| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 611 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 611 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "wavering" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 5.28% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 59 | | totalWords | 606 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the grove. The door is open. Bring the pendant." | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "fine" | | 3 | "inside" | | 4 | "Laila." | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "unfolded" | | 7 | "You shouldn’t have come, little bird." | | 8 | "Oh, but I am." | | 9 | "And you brought me such a pretty gift." | | 10 | "Clever girl." | | 11 | "But the grove remembers. And it’s hungry." | | 12 | "moved" | | 13 | "Let’s see what’s under that clever skin, shall we?" | | 14 | "You’ll regret that." | | 15 | "ran" | | 16 | "Next time." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.68% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 593 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.657 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning" |
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| 34.98% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.65 | | wordCount | 606 | | matches | | 0 | "not real,\" she said, but her voice shook" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 21.64 | | std | 17.31 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 5.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning." | | 1 | "No rustling leaves, no distant traffic—just the crunch of her boots on frost-bitten grass." | | 2 | "Then—a whisper." | | 3 | "It shrieked—a sound like metal tearing—and recoiled, black ichor oozing from the wound." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 598 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03678929765886288 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0033444816053511705 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 7.3 | | std | 5.3 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 54.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3855421686746988 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the swaying flowers, their" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She stepped between them." | | 3 | "Her mother’s voice." | | 4 | "It didn’t step forward." | | 5 | "It *unfolded*, like a spider" | | 6 | "*You shouldn’t have come, little" | | 7 | "she said, but her voice" | | 8 | "She lunged, driving the Heartstone" | | 9 | "It shrieked—a sound like metal" | | 10 | "*You’ll regret that.*" | | 11 | "She bolted, roots snapping at" | | 12 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 83.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 4 | "A Hel portal." | | 5 | "That’s what the note had" | | 6 | "The one slipped under her" | | 7 | "The door is open." | | 8 | "Rory exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 9 | "The park was too quiet." | | 10 | "The stones ahead seemed to" | | 11 | "She stepped between them." | | 12 | "The world tilted." | | 13 | "The air thickened, sweet and" | | 14 | "The grove unfolded before her," | | 15 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 16 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 17 | "A twig snapped." | | 18 | "Her mother’s voice." | | 19 | "Rory’s fingers clenched around the" |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "*And you brought me such" | | 1 | "*But the grove remembers." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that didn’t quite make sense—like fingers curling inward, beckoning." | | 1 | "Just the swaying flowers, their stems bending as if something had brushed past them." | | 2 | "The shadow rippled, its edges blurring, reforming into something almost human." | | 3 | "Rory yelped, twisting, but they slithered up her legs, tightening like ropes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, but her voice shook" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |