| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She jerked back. [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.813 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 90.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 508 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 508 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 29 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 29 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 55.89% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora adjusted theিগ Heartstone pendant at her throat, its crimson pulse syncing with her heartbeat as they approached the standing stones." | | 1 | "\"Correction: it's a trick of reality itself,\" Nyx demurred, coalesced into solid form long enough to drag a clawed shadow-hand through the distortion. The air rippled, parting brie…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 501 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind them, Nyx hissed. The shadows between trees thickened, no longer mere absence of light—but something breathing." |
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| 44.61% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 427 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 4 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Great | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyking | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Nyking" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Great" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.446 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 3.992 | | wordCount | 501 | | matches | | 0 | "not like heat distortion, but airways thickening" | | 1 | "not water, but liquid starlight, thick as mercury" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 29 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 20.04 | | std | 11.55 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 29 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 29 | | ratio | 0.241 | | matches | | 0 | "Between them hung a shimmer—not like heat distortion, but airways thickening and warping.\"" | | 1 | "Aurora exhaled. The dagger Isolde had given her — the Fae-forged blade — hummed against her thigh. \"You sure this won’t get us eaten by carnivorous pixies or whatever?”" | | 2 | "Sound rushed back first—birdsong, but layered with harmonies no avian throat could replicate. Then scent: fermentation and petrichor and something dangerously sweet beneath it." | | 3 | "The grove sprawled before them in impossible dimensions. Wildflowers carpeted the ground at their feet, petals flickering between shades of violet-blue-red in time with unseen pulses. Trees grew spiraled, branches twisting in fractal patterns that defied gravity. Above, the sky seeped between states—dusk chasing dawn in perpetual cycles." | | 4 | "Ahead, a clearing opened. At its center stood a pool—not water, but liquid starlight, thick as mercury. Shapes swam in its depth: winged serpents, libraries on fire, a city with streets of molten gold." | | 5 | "Reluctant, Aurora crouched. The surface shimmered, then resolved into a scene—" | | 6 | "Behind them, Nyx hissed. The shadows between trees thickened, no longer mere absence of light—but something breathing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 141 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.03546099290780142 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014184397163120567 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 29 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 29 | | mean | 17.28 | | std | 9.74 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6896551724137931 | | totalSentences | 29 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "Only more interesting ways to" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "They advanced. Every fourth step," | | 1 | "It was her. Bloodied. Standing" | | 2 | "She jerked back. The dagger" |
| | ratio | 0.111 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted theিগ Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured, their whisper cutting" | | 3 | "Aurora followed the Shade's gaze" | | 4 | "The bark glistened unnaturally, as" | | 5 | "polyn observed, stepping forward. No" | | 6 | "Nyx demurred, coalesced into solid" | | 7 | "Aurora exhaled. The dagger Isolde" | | 8 | "Isolde’s smile was more unsettling" | | 9 | "Nyx drifted forward, dissolving into" | | 10 | "Sound rushed back first—birdsong, but" | | 11 | "The grove sprawled before them" | | 12 | "They advanced. Every fourth step," | | 13 | "Isolde noted, trailing fingers through" | | 14 | "Aurora glanced down. The disturbed" | | 15 | "Nyx recoiled, shadows frothing." | | 16 | "Isolde knelt, silver hair trailing" | | 17 | "It was her. Bloodied. Standing" | | 18 | "She jerked back. The dagger" | | 19 | "The Seer's eyes reflected infinite" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 27 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 12 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove sprawled before them in impossible dimensions. Wildflowers carpeted the ground at their feet, petals flickering between shades of violet-blue-red in t…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "polyn observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Isolde noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |