Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9SPT4HYTGTETMVYYK8

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.017871
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Raven's Nest tasted of beeswax and the phantom sharpness of cigarette smoke, a scent that stubbornly clung to the velvet banquettes despite the ban years ago. Rory rested her elbows on the scarred mahogany, the cold surface seeping through the denim of her jacket. Down here, below the street level of Soho, the frantic noise of the city dulled to a rhythmic, almost soothing thrum. Silas stood opposite her, his movements precise and measured, belying the slight limp in his left leg. He placed a coaster down with a soft thud, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. He poured a measure of amber liquid, his hazel eyes flicking over her shoulder to the door before settling back on her face. "You're counting change in your sleep again." "Just tallying the day's damage." Silas slid the glass across the wood. It stopped perfectly within the circle of the coaster. "Yu-Fei working you hard?" "She pays better than the solicitors in Cardiff ever did." Rory took a sip, the burn welcome. The heavy oak door at the top of the stairs swung open. A wedge of yellow light sliced through the gloom, illuminating dust motes dancing in the stale air. A silhouette paused in the doorway, framed by the distinctive green neon glow of the sign outside, then descended the steps with the confident click of heels on wood. Rory didn't need to see the face to know. The set of the shoulders, the sharp angle of the chin as the woman scanned the room—it was the same way she used to look across a crowded lecture hall, daring the world to be interesting. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist began to throb, a phantom heartbeat beneath the skin. The woman moved to the bar, bypassing the empty tables. She didn't look at Rory. She slid a leather clutch onto the counter, the material expensive and pristine, utterly at odds with the battered journals and coasters littering the surface. "Gin. Tonic. No fruit." Silas nodded, reaching for the Tanqueray without a word. Rory turned slowly on her stool. The years hadn’t just added lines; they had chiselled Eva into someone else. The girl who wore oversized band t-shirts and Rory’s stolen blazers was gone. In her place sat a woman in a tailored charcoal dress, her blonde hair cut into a sharp bob that defied gravity, her makeup applied with a lethal precision. "Eva." The woman stiffened. She didn't turn her head immediately. She watched Silas pour the tonic, the fizz of the soda loud in the quiet bar. Then she pivoted on the stool, her eyes locking onto Rory’s. The shock was there, a quick flinch of the eyelids, but it vanished behind a wall of professional composure before Rory could blink. "Rory." Her voice was smoother, clipped. "My god. They said London was a village, but this is ridiculous." "I could say the same. Last I heard, you were clerking for a High Court judge." "I was. Three years ago." Eva picked up her glass, her manicured nails glinting. "Now I'm at a firm in the City. Mergers and acquisitions. Boring money." "Sounds lucrative." "It pays for the shoes." Eva gestured vaguely at Rory’s attire. "You look... comfortable." "I look like a delivery driver." Rory straightened her spine, refusing to shrink. "It’s honest work." "I didn't mean it as a criticism." Eva took a long drink, her eyes never leaving Rory’s face. "I just expected... I don't know. Maybe you'd have finished the degree by now. You always had the head for it." "Things changed." "Didn't they just." Silas moved down the bar to fetch a fresh bottle of scotch, giving them the illusion of privacy. His presence was a grounding weight, a silent reminder of the life Rory had built here. "How long has it been?" Rory asked, though she knew the answer exactly. "Since the night you got on the train? Four years, three months." "You kept count." "Hard not to, when you left without saying goodbye." "I sent a text." "A text." Eva let out a short, humorless laugh. " 'I'm gone. Don't follow.' Charming." "I had to go, Eva. You know why. You were the one who handed me the ticket." "And you were the one who ran." Eva set her glass down hard. The liquid sloshed, threatening the pristine rim. "I did what I could. I got you out. But you didn't just leave him. You left us. You left me." The weight of the words sat heavy on the scarred wood between them. Rory looked at the scar on her wrist. She remembered the night it happened, a shattered glass during a party Eva had thrown to cheer her up, and she remembered the night she left, packing a bag while Evan screamed downstairs. "Was I supposed to stay?" Rory kept her voice low. "Play the dutiful girlfriend while he decided which wall to put my head through?" "No. But you could have called. Once you were safe. You just vanished." "I wasn't safe for a long time." Rory looked up. "I'm only just starting to feel like I am." Eva’s expression softened, the hard edges of her corporate armor cracking for a fraction of a second. She looked tired. The heavy concealer under her eyes couldn't hide the shadows. "I looked for you," Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper. "I checked the hostels, the cheap hotels. I even called your mother." "That must have been fun." "She cried. She said you were ungrateful." "She would." Rory signaled to Silas for a refill. He placed the bottle down within reach and retreated to the shadows of the back shelf. "You're happy here?" Eva asked, gesturing to the dimly lit room, the peeling wallpaper, the maps of places that didn't exist anymore. "I am. It’s quiet. People mind their own business." "Silas seems... protective." "He knows when to keep his mouth shut." "Unlike me." "Unlike you." Silence stretched, taut and uncomfortable. It wasn't the silence of old friends who had nothing left to say; it was the silence of strangers who used to be family, vibrating with all the things that couldn't be unsaid. Eva smoothed the fabric of her dress, a nervous habit Rory remembered. "He's in London, you know." Rory’s hand stilled on the neck of the bottle. "Evan?" "He moved up six months ago. Working in finance now. Cleaned up his act, or so he says." Eva watched Rory closely. "I saw him at a gallery opening last week. He asked about you." The air in the room grew thin. Rory felt the old panic, a cold hand gripping her spine, but it passed quickly. She wasn't that girl anymore. She wasn't the scared law student with a black eye and a bruised wrist. "And what did you tell him?" "Nothing." Eva held her gaze. "I told him I hadn't seen you since graduation." "Thank you." "I didn't do it for you. I did it because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction." Rory poured the scotch. The liquid was dark, swirling in the glass. "You've changed, Eva. You're harder." "It comes with the territory." Eva finished her drink, the ice clinking softly. "You have to be when you're the only woman in a boardroom full of sharks. It’s different than the playground wars, Rory." "I know. I fight different battles now too." "Delivering Chinese food?" "Surviving." Eva looked at her for a long moment. She reached into her clutch and pulled out a silver business card, sliding it across the wood. It stopped just short of Rory’s glass. "If you ever get tired of surviving... call me. We have a pro-bono division. Legal aid. You always had a mind for the law. It’s a waste to let it rot." "I don't do law anymore." "Doing what you're doing is a waste too." Eva stood up, smoothing her skirt. The movement was fluid, practiced. She was already leaving, already back in her world of high-rises and billable hours. "Rory." Rory looked up. "For what it's worth... you look better than you did back then. You look alive." "I feel it." Eva nodded once, a sharp, decisive motion. She turned and walked up the stairs, her heels echoing on the wood. The door opened, the neon light flooded in for a brief second, and then she was gone, swallowed by the London night. The silence rushed back in, settling into the corners of the bar. Silas moved from the shadows, picking up the empty gin glass. "She seems pleasant," he said, the irony heavy in his tone. "She's a survivor." Rory stared at the business card on the counter. The raised lettering caught the light. "Just like us." "Are you going to call?" Rory picked up the card between her thumb and forefinger. She held it over the ashtray. "No." She let go. The card fluttered down, landing on the discarded lime wedges and ashes. Silas swept it away without a word. "Another?" he asked. "Please." Rory downed the rest of her drink, the heat spreading through her chest, chasing away the lingering chill of the past. "Make it a double."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.027
83.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"slowly"
3"quickly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count2
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"silence"
count4
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"fluttered"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"rhythmic"
2"measured"
3"gloom"
4"dancing"
5"scanned"
6"throb"
7"pristine"
8"glinting"
9"comfortable"
10"weight"
11"reminder"
12"shattered"
13"whisper"
14"silence"
15"echoing"
16"fluttered"
17"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of the words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1549
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1027
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory28
Tanqueray1
Eva17
Silas8
Evan1
Silence1
London1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Silence"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
globalScore0.137
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1549
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean18.66
std16.17
cv0.866
sampleLengths
069
161
27
35
416
54
617
758
845
923
1040
114
129
1361
141
1536
1623
1718
1816
1927
202
2114
2216
2339
242
253
2634
2713
2812
293
309
314
3215
3317
3441
3554
3624
3713
3819
3930
4024
415
427
4325
4422
459
463
478
482
492
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
81.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences140
ratio0.021
matches
0"The set of the shoulders, the sharp angle of the chin as the woman scanned the room—it was the same way she used to look across a crowded lecture hall, daring the world to be interesting."
1"The years hadn’t just added lines; they had chiselled Eva into someone else."
2"It wasn't the silence of old friends who had nothing left to say; it was the silence of strangers who used to be family, vibrating with all the things that couldn't be unsaid."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1030
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02621359223300971
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011650485436893204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.06
std7.54
cv0.682
sampleLengths
030
118
221
317
421
523
67
75
87
99
104
1117
1212
1317
1429
159
1636
176
1817
1910
205
2125
224
239
246
2513
2613
2729
281
293
306
3116
3211
3323
346
3512
3616
3714
3813
392
4011
413
4213
433
4418
4521
462
473
4818
4916
40.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners44
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she pivoted on the"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences86
matches
0"He placed a coaster down"
1"He poured a measure of"
2"It stopped perfectly within the"
3"She didn't look at Rory."
4"She slid a leather clutch"
5"She didn't turn her head"
6"She watched Silas pour the"
7"Her voice was smoother, clipped"
8"His presence was a grounding"
9"She remembered the night it"
10"She looked tired."
11"He placed the bottle down"
12"It wasn't the silence of"
13"She wasn't that girl anymore."
14"She wasn't the scared law"
15"She reached into her clutch"
16"It stopped just short of"
17"She was already leaving, already"
18"She turned and walked up"
19"he said, the irony heavy"
ratio0.256
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air in the Raven's"
1"Rory rested her elbows on"
2"Silas stood opposite her, his"
3"He placed a coaster down"
4"He poured a measure of"
5"Silas slid the glass across"
6"It stopped perfectly within the"
7"Rory took a sip, the"
8"The heavy oak door at"
9"A wedge of yellow light"
10"A silhouette paused in the"
11"Rory didn't need to see"
12"The set of the shoulders,"
13"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
14"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
15"The woman moved to the"
16"She didn't look at Rory."
17"She slid a leather clutch"
18"Silas nodded, reaching for the"
19"Rory turned slowly on her"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"In her place sat a woman in a tailored charcoal dress, her blonde hair cut into a sharp bob that defied gravity, her makeup applied with a lethal precision."
1"It wasn't the silence of old friends who had nothing left to say; it was the silence of strangers who used to be family, vibrating with all the things that coul…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory straightened, refusing to shrink"
1"Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
2"Eva finished, the ice clinking softly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.5064%