| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1834 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1834 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "aftermath" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "aligned" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 172 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1848 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It would feel wrong, Isolde said." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1843 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Thursday | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Grove | 4 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach here, and the oaks threw down a darkness so complete that Rory's phone torch carved the path ahead in a narrow white wedge that made everything beyond it worse" | | 1 | "something between stone and glass" | | 2 | "felt like an hour" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.541 | | wordCount | 1848 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the absence of sound but the presence of quiet, thick" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 35.54 | | std | 23.52 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 90 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 69 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 64 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 55 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 49 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | |
| 60.14% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 286 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't doing" | | 1 | "was sweating" | | 2 | "was looking" | | 3 | "were standing" | | 4 | "were lying" | | 5 | "was cooling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 172 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the gentle ambient warmth of metal held close to skin — something deeper, deliberate, like a second pulse ticking just below her own." | | 1 | "Then two more, their trunks so wide that they couldn't have grown naturally — and they hadn't." | | 2 | "The park's ambient noise — the wind, the road, the restless deer — fell away as if someone had closed a window." | | 3 | "They bloomed dense and uniform, as if the seasons meant nothing here, which — Isolde had been clear — they didn't." | | 4 | "Isolde had described it as a scar — a seam where the ground had split and healed badly, roughly six feet long, aligned north-south." | | 5 | "It smelled of hot stone and something organic underneath — sweet and dense, halfway between overripe fruit and the copper tang at the back of a nosebleed." | | 6 | "Any visible residue or crystalline formation along the —" | | 7 | "It had been a displacement of air — a thick, fibrous pushing, as if something large had shifted its weight from one position to another." | | 8 | "Depth—" | | 9 | "The stillness appeared again immediately — behind her now." | | 10 | "Not breath, not exactly — more like the long slow release of compressed silence, a sound made of negative space." | | 11 | "But the wildflowers in a rough circle the size of a doorway — directly where the exhalation had come from — were lying flat against the earth, their stems bent as if something enormous had been resting there and had lifted away at the exact moment she turned." | | 12 | "The scar on her left wrist — that old crescent from the broken greenhouse pane when she was nine — began to itch." | | 13 | "Then, from somewhere inside the seam at her back — from below the ground, from the black split in the earth she'd been crouching over moments ago — came a sound that made her stomach drop through the floor of her body." | | 14 | "The park's ambient noise flooded back — wind, road, the distant hydraulic sigh of a night bus — and the air lost its thick silent weight so abruptly that she stumbled forward and caught herself against the holly." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1829 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.035538545653362494 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014215418261344996 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 172 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 172 | | mean | 10.74 | | std | 9.34 | | cv | 0.869 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 48.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3546511627906977 | | totalSentences | 172 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "Then two more, their trunks" | | 1 | "Then, from somewhere inside the" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd known it would be." | | 1 | "She'd planned for it, or" | | 2 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 3 | "She'd memorized the route from" | | 4 | "She wrenched it and the" | | 5 | "She stood motionless in the" | | 6 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 7 | "She could feel it pressing" | | 8 | "Her voice fell flat." | | 9 | "It dropped at her feet" | | 10 | "They bloomed dense and uniform," | | 11 | "She took a screenshot for" | | 12 | "She was looking for a" | | 13 | "It would feel wrong, Isolde" | | 14 | "You won't need me to" | | 15 | "She found it." | | 16 | "It smelled of hot stone" | | 17 | "She held perfectly still." | | 18 | "Her fingers stayed frozen on" | | 19 | "It hadn't been footsteps." |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 64.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "The last bus from Richmond" | | 1 | "She'd known it would be." | | 2 | "She'd planned for it, or" | | 3 | "The pendant sat warm against" | | 4 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 5 | "Richmond Park after dark was" | | 6 | "The deer were invisible shapes" | | 7 | "The city's orange haze pressed" | | 8 | "She'd memorized the route from" | | 9 | "The cattle gate's latch stuck." | | 10 | "She wrenched it and the" | | 11 | "She stood motionless in the" | | 12 | "The distant arterial murmur of" | | 13 | "The path forked where Isolde" | | 14 | "Rory went left, ducking under" | | 15 | "The tree was sweating despite" | | 16 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 17 | "The standing oaks appeared gradually," | | 18 | "These were the markers." | | 19 | "The bark had turned to" |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something were standing" | | 1 | "As if they'd never stopped." | | 2 | "As if whatever stood unseen" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The city's orange haze pressed against the southern sky but couldn't quite reach here, and the oaks threw down a darkness so complete that Rory's phone torch ca…" | | 1 | "It had been a displacement of air — a thick, fibrous pushing, as if something large had shifted its weight from one position to another." | | 2 | "Her handwriting, when she pressed pen to paper, came out in tight cramped letters that didn't look like hers." | | 3 | "Nothing visible, nothing solid, nothing that reflected light or cast a shadow." | | 4 | "But the wildflowers in a rough circle the size of a doorway — directly where the exhalation had come from — were lying flat against the earth, their stems bent …" | | 5 | "As if whatever stood unseen in the Fae Grove could be managed the same way she managed late orders and wrong addresses." | | 6 | "Then, from somewhere inside the seam at her back — from below the ground, from the black split in the earth she'd been crouching over moments ago — came a sound…" | | 7 | "Beyond it, the wildflowers would still be blooming, the seam would still be scarring the earth, and somewhere beneath the soil, something that knocked like a vi…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |