Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9QBW66KXT7QRR82ZV0

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.2
Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.044205
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora kept her bike light off and walked it along the park path, tyres whispering over grit. Richmond Park lay flat and black, its fences and hedges reduced to a few darker strokes against the sky. London’s glow sat low on the horizon like a bruise, but out here the trees swallowed it. The Heartstone pendant tapped her sternum with each step. Warm. Not body-warm—stove-warm, like she’d pressed it against a kettle. The crimson gem held a dim glow inside itself, a coal that refused to die. She lifted the chain, thumb and forefinger pinching the silver links. The gem pulsed once against her skin, a slow squeeze. “So this is it,” she muttered, and her breath turned white and small. Her phone screen lit her hand. 00:12. No signal bars. The battery icon sat at thirty per cent, then flickered and dropped to twenty-nine. The park had never done that. Not even in the dead spots near the ponds. A deer barked somewhere to her left—sharp, human-shaped in the throat—and then the night snapped back to quiet. Rory stopped at the line of ancient standing stones. They rose in a loose ring between trunks and tangled undergrowth, their surfaces pale as old teeth. Someone had carved oak leaves into them long ago, veins and stems worn soft. Moss clung in thick seams. The stones did not belong in a public park. They looked planted, like stakes. Wildflowers crowded right up to the stone line. At midnight. In February. Petals shone waxy white and bruised purple, their stems bending without wind. Rory’s pendant warmed further. She let it fall. The gem rested against her chest and throbbed like a second heart. She spoke into the empty air because silence liked to crowd her. “Alright. One step in, one step out. No deals. No bargains. No—” Her mouth tightened. “—no stupid hero stuff.” She pushed the bike forward. The front tyre crossed between two stones. The air changed. Not a breeze. Not a drop in temperature. The space in her lungs shifted, like she’d walked from a street into a cinema and the outside world stayed on the other side of the door. The scent of damp earth sharpened to something sweeter, crushed green and honey. The hairs along her arms lifted. Behind her, the park’s darkness kept its shape, but it felt distant, like it sat at the end of a long corridor. Rory wheeled the bike fully into the ring and set the kickstand. Metal clicked, loud as a coin dropped in a church. Wildflowers filled the clearing, thick as spilled paint. They bloomed in layers—small starry blooms near her boots, taller stalks further out, heads bobbing with no wind. The ground looked smooth, no rabbit holes, no fallen branches. Too tidy. Her boot sank a fraction into the soil, and the earth gave with a slow, wet mouthfeel. Not mud. Something springy, like moss laid over flesh. She pulled her foot free and swallowed. “Eva,” she whispered, and the name tasted like her old flat back in Cardiff, like a place she could shut a door on. “You’d laugh your head off if you could see this.” No answer came, but the clearing offered up sound anyway. A faint clink, like cutlery touched by a careless hand, far off among the trees. Rory turned her head. The grove’s trees stood at the edge of the clearing, trunks thick and dark, canopies knitted together. No gaps showed between leaves, no stars. The night pressed down in one solid sheet. The clink came again. She moved one step toward it. The Heartstone’s heat pushed through her shirt. “I’m not here to play,” she called out, voice low so it didn’t tremble. “I just want to know who gave me the pendant.” Her words fell into the flowers and vanished. The grove swallowed sound with a hungry patience. Rory took out her phone and opened the camera. The screen showed the clearing in cold grainy grey. The flowers smeared into pale flecks. The stone ring stood behind her bike like a set of ribs. Her own face reflected faintly, bright blue eyes catching the screen light, shoulder-length black hair tucked behind her ears. Something moved at the edge of the frame. A dark line slid between tree trunks, too tall to be a deer, too thin to be a person. The camera struggled to hold it. The movement looked like a shadow remembering it had a body. Rory lowered the phone and stared at the trees. Nothing. Her pendant throbbed once, harder. She touched the crescent scar on her left wrist without thinking, thumb rubbing the pale curve. Her skin felt cold there, like the scar kept its own weather. “Right,” she breathed. “Brilliant.” She aimed the phone toward the stone ring. Still no signal. She flicked the torch on. The beam cut across flowers and made their petals shine. Dozens of tiny insects hung in the air, unmoving, like pins in felt. Rory’s stomach dipped. Insects didn’t hover in place. They bounced. They drifted. They lived. She waved her hand through the beam. The insects stayed where they were, each speck fixed, refusing the idea of wind. Her fingers passed between them, and for a moment her skin prickled, like she’d brushed through cobweb. A sound rose behind her—her own bike bell. It chimed once. Clear. Bright. Rory swung around. The bike stood still. The bell’s little lever sat untouched. Her throat tightened. She forced her voice out anyway. “Nice trick. I heard it.” The flowers nearest the bike shifted, their stems bending away from the tyres as if something heavy moved beneath them. The motion ran in a line, a ripple pushing toward the trees. Rory stepped back until her heel struck stone. The standing stone felt warm through her boot. The warmth climbed her calf. The pendant pulsed faster, heat spreading across her chest. The gem’s glow brightened enough to paint her collarbones red. “I’m leaving,” she announced, and hated how thin it sounded. She grabbed the bike handlebars and tugged. The tyres stayed planted. Not stuck in mud; they sat like they’d fused to the ground. She pulled harder and felt the frame strain. “Come on.” The bike did not move. Rory let go and ran her hands along the frame, checking for something caught. Nothing. The chain hung slack. The kickstand stayed down, but even lifted, the bike refused to budge. It might as well have been bolted to bedrock. A laugh drifted from the trees. Soft. Childlike. Not close enough to pinpoint. Rory’s jaw clenched until her teeth ached. She raised the phone like a weapon, torch beam carving a white wedge into the dark. Leaves at the grove’s edge shone wet, each one edged in silver. “Show yourself.” Another laugh answered, and this time it came from behind her right shoulder, close enough to feel on her neck. Rory spun. No one stood there. Only flowers, staring up with their open faces. Her pendant burned. She yanked the chain up, and the silver links bit into the back of her neck. The Heartstone’s crimson depth swirled, like smoke trapped under glass. “Who are you?” Her voice scraped. “You want the pendant? Take it. I don’t care. Just—” A whisper rose from the stone at her back. Not a voice, not words at first. More like the sound you made when you breathed on a window and then dragged your finger through the fog. The stone vibrated against her heel. Rory pressed her palm to the standing stone. Its surface felt slick, not mossy. Like skin with too much oil. The whisper tightened into syllables. “Rory.” Her name slid out of the stone with the wrong accent, too round, too pleased with itself. Her stomach dropped hard. No one here should have known that name. Aurora Carter existed on payslips and delivery apps and mail addressed to the flat above Silas’ bar. Rory belonged to a handful of people, and none of them sat in a ring of stones in a pocket of not-London. She pulled her hand away. The stone’s slickness clung to her palm and then vanished, leaving her skin dry as paper. “Don’t call me that.” The flowers shifted again. This time the motion rose in a circle around her, stems bowing inwards, as if the clearing had inhaled. The laugh returned, lower now, layered with something old. It threaded through the air like a fingernail drawn across cloth. Rory’s torch beam flickered. The phone screen dimmed, brightened, dimmed again. Battery dropped to twenty-seven. Twenty-six. Each percentage fell with a quiet click. She shoved the phone in her pocket and unclasped the pendant. The chain snagged in her hair and yanked. She hissed through her teeth, freed it, and held the Heartstone out at arm’s length. The gem’s glow painted her knuckles red. “You want it? Come and get it.” Silence held for three heartbeats. Then the grove answered with footsteps. Not leaves crunching. Not soil shifting. Footsteps on wood, like someone walked across a pub floor above a cellar. Each step landed with weight and purpose. The sound circled the clearing without any body attached, passing behind the trees where no floorboards existed. Rory backed toward the stone line, keeping the Heartstone raised. Her shoulders touched the carved oak leaves. The stone’s warmth rose into her spine. The footsteps stopped. A shape formed among the flowers. Not solid. Not smoke. It looked like the absence left behind when someone moved a lamp. The flowers beneath it bowed flat, stems pressed down as if a palm smoothed them. Rory held her breath until her chest hurt. The shape slid closer. The air in front of it warped, as if it carried heat, but the clearing stayed cold. Rory’s tongue stuck to the roof of her mouth. She forced sound out. “Listen. I didn’t come here to steal. I didn’t come here to—” She swallowed. “—to disrespect whatever this is. I came because it started pulsing and I thought it might lead me to the person who dropped it in my life like a bloody bomb.” The shape paused. The flowers trembled in a small ring around it, as if something inside it shifted its stance. A voice came from it, and the sound made Rory’s teeth feel loose. “You wore it. You fed it.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the pendant until the chain cut her skin. “I didn’t feed anything. It’s a stone.” The shape leaned forward. The air between them thickened, smelling of wet pennies and crushed petals. “Warm when the door breathes,” the voice pressed. “Warm when Hel listens.” Rory’s grip faltered for a fraction of a second at the word Hel. The pendant pulsed hard, matching her heartbeat, and for an instant she felt a second rhythm under her ribs, not her own. She swallowed it down and lifted her chin. “Where’s the door?” The clearing shifted. Not the trees. Not the stones. The space itself. The distance between her and the shape changed, like someone folded the air. Rory’s back pressed harder against the stone, and the carved oak leaves dug into her jacket. The shape hovered an arm’s length away. No face showed, but the sense of attention pinned Rory’s skin. “You stood on the seam.” Rory’s mouth dried out. “Then show me the edge.” The shape stretched, and the flowers near Rory’s boots flattened in a straight line, a path drawn in crushed stems toward the centre of the clearing. Rory looked down. The path stopped at a patch of ground that looked the same as the rest—dark soil, bright blooms—except the flowers there leaned away from it, each petal turned outward like a crowd refusing to watch. Rory’s pendant burned against her fingers. She moved one step along the crushed line. The soil under her foot felt hollow, like the skin of a drum. The shape stayed near the stones, blocking the line behind her. The footsteps on wood began again, slow, measuring, as if the grove paced itself. Rory lifted the Heartstone, holding it over the patch where the flowers refused to face. The gem’s glow deepened, crimson turning almost black at its core. Heat rolled up her wrist, into the scar, and the crescent mark stung like fresh cut. She breathed through her teeth. “I’m right here,” she told the empty patch. “I’ve got it. What do you want from me?”
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native_tokens_reasoning353
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2093
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2093
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count4
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"throbbed"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"stomach"
6"warmth"
7"jaw clenched"
8"whisper"
9"vibrated"
10"footsteps"
11"weight"
12"trembled"
13"sense of"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"jaw clenched"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences216
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences216
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences235
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2078
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1902
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Heartstone6
February1
Cardiff1
Carter1
Rory28
Hel1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"February"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.764
windowScore0.333
97.55% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences143
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like her old flat back in Cardiff"
1"looked like a shadow remembering it had a"
2"looked like the absence left behind when"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2078
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences235
matches
0"known that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs105
mean19.79
std14.32
cv0.724
sampleLengths
053
134
221
313
439
518
659
724
820
912
1019
1112
123
1354
1422
1522
1638
1726
187
1933
2025
2136
224
2313
2424
2516
2655
2744
2810
295
3028
314
3239
3314
3438
358
365
3713
389
395
4032
4121
4219
4310
4431
452
465
4740
486
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences216
matches
0"been bolted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs343
matches(empty)
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences235
ratio0.021
matches
0"A deer barked somewhere to her left—sharp, human-shaped in the throat—and then the night snapped back to quiet."
1"They bloomed in layers—small starry blooms near her boots, taller stalks further out, heads bobbing with no wind."
2"A sound rose behind her—her own bike bell."
3"Not stuck in mud; they sat like they’d fused to the ground."
4"The path stopped at a patch of ground that looked the same as the rest—dark soil, bright blooms—except the flowers there leaned away from it, each petal turned outward like a crowd refusing to watch."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1337
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.032909498878085267
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002243829468960359
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences235
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences235
mean8.84
std5.86
cv0.663
sampleLengths
017
119
217
39
41
59
615
711
810
913
106
111
123
1314
146
159
1618
179
1817
1914
205
219
225
238
242
252
2612
274
284
2912
3012
3115
324
335
347
353
363
375
3827
3913
406
4122
4212
4310
448
4518
4610
472
4817
492
36.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.2564102564102564
totalSentences234
uniqueOpeners60
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences195
matches
0"Only flowers, staring up with"
1"More like the sound you"
2"Then the grove answered with"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences195
matches
0"She lifted the chain, thumb"
1"she muttered, and her breath"
2"Her phone screen lit her"
3"They rose in a loose"
4"They looked planted, like stakes."
5"She let it fall."
6"She spoke into the empty"
7"Her mouth tightened"
8"She pushed the bike forward."
9"They bloomed in layers—small starry"
10"Her boot sank a fraction"
11"She pulled her foot free"
12"she whispered, and the name"
13"She moved one step toward"
14"she called out, voice low"
15"Her words fell into the"
16"Her own face reflected faintly,"
17"Her pendant throbbed once, harder."
18"She touched the crescent scar"
19"Her skin felt cold there,"
ratio0.251
18.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount172
totalSentences195
matches
0"Aurora kept her bike light"
1"Richmond Park lay flat and"
2"London’s glow sat low on"
3"The Heartstone pendant tapped her"
4"The crimson gem held a"
5"She lifted the chain, thumb"
6"The gem pulsed once against"
7"she muttered, and her breath"
8"Her phone screen lit her"
9"The battery icon sat at"
10"The park had never done"
11"A deer barked somewhere to"
12"Rory stopped at the line"
13"They rose in a loose"
14"Someone had carved oak leaves"
15"Moss clung in thick seams."
16"The stones did not belong"
17"They looked planted, like stakes."
18"Wildflowers crowded right up to"
19"Petals shone waxy white and"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The flowers nearest the bike shifted, their stems bending away from the tyres as if something heavy moved beneath them."
1"The path stopped at a patch of ground that looked the same as the rest—dark soil, bright blooms—except the flowers there leaned away from it, each petal turned …"
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, and the name tasted like her old flat back in Cardiff, like a place she could shut a door on"
1"she called out, voice low so it didn’t tremble"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she called out (call out)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"she announced (announce)"
5"the voice pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.241
leniency0.483
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.414
77.5888%