| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "methodical" | | 14 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 224 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 224 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 25 | | totalWords | 1208 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "to" | | 1 | "unfolding" | | 2 | "mind" | | 3 | "You are not the one." | | 4 | "Fear makes bad plans." | | 5 | "You don’t belong." | | 6 | "swallowed" | | 7 | "unfolded" | | 8 | "breathe" | | 9 | "bodies" | | 10 | "Pressure." | | 11 | "You were not invited." | | 12 | "beckon" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1205 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Like" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | December | 1 | | Home | 1 | | Like | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.483 | | wordCount | 1208 | | matches | | 0 | "not from moon or stars, but from the grove itself" | | 1 | "not loud, but deep" | | 2 | "Not by parting, but by *unfolding*, petals of jade peeling back like a flower bl" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 126 | | mean | 9.59 | | std | 13.58 | | cv | 1.417 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 77 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 71 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was smudged" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was *swallowed" | | 3 | "were covered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 224 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "A slow, uneven beat—like a heart buried under ice." | | 1 | "The standing stones ringed the clearing—massive, barkless oaks with trunks so wide they looked carved from the land itself." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—purple foxgloves, white snowdrops, fire-orange poppies—all thriving in a December midnight." | | 3 | "Rory’s wrist ached—the crescent scar tingling as if scraped fresh." | | 4 | "The lid didn’t open—no hinge, no seam—only a single indentation shaped like a teardrop." | | 5 | "A crack split the air—not loud, but deep." | | 6 | "But her shadow—long and thin in the grove’s eerie light—wasn’t hers." | | 7 | "Its face—she couldn’t see its face." | | 8 | "A hand—blackened, twig-fingered—sank through the earth and closed around her wrist." | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed—warm, frantic." | | 10 | "A column of darkness rose—smooth, polished, like obsidian." | | 11 | "Then the grove returned—worse." | | 12 | "An opening formed—vertical, lipless." | | 13 | "Her hands—her real hands—were covered in moss." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1150 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03739130434782609 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00608695652173913 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 224 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 224 | | mean | 5.39 | | std | 4.82 | | cv | 0.893 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 50.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3482142857142857 | | totalSentences | 224 | | uniqueOpeners | 78 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the rain didn’t touch" | | 1 | "Only that she must bring" | | 2 | "Just a hollow lined with" | | 3 | "Then a sound." | | 4 | "Only a dip where eyes" | | 5 | "Just one step." | | 6 | "Then a third." | | 7 | "Then the grove returned—worse." | | 8 | "All fixed on her." |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 93.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 1 | "She stepped off the path." | | 2 | "She paused at the threshold." | | 3 | "Their roots coiled like petrified" | | 4 | "She stepped inside." | | 5 | "It pressed against the base" | | 6 | "She swallowed, and the sound" | | 7 | "Her voice didn’t carry." | | 8 | "It collapsed into the moss," | | 9 | "She walked toward the center" | | 10 | "She lifted it from its" | | 11 | "*You are not the one.*" | | 12 | "She glanced over her shoulder." | | 13 | "It crouched lower than she" | | 14 | "She stepped left." | | 15 | "It didn’t move." | | 16 | "She took two hard steps" | | 17 | "She didn’t look back." | | 18 | "Her breath came fast." | | 19 | "She forced it slow." |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 117 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had started just as" | | 1 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant weighed against" | | 3 | "The map Yu-Fei had scrawled" | | 4 | "The grove called to her." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 6 | "A slow, uneven beat—like a" | | 7 | "She stepped off the path." | | 8 | "The trees crowded in." | | 9 | "Oaks, ancient and bowed, their" | | 10 | "The air was too still." | | 11 | "A gap between two trunks." | | 12 | "A breath of wild jasmine." | | 13 | "The Fae Grove." | | 14 | "She paused at the threshold." | | 15 | "The standing stones ringed the" | | 16 | "Their roots coiled like petrified" | | 17 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—purple" | | 18 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 19 | "Rory’s wrist ached—the crescent scar" |
| | ratio | 0.709 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Thin tendrils creeping up her wrists, lacing over her fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |