Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9N7NWZFM9WFH39T5YC

Run Details

Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.008452
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park at night possessed a different gravity. The air felt heavier, thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, pressing down on Aurora’s shoulders like a physical weight. She pulled her coat tighter, the wool scratching at her neck, and checked her phone. No signal. Not even a single bar flickering on the screen. She shouldn't be here. The sane part of her brain, the part that had finished her Pre-Law degree and knew exactly how many ways a person could disappear in a city of nine million, screamed at her to turn back. But the Heartstone pendant against her skin was burning, a frantic, rhythmic heat that beat in time with her pulse. "Just a quick look. Verify the anomaly, then leave." The words hung in the cold air, a puff of white vapour that dissolved instantly. Talking to herself was a bad habit, a sign of nerves. Rory took a breath, steadying herself, and clicked off her torch. The moonlight filtering through the canopy was enough. Ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, marking the boundary of the Grove. During the day, they looked like majestic sentinels of history. Tonight, they looked like jagged teeth waiting to snap shut. She stepped between the two largest stones. The change was instant. The ambient noise of the city—the distant hum of traffic on the A3, the sirens, the constant drone of London—vanished. The silence that replaced it wasn't empty. It was a listening silence. Rory crouched, running her fingers over the mossy earth. The wildflowers here defied the season. Blooms of vivid violet and phosphorescent white clustered around the roots of the oaks, their petals open wide as if gasping for air. She reached out to touch a violet stem, but stopped. The flower was twitching. Not trembling in the wind. There was no wind here. The flower was contracting, expanding, like a lung. She yanked her hand back, cradling it against her chest. The Heartstone flared hotter, a sudden spike of temperature that made her wince. She gripped the silver chain, pulling the crimson gem from beneath her shirt. It cast a faint, bloody glow on the grass, illuminating a patch of ground that looked disturbingly like fur. "Okay. Not natural." She stood up, her knees popping in the quiet. The shadows beneath the trees seemed to have deepened, stretching towards her like spilled ink. A snap echoed through the clearing. Rory froze. It sounded like a dry branch breaking, heavy and deliberate. It came from behind her, past the standing stones. Past the boundary she had just crossed. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin, swallowed immediately by the trees. No answer. Just the rustle of leaves, a sound like dry skin dragging over stone. She turned in a slow circle, scanning the perimeter. The oaks were twisted, their branches gnarled into shapes that hurt the eye if she stared too long. Faces. Animals. Things with too many limbs. Her mind was trying to make patterns out of the chaos, a trick of the light and the creeping fear. Focus on the facts. The pendant reacts to Hel portals. It is reacting now. Therefore, there is a portal or something akin to it nearby. Another sound. *Drag. Scrape. Drag.* It was wet this time. Soft and heavy, like a wet sack being pulled across mud. It was coming from the dense thicket to her left. Rory shifted her stance, balancing her weight on the balls of her feet. She looked for a weapon, a stick, a rock, anything. Her hand found a fallen branch, thick and heavy with rot. She lifted it, the wood crumbling slightly under her grip. The Heartstone pulsed against her palm, a frantic strobe light. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* "I'm armed," she said, her voice stronger this time. "I'm not alone." A lie. But a convincing one. The thicket went still. Then, a low chittering sound drifted out. It was high-pitched, like a rodent, but distorted, stretched until it sounded like a child giggling through a fan. Rory took a step back toward the standing stones. The exit. She just needed to step between the oaks. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. She looked up. The moon was gone. The sky above the Grove was not black, but a bruised purple, swirling with clouds that moved in a slow, impossible counter-clockwise rotation. The temperature plummeted, her breath coming out in ragged clouds. She moved faster, crunching over the flowers. They didn't crunch. They bruised, leaking a thick, dark sap that smelled of copper and old blood. *Drag. Scrape.* Closer now. Right behind the tree line to her right. She broke into a jog, aiming for the gap in the stones. Ten feet. Five feet. A shape detached itself from the shadow of the largest oak. It was tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that articulated in too many joints. It didn't walk; it flowed, its body a blur of grey and brown that shifted like smoke in a breeze. It stood between her and the exit. Rory skidded to a halt, digging her heels into the loam. The branch in her hand felt like a toothpick now. The thing had no face. Just a smooth, pale oval where features should be. But it had eyes. Dozens of them, opening and closing along its torso and arms, blinking independently. They were all the same bright, impossible blue. "Back off." The thing tilted its head. It didn't have a mouth, but a sound rippled through the air, a vibrating hum that vibrated in her teeth. *Look. Look. Look.* The voice wasn't in her ears. It was inside her skull, a invasive thought that wasn't hers. Rory gripped the pendant until the metal edges cut into her fingers. The heat was searing now, burning a brand into her chest. "Get out of my head." She swung the branch. It passed harmlessly through the creature’s torso as if it were made of mist. The creature didn't flinch. It just leaned closer, those unblinking blue eyes fixing on her face. *Wrong. Wrong. Wrong.* The ground beneath her feet softened. Rory looked down. The grass was gone. The earth was turning to liquid, a dark, viscous pool bubbling up around her boots. She tried to lift her leg, but the mud held fast, sucking her down with a wet, greedy schlurp. Panic, cold and sharp, pierced her calm. She thrashed, losing her balance and falling to one knee. The mud was up to her shin now, warm and pulsing. The creature drifted forward, hovering over the mud. It raised a long, spindly arm. The hand at the end split open into five tendrils, each one tipped with a single, dripping blue eye. *Give. It. Back.* Rory grabbed a root from the edge of the solid ground, her fingers slipping on the slime. "I don't have anything!" The pendant flared so bright it turned the world white. For a split second, the creature shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, shielding its faceless face with its many arms. The mud loosened its grip. Rory scrambled. She clawed at the earth, fingernails tearing, boots slipping. She threw herself forward, her chest hitting the solid ground near the stones. She didn't look back. She crawled, then scrambled up, and sprinted for the gap. The air behind her screamed. The wind howled, a gale force that tried to push her back into the clearing. Leaves whipped against her face, stinging like needles. She dove through the standing stones, tucking and rolling over the rough grass of the normal park. She hit the ground hard, the breath driven from her lungs. Silence. Real silence. The distant hum of the A3 was back, a comforting, gritty roar. A siren wailed in the distance. Rory lay on her back, gasping, staring up at the normal, starless sky of London. She clutched the Heartstone. It was cooling rapidly, the crimson gem dull and lifeless against her chest. She sat up, her body shaking with delayed adrenaline. She looked back at the Grove. The standing stones were just stones. The flowers were gone. Inside the clearing, everything was still. Just shadows and old trees. But on her ankle, just above the line of her boot, there was a mark. A perfect, blue handprint. Five fingers, long and thin, burned into her skin like a tattoo. She wiped the mud from her face, her hand trembling. "Note to self," she whispered, her voice cracking. "Don't go back."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"loomed"
4"sentinels"
5"silence"
6"echoed"
7"scanning"
8"pulsed"
9"vibrated"
10"searing"
11"comforting"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords16
totalWords1414
ratio0.011
matches
0"Drag. Scrape. Drag."
1"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
2"Drag. Scrape."
3"Look. Look. Look."
4"Wrong. Wrong. Wrong."
5"Give. It. Back."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1379
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Aurora1
Pre-Law1
Heartstone4
Grove3
London2
Hel1
Closer1
Rory11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like majestic sentinels of history"
1"looked like jagged teeth waiting to snap"
2"as if gasping for air"
3"sounded like a dry branch breaking, heavy"
4"something akin to it nearby"
5"sounded like a child giggling through a fa"
6"felt like a toothpick now"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.707
wordCount1414
matches
0"not black, but a bruised purple, swirling with clouds"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean21.75
std15.97
cv0.734
sampleLengths
057
160
29
345
439
536
652
718
855
93
1024
116
1228
131
149
1515
1654
1725
182
193
2026
2144
2212
2312
246
2530
2619
277
2840
2924
302
3110
3216
3311
3440
3521
3639
372
3825
393
4017
4123
425
434
4430
453
4647
4728
4833
493
92.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences164
matches
0"were twisted"
1"being pulled"
2"was gone"
3"were made"
4"was gone"
5"were gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs242
matches
0"was burning"
1"was twitching"
2"was contracting"
3"was trying"
4"was coming"
5"was searing"
6"was turning"
7"was cooling"
93.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences172
ratio0.017
matches
0"The ambient noise of the city—the distant hum of traffic on the A3, the sirens, the constant drone of London—vanished."
1"It didn't walk; it flowed, its body a blur of grey and brown that shifted like smoke in a breeze."
2"For a split second, the creature shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled, shielding its faceless face with its many arms."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1387
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slow, impossible counter-clockwise rotation."
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.02883922134102379
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007209805335255948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.22
std5.89
cv0.716
sampleLengths
08
123
215
32
49
54
636
720
89
915
1011
1111
128
1312
1410
1510
167
174
1820
197
205
219
226
2323
2410
254
265
275
288
2910
3013
3113
3219
333
349
3515
366
372
3810
399
407
411
429
432
4413
459
4618
471
481
495
36.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.29651162790697677
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners51
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just the rustle of leaves,"
1"Then, a low chittering sound"
2"Just a smooth, pale oval"
3"Just shadows and old trees."
ratio0.03
61.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences134
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"She shouldn't be here."
2"She stepped between the two"
3"It was a listening silence."
4"She reached out to touch"
5"She yanked her hand back,"
6"She gripped the silver chain,"
7"It cast a faint, bloody"
8"She stood up, her knees"
9"It sounded like a dry"
10"It came from behind her,"
11"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
12"She turned in a slow"
13"Her mind was trying to"
14"It is reacting now."
15"It was wet this time."
16"It was coming from the"
17"She looked for a weapon,"
18"Her hand found a fallen"
19"She lifted it, the wood"
ratio0.396
45.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences134
matches
0"Richmond Park at night possessed"
1"The air felt heavier, thick"
2"She pulled her coat tighter,"
3"She shouldn't be here."
4"The sane part of her"
5"The words hung in the"
6"Rory took a breath, steadying"
7"The moonlight filtering through the"
8"Tonight, they looked like jagged"
9"She stepped between the two"
10"The change was instant."
11"The ambient noise of the"
12"The silence that replaced it"
13"It was a listening silence."
14"Rory crouched, running her fingers"
15"The wildflowers here defied the"
16"Blooms of vivid violet and"
17"She reached out to touch"
18"The flower was twitching."
19"The flower was contracting, expanding,"
ratio0.828
37.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Therefore, there is a portal"
ratio0.007
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The sane part of her brain, the part that had finished her Pre-Law degree and knew exactly how many ways a person could disappear in a city of nine million, scr…"
1"The words hung in the cold air, a puff of white vapour that dissolved instantly."
2"Blooms of vivid violet and phosphorescent white clustered around the roots of the oaks, their petals open wide as if gasping for air."
3"The Heartstone flared hotter, a sudden spike of temperature that made her wince."
4"It cast a faint, bloody glow on the grass, illuminating a patch of ground that looked disturbingly like fur."
5"The sky above the Grove was not black, but a bruised purple, swirling with clouds that moved in a slow, impossible counter-clockwise rotation."
6"They bruised, leaking a thick, dark sap that smelled of copper and old blood."
7"It was tall, impossibly thin, with limbs that articulated in too many joints."
8"It was inside her skull, a invasive thought that wasn't hers."
9"Rory lay on her back, gasping, staring up at the normal, starless sky of London."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice stronger this time"
1"she whispered, her voice cracking"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
76.0407%