| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1245 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1245 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "jaw clenched" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 39 | | totalWords | 1239 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory—if you're reading this, I'm at the Grove. Don't come alone. Don't come unarmed. Don't come after midnight. But if you don't come at all by the 23rd, something bad will happen. I can feel it happening already. —E" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1213 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | November | 3 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Eva | 9 | | Rory | 12 | | Earth | 1 | | Don | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like hundreds of years compressed" | | 1 | "looked like Eva's but felt wrong" | | 2 | "Not quite formed, not quite solid" | | 3 | "not quite solid" | | 4 | "as though testing its strength" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.807 | | wordCount | 1239 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just the gentle pulse of normal, but genuinely hot" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 34.42 | | std | 23.85 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 61 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 56 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "weren't attacking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper, and she felt it—that familiar pulse of warmth against her sternum." | | 1 | "Not unusual—Eva could disappear for weeks sometimes, consumed by whatever creative project had captured her attention." | | 2 | "*Rory—if you're reading this, I'm at the Grove." | | 3 | "—E*" | | 4 | "The Grove had its own ambient sounds—the rustle of leaves that moved without wind, the distant trill of birds that shouldn't exist in November, a faint hum that might have been her own pulse or might have been something else entirely." | | 5 | "She spun back to face the direction she'd come from—the entrance stones still visible in the distance, maybe fifty metres away." | | 6 | "Nothing fancy—just a kitchen knife she'd taken from her flat." | | 7 | "One of the shapes drifted closer, and Rory could hear it more clearly—that laboured breathing, but now with an added dimension." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 449 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.0378619153674833 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017817371937639197 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 9.46 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 65.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4351145038167939 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally tonight it had become" | | 1 | "Still mimicking her own, but" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone" | | 1 | "It had been growing stronger" | | 2 | "She pulled her phone out" | | 3 | "I can feel it happening" | | 4 | "She reached the centre of" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded swallowed by" | | 6 | "She spun toward it." | | 7 | "she called out" | | 8 | "She pulled it out and" | | 9 | "She spun back to face" | | 10 | "It seemed stupid now." | | 11 | "It sounded almost rhythmic now," | | 12 | "She started walking toward the" | | 13 | "She pulled it out fully," | | 14 | "They hung at the edge" | | 15 | "She couldn't make out the" | | 16 | "She broke into a run." | | 17 | "They weren't attacking exactly." | | 18 | "They were just..." | | 19 | "She crossed through the boundary" |
| | ratio | 0.217 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's trainers crunched against dead" | | 1 | "The November cold bit at" | | 2 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone" | | 3 | "It had been growing stronger" | | 4 | "The Grove hadn't changed much" | | 5 | "Wildflowers still bloomed impossibly in" | | 6 | "The ancient oaks stood like" | | 7 | "The air tasted metallic." | | 8 | "She pulled her phone out" | | 9 | "The screen cast a pale" | | 10 | "Battery at twelve percent." | | 11 | "The reason she'd come pressed" | | 12 | "*Rory—if you're reading this, I'm" | | 13 | "I can feel it happening" | | 14 | "The 23rd was tonight." | | 15 | "Rory moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "Eva had been the one" | | 17 | "Eva had known what she" | | 18 | "Eva didn't scare easily." | | 19 | "The wildflowers seemed to lean" |
| | ratio | 0.689 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been growing stronger all week, a rhythm that matched her heartbeat then diverged, quickened, slowed." | | 1 | "The Grove had its own ambient sounds—the rustle of leaves that moved without wind, the distant trill of birds that shouldn't exist in November, a faint hum that…" | | 2 | "Multiple voices speaking over one another, creating a susurration that raised every hair on her body." | | 3 | "The Heartstone pulsed in her hand with a rhythm that felt frantic, and the pendant itself had begun to ache in her chest like a second heartbeat going mad." | | 4 | "Shapes beginning to coalesce directly at the boundary, pressing against it as though testing its strength." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |