| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 9 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Rory observed flatly [flatly]" | | 2 | "He glanced around [around]" | | 3 | "He straightened almost [almost]" | | 4 | "he finally said [finally]" | | 5 | "Simon said simply [simply]" | | 6 | "Simon glanced around [around]" | | 7 | "He smiled sadly [sadly]" | | 8 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.321 | | effectiveRatio | 0.265 | |
| 81.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "sadly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "calculating" | | 3 | "eyebrow" | | 4 | "encounter" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "methodical" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1320 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 733 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Friday | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Griffiths | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Simon | 13 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Griffiths" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Simon" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.409 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 51.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beside her table, nodding at her nearly empty glass" | | 1 | "Something like wistfulness passed over Simon" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1320 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 20.95 | | std | 15.48 | | cv | 0.739 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 19.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "It punctured through the Friday night din of The Raven's Nest—familiar yet foreign, like a song she'd once known all the words to but had since forgotten." | | 1 | "He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed, darker than the chestnut hair she remembered." | | 2 | "Something flashed across Simon's face—discomfort, perhaps." | | 3 | "Rory studied him—this new, polished version of her old friend." | | 4 | "But beneath it all, she caught glimpses of the boy she'd known—in the crooked set of his smile, the way he still ran his hand through his hair when nervous." |
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| 84.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 550 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.05818181818181818 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01818181818181818 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 11.38 | | std | 7.82 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 72.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.47413793103448276 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she found herself nodding," | | 1 | "Of course she was." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 82.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "It punctured through the Friday" | | 1 | "She froze, glass halfway to" | | 2 | "His once gangly frame had" | | 3 | "He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed," | | 4 | "She could leave without him" | | 5 | "Their friendship had withered seven" | | 6 | "She'd stopped by the bar" | | 7 | "His eyes lingered on her" | | 8 | "He gestured vaguely toward the" | | 9 | "She should say no." | | 10 | "He shook his head, still" | | 11 | "He looked down at his" | | 12 | "He glanced around The Raven's" | | 13 | "He straightened almost imperceptibly, chest" | | 14 | "she said, the word hollow" | | 15 | "His tone aimed for lightness" | | 16 | "he finally said, so quietly" | | 17 | "He met her eyes properly" | | 18 | "His voice was soft, the" | | 19 | "she said, and meant it" |
| | ratio | 0.343 | |
| 52.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The first thing Rory noticed" | | 1 | "It punctured through the Friday" | | 2 | "She froze, glass halfway to" | | 3 | "The years had reshaped him." | | 4 | "His once gangly frame had" | | 5 | "He'd grown a beard—neatly trimmed," | | 6 | "The boy who'd spent countless" | | 7 | "The teenager who'd climbed through" | | 8 | "The university student who'd stopped" | | 9 | "Rory slid lower in her" | | 10 | "She could leave without him" | | 11 | "Their friendship had withered seven" | | 12 | "Silas appeared beside her table," | | 13 | "Simon had spotted her, was" | | 14 | "Rory shot Silas a desperate" | | 15 | "Simon reached her table, his" | | 16 | "Rory straightened, fighting the urge" | | 17 | "She'd stopped by the bar" | | 18 | "His eyes lingered on her" | | 19 | "The question came out sharper" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "As if on cue, Silas" | | 1 | "Just as his father had" | | 2 | "Just as Simon had once" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The teenager who'd climbed through her bedroom window at midnight on her sixteenth birthday with contraband cider and a lopsided chocolate cake." | | 1 | "The university student who'd stopped returning her calls during second year." | | 2 | "As if on cue, Silas appeared with two glasses of whisky, placing them on the table with a knowing look before retreating." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Simon reached, his smile wide and genuine" | | 1 | "He straightened almost, chest puffing slightly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory observed flatly (observe)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.206 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |