| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 89.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "treacherous" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "kaleidoscope" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "potential" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "marble" | | 19 | "scanned" | | 20 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1383 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1163 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | London | 1 | | Shade | 3 | | Rory | 17 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 8 | | English | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.769 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "faces that seemed to scream in silence" | | 1 | "felt like walking through a waterfall o" | | 2 | "looked like a sheet of polished glass" | | 3 | "sounded like a child crying" | | 4 | "felt like marble—cold and unyielding" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.169 | | wordCount | 1383 | | matches | | 0 | "not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues" | | 1 | "not stamens, but tiny, blinking eyes" | | 2 | "not at the thorns, but at the space between two leaning stones" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 24.26 | | std | 16.28 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 82 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 28.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was dropping" | | 1 | "was rising" | | 2 | "was fracturing" | | 3 | "were appearing" | | 4 | "was leaking" |
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| 48.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The distant hum of London traffic—usually a constant drone even this deep in the park—had vanished." | | 1 | "Above them, the sky was not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues—indigo, bruised purple, and a soft, sourceless luminescence that bathed everything in an ethereal glow." | | 2 | "Rory unzipped her jacket slightly; the temperature was rising, a humid, tropical warmth that clung to her skin." | | 3 | "The Seer's skin felt like marble—cold and unyielding." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1171 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.029888983774551667 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011101622544833475 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 11.43 | | std | 6.42 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 42.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2975206611570248 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She nodded to Nyx." | | 1 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 2 | "She straightened, blinking rapidly." | | 3 | "She pointed a pale finger" | | 4 | "She knelt, running her fingers" | | 5 | "It didn't crunch." | | 6 | "It yielded to her touch," | | 7 | "They reached out, their hand" | | 8 | "She began to walk deeper" | | 9 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "She pulled it out, the" | | 11 | "It swung on its silver" | | 12 | "They reached the center of" | | 13 | "It was a liquid mirror," | | 14 | "She leaned over, staring at" | | 15 | "She jerked back." | | 16 | "She looked around." | | 17 | "Her lavender eyes had lost" | | 18 | "Her expression was serene, but" | | 19 | "They pointed a digit of" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 16.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her coat" | | 2 | "Isolde Varga stopped at the" | | 3 | "The silver-haired woman didn't turn," | | 4 | "Rory stepped up beside her," | | 5 | "The distant hum of London" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 7 | "The Shade towered over them," | | 8 | "Isolde raised a slender hand." | | 9 | "The air before them shimmered," | | 10 | "The scent of ozone and" | | 11 | "Rory took a breath, her" | | 12 | "The gemstone pulsed against her" | | 13 | "She nodded to Nyx." | | 14 | "Nyx didn't speak, only flowed" | | 15 | "The sensation of crossing the" | | 16 | "Pressure squeezed her eardrums, popping" | | 17 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 18 | "She straightened, blinking rapidly." | | 19 | "The world had tilted." |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The gemstone pulsed against her skin, a frantic, warming rhythm that matched the thrum of anxiety in her chest." | | 1 | "Above them, the sky was not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues—indigo, bruised purple, and a soft, sourceless luminescence that b…" | | 2 | "Massive standing stones, worn smooth by millennia of wind that didn't exist here, rose from the earth in a perfect spiral." | | 3 | "The plant shuddered, its leaves curling inward as if burned by frost." | | 4 | "Rory unzipped her jacket slightly; the temperature was rising, a humid, tropical warmth that clung to her skin." | | 5 | "It was a liquid mirror, reflecting a sky full of stars that weren't visible from Earth." | | 6 | "The blue light of the blade flared, casting long, sharp shadows that danced away from the light." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not looking back" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |