| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "lurch" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 986 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "click" | | 2 | "Right. Focus." | | 3 | "This is fine. This is normal." | | 4 | "him" | | 5 | "Probably a fox." | | 6 | "Okay. Okay, that’s—" | | 7 | "No. No, that’s not possible." | | 8 | "fuck" | | 9 | "didn’t" | | 10 | "moved" | | 11 | "unfolded" | | 12 | "rippled" | | 13 | "only" | | 14 | "hell" | | 15 | "arse" | | 16 | "move" | | 17 | "breathed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 949 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.71 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if waking just for her" | | 1 | "smelled like copper and something older, s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 986 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 15.65 | | std | 16.45 | | cv | 1.051 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 97.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "being torn" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was streaked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "The first thing Rory noticed wasn’t the silence—it was the *wrong* kind of silence." | | 1 | "Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant, even in the dark—glowed faintly at her feet, their petals unfurling as if waking just for her." | | 2 | "She’d memorized the route anyway—past the standing stones, through the grove, to the clearing where the old well stood." | | 3 | "Another sound—this time, a whisper." | | 4 | "Okay, that’s—*" | | 5 | "The laugh came again, closer this time, and then—" | | 6 | "Its face—" | | 7 | "And then—" | | 8 | "The thing shrieked, a sound like metal scraping against bone, and its form *rippled*, its edges blurring, dissolving—" | | 9 | "The scream came again, closer this time, and then—" | | 10 | "She whirled, knife raised—" |
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| 91.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 955 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.050261780104712044 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011518324607329843 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 7.3 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.817 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 42.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost too warm." | | 1 | "Just the oppressive stillness, pressing" | | 2 | "*Probably a fox.*" | | 3 | "Just a breath, a sigh," | | 4 | "Then it *moved*." |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped past the standing" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, twice, like" | | 3 | "She wasn’t here for the" | | 4 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 5 | "She’d memorized the route anyway—past" | | 6 | "She shoved it back down." | | 7 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 8 | "She forced herself to keep" | | 9 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 10 | "It had led her here." | | 11 | "It echoed through the trees," | | 12 | "She knew that laugh." | | 13 | "She’d heard it in her" | | 14 | "She backed up, her heel" | | 15 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, joints" | | 16 | "It wore a tattered dress," | | 17 | "Its face was a smooth," | | 18 | "Her childhood name." | | 19 | "It *unfolded*, its limbs stretching," |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 51.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The first thing Rory noticed" | | 1 | "She stepped past the standing" | | 2 | "Here, there was only the" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "It pulsed once, twice, like" | | 5 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 6 | "Moonlight filtered through the leaves," | | 7 | "Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant, even in the" | | 8 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 9 | "*This is fine." | | 10 | "This is normal.*" | | 11 | "She wasn’t here for the" | | 12 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 13 | "The map app spun uselessly," | | 14 | "She’d memorized the route anyway—past" | | 15 | "The well that, according to" | | 16 | "The name slithered through her" | | 17 | "She shoved it back down." | | 18 | "A twig snapped." | | 19 | "The sound had come from" |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Not even the distant hum of London traffic that followed her everywhere, a constant white noise she’d learned to ignore." | | 1 | "Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant, even in the dark—glowed faintly at her feet, their petals unfurling as if waking just for her." | | 2 | "The map app spun uselessly, searching for a connection that wouldn’t come." | | 3 | "The well that, according to the cryptic note slipped under her door, held answers about *him*." | | 4 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, joints bending at angles that made her stomach lurch." | | 5 | "The thing shrieked, a sound like metal scraping against bone, and its form *rippled*, its edges blurring, dissolving—" | | 6 | "The trees bent inward, their branches twisting like fingers, knitting together into a wall of wood and leaf." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She grabbed, her grip bruising" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |