Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9TN0CPWFZCYZ3N4M9T

Run Details

Duration:
2m 53s
Cost:
$0.022378
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest hissed against the November dark like a trapped insect. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door, the bell giving its familiar brass cough. Inside, the air hung thick with pipe smoke and the yeast smell of stout. Maps covered the walls—faded topographies of places that no longer existed, their creases holding decades of cigarette smoke. Black-and-white photographs clustered between the frames: men in trench coats, women with victory rolls, all watching the room with silver gelatin eyes. She peeled off her delivery jacket. The Golden Empress logo crumpled in her fist. Her hair, black and cut sharp to her shoulders, swung forward as she leaned against the bar. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the low light, a pale sliver against her skin. Silas looked up from wiping a glass. His grey-streaked auburn beard framed a mouth that rarely smiled fully. The silver signet ring on his right hand tapped twice against the mahogany. He limped slightly as he reached beneath the counter, the old knee injury from Prague still dictating his movements on cold evenings. "Post came," Silas said. "Left it on the register." Rory traced the scar with her thumb. She didn't reach for the letters. The door opened. Green light spilled across the floorboards, cutting through the amber gloom. A man stood silhouetted against the street, briefcase in hand, wool coat tailored sharp across shoulders that had broadened since she last saw them. He stepped inside, shaking rain from his collar, and the door thumped shut behind him. He scanned the room with the precision of someone used to reading witness statements. Then his eyes found her. "Aurora." The name landed like a stone in still water. Nobody here called her that. She was Rory to the kitchen staff at Golden Empress, Carter to the regulars, and occasionally 'the girl upstairs' to Silas when he was being particularly opaque. She turned. The man moved closer, into the pool of light cast by the tiffany lamp above the corner booth. His hair, once shaggy and protest-brown during their Cardiff days, was now cut close to the scalp, peppered with early grey. But the jaw was the same, and the way he held his head—slightly tilted, as if listening for lies. "Declan." Her voice came out steady. She had learned steadiness in the three years since she'd fled. Declan Byrne set his briefcase down. He wore a silk tie the color of clotted blood. Barrister's robes peeked from his bag. He looked at her hair, her hands, the jacket crumpled on the bar. His gaze snagged on her wrist. "You cut it," he said. "The hair. Yes." "And everything else." Silas placed a glass of water on the bar. Ice clicked against crystal. He withdrew to the far end, his hazel eyes fixed on a point above the bourbon selection, giving them the distance that English propriety demanded but London rarely provided. Rory pulled herself onto a stool. Her jeans, faded at the knees, caught on the leather. She wore trainers with a hole near the toe. Declan noticed. He always noticed details—that had been his gift during their moot court days, catching the inconsistencies in depositions, the tells in body language. "I heard you were in London," Declan said. He didn't sit. He stood with his coat still buttoned, as if preparing for a quick escape. "Your mother mentioned it. Last Christmas. She didn't say where." "I asked her not to." "She said you were working for a restaurant." "Delivery." Rory picked up the water. Her fingers left smudges on the glass. "I bring people kung pao chicken in the rain. It's honest work." "Honest." He tasted the word. "You were going to be a barrister. You had the pupillage lined up. Redmond Chambers. You were going to—" "I know what I was going to do, Declan." The maps on the wall seemed to lean closer, the old coastlines listening. In the photographs, the men in fedoras watched with their shadowed eyes. Declan unbuttoned his coat at last. He sat on the stool beside her, leaving exactly eighteen inches of mahogany between them. He smelled of cedar and tribunal stress. "Evan came to the chambers last month," Declan said quietly. Rory's thumb stopped moving across the scar. The crescent shape pressed white against her skin, then flushed red. "He was looking for you," Declan continued. "Said you'd taken some things. Papers. Money. He was... distressed." "Evan is always distressed when he doesn't get what he wants." "You could have told me. When it was happening. Before you disappeared." The green neon above the door flickered. The sound filled the silence where her answer should have been. Rory looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar—a ghost among the bottles. Her eyes, bright blue and too large for her face, stared back with the hard glaze of someone who had learned to sleep with one eye open. She'd been soft once. She'd worn pastel blazers and carried color-coded binders. She'd quoted precedent and believed in the law as a shield. "I tried," she said. "Do you remember third year? The night before the Land Law exam? I came to your flat." Declan's hands tightened on the bar. His knuckles matched the white of his shirt cuffs. "You had a bruise," he said. "Here." He touched his own jaw. "You said you'd walked into a door." "I was walking into doors frequently back then." "You said—" "I know what I said. And you believed me because it was easier than believing the alternative." Rory turned to face him. The scar on her wrist caught the light again, that small crescent moon of childhood clumsiness that had nothing to do with Evan but everything to do with how she hid her hands now, how she flinched when people moved too fast. "You let me leave that night. You walked me to the taxi. You said 'good luck on the exam.'" The weight of it settled between them—three years, the unspoken regret, the complicity of silence. Declan had known. Or he had suspected. Or he had failed to look closely enough at the girl he'd studied beside for three years, the girl who organized his notes when he was sick, who had once been capable of such meticulous care for others while her own life fractured along invisible fault lines. "I should have—" Declan stopped. He looked at Silas, who was polishing the same glass he'd been polishing for ten minutes. "I should have done something." "What? Ruined your career? Accused a promising solicitor of abuse with no evidence? You were my friend, Declan. Not my savior." "But I was something." His voice cracked. He leaned forward, bridging the gap between them, his expensive wool coat brushing her nylon jacket. "I was your friend, Aurora. And then you were gone. And I kept studying. I kept going to chambers. I kept winning cases while you were... here. In this place. Delivering—" He gestured at the room, at the maps, at Silas with his limp and his spy's eyes. "—delivering noodles to people who don't know what you can do. What you know. The Commercial Equity paper you wrote, the one Dr. Williams said was publication-worthy, and you're—" "I'm alive," Rory said. The words hung there, sharp and simple. She pulled her sleeve down over the scar. "I'm alive, Declan. I wake up in the flat upstairs. I walk to work. I don't flinch when the door slams. I don't have to memorize lies to tell my parents about why I'm not coming home for Easter. I traded the wig and gown for a thermal bag and a bike helmet, and I survived." Declan stared at her. His eyes, grey-green and filmed with the moisture of men who never learned to cry properly, searched her face for the girl he remembered. The girl with longer hair. The girl who argued tort law with passionate precision, who believed in systems and structures and the protective architecture of the legal world. "Your father asks about you," Declan whispered. "At the Inn. Every time I see him. He asks if I've heard from you." Rory looked down at the bar. Her hands were rougher now, marked by the handlebars of her delivery bike, the small burns from restaurant steam. The crescent scar sat among these new marks, a pale reminder of who she'd been before Evan, before the fear, back when injuries came from climbing trees in Cardiff gardens rather than from bracing against doorframes. "Tell him..." She stopped. Her throat tightened around the unsaid things—the apology for leaving, the explanation that wouldn't fit in a conversation, the regret that she hadn't been strong enough to stay and fight both Evan and the expectations that had caged her. "Tell him I'm well. Tell him I'm learning to be well." Silas moved then, his limp pronounced as he carried a bottle to the back shelf. The sound of his shoes on the floorboards marked time. Declan reached into his coat pocket. He withdrew a business card—heavy stock, embossed lettering. Byrne & Associates. He placed it on the bar between them, sliding it across the mahogany with two fingers. "If you ever need anything," he said. "Legal advice. Or... just someone who remembers who you were. Before." Rory looked at the card. She didn't touch it. Outside, the green neon hissed and spat against the London dark, painting the wet pavement in shades of jade. The maps on the walls showed borders that had shifted, countries that had renamed themselves, territories that no longer recognized their old names. "I remember who I was," Rory said. "I just don't know how to be her anymore." Declan stood. He buttoned his coat with fingers that trembled slightly. He picked up his briefcase, the leather gleaming with care and use. "She's still in there," he said. "The girl who argued me into the ground over promissory estoppel. She's in the way you watch the door. The way you hold your glass." He moved toward the exit. Paused with his hand on the brass handle. "I'm sorry," he said. "For the doors. For the taxi. For believing what was easy." Then he was gone. The green neon swallowed his silhouette. The door clicked shut, and the bell gave its brass cough, and the Raven's Nest settled back into its smoke and its silence. Rory sat alone at the bar. Her fingers found the crescent scar again, tracing its familiar curve. Silas poured two fingers of Scotch into a clean glass and pushed it toward her without a word. The liquid caught the light, amber and honest. Outside, London continued its indifferent rain.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:12:31.648Z" 2/19/2026, 12:12:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Declan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.46
leniency0.92
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.04
91.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1806
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"coded"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"traced"
2"gloom"
3"scanned"
4"silk"
5"crystal"
6"flickered"
7"silence"
8"coded"
9"weight"
10"unspoken"
11"fractured"
12"reminder"
13"trembled"
14"gleaming"
15"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1791
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Outside, London continued its indifferent rain."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1342
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Declan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
November1
Golden2
Empress2
Prague1
Rory13
Carter1
Cardiff2
Byrne2
Silas7
English1
London3
Declan13
Evan3
Commercial1
Equity1
Dr1
Associates1
Scotch1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Byrne"
5"Silas"
6"Declan"
7"Evan"
8"Dr"
places
0"Golden"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening for lies"
1"as if preparing for a quick escape"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1791
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean28.89
std22.68
cv0.785
sampleLengths
084
148
253
39
413
53
650
719
81
941
1060
1117
1241
135
143
153
1642
1750
1835
195
208
2125
2224
239
2425
2528
2610
2718
2817
2911
3012
3118
3265
3321
3415
3519
368
372
3883
3969
4026
4121
42100
434
4415
4556
4656
4722
4861
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was polishing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences151
ratio0.053
matches
0"Maps covered the walls—faded topographies of places that no longer existed, their creases holding decades of cigarette smoke."
1"But the jaw was the same, and the way he held his head—slightly tilted, as if listening for lies."
2"He always noticed details—that had been his gift during their moot court days, catching the inconsistencies in depositions, the tells in body language."
3"Rory looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar—a ghost among the bottles."
4"The weight of it settled between them—three years, the unspoken regret, the complicity of silence."
5"\"—delivering noodles to people who don't know what you can do. What you know. The Commercial Equity paper you wrote, the one Dr. Williams said was publication-worthy, and you're—\""
6"Her throat tightened around the unsaid things—the apology for leaving, the explanation that wouldn't fit in a conversation, the regret that she hadn't been strong enough to stay and fight both Evan and the expectations that had caged her."
7"He withdrew a business card—heavy stock, embossed lettering."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.025503355704697986
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008053691275167786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean11.86
std9.32
cv0.786
sampleLengths
016
114
214
318
422
56
68
717
817
97
1011
1113
1222
134
145
157
166
173
1811
1924
2015
2114
225
231
249
255
2627
272
2818
2921
3019
316
3211
336
3410
356
3613
376
385
393
403
419
424
4329
446
4510
469
472
4823
498
42.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2847682119205298
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners43
62.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then his eyes found her."
1"Then he was gone."
ratio0.019
51.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences107
matches
0"She peeled off her delivery"
1"Her hair, black and cut"
2"His grey-streaked auburn beard framed"
3"He limped slightly as he"
4"She didn't reach for the"
5"He stepped inside, shaking rain"
6"He scanned the room with"
7"She was Rory to the"
8"His hair, once shaggy and"
9"Her voice came out steady"
10"She had learned steadiness in"
11"He wore a silk tie"
12"He looked at her hair,"
13"His gaze snagged on her"
14"He withdrew to the far"
15"Her jeans, faded at the"
16"She wore trainers with a"
17"He always noticed details—that had"
18"He didn't sit."
19"He stood with his coat"
ratio0.421
16.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"Maps covered the walls—faded topographies"
3"She peeled off her delivery"
4"The Golden Empress logo crumpled"
5"Her hair, black and cut"
6"The crescent scar on her"
7"Silas looked up from wiping"
8"His grey-streaked auburn beard framed"
9"The silver signet ring on"
10"He limped slightly as he"
11"Rory traced the scar with"
12"She didn't reach for the"
13"The door opened."
14"A man stood silhouetted against"
15"He stepped inside, shaking rain"
16"He scanned the room with"
17"The name landed like a"
18"Nobody here called her that."
19"She was Rory to the"
ratio0.888
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"A man stood silhouetted against the street, briefcase in hand, wool coat tailored sharp across shoulders that had broadened since she last saw them."
1"He always noticed details—that had been his gift during their moot court days, catching the inconsistencies in depositions, the tells in body language."
2"Her eyes, bright blue and too large for her face, stared back with the hard glaze of someone who had learned to sleep with one eye open."
3"The scar on her wrist caught the light again, that small crescent moon of childhood clumsiness that had nothing to do with Evan but everything to do with how sh…"
4"Or he had failed to look closely enough at the girl he'd studied beside for three years, the girl who organized his notes when he was sick, who had once been ca…"
5"He looked at Silas, who was polishing the same glass he'd been polishing for ten minutes."
6"The girl who argued tort law with passionate precision, who believed in systems and structures and the protective architecture of the legal world."
7"Her throat tightened around the unsaid things—the apology for leaving, the explanation that wouldn't fit in a conversation, the regret that she hadn't been stro…"
8"The maps on the walls showed borders that had shifted, countries that had renamed themselves, territories that no longer recognized their old names."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Declan continued (continue)"
1"Declan whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.08
80.0872%