Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9PH0A27DA9TXMNY06J

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.011174
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, a rhythmic drumming that drowned the city’s pulse. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched over wet gravel and shattered glass as she rounded the corner of an alleyway in Camden. Ahead, a hooded figure darted between overflowing skips. The runner’s movements were fluid, a frantic grace that suggested desperation rather than skill. Quinn tapped the worn leather on her left wrist, checking the time. 11:42 PM. "Stop right there!" The suspect didn't even flinch. He vaulted over a rusted iron gate, his sneakers squeaking against the slick metal. Quinn didn't hesitate. She grabbed the top bar, swung her weight over, and landed in a shallow puddle that sprayed mud across her trousers. The salt-and-pepper strands of her hair clung to her forehead. She wiped the moisture from her eyes, refocusing on the retreating silhouette. They were deep in the guts of the borough now, where the streetlights flickered with a dying yellow hum. The man ahead took a sharp right, disappearing into the maw of an abandoned Tube station entrance. The signs for the Northern Line had been stripped away years ago, leaving only jagged metal teeth and a cavernous darkness that smelled of damp earth and ozone. Quinn slowed her pace as she reached the threshold. Her breath came in short, jagged plumes of white. She drew her service pistol, the weight familiar and grounding in her palm. The stairs spiraled down into a throat of pitch. From below, a faint vibration thrummed through the soles of her boots—not the rattle of a train, but a low-frequency hum that made the hair on her neck prickle. "I know you’re down there, Herrera!" Her voice echoed, bouncing off the tiled walls until it lost all meaning. She stepped onto the first stair. The air grew thick, tasting of copper and incense. As she descended, the darkness peeled back to reveal a flickering green glow. It wasn't the sterile emerald of an exit sign, but something organic, swirling like gas trapped in a bottle. At the bottom of the flight, the corridor opened into a vast, vaulted chamber. This was no longer a transit hub. Stalls draped in heavy velvet and rusted chain-link lined the platform edges. Gloved hands swapped jars of shimmering silt for coins that didn't glint like sterling. This was the Veil Market, a place whispered about in the redacted margins of her old partner’s field notes. Quinn tucked her weapon into its holster, realizing a gun was a scream in a room full of whispers. She adjusted her jacket, sharp jaw set in a grim line. A few yards away, Tomás Herrera stood by a stall overflowing with dried roots and blackened bones. He looked haggard. The olive skin of his face seemed sallow under the sickly subterranean lights. He was clutching a small wooden crate to his chest as if it held his own heart. "You’re a long way from the hospital, Tomás." The man jumped, nearly dropping his cargo. He turned, the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swinging wildly. His eyes, usually a warm brown, were wide and bloodshot. "Stay back, Quinn. You don't understand what’s moving through the streets tonight. You shouldn't be here without a token." Quinn took a measured step forward, her military bearing cutting through the chaotic throng of the market. A man with skin like parchment brushed past her, his eyes devoid of pupils. She felt a cold shiver trek down her spine but kept her focus on the former paramedic. "I understand you’re missing. I understand three bodies turned up in Soho with their veins drained of more than just blood. Now, put the box down and let's go back to the surface." Tomás shook his head, retreating toward a tunnel where the shadows seemed to move independently of the light. "Those people were dying anyway. I was trying to buy them time. The things I need... they don't sell them at the pharmacy on the corner." He gestured vaguely to the market around them. A vendor nearby held up a string of teeth, clicking them together like castanets. Quinn scanned the crowd. She felt eyes on her—too many eyes, and some were positioned at heights that defied human anatomy. "This is your last chance to walk out of here in cuffs instead of a sheet." Tomás glanced at the dark tunnel behind him, then back at the detective. A flicker of pity crossed his face. "You’re still looking for Morris, aren't you? Following the ghosts because you can't stand the silence he left behind." Quinn’s Hand twitched toward her belt. The mention of her partner was a jagged blade in an old wound. "Keep his name out of your mouth." "He was here, Harlow. Three years ago, he sat at the Raven's Nest and realized the world was bigger than the law. He didn't die because of a botched bust. He died because he didn't have the right currency for what he wanted to know." Tomás backed further into the gloom. The green light faded, replaced by the orange flicker of torches deeper in the tunnel system. "If you follow me, there’s no turning back. The Market moves at dawn. If you’re still down here when the full moon shifts, you belong to the stone." Quinn looked up at the ceiling. Somewhere far above, the rain was still falling on a world that made sense. There were traffic lights and coffee shops and reports to file. Down here, the air smelled of ancient secrets and rot. She thought of the cold case file on her desk, the one with the blurred photos and the missing autopsy results. She stepped over the threshold of the platform, leaving the safety of the station's footprint. "Then I guess we’re both going to be late for work tomorrow." Tomás turned and bolted into the dark. Quinn lunged after him, her boots splashing through a stream of bioluminescent sludge that ran between the tracks. The market noises muffled instantly, replaced by a heavy, oppressive stillness. The tunnel narrowed. The walls were no longer tiled but carved directly from the London clay, reinforced with massive, salt-crusted timbers. Quinn pulled a small torch from her pocket. The beam cut through the dark, illuminating the scar on Tomás’s forearm as he scrambled over a pile of debris. "Wait!" She tackled him just as they reached a fork in the path. They hit the ground hard. The wooden crate tumbled away, the lid popping open. Dozens of small glass vials spilled onto the dirt, filled with a viscous, silver fluid that pulsed with a soft light. Tomás groaned, pinning Quinn’s wrists down with surprising strength for a man who looked like he hadn't slept in a week. "You've broken them! Do you have any idea what that costs?" Quinn bucked him off, rolling to her feet and pinning him against the damp wall. She pressed her forearm against his throat, not enough to choke, but enough to command. "I don't care about the price. I want names. Who is running the Nest? Who cleared the scene when Morris went down?" Tomás laughed, a dry, hacking sound. He didn't look at her; he looked past her, toward the cavern they had just exited. The sound of rhythmic chanting began to drift through the tunnel, accompanied by the heavy thud of something massive moving through the Market. "The names won't help you, Detective. The people you're looking for... they aren't people anymore. They’re stockholders in something much older than the Met." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, jagged piece of polished bone. He shoved it into Quinn’s hand. "Take it. It’s a bone token. If the guards find you without it, they’ll harvest yours to make a new one." Quinn looked down at the macabre object. It felt unnaturally warm, vibrating against her palm like a trapped insect. "Why are you helping me?" Tomás straightened his Saint Christopher medallion, his expression softening for a fleeting second. "Because Morris was my friend. And he told me that if you ever came looking, I should tell you to run. But I know you. You never were much for running." A guttural roar echoed from the direction of the station. The silver liquid from the broken vials began to seep into the floor, carving glowing runes into the earth. The ground beneath them shuddered. Quinn gripped the bone token tight enough to draw blood. She looked into the darkness ahead, where the tunnel sloped even deeper into the crust of the city. The suspect was no longer a target; he was a guide. "Keep moving, Herrera. And if you lie to me once, I'm locking you in a cell so deep the moon won't ever find you." They moved into the throat of the deeper tunnels, the light of the upper world fading until it was nothing more than a memory of rain. The walls began to weep a thick, black resin. Quinn didn't look back. She followed the rhythmic clinking of Tomás’s medallion, her senses heightened to a point of excruciating clarity. Every drip of water sounded like a gunshot. Every shift in the air felt like a caress. They reached a heavy iron door, its surface etched with weeping eyes. Tomás pressed his palm against the metal. The door didn't creak; it sighed, a sound of profound exhaustion. "Once we go through here, we’re in the Inner Circle," Tomás whispered. "Keep your eyes down. Don't look at the merchants in the red veils. And for God’s sake, Quinn, don't touch the mirrors." Quinn stepped through the threshold. The room beyond was a cathedral of stolen things. Shelves rose fifty feet high, packed with jars of memories, tethered shadows, and weapons that hummed with forbidden intent. In the center of the room stood a stone table, and sitting there was a woman with hair the color of dried blood, shuffling a deck of cards made of human skin. The woman looked up, her eyes entirely gold. "The Law has come to the cellar," the woman said, her voice a chorus of a dozen different tones. "And she's brought a thief to show her the way." Quinn stepped forward, her hand resting on the hilt of her weapon, though she knew it was useless here. "I'm looking for a man named Silas," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the hammering of her heart. The woman laughed, and the sound made the vials in Quinn’s pockets rattle. "Silas is a busy man, Detective. He’s currently negotiating the price of a soul. But perhaps you have something to trade for his time?" Tomás stepped beside Quinn, his face pale. "She has the token, Morana. She’s under protection of the Market." The woman, Morana, leaned forward, the gold of her eyes swirling like a storm. "The token buys her passage, little medic. It doesn't buy her answers. Answers require a deeper tribute." Quinn watched as Morana laid out three cards. The first showed a tower falling into a black sea. The second showed a silver star eclipsed by a jagged tooth. The third was blank—a void of white cardstock that seemed to pull the light from the room. "Your partner sat in that very chair," Morana said, pointing to a stool carved from a single piece of obsidian. "He asked the same question. Do you want to know what he traded for the answer?" Quinn felt the weight of her eighteen years on the force pressing down on her shoulders. She thought of the medals in her drawer, the commendations for bravery, the rules she had lived by since she was twenty. "I don't care about the cost." "Spoken like a woman who has already lost everything," Morana flicked the blank card toward Quinn. It slid across the stone table, stopping inches from her hand. "The answer isn't in a name, Detective. It’s in a location. The Raven's Nest is just the lobby. If you want the truth about DS Morris, you need to go to the basement." "I've been in the Nest's basement," Quinn snapped. "It’s a secret room with a few maps and some vintage whiskey." Morana’s smile was a jagged line. "You’ve been in the room the humans use. You haven't been in the room the Raven uses." The gold-eyed woman gestured to the back of the cathedral of curiosities. A narrow staircase made of translucent bone wound upward, disappearing into a ceiling of swirling mist. "Go on, then. Follow the medic. He knows the way to the back door. But remember, Detective Quinn—the truth is a heavy thing to carry back up to the surface. Most people find it easier to just stay down here and let the weight crush them." Tomás grabbed Quinn’s arm, his grip urgent. "We have to go. The shift is starting." Across the chamber, the heavy thudding sound returned, accompanied by the screech of metal on stone. The vendors began packing their wares with frantic speed. The green light in the air began to pulse a violent, bruised purple. Quinn looked at the blank card on the table. For a second, a face flickered in the white void—Morris, his eyes wide with the same realization she was beginning to feel. He wasn't dead. He was just part of the inventory now. She snatched the card and turned to Tomás. "Lead the way." They ran through the maze of shelves, the air growing colder with every step. The sound of the Market's relocation was deafening now, a cacophony of grinding gears and screaming stone. They reached the base of the bone staircase. "Keep climbing," Tomás shouted over the roar. "Don't look back at the floor! If you see the ground move, you'll lose your mind!" Quinn shoved him toward the stairs and began the ascent. The steps felt soft, like treading on velvet. Below them, the entire abandoned Tube station began to fold in on itself. The stalls, the velvet drapes, and the glowing silt were being swallowed by a rift in the reality of the tunnel. The detective’s lungs burned. She reached the top of the stairs and found a small, wooden door with a brass handle in the shape of a feather. She grabbed it, twisted, and threw herself through the opening. She landed hard on a floor of polished oak. The smell of expensive bourbon and stale smoke hit her instantly. She was in the secret room of the Raven's Nest. The bookshelf she had used to enter a dozens times was closed behind her. She looked down at her hands. They were covered in the bioluminescent sludge from the tunnels. Beside her, Tomás sat on the floor, gasping for air, his Saint Christopher medallion glowing with a dull, dying heat. "We're back," he wheezed. Quinn stood up, her knees shaking. She walked to the bookshelf and pushed it open. The bar was empty, the green neon sign outside casting long, emerald shadows across the empty stools. The rain was still drumming against the windows, a constant, mundane reality that felt like a lie. She reached into her pocket and pulled out the blank card. It wasn't blank anymore. A map of the very room she was standing in was etched in silver ink. At the center of the room, beneath the floorboards where the safe was supposed to be, was a symbol Quinn had seen only once before—etched into the skin of her partner’s cold hand. "Tomás," she said, her voice a low rasp. The medic looked up. "Get the crowbar from the bar's toolkit. We aren't done yet." Quinn walked to the center of the room, her boots heavy on the oak. She looked at the worn leather watch on her wrist. 12:05 AM. The world was still turning, but Harlow Quinn was no longer walking on the same earth as the rest of the city. She stood over the symbol, the bone token in her pocket feeling like a hot coal against her hip. The chase had ended, but the hunt had just begun. "Hurry up, Herrera," she said, her eyes fixed on the floorboards. "I want to see what's under the house."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2712
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2712
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"maw"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"velvet"
count3
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count2
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
17
word"oppressive"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count1
19
word"macabre"
count1
20
word"fleeting"
count1
21
word"etched"
count3
22
word"profound"
count1
23
word"flicked"
count1
24
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"shattered"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"maw"
6"familiar"
7"echoed"
8"velvet"
9"glint"
10"measured"
11"chaotic"
12"down her spine"
13"scanned"
14"flicker"
15"silence"
16"gloom"
17"oppressive"
18"pulsed"
19"macabre"
20"fleeting"
21"etched"
22"profound"
23"flicked"
24"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences166
matches
0"A flicker of pity"
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences166
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2700
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount2025
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn33
Camden1
Tube2
Northern1
Line1
Veil1
Market3
Tomás17
Herrera1
Saint3
Christopher3
Hand1
London1
Morana5
Morris1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Line"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Hand"
8"Morana"
9"Morris"
10"Raven"
places
0"Camden"
1"Market"
2"London"
globalScore0.685
windowScore0.333
64.97% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences147
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like he hadn't slept in a week"
1"sounded like a gunshot"
2"felt like a caress"
3"cardstock that seemed to pull the light from the room"
4"felt like a lie"
88.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.111
wordCount2700
matches
0"not the rattle of a train, but a low-frequency hum"
1"no longer tiled but"
2"not enough to choke, but enough to command"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean29.03
std18.81
cv0.648
sampleLengths
069
13
265
364
469
56
660
766
830
950
108
1128
1219
1348
1433
1518
1626
1743
1816
1920
2019
2119
227
2345
2422
2528
2662
2715
2812
2936
3049
311
3247
3321
3411
3530
3622
3745
3824
3921
4021
4119
425
4313
4431
4534
4639
4724
4873
4930
92.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences166
matches
0"been stripped"
1"were positioned"
2"being swallowed"
3"were covered"
4"was etched"
5"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs321
matches
0"was clutching"
1"was beginning"
2"was deafening"
3"was standing"
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences202
ratio0.04
matches
0"From below, a faint vibration thrummed through the soles of her boots—not the rattle of a train, but a low-frequency hum that made the hair on her neck prickle."
1"She felt eyes on her—too many eyes, and some were positioned at heights that defied human anatomy."
2"He didn't look at her; he looked past her, toward the cavern they had just exited."
3"The suspect was no longer a target; he was a guide."
4"The door didn't creak; it sighed, a sound of profound exhaustion."
5"The third was blank—a void of white cardstock that seemed to pull the light from the room."
6"For a second, a face flickered in the white void—Morris, his eyes wide with the same realization she was beginning to feel."
7"At the center of the room, beneath the floorboards where the safe was supposed to be, was a symbol Quinn had seen only once before—etched into the skin of her partner’s cold hand."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2036
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"massive, salt-crusted timbers."
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.023575638506876228
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.0063850687622789785
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean13.37
std7.33
cv0.549
sampleLengths
012
121
28
314
412
52
63
75
814
93
1021
1110
1212
1319
1417
1528
169
179
1813
199
2029
216
2213
236
249
2513
2619
2714
287
2912
3014
3119
3219
3311
3417
353
3613
3717
388
397
4011
4110
4219
4317
4414
4517
4633
4718
4826
498
41.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.27722772277227725
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners56
20.70% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"Somewhere far above, the rain"
ratio0.006
95.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences161
matches
0"He vaulted over a rusted"
1"She grabbed the top bar,"
2"She wiped the moisture from"
3"They were deep in the"
4"Her breath came in short,"
5"She drew her service pistol,"
6"Her voice echoed, bouncing off"
7"She stepped onto the first"
8"It wasn't the sterile emerald"
9"She adjusted her jacket, sharp"
10"He looked haggard."
11"He was clutching a small"
12"He turned, the Saint Christopher"
13"His eyes, usually a warm"
14"She felt a cold shiver"
15"He gestured vaguely to the"
16"She felt eyes on her—too"
17"She thought of the cold"
18"She stepped over the threshold"
19"She tackled him just as"
ratio0.311
9.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount145
totalSentences161
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched"
1"The runner’s movements were fluid,"
2"Quinn tapped the worn leather"
3"The suspect didn't even flinch."
4"He vaulted over a rusted"
5"Quinn didn't hesitate."
6"She grabbed the top bar,"
7"The salt-and-pepper strands of her"
8"She wiped the moisture from"
9"They were deep in the"
10"The man ahead took a"
11"The signs for the Northern"
12"Quinn slowed her pace as"
13"Her breath came in short,"
14"She drew her service pistol,"
15"The stairs spiraled down into"
16"Her voice echoed, bouncing off"
17"She stepped onto the first"
18"The air grew thick, tasting"
19"It wasn't the sterile emerald"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences102
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She grabbed the top bar, swung her weight over, and landed in a shallow puddle that sprayed mud across her trousers."
1"The signs for the Northern Line had been stripped away years ago, leaving only jagged metal teeth and a cavernous darkness that smelled of damp earth and ozone."
2"From below, a faint vibration thrummed through the soles of her boots—not the rattle of a train, but a low-frequency hum that made the hair on her neck prickle."
3"Gloved hands swapped jars of shimmering silt for coins that didn't glint like sterling."
4"He was clutching a small wooden crate to his chest as if it held his own heart."
5"Quinn lunged after him, her boots splashing through a stream of bioluminescent sludge that ran between the tracks."
6"Tomás straightened his Saint Christopher medallion, his expression softening for a fleeting second."
7"Shelves rose fifty feet high, packed with jars of memories, tethered shadows, and weapons that hummed with forbidden intent."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the woman said, her voice a chorus of a dozen different tones"
1"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the hammering of her heart"
2"she said, her voice a low rasp"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Tomás shouted (shout)"
3"he wheezed (wheeze)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.391
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.174
74.0291%