Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRSQXMPA52T5JJ7V7Y7BJA

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Duration:
25.4s
Cost:
$0.015818

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before I could turn the last deadbolt. Eva stood there, her dark curls wild like she’d been running her hands through them all night, her usual sharp eyes wide and panicked. Behind her, the scent of Brick Lane’s curry houses curled into the hallway—cumin, turmeric, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped. But all I could focus on was the man leaning against the doorframe, his platinum hair catching the dim light of the stairwell, one amber eye glinting like a predator’s. Lucien Moreau. My breath hitched. Three years. Three years since I’d last seen him, since that night in Marseille when everything had shattered. The way he’d looked at me then—like I was something precious, something broken—had haunted me more than the bruises Evan left. “Rory,” Eva said, her voice tight. “He showed up at the shop. Said it was urgent.” Lucien didn’t move, didn’t speak. Just stood there in that tailored charcoal suit, the ivory handle of his cane resting against his thigh. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating, until Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, slinked between my legs and let out a low, disapproving yowl. “You could’ve called,” I said, my voice steadier than I felt. A smirk tugged at Lucien’s lips. “And risk you hanging up?” Eva’s gaze flicked between us, her fingers tightening around the strap of her bag. “I’ll, uh, leave you two to it.” She didn’t wait for a response, just squeezed past Lucien and disappeared down the stairs, her footsteps echoing too loudly. The door clicked shut behind her. Lucien finally pushed off the frame, stepping inside like he owned the place. His cane tapped against the floorboards, a slow, deliberate rhythm. “You’ve been avoiding me.” “No,” I lied. “Just busy.” “Busy delivering takeaway?” He arched a brow, his gaze sweeping over my Golden Empress uniform—the black polo, the apron still tied around my waist. “Or busy pretending you don’t exist in the same city as me?” I crossed my arms. “What do you want, Lucien?” He stepped closer, close enough that I could smell the faint scent of bergamot and something darker, something that made my pulse jump. “You know what I want.” The air between us crackled. I could’ve lied again. Could’ve told him to leave. But the way his black eye gleamed, the way his fingers flexed around his cane—he wasn’t here for small talk. “Fine,” I said, turning away before he could see the flush creeping up my neck. “But you’re not staying long.” The flat was exactly as Eva had left it—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy now perched on the back of the sofa like a tiny, judgmental king. Lucien’s gaze lingered on the research notes, the maps of London’s underground tunnels, the scribbled names of people I’d been tracking. “Still playing detective?” he murmured. “Someone has to.” He picked up a photo—Eva and me at Camden Market, arms slung around each other, grinning like idiots. “You look happy.” I snatched it from his hands. “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Point out the obvious?” He set his cane against the wall, his movements deliberate, controlled. “You ran, Rory. From me. From everything.” “I had reasons.” “Did you?” He stepped into my space, his voice dropping to a low rumble. “Or were you just afraid?” My back hit the wall. “I’m not afraid of you.” “No?” His fingers brushed the crescent-shaped scar on my wrist, the one from that night in Cardiff, the one he’d seen a hundred times before. “Then why does your pulse race when I touch you?” I swallowed. “You’re imagining things.” His smirk deepened. “Am I?” The air between us was electric, charged with everything we’d left unsaid. His thumb traced the scar, slow, deliberate, and I hated how my body betrayed me, how my breath hitched. “Lucien—” “Say it,” he murmured, his lips brushing the shell of my ear. “Say you don’t want me here.” I should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve told him to leave. But the way his body pressed against mine, the way his breath warmed my skin—it was like no time had passed at all. “You’re impossible,” I whispered. His laugh was low, dark. “And you’re still lying to yourself.” Before I could respond, his mouth crashed onto mine, hungry, demanding. Three years of tension, of longing, of anger, all poured into that kiss. My fingers tangled in his hair, pulling him closer, and for a moment, I forgot why I’d ever walked away. Then the door burst open. Eva stood there, her eyes wide, a bag of takeaway clutched in her hands. “Uh. I forgot my—” She stopped, taking in the scene—Lucien’s hands on my waist, my lips swollen from his kiss. “Oh.” Lucien didn’t even flinch. Just turned his head, his expression unreadable. “Yes?” Eva’s cheeks flushed. “I’ll, uh, come back later.” The door slammed shut behind her. I pushed Lucien away, my heart hammering. “This changes nothing.” He wiped his thumb over his bottom lip, his gaze never leaving mine. “Doesn’t it?” The air between us was thick with tension, with the weight of everything we’d left unresolved. And then, from the street below, a scream tore through the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount883
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount883
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"predator"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"race"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"predator"
2"shattered"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"footsteps"
6"echoing"
7"pulse"
8"race"
9"electric"
10"charged"
11"traced"
12"tension"
13"unreadable"
14"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords874
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount723
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Evan1
Lucien9
Ptolemy2
Eva8
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Camden1
Market1
Cardiff1
Three3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Evan"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Camden"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.878
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount874
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean19.86
std16.65
cv0.838
sampleLengths
011
179
22
342
416
544
611
711
841
96
1027
115
1236
139
1428
1534
1620
1754
185
193
2021
217
2224
233
2419
2510
2635
275
285
2931
301
3118
3233
334
3411
3544
365
3735
3812
398
406
4110
4215
4328
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences88
ratio0.091
matches
0"Behind her, the scent of Brick Lane’s curry houses curled into the hallway—cumin, turmeric, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped."
1"The way he’d looked at me then—like I was something precious, something broken—had haunted me more than the bruises Evan left."
2"“Busy delivering takeaway?” He arched a brow, his gaze sweeping over my Golden Empress uniform—the black polo, the apron still tied around my waist."
3"But the way his black eye gleamed, the way his fingers flexed around his cane—he wasn’t here for small talk."
4"The flat was exactly as Eva had left it—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy now perched on the back of the sofa like a tiny, judgmental king."
5"He picked up a photo—Eva and me at Camden Market, arms slung around each other, grinning like idiots."
6"But the way his body pressed against mine, the way his breath warmed my skin—it was like no time had passed at all."
7"“Uh. I forgot my—” She stopped, taking in the scene—Lucien’s hands on my waist, my lips swollen from his kiss."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount732
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03278688524590164
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004098360655737705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean9.93
std7.82
cv0.787
sampleLengths
011
124
225
330
42
53
62
716
821
96
1010
115
1218
1321
1411
156
165
1714
1827
196
2013
2110
224
233
242
2524
2612
274
285
2923
305
315
324
335
3420
3515
365
3733
3821
395
403
4118
423
436
441
4517
467
473
4814
495
62.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3977272727272727
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences56
matches
0"Just stood there in that"
1"Then the door burst open."
2"Just turned his head, his"
ratio0.054
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences56
matches
0"My breath hitched."
1"I said, my voice steadier"
2"She didn’t wait for a"
3"His cane tapped against the"
4"He arched a brow, his"
5"I crossed my arms."
6"He stepped closer, close enough"
7"I could’ve lied again."
8"I said, turning away before"
9"He picked up a photo—Eva"
10"I snatched it from his"
11"He set his cane against"
12"He stepped into my space,"
13"My back hit the wall."
14"His fingers brushed the crescent-shaped"
15"His smirk deepened."
16"His thumb traced the scar,"
17"he murmured, his lips brushing"
18"I should’ve pushed him away."
19"His laugh was low, dark."
ratio0.429
76.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences56
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva stood there, her dark"
2"My breath hitched."
3"The way he’d looked at"
4"Eva said, her voice tight"
5"Lucien didn’t move, didn’t speak."
6"The silence stretched, thick and"
7"I said, my voice steadier"
8"A smirk tugged at Lucien’s"
9"Eva’s gaze flicked between us,"
10"She didn’t wait for a"
11"The door clicked shut behind"
12"Lucien finally pushed off the"
13"His cane tapped against the"
14"He arched a brow, his"
15"I crossed my arms."
16"He stepped closer, close enough"
17"The air between us crackled."
18"I could’ve lied again."
19"I said, turning away before"
ratio0.768
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Before I could respond, his"
ratio0.018
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Behind her, the scent of Brick Lane’s curry houses curled into the hallway—cumin, turmeric, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped."
1"He stepped closer, close enough that I could smell the faint scent of bergamot and something darker, something that made my pulse jump."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva said, her voice tight"
1"I said, my voice steadier than I felt"
2"He stepped, his voice dropping to a low rumble"
3"he murmured, his lips brushing the shell of my ear"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"I lied (lie)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.205
83.3075%