| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 559 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 559 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "almost alive" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 562 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 562 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.36 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Rory | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite animal, not quite mechanical, rumbled from the shadows between the oaks" | | 1 | "not quite mechanical, rumbled from the shadows between the oaks" | | 2 | "as if breathing" | | 3 | "felt like a brand, marking her as somet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 562 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 4 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 87 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of the park – the rustle of foxes, the distant hoot of an owl – were absent, replaced by a low, unnatural hum that vibrated in her bones." | | 1 | "The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something else – ozone, metallic." | | 2 | "The growl returned, closer this time, accompanied by a faint, scraping sound – like claws on stone." | | 3 | "The Grove wasn’t just wrong; it was alive." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 559 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly sweet perfume" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03398926654740608 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012522361359570662 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 11.47 | | std | 7.2 | | cv | 0.628 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 |
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| 52.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.32653061224489793 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive silence that" | | 1 | "Just the gnarled trunk of" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 56.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here for a" | | 1 | "She’d ignored it, telling herself" | | 2 | "She’d come because Eva had" | | 3 | "She paused, hand on her" | | 4 | "It felt warm, almost alive." | | 5 | "She’d felt it before, near" | | 6 | "She froze, straining her ears." | | 7 | "She took a step, then" | | 8 | "They stood like silent sentinels," | | 9 | "She felt a sudden, overwhelming" | | 10 | "She took a deep breath," | | 11 | "She stumbled over a root," | | 12 | "She’d forgotten it." | | 13 | "She spun around, heart leaping" | | 14 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "She didn’t dare move, didn’t" | | 17 | "It was a signal, she" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s breath fogged in the" | | 1 | "The ancient oaks, their branches" | | 2 | "She’d come here for a" | | 3 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of" | | 4 | "She’d ignored it, telling herself" | | 5 | "She’d come because Eva had" | | 6 | "The air grew thick, heavy" | | 7 | "A faint, sickly sweet perfume" | | 8 | "She paused, hand on her" | | 9 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 10 | "It felt warm, almost alive." | | 11 | "She’d felt it before, near" | | 12 | "This was stronger, more insistent." | | 13 | "A low growl, not quite" | | 14 | "She froze, straining her ears." | | 15 | "She took a step, then" | | 16 | "The path opened into a" | | 17 | "Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered" | | 18 | "They stood like silent sentinels," | | 19 | "The air here felt charged," |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the path ahead, barely" | | 1 | "Now it felt like a" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual nocturnal sounds of the park – the rustle of foxes, the distant hoot of an owl – were absent, replaced by a low, unnatural hum that vibrated in her bo…" | | 1 | "She took a step, then another, her boots crunching on the dry leaves, each sound echoing unnaturally loud in the stillness." | | 2 | "The stones loomed closer, their shadows stretching and contracting as if breathing." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |