| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1225 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "intensely" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1225 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "profound" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1219 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a branch falling, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1219 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.16 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a physical weight on her shou" | | 1 | "seemed narrower than she remembered" | | 2 | "looked like a coiled serpent, half-buried" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.82 | | wordCount | 1219 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the symbol she expected, but a single, starkly drawn arrow pointing deeper into the grove" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 60.95 | | std | 25.12 | | cv | 0.412 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 87 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 69 |
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| 95.61% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were fashioned" | | 2 | "being pulled" |
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| 91.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "weren't reflecting" | | 2 | "were generating" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "This was a Fae-touched place; strange was the baseline." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1225 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faded, mud-stained Cardiff" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03428571428571429 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012244897959183673 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 11.18 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 40.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3302752293577982 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 33.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a branch falling, she" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 88.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch beam cut a" | | 1 | "She paused, sweeping the light" | | 2 | "Her knuckles were white where" | | 3 | "She forced herself to move" | | 4 | "It came from directly above" | | 5 | "She angled the torch upwards," | | 6 | "It wasn't an animal." | | 7 | "It was a mimicry, too" | | 8 | "Her gaze swept the circle" | | 9 | "She blinked, shaking her head" | | 10 | "She reached the central oak," | | 11 | "She ran her gloved hand" | | 12 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 13 | "Her mysterious benefactor was nothing" | | 14 | "It did not pulse with" | | 15 | "It leached it away." | | 16 | "It was a violation, a" | | 17 | "It was a warning." | | 18 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 19 | "It was the smell of" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The brambles tore at her" | | 1 | "Her torch beam cut a" | | 2 | "The air, thick with the" | | 3 | "She paused, sweeping the light" | | 4 | "The beams caught on the" | | 5 | "This was Isolde’s Grove, a" | | 6 | "Time stretched and compressed here," | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath" | | 8 | "That was something, at least." | | 9 | "A sharp crack echoed from" | | 10 | "Rory froze, snapping her head" | | 11 | "The torchlight sliced through the" | | 12 | "Her knuckles were white where" | | 13 | "The silence that had followed" | | 14 | "She forced herself to move" | | 15 | "The objective was the central" | | 16 | "A message was supposed to" | | 17 | "This time, it was a" | | 18 | "It came from directly above" | | 19 | "She angled the torch upwards," |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch beam cut a nervous, bouncing path through the undergrowth, illuminating a world that felt both ancient and alien." | | 1 | "No rustle of unseen creatures in the bracken, no whisper of wind through the heavy boughs of the ancient oak trees that stood like silent, slumbering giants gua…" | | 2 | "The silence that had followed the noise was heavier, more profound than before, as if the entire grove was holding its breath." | | 3 | "It was a violation, a wrongness that made the hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 4 | "It was the smell of a butcher’s shop, a coppery, metallic tang that coated the back of her throat." | | 5 | "The torch beam flickered, a sudden, technical glitch that sent a spike of pure adrenaline through her." | | 6 | "She felt a hundred pairs of tiny, unblinking eyes on her, a gaze that was both dead and intensely watchful." | | 7 | "They were generating it, a pair of dim, swampy yellow embers that blinked, slowly and deliberately, in the suffocating darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |