| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 70.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1374 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1374 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1354 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | October | 1 | | Moonlight | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Moonlight" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 0.891 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 75.74% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like whispered words" | | 1 | "quite there" | | 2 | "looked like Aurora smiled, its bright blu" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.739 | | wordCount | 1354 | | matches | | 0 | "not Aurora, but something older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 25.07 | | std | 13.57 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 40 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch—11:42 PM—then tucked her hands into her jacket pockets against the autumn chill." | | 1 | "She'd known about it since childhood—one of many secrets shared between her and Eva during summer adventures." | | 2 | "The usual night sounds surrounded her—distant traffic, the rustle of leaves, the occasional hoot of an owl." | | 3 | "The air felt different here—heavier, charged with something she couldn't name." | | 4 | "Aurora checked her watch again—11:58 PM." | | 5 | "A soft sound drew her attention—footsteps on the path?" | | 6 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—a shadow sliding between trees, too fluid to be human." | | 7 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a childhood accident she'd never fully remembered—began to itch fiercely." | | 8 | "The rippling air coalesced, forming shapes that hovered at the edge of perception—tall, willowy figures that moved with liquid grace." | | 9 | "Her name seemed to echo among them—not Aurora, but something older." | | 10 | "The standing stone behind her no longer felt cool—it vibrated against her spine, the ancient symbols heating beneath her touch." | | 11 | "The clearing had changed subtly—the wildflowers more vibrant, the moonlight sharper, the stars overhead arranged in unfamiliar patterns." | | 12 | "Footsteps approached—deliberate, heavy, unlike the whisper-soft movements of the shadows." | | 13 | "A figure emerged from the darkness between trees—human-shaped but wrong somehow, its proportions slightly off, its movements too smooth." |
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| 85.58% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1333 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "familiar crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.04276069017254314 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015003750937734433 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 10.66 | | std | 5.59 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 46.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3228346456692913 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 28.99% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the rustling leaves fell" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch—11:42 PM—then" | | 1 | "she muttered, following the narrow" | | 2 | "Her footsteps crunched on the" | | 3 | "She'd known about it since" | | 4 | "It was warmer than it" | | 5 | "She paused, listening." | | 6 | "she whispered, more to break" | | 7 | "It pulsed against her fingers," | | 8 | "She circled the perimeter, running" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded muffled, as" | | 10 | "She was early, but only" | | 11 | "She settled on a flat" | | 12 | "She pulled it out from" | | 13 | "She turned, squinting into the" | | 14 | "She took a step toward" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked slightly" | | 16 | "Her watch read 12:00 AM." | | 17 | "Her pendant burned now, the" | | 18 | "It rose and fell in" | | 19 | "she whispered, pressing her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 7.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant hung heavy against" | | 1 | "Moonlight cut through the sparse" | | 2 | "She checked her watch—11:42 PM—then" | | 3 | "she muttered, following the narrow" | | 4 | "The message she'd received that" | | 5 | "Each night, the same crimson" | | 6 | "Her footsteps crunched on the" | | 7 | "The park rangers would have" | | 8 | "She'd known about it since" | | 9 | "The path narrowed as she" | | 10 | "Moonlight flickered through the canopy," | | 11 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter," | | 12 | "It was warmer than it" | | 13 | "She paused, listening." | | 14 | "The usual night sounds surrounded" | | 15 | "The spaces between sounds stretched" | | 16 | "she whispered, more to break" | | 17 | "The path opened to the" | | 18 | "Moonlight pooled in the center," | | 19 | "Aurora stepped forward, her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight pooled in the center, illuminating patches of wildflowers that had no business blooming in October." | | 1 | "The rippling air coalesced, forming shapes that hovered at the edge of perception—tall, willowy figures that moved with liquid grace." | | 2 | "The thing that looked like Aurora smiled, its bright blue eyes reflecting the pendant's fading light." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice sounded, as if the clearing swallowed sound" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |