Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9WNZ0CN5M3DHAK2FWM

Run Details

Duration:
3m 24s
Cost:
$0.001110
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was cold enough to bite. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged in the beam of her torch, the light carving a tunnel through the oppressive dark. The scene was at the very end of the disused platform, past faded ‘Mind the Gap’ warnings and layers of grime. Two uniformed officers stood by a cordon tape that looked ridiculous in the vast emptiness. The body lay face down, a dark shape against the cracked concrete. Her colleague, DS Amir Chen, knelt beside it, the LED panel on his camera casting a sterile, blue-white glow. He glanced up as her footsteps echoed. “Quinn. Took your time.” “The briefing said ‘unusual location.’ They undersold it.” Quinn pulled on latex gloves, the snap loud in the quiet. She took in the scene. Male, late twenties, dressed in expensive but practical dark clothing—technical trousers, a merino wool jumper. No obvious signs of a struggle on his person. A small, expensive-looking backpack lay a few feet away, unopened. “What’s the story?” “Security guard doing his rounds above heard a shout, came down to check. Found him. No ID, wallet’s missing. Looks like a mugging gone wrong. Probably chased him down here, took his stuff, gave him a shove.” Amir pointed with his pen towards the edge of the platform. “Cracked his skull on the rail. Classic.” Quinn didn’t answer. Her eyes tracked from the body to the backpack. It was too neat. She moved past Amir, her torch beam sweeping the ground. The dust was thick, a pale grey blanket undisturbed for years, save for two clear sets of footprints leading from the service stairs to this spot. One set, the victim’s, by the tread. The other, heavier, booted—likely the assailant. They converged here. But there was no third set. No prints leading away. “Amir,” she said, her voice flat. “The assailant’s prints. Show me where they go after this.” He stood, brushing dust from his trousers, and shone his own light. The boot prints came in, stopped by the body. And ended. “He must have… jumped down onto the tracks? Walked along the rail?” Quinn was already moving, her light scanning the tracks. The rail was a foot below the platform edge, a narrow strip of filthy ballast and litter on either side. Not a single scuff in the thick grime on the rail itself. No disturbance in the dust and debris between the tracks for twenty yards in either direction. It was a perfect, undisturbed archaeological layer of urban decay. “He didn’t leave that way,” she said. “So he backtracked in his own prints. Careful-like.” “Possible.” Quinn’s tone said it wasn’t. She returned to the body, crouching opposite Amir. The back of the victim’s head was a mess of blood and hair, congealed black in the cold air. The injury was consistent with a fall onto the rounded iron rail. But something nagged. She leaned closer, ignoring the coppery smell. “Help me roll him.” Together, they eased the body onto its back. The man’s face was pale, eyes open and clouded. Quinn’s torchlight caught something. She tilted his head gently. Just below the hairline, near the temple, was a small, perfect circle of burned flesh, no bigger than a pencil eraser. The skin around it was blistered. There was no soot, no powder burn. It was a clean, cauterized wound. “What the hell is that?” Amir leaned in. “Entry wound? Too small. No bullet I’ve ever seen.” “It’s not a bullet.” Quinn’s mind raced, a cold feeling settling in her gut that had nothing to do with the station’s chill. She’d seen marks like that before. Once. On the rain-slicked pavement where DS Morris had died. The official report called it an ‘electrical anomaly.’ She’d never believed it. Her light swept over the victim’s hands. They were clean, no defensive wounds. But his right hand was clenched in a fist. Using her pen, she pried the stiff fingers open. In his palm lay a small, hexagonal token, carved from what looked like yellowed bone. It was etched with a complex, interlocking pattern that seemed to swim in the torchlight if you stared too long. Amir whistled softly. “Weird. Occult stuff? Some kind of gang symbol?” Quinn didn’t answer. She bagged the token, her movements precise. Her gaze drifted past the cordon, into the deeper darkness of the tunnel mouth. The air there felt different—thicker, with a faint, ozone tang that made the hair on her arms stand up. Her worn leather watch felt heavy on her wrist. “This wasn’t a mugging,” she said, more to herself than to Amir. “Come on, Quinn. Guy with no ID, fancy gear, in a place he shouldn’t be? He had something someone wanted. They took it and pushed him. The burn… maybe from a taser? A modified one?” “A taser leaves probes. This is a puncture. And where’s the wallet? If this was a robbery, why leave the backpack? It’s a top-end mountaineering pack. Worth a few hundred quid empty.” She stood, walking over to the discarded bag. She opened the main flap. Inside, nestled in padded compartments, were items that made no sense for a mugger’s target or a casual urban explorer: several small vials of iridescent liquid stoppered with wax; a bundle of dried herbs tied with silver wire; a notebook filled with dense, handwritten script in a language she didn’t recognize; and, wrapped in velvet, a small brass compass. She lifted the compass out. It was cold, heavier than it should be. The casing was verdigris-stained brass, its face etched not with cardinal points, but with intricate, spiralling sigils. The needle didn’t point north. It quivered, then spun lazily before settling, pointing unwavering into the dark tunnel. Amir came to stand beside her. “A busted compass. More junk.” “It’s not busted.” Quinn’s voice was low. “It’s pointing at something.” “The tunnel? It’s a dead end. Network sealed it off forty years ago.” She ignored him, following the compass’s indication. She took a few steps towards the tunnel mouth, the beam of her torch swallowed by the blackness. The ozone smell grew stronger. The uniformed officers shifted uneasily. “Quinn, leave it. Forensics will do a sweep. It’s a mugging. A weird one, but a mugging. We write it up, wait for the ID to come through missing persons, and go from there.” The compass needle began to vibrate in her hand. A low hum, more felt than heard, throbbed in the air. In her mind’s eye, she saw Morris’s face, the confusion in his eyes just before he fell. The unexplained ‘anomaly.’ The case they’d been working on—small-time artifacts, odd burglaries—had been shut down too quickly. She looked from the compass to the bone token in the evidence bag, to the strange, clean burn on the victim’s temple. The pieces didn’t fit the picture of a random crime. They fit another picture, one she’d been refusing to develop for three years. “He wasn’t mugged,” Quinn said, turning back to Amir. Her face was a mask of military calm, but her brown eyes were hard. “He was intercepted. He was coming here to meet someone, or to go somewhere. He had the token for entry. The backpack is a kit. Specialized. The burn isn’t from a taser; it’s a kill shot. Something that leaves minimal evidence. The assailant didn’t follow him in and didn’t leave on foot.” Amir frowned. “So how did he get out? He flew?” Quinn’s gaze went back to the empty, print-less dust where the boot marks ended. “No. He didn’t come in through the stairs, either. Not really. And he didn’t leave the way we understand leaving.” She held up the bone token. “This is a key. And this,” she lifted the compass, its needle still fixed on the tunnel, “is telling us the door is that way.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"gently"
2"softly"
3"lazily"
4"quickly"
5"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"oppressive"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"scanning"
4"perfect"
5"raced"
6"chill"
7"etched"
8"complex"
9"velvet"
10"intricate"
11"quivered"
12"unwavering"
13"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1312
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount930
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Two1
Amir10
Chen1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Two"
3"Amir"
4"Chen"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.909
windowScore1
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like yellowed bone"
1"pattern that seemed to swim in the torchlight if you stared too long"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.762
wordCount1312
matches
0"not with cardinal points, but with intricate, spiralling sigils"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean39.76
std25.08
cv0.631
sampleLengths
081
130
261
355
468
510
616
735
867
97
108
1159
1266
1317
1451
1531
1635
1711
1852
1912
2035
21104
2248
2311
2411
2513
2635
2734
2854
2945
3075
3110
3265
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"was blistered"
1"was clenched"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
11.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences109
ratio0.046
matches
0"Male, late twenties, dressed in expensive but practical dark clothing—technical trousers, a merino wool jumper."
1"The other, heavier, booted—likely the assailant."
2"The air there felt different—thicker, with a faint, ozone tang that made the hair on her arms stand up."
3"Inside, nestled in padded compartments, were items that made no sense for a mugger’s target or a casual urban explorer: several small vials of iridescent liquid stoppered with wax; a bundle of dried herbs tied with silver wire; a notebook filled with dense, handwritten script in a language she didn’t recognize; and, wrapped in velvet, a small brass compass."
4"“He was intercepted. He was coming here to meet someone, or to go somewhere. He had the token for entry. The backpack is a kit. Specialized. The burn isn’t from a taser; it’s a kill shot. Something that leaves minimal evidence. The assailant didn’t follow him in and didn’t leave on foot.”"
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount660
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"perfect, undisturbed archaeological layer"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.024242424242424242
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004545454545454545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.04
std9.95
cv0.827
sampleLengths
013
120
221
315
412
519
67
74
819
95
1015
119
1210
133
1448
157
163
179
184
1910
2026
217
226
233
246
254
266
2710
2812
299
302
3112
329
3320
3412
3516
3610
377
388
396
408
4119
4212
433
447
454
468
479
484
495
48.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3211009174311927
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners35
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Just below the hairline, near"
ratio0.011
65.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences88
matches
0"Her colleague, DS Amir Chen,"
1"He glanced up as her"
2"She took in the scene."
3"Her eyes tracked from the"
4"It was too neat."
5"She moved past Amir, her"
6"They converged here."
7"she said, her voice flat"
8"He stood, brushing dust from"
9"It was a perfect, undisturbed"
10"She returned to the body,"
11"She leaned closer, ignoring the"
12"She tilted his head gently."
13"It was a clean, cauterized"
14"She’d seen marks like that"
15"Her light swept over the"
16"They were clean, no defensive"
17"It was etched with a"
18"She bagged the token, her"
19"Her gaze drifted past the"
ratio0.386
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences88
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged"
2"The scene was at the"
3"The body lay face down,"
4"Her colleague, DS Amir Chen,"
5"He glanced up as her"
6"Quinn pulled on latex gloves,"
7"She took in the scene."
8"A small, expensive-looking backpack lay"
9"Amir pointed with his pen"
10"Quinn didn’t answer."
11"Her eyes tracked from the"
12"It was too neat."
13"She moved past Amir, her"
14"The dust was thick, a"
15"The other, heavier, booted—likely the"
16"They converged here."
17"she said, her voice flat"
18"He stood, brushing dust from"
19"The boot prints came in,"
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Two uniformed officers stood by a cordon tape that looked ridiculous in the vast emptiness."
1"It was etched with a complex, interlocking pattern that seemed to swim in the torchlight if you stared too long."
2"The air there felt different—thicker, with a faint, ozone tang that made the hair on her arms stand up."
3"Inside, nestled in padded compartments, were items that made no sense for a mugger’s target or a casual urban explorer: several small vials of iridescent liquid…"
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
1"she said, more to herself than to Amir"
2"she lifted, its needle still fixed on the tunnel,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.0752%