| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "predator" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "otherworldly" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "the last thing" | | 17 | "echo" | | 18 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 94.13% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure’s laughter rose, a series of high‑pitched clicks—tick‑tock, click‑click—echoing through the grove." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 982 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.889 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "tick‑tock that seemed to reverberate through the ground" | | 1 | "sounded like wind through leaves" | | 2 | "light that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness" | | 3 | "disc that seemed to pulse in rhythm with the pendant" | | 4 | "pulse that seemed to respond to her plea" | | 5 | "as if urging her forward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.893 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | | 0 | "not to the figure but to the unseen forces" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 44.8 | | std | 16.9 | | cv | 0.377 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 62 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "were breathing" | | 1 | "were pulling" | | 2 | "was dying" | | 3 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "“Leave now,” Aurora said, stepping back, the bag sliding from her grip and spilling its contents—steaming bowls of rice, fragrant dumplings—onto the grass." | | 1 | "The figure’s laughter rose, a series of high‑pitched clicks—tick‑tock, click‑click—echoing through the grove." | | 2 | "A thin, silvery thread of light emerged from the pendant, stretching toward a gap forming between the stones—a jagged fissure that glimmered with an otherworldly hue." | | 3 | "The last thing she felt was the cold kiss of the earth, the echo of a distant laugh, and the sudden, terrifying realization that something far larger than herself was watching, waiting, and that the portal had not closed—it had merely shifted." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.009523809523809525 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009523809523809525 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 15.14 | | std | 7.81 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 37.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.21621621621621623 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She slipped the leather bag" | | 1 | "She lifted the bag, the" | | 2 | "she muttered, her voice low," | | 3 | "she called, eyes scanning the" | | 4 | "It wore a coat of" | | 5 | "she demanded, voice firm despite" | | 6 | "it said, reaching a hand" | | 7 | "She remembered the scar on" | | 8 | "she asked, tone clipped, trying" | | 9 | "It landed with a soft" | | 10 | "She lunged for the pendant," | | 11 | "She felt the time warp," | | 12 | "she whispered, not to the" | | 13 | "She bent down, picking up" | | 14 | "she asked the darkness, voice" | | 15 | "she muttered, stepping toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant throbbed against her" | | 1 | "She slipped the leather bag" | | 2 | "The delivery order had read" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "Aurora crouched by the largest" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed brighter," | | 6 | "She lifted the bag, the" | | 7 | "she muttered, her voice low," | | 8 | "The wind rustled through the" | | 9 | "A distant laugh, barely audible," | | 10 | "Aurora froze, hand tightening on" | | 11 | "she called, eyes scanning the" | | 12 | "A figure stepped from behind" | | 13 | "It wore a coat of" | | 14 | "the voice said, smooth, a" | | 15 | "Aurora’s breath steadied." | | 16 | "The stranger chuckled, the sound" | | 17 | "A sudden crack split the" | | 18 | "A branch snapped, then another," | | 19 | "The wildflowers shivered, petals falling" |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind rustled through the wildflowers, a soft susurrus that sounded too regular, as if the blossoms were breathing in unison." | | 1 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a deep red light that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness." | | 2 | "The food sizzled, steam curling upward, forming ghostly shapes that hovered before dissipating." | | 3 | "A sudden gust tore the pendant from Aurora’s wrist, sending it spinning through the air." | | 4 | "It landed with a soft thud on the stone, its crimson glow flaring, sending a shockwave that rippled across the clearing." | | 5 | "The standing stones began to shift, their positions sliding like puzzle pieces rearranging themselves." | | 6 | "She lunged for the pendant, fingers brushing its surface, but the stone moved of her grasp, sliding along the stone’s edge." | | 7 | "A thin, silvery thread of light emerged from the pendant, stretching toward a gap forming between the stones—a jagged fissure that glimmered with an otherworldl…" | | 8 | "Aurora seized the moment, pulling the pendant toward her, feeling the warmth spread through her wrist, coursing into her arm, into her heart." | | 9 | "The figure staggered, its silhouette flickering, dissolving into a spray of ash that drifted upward, disappearing into the night." | | 10 | "The steam rose, forming a face that eyes flickeredmbled listening for." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice low, half‑whispered to the empty night" | | 1 | "she called, eyes scanning the shadows" | | 2 | "she asked, tone clipped, trying to keep the panic at bay" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "it jeered (jeer)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |