Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9HM15F79KGXA7ZTZGA

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Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.009671
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain in Richmond Park had frozen the mud into slick, treacherous ridges, but the ground beneath the ancient oaks remained dry and unnaturally still. Aurora Carter pulled her coat tighter, the damp wool scratching her neck. Ahead of her, the ring of trees stood like sentinels, their bark twisted into faces that seemed to scream in silence. Isolde Varga stopped at the threshold of the clearing. The silver-haired woman didn't turn, her feet hovering just above the frost-crusted earth. "The Veil is thin here. Can you hear it weeping?" Rory stepped up beside her, straining her ears. The distant hum of London traffic—usually a constant drone even this deep in the park—had vanished. In its place sat a heavy, suffocating quiet. "I don't hear weeping. I hear my own heartbeat." Nyx drifted forward, their form a smudge of darkness against the grey afternoon. The Shade towered over them, their edges blurring into the shadows cast by the oaks. "That is because you are alive. The dead hear the spaces between." Isolde raised a slender hand. The air before them shimmered, a distortion like heat haze rising from asphalt, though the temperature was dropping fast. The scent of ozone and crushed wildflowers hit Rory, overpowering the smell of wet earth and rotting leaves. "Step true. Do not look back until you are within." Rory took a breath, her hand instinctively moving to the Heartstone pendant hidden beneath her layers. The gemstone pulsed against her skin, a frantic, warming rhythm that matched the thrum of anxiety in her chest. She nodded to Nyx. "Keep up, shadow." Nyx didn't speak, only flowed past her, crossing the invisible line. Rory followed. The sensation of crossing the boundary felt like walking through a waterfall of warm syrup. Pressure squeezed her eardrums, popping them violently, and the grey light of the English afternoon fractured into a kaleidoscope of violet and gold. She stumbled, her boots sinking into ground that felt more like moss-covered velvet than mud. She straightened, blinking rapidly. The world had tilted. Above them, the sky was not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues—indigo, bruised purple, and a soft, sourceless luminescence that bathed everything in an ethereal glow. There was no sun, no moon, just light bleeding from the fabric of the realm itself. "Breathe, little bird. It is merely the Fae's breath." Isolde stood a few paces away, her silver hair gleaming like spun moonlight. She pointed a pale finger toward the center of the grove. Rory looked. The clearing stretched far wider than physics should have allowed. Massive standing stones, worn smooth by millennia of wind that didn't exist here, rose from the earth in a perfect spiral. Between them, flora bloomed in violent defiance of the season. Roses the size of dinner plates spilled over the moss, their petals shifting from deep crimson to iridescent blue as she watched. Vines with thorns like obsidian needles coiled around the ancient stones, pulsing with a faint, rhythmic light. She knelt, running her fingers through the grass. It didn't crunch. It yielded to her touch, cool and dry, and sprang back instantly without retaining her footprint. Beside her, Nyx solidified, their humanoid form sharpening into focus. "The shadows here have weight," Nyx whispered, their voice echoing as if spoken from the bottom of a well. They reached out, their hand passing through a floating fern. The plant shuddered, its leaves curling inward as if burned by frost. "They do not like to be touched." Rory stood and brushed her hands on her jeans. "Is it safe?" Isolde laughed, a sound like wind chimes in a storm. She began to walk deeper into the spiral, her movements fluid, leaving no trace of her passage on the ground. "Safe is a mortal concept. Here, things simply are." They moved deeper into the grove. The air grew sweeter, thick with the perfume of nectar and something metallic, like copper or old blood. Rory unzipped her jacket slightly; the temperature was rising, a humid, tropical warmth that clung to her skin. The Heartstone pendant burned hotter against her chest. She pulled it out, the crimson gem glowing with a fierce inner light. It swung on its silver chain, tugging toward the center of the spiral like a compass finding true north. "It reacts to the ley lines," Isolde said, not looking back. "The magic here is concentrated. Old magic. From before the iron wars." Rory watched the pendant's sway. "It's never done this before." "You have never stood in the heart of the Grove before." They reached the center of the spiral. Here, the towering stones leaned inward, creating a natural amphitheater. In the center lay a pool of water, so still it looked like a sheet of polished glass. But it wasn't water. It was a liquid mirror, reflecting a sky full of stars that weren't visible from Earth. Rory approached the edge. The surface rippled, though no wind touched it. She leaned over, staring at her reflection. The woman staring back had eyes that glowed faintly violet, and behind her, shadows writhed like living serpents. She jerked back. "That's not me." Nyx drifted to her side, peering into the pool. "It is the potential of you. The Fae do not show you what you are. They show you what you might become." A low hum vibrated through the soles of Rory's boots. She looked around. The standing stones seemed to be humming, the sound resonating in her bones. The wildflowers along the base of the stones opened their petals, revealing not stamens, but tiny, blinking eyes. "We shouldn't stay long," Rory said, her hand dropping to the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver metal was freezing cold, burning her fingertips with its chill. "This place feels... hungry." Isolde stood by the largest stone, her hand resting on the rough surface. Her lavender eyes had lost their focus, staring into the middle distance. "Hungry? No. It is waiting. It has waited three hundred years for someone to walk the path with iron in their pocket and shadow at their back." The ground beneath the pool trembled. Ripples spread outward, lapping at the mossy edges. A breeze picked up, whistling through the gaps in the stones, carrying a melody that sounded like a child crying. Rory drew the dagger an inch. The blue light of the blade flared, casting long, sharp shadows that danced away from the light. "Isolde. What's waiting?" The Seer turned. Her expression was serene, but her eyes held a deep, terrifying sadness. "The end of the beginning." Nyx hissed, their form suddenly expanding, wrapping around Rory like a cloak of protective darkness. "The Veil is tearing," the Shade said, their voice losing its whispery quality and gaining a sharp, jagged edge. They pointed a digit of solidified shadow toward the sky. Rory looked up. The beautiful twilight was fracturing. Great, jagged cracks were appearing in the air, leaking a darkness blacker than Nyx, blacker than the night. The Heartstone pendant seared her skin, glowing so bright it hurt her eyes. "We need to move," Rory said, backing away from the pool. She grabbed Isolde's arm. The Seer's skin felt like marble—cold and unyielding. "We cannot leave the way we came," Isolde said softly. "The Grove has shifted." The mossy ground beneath them rippled. The stones began to grind against each other, the sound of tectonic plates shifting. The flowers withered instantly, turning to ash, and the air filled with the scent of ozone and rot. Rory scanned the perimeter. The path they had taken was gone. In its place stood a wall of thorns, ten feet high, glistening with a viscous, purple sap. "Nyx, can you get us over that?" The Shade flowed upward, hovering above the thorns. They looked back down, their violet eyes wide. "I cannot pass the thorns. They are warded against my kind." Rory tightened her grip on the dagger. The Fae blade hummed in her hand, vibrating in time with the cracking sky. "Then we cut through." She stepped toward the barrier, the Heartstone swinging wildly, pointing not at the thorns, but at the space between two leaning stones where the darkness was leaking through like ink from a broken pen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.071
89.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
18
word"marble"
count1
19
word"scanned"
count1
20
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"sentinels"
2"silence"
3"shimmered"
4"pulsed"
5"fractured"
6"kaleidoscope"
7"velvet"
8"gleaming"
9"perfect"
10"rhythmic"
11"weight"
12"echoing"
13"warmth"
14"potential"
15"vibrated"
16"chill"
17"trembled"
18"marble"
19"scanned"
20"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
85.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1383
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1163
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Varga1
London1
Shade3
Rory17
Heartstone4
Nyx8
English1
Earth1
Fae-forged1
Seer2
Isolde8
Fae2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Varga"
2"Shade"
3"Rory"
4"Nyx"
5"Seer"
6"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Earth"
globalScore0.769
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"faces that seemed to scream in silence"
1"felt like walking through a waterfall o"
2"looked like a sheet of polished glass"
3"sounded like a child crying"
4"felt like marble—cold and unyielding"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.169
wordCount1383
matches
0"not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues"
1"not stamens, but tiny, blinking eyes"
2"not at the thorns, but at the space between two leaning stones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean24.26
std16.28
cv0.671
sampleLengths
058
122
210
332
49
528
612
742
810
939
103
1111
122
1338
1419
154
1648
179
1824
1982
2037
2148
2212
2330
249
2542
2640
2723
2810
2911
3055
3137
326
3331
3444
3535
3625
3727
3834
3923
403
4115
425
4315
4429
4526
4613
4723
4814
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"was gone"
28.18% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was dropping"
1"was rising"
2"was fracturing"
3"were appearing"
4"was leaking"
48.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences121
ratio0.033
matches
0"The distant hum of London traffic—usually a constant drone even this deep in the park—had vanished."
1"Above them, the sky was not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues—indigo, bruised purple, and a soft, sourceless luminescence that bathed everything in an ethereal glow."
2"Rory unzipped her jacket slightly; the temperature was rising, a humid, tropical warmth that clung to her skin."
3"The Seer's skin felt like marble—cold and unyielding."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1171
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.029888983774551667
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011101622544833475
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean11.43
std6.42
cv0.562
sampleLengths
025
112
221
39
413
510
68
716
88
99
1013
1115
1212
135
1419
1518
1610
1716
1819
194
203
2111
222
2315
2423
2515
264
274
2832
2916
309
3113
3211
332
3410
3521
3610
3722
3817
398
403
4116
4210
4319
4410
4512
467
479
483
4910
42.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2975206611570248
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences97
matches
0"She nodded to Nyx."
1"She stumbled, her boots sinking"
2"She straightened, blinking rapidly."
3"She pointed a pale finger"
4"She knelt, running her fingers"
5"It didn't crunch."
6"It yielded to her touch,"
7"They reached out, their hand"
8"She began to walk deeper"
9"They moved deeper into the"
10"She pulled it out, the"
11"It swung on its silver"
12"They reached the center of"
13"It was a liquid mirror,"
14"She leaned over, staring at"
15"She jerked back."
16"She looked around."
17"Her lavender eyes had lost"
18"Her expression was serene, but"
19"They pointed a digit of"
ratio0.237
16.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her coat"
2"Isolde Varga stopped at the"
3"The silver-haired woman didn't turn,"
4"Rory stepped up beside her,"
5"The distant hum of London"
6"Nyx drifted forward, their form"
7"The Shade towered over them,"
8"Isolde raised a slender hand."
9"The air before them shimmered,"
10"The scent of ozone and"
11"Rory took a breath, her"
12"The gemstone pulsed against her"
13"She nodded to Nyx."
14"Nyx didn't speak, only flowed"
15"The sensation of crossing the"
16"Pressure squeezed her eardrums, popping"
17"She stumbled, her boots sinking"
18"She straightened, blinking rapidly."
19"The world had tilted."
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The gemstone pulsed against her skin, a frantic, warming rhythm that matched the thrum of anxiety in her chest."
1"Above them, the sky was not the dull ceiling of cloud but a sprawling canvas of twilight hues—indigo, bruised purple, and a soft, sourceless luminescence that b…"
2"Massive standing stones, worn smooth by millennia of wind that didn't exist here, rose from the earth in a perfect spiral."
3"The plant shuddered, its leaves curling inward as if burned by frost."
4"Rory unzipped her jacket slightly; the temperature was rising, a humid, tropical warmth that clung to her skin."
5"It was a liquid mirror, reflecting a sky full of stars that weren't visible from Earth."
6"The blue light of the blade flared, casting long, sharp shadows that danced away from the light."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde said, not looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.071
70.2289%