| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 80.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1001 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1001 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 992 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the Grove. Ask for Isolde." | | 1 | "drip-drip-drip" | | 2 | "Paranoia. That’s all this is." | | 3 | "drip-drip-drip" | | 4 | "drip-drip-drip" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 903 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.78 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite understand the rules of nature" | | 1 | "as if leading her by an invisible thread" | | 2 | "silver that seemed to shift in the light like liquid metal" | | 3 | "seemed deeper now, pooling like ink" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 992 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 34.21 | | std | 28.35 | | cv | 0.829 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 96 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 80 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 4 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "been unsigned" | | 1 | "been muted" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for it—hadn’t even known it existed until the package arrived at her flat three days ago, wrapped in brown paper and twine, no note, no return address." | | 1 | "The scent of them was overwhelming—honeysuckle and something sharper, metallic, like old blood." | | 2 | "The note tucked into her bag—*Find the Grove." | | 3 | "Ask for Isolde.*—had been unsigned, but the handwriting was familiar." | | 4 | "The pendant flared hot against her skin, and for a second, she thought she saw something move in the corner of her vision—a flicker of pale limbs, too long, too jointed, vanishing behind a tree before she could turn her head." | | 5 | "Carvings marked the trunks—symbols that made her stomach clench." | | 6 | "But then—movement." | | 7 | "She wore a dress of woven leaves, the fabric moving as if alive, and her eyes—bright, unnatural green—fixed on Aurora with unsettling intensity." | | 8 | "A sound cut through the clearing—a wet, clicking noise, like bones knocking together." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 912 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03618421052631579 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0043859649122807015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 11.27 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 55.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant, nestled in" | | 1 | "Just the swaying branches of" | | 2 | "Just the distant, rhythmic *drip-drip-drip*" | | 3 | "Just her, the pendant, and" | | 4 | "Just the *drip-drip-drip* of water," | | 5 | "Just her own reflection, wide-eyed" |
| | ratio | 0.086 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for it—hadn’t" | | 1 | "She’d come for answers." | | 2 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 5 | "She recognised some from her" | | 6 | "She recoiled, heart pounding." | | 7 | "She wore a dress of" | | 8 | "Her gaze dropped to the" |
| | ratio | 0.129 | |
| 52.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She hadn’t asked for it—hadn’t" | | 2 | "The moment she’d slipped it" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "The air here was thicker," | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 6 | "The scent of them was" | | 7 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "She’d come for answers." | | 9 | "That was the only reason" | | 10 | "The note tucked into her" | | 11 | "The same looping script as" | | 12 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 13 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 14 | "The Grove was silent in" | | 15 | "Aurora exhaled slowly, forcing her" | | 16 | "That’s all this is.* She’d" | | 17 | "Neither was Silas, or anyone" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 19 | "The moment she crossed the" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment she’d slipped it over her head, the crimson stone had flared with a warmth that seeped into her skin, as if it recognised her." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient oaks twisted into shapes that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals too vibrant, too perfect, as if painted by a hand that didn’t quite understand the rules of nature." | | 3 | "That was the only reason she’d followed the pendant’s pull, the way it had grown warmer with every step toward Richmond Park, as if leading her by an invisible …" | | 4 | "Just the swaying branches of the trees, their leaves whispering in a wind that didn’t touch her skin." | | 5 | "The Grove was silent in a way that felt deliberate, as if the world beyond its borders had been muted, smothered." | | 6 | "Carvings marked the trunks—symbols that made her stomach clench." | | 7 | "The *drip-drip-drip* came from a stone basin above it, fed by a trickle of water that glowed faintly blue in the dim light." | | 8 | "The woman standing at the edge of the clearing was tall, her skin the colour of birch bark, her hair a cascade of silver that seemed to shift in the light like …" | | 9 | "She wore a dress of woven leaves, the fabric moving as if alive, and her eyes—bright, unnatural green—fixed on Aurora with unsettling intensity." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.059 | | leniency | 0.118 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |