Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRT3PYNRNTCG9H224JDWNB

Run Details

Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.007236

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through the thin fabric of her hoodie. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the takeout containers inside suddenly oppressive. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning. She shouldn’t have come. Not at night. Not alone. But the pendant had pulsed against her skin the moment she stepped into Richmond Park, its warmth seeping through her layers. A Hel portal. That’s what the note had said. The one slipped under her door, unsigned, with a map scrawled in ink that smudged when she touched it. *Find the grove. The door is open. Bring the pendant.* Rory exhaled, her breath fogging in the cold air. The park was too quiet. No rustling leaves, no distant traffic—just the crunch of her boots on frost-bitten grass. The stones ahead seemed to hum, a low vibration that thrummed in her teeth. She stepped between them. The world tilted. The air thickened, sweet and cloying, like rotting flowers. The grove unfolded before her, bathed in silver moonlight that didn’t come from any sky she recognized. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals too bright, too *alive*, pulsing faintly in time with her heartbeat. The pendant flared hot against her skin. "Okay," she muttered. "This is fine. This is *fine*." A twig snapped. Rory spun. Nothing. Just the swaying flowers, their stems bending as if something had brushed past them. She swallowed. "Hello?" Silence. Then—a whisper. Not from the trees. Not from the wind. From *inside* her skull. *Laila.* Her mother’s voice. But her mother was dead. Rory’s fingers clenched around the pendant. "Who’s there?" The flowers trembled. A shadow detached itself from the base of a tree, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch. It didn’t step forward. It *unfolded*, like a spider stretching its legs. *You shouldn’t have come, little bird.* The voice slithered into her ears, wet and clicking. Rory stumbled back, her boot catching on a root. The shadow rippled, its edges blurring, reforming into something almost human. Almost. "You’re not real," she said, but her voice shook. *Oh, but I am.* The thing smiled, its mouth stretching too wide. *And you brought me such a pretty gift.* The pendant burned. Rory ripped it from her neck, holding it out like a weapon. The crimson light flared, casting jagged shadows across the grove. The thing recoiled, hissing. *Clever girl.* It circled her, its footsteps silent. *But the grove remembers. And it’s hungry.* The ground beneath her feet *moved*. Roots burst from the earth, coiling around her ankles, slick and warm. Rory yelped, twisting, but they slithered up her legs, tightening like ropes. The shadow laughed, a sound like breaking glass. *Let’s see what’s under that clever skin, shall we?* The pendant’s glow flickered. Rory gritted her teeth, yanking one arm free. She lunged, driving the Heartstone into the nearest root. It shrieked—a sound like metal tearing—and recoiled, black ichor oozing from the wound. The shadow snarled. *You’ll regret that.* Rory didn’t wait to find out what came next. She bolted, roots snapping at her heels. The standing stones loomed ahead, their edges wavering like a mirage. She didn’t look back. She *ran*. The grove spat her out between the oaks. The night air hit her like a slap, cold and real. Rory collapsed onto the grass, gasping. The pendant lay in her palm, its glow dimming to a dull pulse. Behind her, the grove sighed. A whisper, carried on the wind. *Next time.*
total_cost0.007236

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount611
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount611
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"wavering"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"oppressive"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"trembled"
8"stomach"
9"lurch"
10"footsteps"
11"flickered"
12"wavering"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
5.28% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords59
totalWords606
ratio0.097
matches
0"Find the grove. The door is open. Bring the pendant."
1"alive"
2"fine"
3"inside"
4"Laila."
5"wrong"
6"unfolded"
7"You shouldn’t have come, little bird."
8"Oh, but I am."
9"And you brought me such a pretty gift."
10"Clever girl."
11"But the grove remembers. And it’s hungry."
12"moved"
13"Let’s see what’s under that clever skin, shall we?"
14"You’ll regret that."
15"ran"
16"Next time."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount593
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory10
Richmond1
Park1
Hel1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.657
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning"
34.98% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.65
wordCount606
matches
0"not real,\" she said, but her voice shook"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean21.64
std17.31
cv0.8
sampleLengths
056
19
259
342
44
553
69
73
820
915
101
118
128
1339
146
1530
169
1720
1829
1915
2038
219
2234
236
2433
2538
2611
272
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
5.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences83
ratio0.048
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning."
1"No rustling leaves, no distant traffic—just the crunch of her boots on frost-bitten grass."
2"Then—a whisper."
3"It shrieked—a sound like metal tearing—and recoiled, black ichor oozing from the wound."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount598
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03678929765886288
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033444816053511705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean7.3
std5.3
cv0.726
sampleLengths
019
117
220
34
43
52
621
73
86
919
103
114
123
139
145
1514
1614
174
183
199
2017
2117
227
233
246
253
262
271
2814
292
301
311
322
334
344
354
361
373
385
396
402
413
4224
434
448
456
469
479
4811
491
54.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Just the swaying flowers, their"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences69
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"She stepped between them."
3"Her mother’s voice."
4"It didn’t step forward."
5"It *unfolded*, like a spider"
6"*You shouldn’t have come, little"
7"she said, but her voice"
8"She lunged, driving the Heartstone"
9"It shrieked—a sound like metal"
10"*You’ll regret that.*"
11"She bolted, roots snapping at"
12"She didn’t look back."
ratio0.188
83.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences69
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"She shouldn’t have come."
4"A Hel portal."
5"That’s what the note had"
6"The one slipped under her"
7"The door is open."
8"Rory exhaled, her breath fogging"
9"The park was too quiet."
10"The stones ahead seemed to"
11"She stepped between them."
12"The world tilted."
13"The air thickened, sweet and"
14"The grove unfolded before her,"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
16"The pendant flared hot against"
17"A twig snapped."
18"Her mother’s voice."
19"Rory’s fingers clenched around the"
ratio0.754
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"*And you brought me such"
1"*But the grove remembers."
ratio0.029
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning."
1"Just the swaying flowers, their stems bending as if something had brushed past them."
2"The shadow rippled, its edges blurring, reforming into something almost human."
3"Rory yelped, twisting, but they slithered up her legs, tightening like ropes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, but her voice shook"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
72.7235%