Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9SZBTFKBCCKEH2HMF2

Run Details

Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.029720
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clatter of the third deadbolt sliding back echoed in the cramped hallway, a final metallic sigh against the evening clamour of Brick Lane. Curry and cardamom drifted up through the floorboards, a familiar, comforting scent that did nothing to prepare Rory for who stood on the landing. Lucien Moreau. He was a slash of charcoal and silver against the peeling paint of the corridor wall. The London damp had done nothing to disturb the severe part in his platinum hair, and the bespoke suit he wore looked as if it had been tailored to him that morning. One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane; the other was tucked into his pocket. He was an anomaly, a disruption in the fabric of her carefully constructed peace. The delivery bag for the Golden Empress slid from her shoulder, thumping softly against the floor. A phantom ache blossomed in her left wrist, right over the crescent-shaped scar hidden by her watch. “Carter.” His voice was a low hum, the French accent a ghost clinging to the edges of his perfect English. The sound of it coiled in her stomach. Her own name felt foreign on his tongue. He never called her Rory. It was always Carter, a name that felt like a challenge, or a piece on a chessboard. His eyes, one the colour of old amber, the other a chip of obsidian, took in the mess of her—the grease-stained jeans, the faded university jumper, the frantic escape of black hair from her ponytail. He missed nothing. He never did. “Moreau.” She forced the word past the knot in her throat. “Lost your way to Mayfair?” A corner of his mouth lifted, a fractional movement that did not reach his eyes. “My sense of direction remains impeccable. I was looking for you.” She leaned against the doorframe, crossing her arms over her chest, a barricade of denim and cotton. “How?” The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken accusations. *How did you find me? How dare you find me?* “Finding people is what I do.” Lucien’s gaze swept past her, into the chaotic sanctuary of Eva’s flat. Books overflowed from shelves, teetering in towers on the floor. Scrolls were pinned to the walls like macabre wallpaper. “Your friend is quite the scholar.” A fat tabby cat wound its way around Rory’s ankles, looked up at Lucien, and gave a hiss that was more indignation than threat. “Ptolemy, down.” She nudged the cat with her foot. She kept her body blocking the doorway. “She isn't here. And you shouldn't be either.” “I’m aware Miss Vance is in Oxford for the week.” He took a deliberate step forward, his polished brogues crossing the threshold. The cramped hallway shrank around him. He brought with him the scent of expensive cologne, rain, and something else, something uniquely his—ozone, like the air after a lightning strike. “Which is why I am here. We need to talk.” Rory held her ground. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. It was foolish. He was half-demon, and she was a delivery girl with a half-finished law degree. But she had learned to stand her ground. She’d had to. “We said everything that needed to be said six months ago.” “Did we?” The amber eye seemed to smoulder. “As I recall, you left a note on my pillow. That’s hardly a conversation.” Her jaw tightened. The note had been three words. *I can’t do this.* It had felt like a confession and a surrender. Looking at him now, she remembered why. He was a world of lethal elegance and beautiful danger, a world that had almost swallowed her whole. He moved past her, a whisper of fine wool and cold air. He didn't touch her, but she felt the brush of his presence along her skin like a static charge. He stopped in the centre of the living room, his stillness a stark contrast to the clutter. His gaze landed on an open grimoire on the coffee table, its arcane symbols illuminated by the streetlights filtering through the grimy window. “You’re still dabbling,” he observed, his tone neutral. “I’m helping a friend with some research.” She closed the door, the click of the latch sounding loud and final. She left the deadbolts undone. An escape route. Or an invitation. She wasn’t sure which. “What do you want, Lucien?” He turned to face her. The single lamp in the room carved sharp shadows across his face, making his features seem more angular, less human. “There’s been a development. Something you should be aware of.” “If it’s about your father’s business, I’m not interested.” “This isn’t about Avaros.” He took a step closer, his heterochromatic eyes fixed on hers. “It’s about London. It’s about a name you know. Evan.” Ice flooded her veins. The name was a key, unlocking a room in her mind she kept bolted shut. It brought back the smell of stale beer, the sickening colour of a fresh bruise, the slick promises that always curdled into threats. She shook her head, a small, jerky motion. “No. He’s gone. Back in Cardiff. He wouldn't… he couldn't find me here.” “He has powerful new friends.” Lucien’s voice was soft, but it cut through her denial like a shard of glass. “Friends who don’t concern themselves with restraining orders. Friends who deal in markers and blood.” Ptolemy, seeming to sense the shift in the room, rubbed against Lucien’s leg and, to Rory’s astonishment, began to purr. Lucien’s long fingers drifted down to scratch the cat behind the ears absently. His attention remained entirely on her. “What are you talking about?” “Your ex-boyfriend has made a bargain. He’s offered something of great value to a very old, very dangerous player in this city in exchange for a single service: finding you.” All the fight drained out of her, replaced by a cold dread. She sank onto the arm of the sofa, the worn fabric rough against her jeans. The room, which a moment ago felt like a shield, now felt like a cage. She looked at the man standing over her, a man she had run from, a man who trafficked in secrets and moved through shadows. He was the last person she ever wanted to see again. And he might be the only one who could help. The irony was a bitter pill in her throat. “What did he offer them?” her voice was a thin whisper. Lucien stopped stroking the cat. He straightened up, his silhouette a column of darkness against the window. The casual ease fell away, replaced by the lethal focus of the fixer she knew. “You, Carter.” His gaze was unyielding, a fusion of molten gold and endless night. “He offered them you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"macabre"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"constructed"
4"perfect"
5"stomach"
6"sense of"
7"unspoken"
8"chaotic"
9"sanctuary"
10"macabre"
11"whisper"
12"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords14
totalWords1130
ratio0.012
matches
0"How did you find me? How dare you find me?"
1"I can’t do this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount915
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Rory5
Moreau1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
French1
English1
Carter1
Lucien7
Eva1
Books1
Ice1
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Empress"
3"Carter"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
6"Books"
7"Ice"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a challenge, or a piece on a"
1"felt like a confession and a surrender"
2"felt like a shield, now felt like a cag"
3"felt like a cage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1130
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean32.29
std20.39
cv0.632
sampleLengths
048
12
279
333
428
530
641
716
826
918
1019
1143
1224
1324
1461
1541
1611
1722
1847
1971
208
2140
2235
239
2425
2542
2621
2735
2839
295
3030
3196
3211
3332
3418
91.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"been tailored"
1"was tucked"
2"were pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was unyielding"
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane; the other was tucked into his pocket."
1"His eyes, one the colour of old amber, the other a chip of obsidian, took in the mess of her—the grease-stained jeans, the faded university jumper, the frantic escape of black hair from her ponytail."
2"He brought with him the scent of expensive cologne, rain, and something else, something uniquely his—ozone, like the air after a lightning strike."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02062975027144408
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00760043431053203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.02
std7.18
cv0.597
sampleLengths
024
124
22
316
432
517
614
716
817
920
108
118
125
1317
1435
153
163
1711
185
1915
2011
2117
221
239
245
255
2618
2710
289
296
3024
319
327
338
3422
356
3623
3710
384
399
403
4114
428
433
4411
458
4614
473
486
4913
64.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.425531914893617
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
4.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences76
matches
0"He was a slash of"
1"He was an anomaly, a"
2"His voice was a low"
3"Her own name felt foreign"
4"He never called her Rory."
5"It was always Carter, a"
6"His eyes, one the colour"
7"He missed nothing."
8"He never did."
9"She forced the word past"
10"She leaned against the doorframe,"
11"She nudged the cat with"
12"She kept her body blocking"
13"He took a deliberate step"
14"He brought with him the"
15"Her heart hammered a frantic"
16"It was foolish."
17"He was half-demon, and she"
18"She’d had to."
19"Her jaw tightened."
ratio0.539
6.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences76
matches
0"The clatter of the third"
1"Curry and cardamom drifted up"
2"He was a slash of"
3"The London damp had done"
4"He was an anomaly, a"
5"The delivery bag for the"
6"A phantom ache blossomed in"
7"His voice was a low"
8"The sound of it coiled"
9"Her own name felt foreign"
10"He never called her Rory."
11"It was always Carter, a"
12"His eyes, one the colour"
13"He missed nothing."
14"He never did."
15"She forced the word past"
16"A corner of his mouth"
17"She leaned against the doorframe,"
18"The question hung between them,"
19"Lucien’s gaze swept past her,"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Curry and cardamom drifted up through the floorboards, a familiar, comforting scent that did nothing to prepare Rory for who stood on the landing."
1"A fat tabby cat wound its way around Rory’s ankles, looked up at Lucien, and gave a hiss that was more indignation than threat."
2"He was a world of lethal elegance and beautiful danger, a world that had almost swallowed her whole."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He took, his polished brogues crossing the threshold"
1"he observed, his tone neutral"
2"She closed, the click of the latch sounding loud and final"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.069
74.3518%