Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9ZA8Q68A4CZKKVK4RG

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant throbbed against her wrist as the silver chain brushed the bark of an ancient oak. She slipped the leather bag onto the damp grass, the scent of wildflowers hitting her nostrils like a careless perfume. The delivery order had read “client: Isolde – 13 Myrtle Lane, Richmond.” No one in Silas’ bar had heard of an Isolde, but the address pulsed on the GPS, leading her off the main road and into a narrow footpath that vanished beneath a canopy of twisted branches. The standing stones loomed ahead, their silhouettes like watchful sentinels. Aurora crouched by the largest stone, feeling the cool earth press against her knees. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed brighter, a faint crimson glow spreading like a heartbeat. She lifted the bag, the clink of ceramic plates echoing softly. “You’re late,” she muttered, her voice low, half‑whispered to the empty night. The wind rustled through the wildflowers, a soft susurrus that sounded too regular, as if the blossoms were breathing in unison. A distant laugh, barely audible, slipped through the trees. Aurora froze, hand tightening on the pendant. “Who’s there?” she called, eyes scanning the shadows. A figure stepped from behind a stone, its outline flickering like a candle in a draft. It wore a coat of midnight velvet, the clasp a tarnished silver leaf. “You’ve come,” the voice said, smooth, a hint of amusement curling at the edges. “The Heartstone knows its bearer.” Aurora’s breath steadied. “I’m only here to drop off a meal. No one asked for a… ritual.” The stranger chuckled, the sound a low tick‑tock that seemed to reverberate through the ground. “Everything here is a ritual, dear.” A sudden crack split the air. A branch snapped, then another, as if unseen hands were pulling at the foliage. The wildflowers shivered, petals falling like ash. Aurora’s eyes darted to the edge of her vision, where a pale shape darted between the stones, disappearing before she could focus. “Show yourself,” she demanded, voice firm despite the tremor in her fingers. The figure stepped fully into the moonlight, revealing a face half‑concealed by shadow. Eyes glowed an unsettling amber, pupils dilated like predator’s. “You carry the Heartstone,” it said, reaching a hand that hovered just above the pendant. “It pulses for a portal. You have opened it.” Aurora’s mind raced. The delivery address had been a trap, a lure. She remembered the scar on her left wrist, a crescent from a childhood accident, now matching the shape of a faint glyph etched into the stone beneath her palm. “What do you want?” she asked, tone clipped, trying to keep the panic at bay. “Your curiosity,” the figure replied, voice dropping to a whisper that sounded like wind through leaves. “Your need to know why the world hides its seams.” A low hum rose from the stones, a resonant vibration that made the hair on Aurora’s arms stand up. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a deep red light that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness. The air grew thick, the smell of damp earth mingling with a metallic tang, like fresh blood under a rusted blade. “Leave now,” Aurora said, stepping back, the bag sliding from her grip and spilling its contents—steaming bowls of rice, fragrant dumplings—onto the grass. The food sizzled, steam curling upward, forming ghostly shapes that hovered before dissipating. The figure moved with a fluid grace, gliding across the stones as if the ground were a river. “You cannot leave,” it said. “The Heartstone has chosen you. The portal opens, and the Fae will claim what is yours.” A sudden gust tore the pendant from Aurora’s wrist, sending it spinning through the air. It landed with a soft thud on the stone, its crimson glow flaring, sending a shockwave that rippled across the clearing. Aurora’s breath caught. The standing stones began to shift, their positions sliding like puzzle pieces rearranging themselves. She lunged for the pendant, fingers brushing its surface, but the stone moved of her grasp, sliding along the stone’s edge. The figure’s laughter rose, a series of high‑pitched clicks—tick‑tock, click‑click—echoing through the grove. “You think you can stop what is already begun?” it jeered. Aurora’s eyes flicked to the sky, where the moon hung low, a silver disc that seemed to pulse in rhythm with the pendant. The wind carried a faint chant, a melodic hum that rose and fell, as if the grove itself sang in a language older than any human tongue. She felt the time warp, minutes stretching into an eternity, the world outside the clearing shrinking into a distant memory. “Help me,” she whispered, not to the figure but to the unseen forces that had drawn her here. The pendant’s glow softened, a warm pulse that seemed to respond to her plea. A thin, silvery thread of light emerged from the pendant, stretching toward a gap forming between the stones—a jagged fissure that glimmered with an otherworldly hue. The figure lunged, its hand reaching for the thread. Aurora seized the moment, pulling the pendant toward her, feeling the warmth spread through her wrist, coursing into her arm, into her heart. The thread snapped, sending a burst of crimson light that slammed into the fissure, shattering it like glass. A roar erupted, a sound that was both a howl and a sigh, as if the grove itself was dying and being reborn at once. The standing stones trembled, cracks spider‑webbing across their bark. The figure staggered, its silhouette flickering, dissolving into a spray of ash that drifted upward, disappearing into the night. Aurora stood panting, the pendant clutched tightly, its glow now a steady ember. The clearing fell silent, the wildflowers half, the air still. She bent down, picking up a bowl that had rolled near a stone. The steam rose, forming a face that eyes flickeredmbled listening for. “What now?” she asked the darkness, voice hoarse. A soft rustle came from the edge of the grove. The bronze of the standing stones seemed to shift again, revealing a narrow passage of roots and moss, a doorway that pulsed with a faint, inviting light. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed once more, as if urging her forward. “Come on,” she muttered, stepping toward the passage, the bag of food forgotten at her feet. The ground gave way beneath her, and she slipped, tumbling into the darkness. The last thing she felt was the cold kiss of the earth, the echo of a distant laugh, and the sudden, terrifying realization that something far larger than herself was watching, waiting, and that the portal had not closed—it had merely shifted. The night swallowed her scream, and the grove fell into a hush that promised more than silence could ever convey.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:12:31.672Z" 2/19/2026, 12:12:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"the last thing"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"pulsed"
2"loomed"
3"sentinels"
4"echoing"
5"scanning"
6"velvet"
7"predator"
8"raced"
9"etched"
10"whisper"
11"flicked"
12"pulse"
13"otherworldly"
14"warmth"
15"trembled"
16"the last thing"
17"echo"
18"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
16.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
94.13% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0.014
matches
0"The figure’s laughter rose, a series of high‑pitched clicks—tick‑tock, click‑click—echoing through the grove."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount982
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Aurora12
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.889
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"tick‑tock that seemed to reverberate through the ground"
1"sounded like wind through leaves"
2"light that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness"
3"disc that seemed to pulse in rhythm with the pendant"
4"pulse that seemed to respond to her plea"
5"as if urging her forward"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.893
wordCount1120
matches
0"not to the figure but to the unseen forces"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
64.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean44.8
std16.9
cv0.377
sampleLengths
017
178
250
345
448
517
621
761
846
956
1026
1157
1236
1339
1453
1545
1670
1758
1850
1953
2047
218
2248
2329
2462
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
45.86% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs173
matches
0"were breathing"
1"were pulling"
2"was dying"
3"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences74
ratio0.054
matches
0"“Leave now,” Aurora said, stepping back, the bag sliding from her grip and spilling its contents—steaming bowls of rice, fragrant dumplings—onto the grass."
1"The figure’s laughter rose, a series of high‑pitched clicks—tick‑tock, click‑click—echoing through the grove."
2"A thin, silvery thread of light emerged from the pendant, stretching toward a gap forming between the stones—a jagged fissure that glimmered with an otherworldly hue."
3"The last thing she felt was the cold kiss of the earth, the echo of a distant laugh, and the sudden, terrifying realization that something far larger than herself was watching, waiting, and that the portal had not closed—it had merely shifted."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.009523809523809525
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.009523809523809525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean15.14
std7.81
cv0.516
sampleLengths
017
120
248
310
414
513
611
712
821
99
107
118
1216
1313
1414
155
163
1714
1815
196
206
2114
227
2322
2412
2513
269
2715
289
293
309
3129
3215
3316
3410
3519
3617
3721
3823
3913
4018
415
4216
4315
4421
453
4614
4721
4813
4911
37.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.21621621621621623
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences66
matches
0"She slipped the leather bag"
1"She lifted the bag, the"
2"she muttered, her voice low,"
3"she called, eyes scanning the"
4"It wore a coat of"
5"she demanded, voice firm despite"
6"it said, reaching a hand"
7"She remembered the scar on"
8"she asked, tone clipped, trying"
9"It landed with a soft"
10"She lunged for the pendant,"
11"She felt the time warp,"
12"she whispered, not to the"
13"She bent down, picking up"
14"she asked the darkness, voice"
15"she muttered, stepping toward the"
ratio0.242
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences66
matches
0"The pendant throbbed against her"
1"She slipped the leather bag"
2"The delivery order had read"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
4"Aurora crouched by the largest"
5"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed brighter,"
6"She lifted the bag, the"
7"she muttered, her voice low,"
8"The wind rustled through the"
9"A distant laugh, barely audible,"
10"Aurora froze, hand tightening on"
11"she called, eyes scanning the"
12"A figure stepped from behind"
13"It wore a coat of"
14"the voice said, smooth, a"
15"Aurora’s breath steadied."
16"The stranger chuckled, the sound"
17"A sudden crack split the"
18"A branch snapped, then another,"
19"The wildflowers shivered, petals falling"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The wind rustled through the wildflowers, a soft susurrus that sounded too regular, as if the blossoms were breathing in unison."
1"The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a deep red light that seemed to bleed into the surrounding darkness."
2"The food sizzled, steam curling upward, forming ghostly shapes that hovered before dissipating."
3"A sudden gust tore the pendant from Aurora’s wrist, sending it spinning through the air."
4"It landed with a soft thud on the stone, its crimson glow flaring, sending a shockwave that rippled across the clearing."
5"The standing stones began to shift, their positions sliding like puzzle pieces rearranging themselves."
6"She lunged for the pendant, fingers brushing its surface, but the stone moved of her grasp, sliding along the stone’s edge."
7"A thin, silvery thread of light emerged from the pendant, stretching toward a gap forming between the stones—a jagged fissure that glimmered with an otherworldl…"
8"Aurora seized the moment, pulling the pendant toward her, feeling the warmth spread through her wrist, coursing into her arm, into her heart."
9"The figure staggered, its silhouette flickering, dissolving into a spray of ash that drifted upward, disappearing into the night."
10"The steam rose, forming a face that eyes flickeredmbled listening for."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, her voice low, half‑whispered to the empty night"
1"she called, eyes scanning the shadows"
2"she asked, tone clipped, trying to keep the panic at bay"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"it jeered (jeer)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.65
leniency1
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.385
61.7282%