Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9YD51YBMNMBEN9MXQV

Run Details

Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000226
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s breath fogged in the cold night air as she pushed through the dense thicket bordering Richmond Park. The ancient oaks, their branches like skeletal fingers, scraped against the hood of her jacket. She’d come here for a reason, a desperate one, but the moment she’d stepped off the bus, a prickle of wrongness had crawled up her spine. The usual nocturnal sounds of the park – the rustle of foxes, the distant hoot of an owl – were absent, replaced by a low, unnatural hum that vibrated in her bones. She’d ignored it, telling herself it was just the wind through the leaves. Stupid, really. She’d come because Eva had insisted, whispered about a place where time didn’t matter, where secrets bled into the earth. Now, the path ahead, barely visible under a blanket of fallen leaves, seemed to twist and shift, leading her deeper into the heart of the Grove. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something else – ozone, metallic. A faint, sickly sweet perfume clung to the air, making her nose wrinkle. She paused, hand on her chest, heart hammering against her ribs. The pendant around her neck, a gift from someone she’d never met, pulsed weakly against her skin. It felt warm, almost alive. She’d felt it before, near the old abandoned warehouse on the docks, but that had been different. This was stronger, more insistent. A low growl, not quite animal, not quite mechanical, rumbled from the shadows between the oaks. She froze, straining her ears. Nothing. Just the oppressive silence that followed. She took a step, then another, her boots crunching on the dry leaves, each sound echoing unnaturally loud in the stillness. The path opened into a small clearing. Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered through the dense canopy, illuminating a circle of ancient, moss-covered standing stones. They stood like silent sentinels, their surfaces etched with strange, swirling symbols Rory didn’t recognize. The air here felt charged, thick with power. She felt a sudden, overwhelming urge to turn back, to flee the way she’d come. But the pendant’s warmth intensified, a small beacon in the growing darkness. She took a deep breath, forcing herself to move forward. The stones loomed closer, their shadows stretching and contracting as if breathing. She stumbled over a root, her hand catching on the rough bark of an oak. The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon, burned with a sudden, sharp pain. Stupid accident, years ago. She’d forgotten it. Now it felt like a brand, marking her as something vulnerable. A movement caught the corner of her eye. She spun around, heart leaping into her throat. Nothing. Just the gnarled trunk of an oak, its bark twisted and ancient. She pressed herself against the stone, breathing shallowly. The growl returned, closer this time, accompanied by a faint, scraping sound – like claws on stone. Her breath hitched. She didn’t dare move, didn’t dare look. The pendant’s glow flared, a tiny, desperate pulse of crimson light. It was a signal, she realized with a jolt of terror. A beacon. But to whom? Or what? The silence was absolute now, broken only by the frantic beat of her own pulse and the distant, muffled sound of her own ragged breathing. The Grove wasn’t just wrong; it was alive. And it was watching her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount559
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount559
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"almost alive"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"sentinels"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"beacon"
count2
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"pulsed"
2"almost alive"
3"mechanical"
4"oppressive"
5"silence"
6"echoing"
7"sentinels"
8"etched"
9"charged"
10"warmth"
11"beacon"
12"loomed"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences49
matches
0"a jolt of terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords562
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount562
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Eva1
Grove2
Rory2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite animal, not quite mechanical, rumbled from the shadows between the oaks"
1"not quite mechanical, rumbled from the shadows between the oaks"
2"as if breathing"
3"felt like a brand, marking her as somet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount562
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs4
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
0152
1134
2145
3131
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs87
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences49
ratio0.082
matches
0"The usual nocturnal sounds of the park – the rustle of foxes, the distant hoot of an owl – were absent, replaced by a low, unnatural hum that vibrated in her bones."
1"The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something else – ozone, metallic."
2"The growl returned, closer this time, accompanied by a faint, scraping sound – like claws on stone."
3"The Grove wasn’t just wrong; it was alive."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount559
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly sweet perfume"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03398926654740608
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012522361359570662
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean11.47
std7.2
cv0.628
sampleLengths
018
115
226
332
413
52
620
726
817
913
1011
1117
125
1317
145
1516
165
171
186
1921
207
2117
2215
238
2415
2512
2610
2712
2815
2916
304
313
3211
338
348
351
3612
378
3817
393
407
4111
4211
432
443
452
4625
478
485
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.32653061224489793
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners16
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"Just the oppressive silence that"
1"Just the gnarled trunk of"
ratio0.045
56.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences44
matches
0"She’d come here for a"
1"She’d ignored it, telling herself"
2"She’d come because Eva had"
3"She paused, hand on her"
4"It felt warm, almost alive."
5"She’d felt it before, near"
6"She froze, straining her ears."
7"She took a step, then"
8"They stood like silent sentinels,"
9"She felt a sudden, overwhelming"
10"She took a deep breath,"
11"She stumbled over a root,"
12"She’d forgotten it."
13"She spun around, heart leaping"
14"She pressed herself against the"
15"Her breath hitched."
16"She didn’t dare move, didn’t"
17"It was a signal, she"
ratio0.409
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rory’s breath fogged in the"
1"The ancient oaks, their branches"
2"She’d come here for a"
3"The usual nocturnal sounds of"
4"She’d ignored it, telling herself"
5"She’d come because Eva had"
6"The air grew thick, heavy"
7"A faint, sickly sweet perfume"
8"She paused, hand on her"
9"The pendant around her neck,"
10"It felt warm, almost alive."
11"She’d felt it before, near"
12"This was stronger, more insistent."
13"A low growl, not quite"
14"She froze, straining her ears."
15"She took a step, then"
16"The path opened into a"
17"Moonlight, pale and cold, filtered"
18"They stood like silent sentinels,"
19"The air here felt charged,"
ratio0.818
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now, the path ahead, barely"
1"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.045
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The usual nocturnal sounds of the park – the rustle of foxes, the distant hoot of an owl – were absent, replaced by a low, unnatural hum that vibrated in her bo…"
1"She took a step, then another, her boots crunching on the dry leaves, each sound echoing unnaturally loud in the stillness."
2"The stones loomed closer, their shadows stretching and contracting as if breathing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7012%