| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Victor glanced around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.21 | | leniency | 0.419 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |
| 87.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1928 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1928 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "porcelain" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "aligned" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1915 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1148 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Victor" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Victor" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | West | 1 | | End | 1 | | Sterling | 1 | | Silas | 20 | | Victor | 23 | | Berlin | 1 | | Prague | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Balkans | 1 | | Italian | 1 | | Pain | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Blackwood" | | 2 | "Sterling" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Victor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "West" | | 3 | "End" | | 4 | "Berlin" | | 5 | "Prague" |
| | globalScore | 0.498 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1915 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 25.53 | | std | 19.4 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 68 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 47 | | 48 | 60 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "were pulled" | | 1 | "was spoiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.56% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "The eyes, however, remained flat—grey stones in a riverbed." | | 1 | "\"We did what was necessary in Prague, Silas. You took a bullet to the knee; I took the exit strategy. It wasn't personal.\"" | | 2 | "Silas’s hand drifted inches toward the hidden compartment under the bar—a reflex, old and reliable as the ache in his bone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1060 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.022641509433962263 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007547169811320755 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 12.35 | | std | 8.7 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 48.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3419354838709677 | | totalSentences | 155 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the hum of the" | | 1 | "Just smooth, pale skin and" | | 2 | "Then two more for himself." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "He rubbed the joint absently," | | 1 | "He polished a highball glass" | | 2 | "It was a practiced expression," | | 3 | "He moved with a feline" | | 4 | "He placed a manicured hand" | | 5 | "He poured two fingers." | | 6 | "He twisted the silver signet" | | 7 | "He swallowed without flinching." | | 8 | "He leaned in, the expensive" | | 9 | "He didn't shout." | | 10 | "He placed the cloth on" | | 11 | "He extracted a cigarette, tapping" | | 12 | "He didn't light it." | | 13 | "He didn't look at the" | | 14 | "He came around the bar," | | 15 | "He stopped a few feet" | | 16 | "He was shorter, older, and" | | 17 | "He took a long drag" | | 18 | "He dropped the cigarette and" | | 19 | "He reached into his pocket" |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 20.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas Blackwood leaned against the" | | 1 | "He rubbed the joint absently," | | 2 | "Tuesday nights offered a sanctuary" | | 3 | "The green neon sign above" | | 4 | "The brass bell above the" | | 5 | "A gust of wind folded" | | 6 | "Silas didn't straighten up immediately." | | 7 | "He polished a highball glass" | | 8 | "The man shook off a" | | 9 | "Cashmere, tailored, dry-clean only." | | 10 | "Silas stopped polishing." | | 11 | "The glass commanded his grip," | | 12 | "The newcomer smiled." | | 13 | "It was a practiced expression," | | 14 | "The eyes, however, remained flat—grey" | | 15 | "Victor Sterling walked to the" | | 16 | "He moved with a feline" | | 17 | "He placed a manicured hand" | | 18 | "Silas reached for the bottle" | | 19 | "He poured two fingers." |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain battered the pavement of Soho, a relentless, rhythmic drumming that seeped through the brickwork of The Raven’s Nest." | | 1 | "Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of beeswax polish and stale tobacco, a preservation of a London that ceased to exist past the threshold." | | 2 | "Captured moments of men in trench coats and women with sharp eyes, froze alongside maps of cities that had since changed names and borders." | | 3 | "It was a practiced expression, flashing porcelain veneers that caught the low light." | | 4 | "He was shorter, older, and broken in places that didn't show on x-rays, but the authority that had once commanded clean-up teams in the Balkans flared in his ey…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas said, his voice dropping to a low rumble," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas interrupted (interrupt)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.081 | | leniency | 0.161 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |