Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9R6Q5YQ8NEWBEG93DC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.054036
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain battered the pavement of Soho, a relentless, rhythmic drumming that seeped through the brickwork of The Raven’s Nest. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of beeswax polish and stale tobacco, a preservation of a London that ceased to exist past the threshold. Silas Blackwood leaned against the mahogany bar, the damp weather settling into his left knee like a rusted hinge. He rubbed the joint absently, his thumb tracing the fabric of his trousers, while his hazel eyes scanned the empty room. Tuesday nights offered a sanctuary of silence. No university students seeking cheap thrills, no tourists stumbling in from the West End looking for a quaint authentic experience. Just the hum of the cooling compressors and the hiss of tires on the wet tarmac outside. The green neon sign above the entrance flickered, casting an intermittent emerald pulse across the black-and-white photographs pinned to the far wall. Captured moments of men in trench coats and women with sharp eyes, froze alongside maps of cities that had since changed names and borders. The brass bell above the door chimed, a sharp intrusion. A gust of wind folded a stranger into the room, followed by the clatter of a dripping umbrella shoved into the stand. Silas didn't straighten up immediately. He polished a highball glass with a lint-free cloth, watching the reflection in the mirror behind the rows of bottles. The man shook off a coat that cost more than the yearly lease of the building. Cashmere, tailored, dry-clean only. He turned. Silas stopped polishing. The glass commanded his grip, threatening to shatter under the sudden pressure of his fingers. "I thought you were dead." The newcomer smiled. It was a practiced expression, flashing porcelain veneers that caught the low light. The eyes, however, remained flat—grey stones in a riverbed. "Gossip, Silas. It always was the agency's primary currency." Victor Sterling walked to the bar. He moved with a feline grace that defied the decades, absent of the stiffness that plagued Silas. He placed a manicured hand on the wood surface. No calluses. No ink stains. Just smooth, pale skin and a watch that ticked away seconds in diamonds. "Whiskey," Victor said. "The good stuff. Not what you serve the locals." Silas reached for the bottle of single malt he kept hidden beneath the counter, the label yellowed and peeling. He poured two fingers. Then two more for himself. "You look... prosperous." Silas slid the glass across. Victor picked it up, swirling the amber liquid but not drinking. "Adjusting to the private sector requires certain compromises. Wardrobe included. You, on the other hand, look like you’ve been carved out of the woodwork of this place." "It pays the bills." "Does it?" Victor glanced around the dimly lit room, taking in the peeling wallpaper and the dust motes dancing in the neon glare. "It looks like a mausoleum. A shrine to a game we lost." "We didn't lose. We retired." Victor laughed, a dry sound like unexpected friction. "You retired. I evolved. There is a difference." Silas took a sip, the burn familiar and grounding. He twisted the silver signet ring on his right hand, the metal cold against his skin. "Is that what they call it now? Evolution? I heard rumors. People said you went to Dubai. Or was it distinctively more eastern?" "Contracts took me where the interests aligned. Borders are just lines on those maps you keep hoarding." Victor gestured to the wall of cartography behind them. Deep creases lined his forehead, but his cheeks were pulled tight, injected and filled to erase the worry lines Silas remembered from nights spent huddled in safe houses in Berlin. The Victor who had pulled him out of the wreckage in Prague had dirt under his fingernails and fear in his sweat. This man smelled of sandalwood and indifference. "I keep the maps so I remember where not to go," Silas said. "Or where you failed to go." Victor finally drank. He swallowed without flinching. "How is the leg?" "Operative." "Does it hurt?" "Only when it rains. Or when I’m reminded of mistakes." Victor set the glass down with a sharp *clack*. He leaned in, the expensive suit jacket straining slightly across broad shoulders. "We did what was necessary in Prague, Silas. You took a bullet to the knee; I took the exit strategy. It wasn't personal." "Leaving the asset behind was the strategy. Leaving me was a choice." "You were compromised. You couldn't run." "I could have walked. If you hadn't taken the car." Note the lack of volume in Silas' voice. He didn't shout. He placed the cloth on the counter and flattened it with his palm. "But you’re not here to reminisce about Czech architecture. Men like you don't walk into bars in Soho fast emerging from a storm just to catch up with old ghosts." Victor reached into his inner pocket. Silas’s hand drifted inches toward the hidden compartment under the bar—a reflex, old and reliable as the ache in his bone. But Victor only produced a slim, metal case. He extracted a cigarette, tapping it on the wood. He didn't light it. "I’m looking for a girl." Silas let out a breath through his nose. "Aren't we all." "Not that kind. A specific one. Young. Twenty-five. Dark hair, blue eyes. goes by Aurora, or Rory. Carter." The air in the room grew thin. The hum of the fridge sounded like a roar. Silas picked up his glass again, examining the play of light through the whiskey. He didn't look at the ceiling, towards the floorboards of the flat above where Aurora was likely sleeping, or perhaps reading law textbooks she pretended to hate. "Name doesn't ring a bell." "Don't play the fool, Si. It doesn't suit your demographic. She works for the noodle shop down the street. We know she lives nearby." "It's a big city. People deliver food. People eat food. I pour drinks." Victor lit the cigarette now, ignoring the ‘No Smoking’ sign peeling above the register. The smoke curled up, acrid and blue. "She’s a person of interest. Her father—" "Is a barrister in Cardiff," Silas interrupted. "Brendan. Good man. Loud when he drinks." Victor froze, the lighter flame hovering for a second before snapping shut. "So you do know her." "I know her father. Drank with him once when he came to visit his daughter. Why does a private contractor with a five-thousand-pound suit care about a part-time delivery girl?" "It’s not the girl. It’s what she might have inadvertently intercepted. A courier packet was mixed up. A digital drive. Mundane to her, vital to my employers." "Employers." Silas tasted the word like it was spoiled milk. "mercenaries." "Consultants. She has something that belongs to us. I just want to retrieve it. I’m doing you a courtesy, Silas, coming here first. I saw the address on her file. 'Above The Raven's Nest'. I laughed. I truly did. It seemed too poetic. The old Raven shielding the chick." "She’s not a chick. And this is my bar." "It’s a front. It always was." Victor turned, looking at the door to the back room, the one hidden behind the bookshelf. "You never really left the game, did you? You just stopped getting paid for it. You sit here, hoarding secrets and playing house with strays." Silas moved. He came around the bar, the limp pronounced, the heavy thud of his left foot hitting the floorboards echoing in the quiet. He stopped a few feet from Victor. He was shorter, older, and broken in places that didn't show on x-rays, but the authority that had once commanded clean-up teams in the Balkans flared in his eyes. "You’ve changed, Victor. And I don't mean the teeth." "I grew up." "You got hollowed out. You used to believe in the mission. Now you believe in the margin." Victor flicked ash onto the floor. "The mission was a lie. We were pawns. Now, I’m the player. I have resources, Silas. I can make things very difficult for a washed-up spook and his tenant. Give me the girl. Or let me talk to her. I’ll pay her for the trouble. Generously." "She doesn't have your drive." "How would you know?" "Because she’s smart. If she found something odd, she wouldn't keep it. She’d bin it or hand it in. She’s not like us. She has a life. A future." Victor stared at him, analyzing the micro-expressions, the twitch of the jaw, the position of the hands. He took a long drag of the cigarette. "You’re protecting her. That’s adorable. Is she the daughter you never had? Or something more pathetic?" Silas stepped into Victor’s personal space. The smell of expensive cologne was overpowering, masking the scent of rain. "Get out." "I can have this place condemned by morning. Health and safety violations alone." "And I can make a phone call that drops your name in an inbox at Vauxhall Cross. Do you think they stopped looking for the leak from the Budapest operation? The funds that went missing?" Victor’s face tightened. The mask slipped, just for a fraction of a second, revealing a jagged edge of genuine fear. He dropped the cigarette and ground it out with the heel of his Italian leather shoe. "You have no proof." "I have a memory. And unlike you, I kept my files." Silas gestured to the back room, a bluff, or perhaps not. "The Nest isn't a mausoleum, Victor. It’s a library. And I know exactly which book to pull to bring the shelf down on your head." The silence stretched, taut as a piano wire. Victor smoothed the lapels of his jacket. The veneer returned, sealing the cracks. He reached into his pocket again, pulling out a crisp fifty-pound note. He dropped it on the bar. "For the drink. It was mediocre." "Take your change." "Keep it. Buy some paint. Cover up the rot." Victor turned toward the door. He paused with his hand on the brass handle. "I’ll find the drive, Silas. With or without your permission. Don't make me burn the nest down to get to the eggs." "If you come back," Silas said, his voice dropping to a low rumble, "wear something waterproof. It’s going to get very wet." Victor opened the door. The wind howled, snatching at his coat, eager to drag him back into the storm. He didn't look back. The door slammed shut, cutting off the silhouette against the streetlights. Silas stood in the center of the room for a long minute. The scent of the cigarette lingered, a toxic ribbon in the air. He walked to the door and engaged the deadbolt, the steel sliding home with a heavy thud. He flipped the sign to 'Closed'. Pain flared in his knee, sharp and electric. He ignored it, limping back behind the bar to the sink. He picked up Victor’s glass, holding it by the rim. Lipstick couldn't have stained it more than the man's presence had. He didn't wash it. He threw it into the trash bin, hearing it shatter against the bottom. Above him, the floorboards creaked. Rory was awake. Silas poured himself another drink, neat. He looked at the map on the wall, specifically at the winding streets of Prague. He took a pen from the jar and drew a thick, black X over the city, pressing down until the nib tore through the paper. "Welcome back, old friend," he whispered to the empty room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Victor glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.21
leniency0.419
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.032
87.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"really"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"porcelain"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"aligned"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"flicked"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"tracing"
2"scanned"
3"sanctuary"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"pulse"
7"porcelain"
8"dancing"
9"familiar"
10"aligned"
11"echoing"
12"flicked"
13"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1915
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1148
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Victor"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Victor"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Blackwood1
West1
End1
Sterling1
Silas20
Victor23
Berlin1
Prague2
Aurora1
Balkans1
Italian1
Pain1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Sterling"
3"Silas"
4"Victor"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"West"
3"End"
4"Berlin"
5"Prague"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a roar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1915
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean25.53
std19.4
cv0.76
sampleLengths
085
144
246
310
447
522
618
75
825
99
1050
1112
1228
138
1438
154
1635
175
1816
1948
2017
2168
2213
2317
241
253
2610
2744
2812
296
3064
3148
325
3311
3418
3557
365
3724
3813
3928
4014
4117
4230
4327
4411
4549
469
4747
4860
499
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"were pulled"
1"was spoiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
87.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences155
ratio0.019
matches
0"The eyes, however, remained flat—grey stones in a riverbed."
1"\"We did what was necessary in Prague, Silas. You took a bullet to the knee; I took the exit strategy. It wasn't personal.\""
2"Silas’s hand drifted inches toward the hidden compartment under the bar—a reflex, old and reliable as the ache in his bone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1060
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.022641509433962263
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007547169811320755
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean12.35
std8.7
cv0.704
sampleLengths
019
126
219
321
47
520
617
722
824
910
1022
115
1220
1316
144
152
163
1715
185
193
2013
219
229
236
2417
259
262
273
2813
293
309
3119
324
335
348
3511
3627
374
3823
3912
405
418
428
439
4416
4523
4617
479
4830
4922
48.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3419354838709677
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"Just the hum of the"
1"Just smooth, pale skin and"
2"Then two more for himself."
ratio0.03
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences100
matches
0"He rubbed the joint absently,"
1"He polished a highball glass"
2"It was a practiced expression,"
3"He moved with a feline"
4"He placed a manicured hand"
5"He poured two fingers."
6"He twisted the silver signet"
7"He swallowed without flinching."
8"He leaned in, the expensive"
9"He didn't shout."
10"He placed the cloth on"
11"He extracted a cigarette, tapping"
12"He didn't light it."
13"He didn't look at the"
14"He came around the bar,"
15"He stopped a few feet"
16"He was shorter, older, and"
17"He took a long drag"
18"He dropped the cigarette and"
19"He reached into his pocket"
ratio0.32
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences100
matches
0"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
1"He rubbed the joint absently,"
2"Tuesday nights offered a sanctuary"
3"The green neon sign above"
4"The brass bell above the"
5"A gust of wind folded"
6"Silas didn't straighten up immediately."
7"He polished a highball glass"
8"The man shook off a"
9"Cashmere, tailored, dry-clean only."
10"Silas stopped polishing."
11"The glass commanded his grip,"
12"The newcomer smiled."
13"It was a practiced expression,"
14"The eyes, however, remained flat—grey"
15"Victor Sterling walked to the"
16"He moved with a feline"
17"He placed a manicured hand"
18"Silas reached for the bottle"
19"He poured two fingers."
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rain battered the pavement of Soho, a relentless, rhythmic drumming that seeped through the brickwork of The Raven’s Nest."
1"Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of beeswax polish and stale tobacco, a preservation of a London that ceased to exist past the threshold."
2"Captured moments of men in trench coats and women with sharp eyes, froze alongside maps of cities that had since changed names and borders."
3"It was a practiced expression, flashing porcelain veneers that caught the low light."
4"He was shorter, older, and broken in places that didn't show on x-rays, but the authority that had once commanded clean-up teams in the Balkans flared in his ey…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, his voice dropping to a low rumble,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas interrupted (interrupt)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.161
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.065
86.0008%