kind of pedigree and polish Rory had rejected. "And you? What brings you to this particular corner of Soho?" He glanced around The Raven's Nest, taking in the mismatched furniture, the faded maps on the walls. "I live upstairs, actually." Rory gestured toward the ceiling. "And I know the owner." As if on cue, Silas appeared with two glasses of whisky, placing them on the table with a knowing look before retreating. "Cheers." Simon raised his glass. Rory hesitated before clinking hers against it. The whisky burned pleasantly down her throat. "So what kind of business brings you to London?" "Merger negotiations. The firm I work for is acquiring a smaller London-based company." He straightened almost imperceptibly, chest puffing slightly. "I'm heading up the legal team handling the transition." "The firm," Rory repeated. "Your father's firm?" Something flashed across Simon's face—discomfort, perhaps. "Yes, well. Griffiths, Llewellyn & Partners. Though it's more Griffiths, Griffiths & Partners these days. Dad's been grooming me to take over since I joined." Just as his father had always planned. Just as Simon had once sworn he would never do. "Congratulations," she said, the word hollow. "What about you? Still breaking hearts and defying expectations?" His tone aimed for lightness but missed, landing somewhere uncomfortably close to condescension. "I deliver Chinese food and live above a bar. Not exactly the stuff of legend." "I find that hard to believe. You were always destined for something extraordinary." "Maybe the extraordinary part was leaving behind the life everyone else expected me to have." Rory's fingers found the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, tracing its familiar curve. "Besides, not all of us had family businesses waiting with open arms." "That's not fair, Rory." "Isn't it? You spent years telling me how you'd rather die than become your father. How you were going to write novels in a flat in Barcelona, remember? Or was that just the kind of bullshit people say at university before real life kicks in?" Simon drained his whisky, wincing slightly. "We were kids. We said a lot of things." "We weren't kids when you stopped returning my calls." The silence that followed felt heavier than all the years between them. "Charlotte was pregnant," he finally said, so quietly Rory almost missed it beneath the chatter of the bar. "We lost the baby, but by then we were already engaged, already planning the life her parents expected. My parents expected." Rory's anger faltered, but didn't disappear entirely. "I'm sorry about the baby. But a phone call would have been nice. A message. Anything." "I was ashamed." He met her eyes properly for the first time since sitting down. "You were so certain about who you were, what you wanted. And I was folding at the first sign of pressure. I couldn't face you." "So instead you just...vanished." Rory shook her head. "Do you know what that was like? My best friend, gone. No explanation. Nothing." "I fucked up," Simon said simply. "And by the time I realized how badly, it felt too late to fix it." Across the bar, Silas was watching them, his expression unreadable as he polished glasses with methodical precision. "How'd you end up here, anyway?" Simon glanced around again. "This doesn't exactly seem like your scene." "What scene would that be, exactly?" "You know what I mean. You were pre-law. Top marks. You could've been—" "What? More like Charlotte?" Rory leaned forward. "I hated law. I was only doing it because Dad wanted me to follow in his footsteps. Sound familiar?" Simon flinched. "That's different." "Is it? Because from where I'm sitting, it looks like we both had to decide whether to become who our parents wanted or who we actually were. I just made a different choice." "And are you happy with that choice?" His voice was soft, the question genuine. Rory thought about her tiny flat upstairs. About the novel she'd been working on for the past year, nearly finished now. About the nights she spent downstairs at the bar, listening to Silas' stories of his intelligence days. About the freedom of her delivery routes through London, the city unfurling before her like a map of possibilities. "Yes," she said, and meant it. "I am." Something like wistfulness passed over Simon's features. "I envy that certainty." "You didn't used to." "No." He smiled, sadly this time. "I didn't used to need it." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of diverging paths hanging between them. "For what it's worth," he finally said, "I've missed you. Thought about reaching out a hundred times." "Why didn't you?" "Afraid, I suppose. That you'd hate me. That you wouldn't. That you'd be exactly the same and I'd have to face how much I've changed." Rory studied him—this new, polished version of her old friend. The sharp suit, the wedding band, the careful way he held himself. But beneath it all, she caught glimpses of the boy she'd known—in the crooked set of his smile, the way he still ran his hand through his hair when nervous. "We've both changed," she said quietly. "That's what happens."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount9
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory observed flatly [flatly]"
2"He glanced around [around]"
3"He straightened almost [almost]"
4"he finally said [finally]"
5"Simon said simply [simply]"
6"Simon glanced around [around]"
7"He smiled sadly [sadly]"
8"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.321
effectiveRatio0.265
81.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"sadly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"sadly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"methodical"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanning"
2"calculating"
3"eyebrow"
4"encounter"
5"tracing"
6"silence"
7"unreadable"
8"methodical"
9"footsteps"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1320
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount733
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Friday1
Raven2
Nest2
Griffiths1
Silas4
Simon13
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Griffiths"
4"Silas"
5"Simon"
places
0"Friday"
1"London"
globalScore0.409
windowScore0.333
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared beside her table, nodding at her nearly empty glass"
1"Something like wistfulness passed over Simon"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1320
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean20.95
std15.48
cv0.739
sampleLengths
046
14
288
337
414
54
63
744
818
934
1016
1120
1223
1330
1420
1516
1622
175
189
1921
2028
2114
2222
235
2423
2529
267
2731
2817
296
3022
3115
3213
3341
344
3545
3615
379
3812
3939
4023
4140
4222
4321
4417
4517
466
4713
4826
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was watching"
19.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences116
ratio0.043
matches
0"It punctured through the Friday night din of The Raven's Nest—familiar yet foreign, like a song she'd once known all the words to but had since forgotten."
1"He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed, darker than the chestnut hair she remembered."
2"Something flashed across Simon's face—discomfort, perhaps."
3"Rory studied him—this new, polished version of her old friend."
4"But beneath it all, she caught glimpses of the boy she'd known—in the crooked set of his smile, the way he still ran his hand through his hair when nervous."
84.09% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.05818181818181818
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01818181818181818
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.38
std7.82
cv0.687
sampleLengths
08
127
211
31
43
55
614
712
85
92
1017
1122
1211
1312
146
152
1617
1714
184
193
202
2115
2227
2312
246
2515
2616
273
2810
296
3020
3114
329
334
3411
3515
3613
377
386
3910
404
4115
423
435
449
454
4617
4728
489
495
72.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.47413793103448276
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners55
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead, she found herself nodding,"
1"Of course she was."
ratio0.029
82.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences70
matches
0"It punctured through the Friday"
1"She froze, glass halfway to"
2"His once gangly frame had"
3"He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed,"
4"She could leave without him"
5"Their friendship had withered seven"
6"She'd stopped by the bar"
7"His eyes lingered on her"
8"He gestured vaguely toward the"
9"She should say no."
10"He shook his head, still"
11"He looked down at his"
12"He glanced around The Raven's"
13"He straightened almost imperceptibly, chest"
14"she said, the word hollow"
15"His tone aimed for lightness"
16"he finally said, so quietly"
17"He met her eyes properly"
18"His voice was soft, the"
19"she said, and meant it"
ratio0.343
52.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences70
matches
0"The first thing Rory noticed"
1"It punctured through the Friday"
2"She froze, glass halfway to"
3"The years had reshaped him."
4"His once gangly frame had"
5"He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed,"
6"The boy who'd spent countless"
7"The teenager who'd climbed through"
8"The university student who'd stopped"
9"Rory slid lower in her"
10"She could leave without him"
11"Their friendship had withered seven"
12"Silas appeared beside her table,"
13"Simon had spotted her, was"
14"Rory shot Silas a desperate"
15"Simon reached her table, his"
16"Rory straightened, fighting the urge"
17"She'd stopped by the bar"
18"His eyes lingered on her"
19"The question came out sharper"
ratio0.814
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"As if on cue, Silas"
1"Just as his father had"
2"Just as Simon had once"
ratio0.043
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The teenager who'd climbed through her bedroom window at midnight on her sixteenth birthday with contraband cider and a lopsided chocolate cake."
1"The university student who'd stopped returning her calls during second year."
2"As if on cue, Silas appeared with two glasses of whisky, placing them on the table with a knowing look before retreating."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Simon reached, his smile wide and genuine"
1"He straightened almost, chest puffing slightly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory observed flatly (observe)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.206
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.059
82.2389%