Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9V5XBBKGH0C7734YGF

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy, metallic groan. I yanked the door open, expecting Eva with her arms full of laundered robes or perhaps a frantic courier delivering another scroll that needed translating before dawn. Instead, a wall of charcoal wool and expensive cologne blocked the entire frame. "Good evening, Rory." Lucien Moreau stood in the dingy hallway of the curry house flat, looking like a mistake in a painting. His platinum blond hair was slicked back with surgical precision, and his mismatched eyes—one amber, one abyssal black—scanned my face with the detached interest of a jeweller assessing a flawed gem. I moved to slam the door. A polished Oxford shoe stopped it dead. "We need to talk." "I'm busy." I leaned my weight against the wood, but it was like pushing against a steel pillar. "And I believe the phrase 'fuck off' translates perfectly into French." "It does." He stepped forward, forcing me back or be crushed. "But it lacks a certain nuance in this situation." He pushed inside, the ivory handle of his cane clicking against the floorboards. The small living room, already bursting with Eva’s collection of arcane texts and dusty maps, suddenly felt suffocatingly small. Lucien ducked slightly to avoid a hanging mobile of dried herbs. "You're not welcome here, Lucien." "Ptolemy seems pleased to see me." The ginger tabby wound around his legs, purring loud enough to rattle the windows. Lucien ignored me to stroke the cat’s head with long, pale fingers. "Traitor," I muttered. The cat hissed at me. I crossed my arms. The flat smelled of cardamom and old paper, a comforting scent that Lucien’s presence was currently violating with the smell of ozone and danger. He walked to the cluttered desk, tapping the cane rhythmically against a stack of books. "Six weeks," I said, my voice steady despite the thudding in my chest. "You vanish without a word. No note. No body. I thought the Avaros realm finally swallowed you whole." "I had business." "Business that required you to erase your number from my phone?" "Collateral damage." He turned, his amber eye catching the yellow light of the standing lamp. "You look well, Rory. The delivery life suits you. Takeaway menus and traffic fumes. Very... grounding." "Get out." "I can't." He leaned against the desk, crossing one ankle over the other. He looked too pristine. His suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, not a crease in sight, while I stood there in joggers and an oversized t-shirt. The contrast was irritating. "Why not?" "Because they are already here." The air in the room dropped ten degrees. "Who?" "The Hounds." He gestured vaguely towards the window. "They tracked the signature." I froze. "I thought you masked it." "I did." A corner of his mouth lifted, not a smile. "But you and I... we share a resonance now, don't we? Proximity makes us loud." "Speak English, Lucien." He sighed, a sound of long-suffering patience. "When I left, I severed our connection. Or I tried to. But lingering attachments are like stains. They don't wash out easily." "Charming comparison." "Focus, Rory." He pushed off the desk and closed the distance between us in two strides. I stood my ground, tilting my head back to meet his gaze. Up close, the scent of him was intoxicating—sandalwood and something metallic, like blood on a blade. "You remember the club on Wardour Street?" "The one you burned down? Hard to forget." "I didn't burn it. I merely accelerated the decomposition process." He reached out, his hand hovering near my face. I flinched, but he didn't touch me. Instead, he plucked a loose hair from my shoulder, inspecting it with mild curiosity before letting it fall to the floor. "I took something from the owner that night. A ledger. He wants it back." "And you led him to my door?" "I led him to Eva's door." He corrected smoothly. "Eva has protections. Wards. Silas has muscle. You, on the other hand, are currently..." He looked me up and down, his gaze lingering on my wrists. "Vulnerable." My hand went instinctively to the crescent scar on my left wrist, covering it. "I can handle myself." "Against a low-level thug? Certainly. Against a Varkolak? You'd be a light snack." "So you're here to protect me?" I laughed, a harsh sound. "Forgive me if I don't buy the white knight act. Last time you tried to 'protect' me, I spent three nights in a hospital in Cardiff while you 'handled' the demon that broke my ribs." "He didn't just break them. He was eating them." Lucien’s voice dropped an octave, the black eye seeming to expand. "And I killed him. Slowly." "You didn't visit." "I was busy disposing of the parts." "Always an excuse." "It is the truth." He stepped closer, invading my personal space. The heat radiating from him was unnatural, a supernatural furnace. "I am not here to debate our failed relationship, Rory. I am here because you are in danger, and despite your best efforts to antagonise me, I find myself oddly reluctant to let you die." I stared at him. The anger was still there, a cold knot in my stomach, but beneath it lay the other thing. The attraction. The magnetic pull that had drawn me to him in the first place, despite the red flags and the danger. "So what's the plan?" I asked, my voice barely a whisper. "We hide in Eva's flat and hope her wards hold?" "The wards are already cracking." Lucien turned his head sharply towards the front door. The wood of the door frame creaked. Not from the wind. The building was old, but the sounds coming from the hallway were wet, heavy footsteps dragging across the floorboards. Suction. Squelch. Ptolemy hissed, arching his back, and bolted under the sofa. Lucien moved faster than a human should. He gripped my arm, pulling me behind him, his body a shield between me and the door. "Stay behind me," he commanded, his voice losing the lazy drawl. It was hard now. Cold. "Who is it?" "The retrieval team." He pulled the cane apart with a sharp click, revealing a thin, gleaming blade. "And they are not here to negotiate." A low growl vibrated through the floorboards, shaking the pile of occult books on the table. The toppling books hit the floor with loud thuds. "They're inside the building," I whispered. "They are in the stairwell," Lucien corrected. He looked back at me, the amber eye burning with a ferocity that made my breath hitch. "Do exactly as I say. When I engage, you run to the fire escape." "I'm not leaving you." "You will." He tightened his grip on my arm, almost painful. "Because if you stay, I will be distracted. And if I am distracted, I cannot kill them all." The door to the flat didn't open. It exploded. Splinters of wood and shards of the deadbolts flew across the room like shrapnel. I threw my arm up to shield my face, choking on the cloud of plaster dust. A massive shape filled the doorway. It looked like a man, but wrong—too tall, limbs too long, skin the colour of a bruised plum. It opened its mouth, revealing rows of needle-like teeth, and a sound like tearing metal filled the small room. Lucien didn't hesitate. He didn't speak. He just lunged, the silver cane-blade flashing in the dim light. "Go, Rory!" He met the creature in the centre of the room, the impact knocking a stack of ancient scrolls flying. I scrambled backwards, knocking over a chair, my heart hammering against my ribs like a trapped bird. I reached for the heavy iron poker leaning against the fireplace grip. "No!" Lucien snarled as a second shape squeezed through the ruined doorframe. This one was smaller, faster, crawling on all fours like a spider. I swung the poker. The creature dodged with impossible speed, snapping its jaws inches from my hand. I lost my balance, crashing onto the hard floor. Books dug into my spine. The creature reared up, dripping black ichor onto the rug, its many eyes fixing on my throat. A blade shot through its chest. Lucien stood behind it, wrenching his cane free. The spider-thing shrieked and dissolved into ash. He extended a hand to me, blood dripping from a cut on his temple. His suit was ruined, dust coating the charcoal wool. "I told you to run," he said, panting slightly. "And miss all the fun?" I grabbed his hand, his grip crushing mine as he hauled me up. From the hallway, a deep, guttural roar echoed. Not a beast. A man. But a man who was not a man. Lucien’s face paled. The black eye seemed to swallow the room. "Malakor," he whispered. "Who?" "Varkolak Alpha." He shoved me towards the kitchenette. "The fire escape. Now." "What about you?" "I have a debt to settle." He turned back to the swirling dust in the doorway, raising his blade. "Go!" I backed away, my eyes locked on his back. He looked small against the darkness filling the hall. A single man in a suit against a nightmare. The large shadow in the doorway stepped forward, and I saw the glint of a silver gun. "Lucien, down!" I screamed. He moved, but not fast enough. The crack of the gunshot was deafening in the cramped flat. Lucien staggered, grabbing his shoulder. Blood bloomed instantly on the white shirt beneath his jacket. He looked at me, shock registering for a fraction of a second before his face hardened into a mask of pure, lethal rage. The air around him began to shimmer, heat waves distorting the room. "Run!" he roared, a sound that was barely human. The Varkolak Alpha raised the gun again, aiming straight at me.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He corrected smoothly [smoothly]"
2"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.081
78.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"slowly"
5"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"abyssal"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"abyssal"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"comforting"
4"pristine"
5"resonance"
6"stomach"
7"magnetic"
8"whisper"
9"footsteps"
10"gleaming"
11"vibrated"
12"echoed"
13"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1642
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1171
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
Oxford1
Lucien13
Varkolak1
Alpha1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Alpha"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.945
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man, but wrong—too tall, li"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1642
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean18.45
std15.21
cv0.824
sampleLengths
037
113
23
350
413
54
629
720
843
95
106
1126
123
135
1443
1531
163
1711
1831
192
2047
212
225
238
241
2512
267
2726
283
2929
302
3144
327
338
3461
357
3636
3718
3813
3946
4025
413
427
433
4456
4544
4621
4714
4832
4910
96.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was tailored"
2"was ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was deafening"
89.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences160
ratio0.019
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back with surgical precision, and his mismatched eyes—one amber, one abyssal black—scanned my face with the detached interest of a jeweller assessing a flawed gem."
1"Up close, the scent of him was intoxicating—sandalwood and something metallic, like blood on a blade."
2"It looked like a man, but wrong—too tall, limbs too long, skin the colour of a bruised plum."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1178
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028862478777589132
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011035653650254669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean10.26
std6.9
cv0.672
sampleLengths
010
127
213
33
419
531
66
77
84
918
1011
1111
129
1313
1419
1511
165
176
1814
1912
203
215
224
2324
2415
2513
2618
273
2811
2915
3016
312
3213
334
3426
354
362
375
388
391
408
414
422
435
4411
4515
463
477
4822
492
47.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.325
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners52
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Instead, a wall of charcoal"
1"Instead, he plucked a loose"
ratio0.019
16.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences104
matches
0"I yanked the door open,"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"I moved to slam the"
3"I leaned my weight against"
4"He stepped forward, forcing me"
5"He pushed inside, the ivory"
6"I crossed my arms."
7"He walked to the cluttered"
8"I said, my voice steady"
9"He turned, his amber eye"
10"He leaned against the desk,"
11"He looked too pristine."
12"His suit was tailored to"
13"He gestured vaguely towards the"
14"He sighed, a sound of"
15"He pushed off the desk"
16"I stood my ground, tilting"
17"He reached out, his hand"
18"I flinched, but he didn't"
19"He corrected smoothly"
ratio0.51
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences104
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"I yanked the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"I moved to slam the"
5"A polished Oxford shoe stopped"
6"I leaned my weight against"
7"He stepped forward, forcing me"
8"He pushed inside, the ivory"
9"The small living room, already"
10"Lucien ducked slightly to avoid"
11"The ginger tabby wound around"
12"Lucien ignored me to stroke"
13"The cat hissed at me."
14"I crossed my arms."
15"The flat smelled of cardamom"
16"He walked to the cluttered"
17"I said, my voice steady"
18"He turned, his amber eye"
19"He leaned against the desk,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Instead, he plucked a loose hair from my shoulder, inspecting it with mild curiosity before letting it fall to the floor."
1"He looked back at me, the amber eye burning with a ferocity that made my breath hitch."
8.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"I said, my voice steady despite the thudding in my chest"
1"He reached out, his hand hovering near my face"
2"He looked, his gaze lingering on my wrists"
3"Lucien’s voice dropped, the black eye seeming to expand"
4"I asked, my voice barely a whisper"
5"he commanded, his voice losing the lazy drawl"
6"I grabbed, his grip crushing mine as he hauled me up"
28.38% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"I muttered (mutter)"
1"He corrected smoothly (correct)"
2"I laughed (laugh)"
3"I whispered (whisper)"
4"Lucien corrected (correct)"
5"Lucien snarled (snarl)"
6"he whispered (whisper)"
7"I screamed (scream)"
8"he roared (roar)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.243
79.3530%