Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX1T9ZH2P6YGP2JG9CEQAW

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.011122
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had started just as Rory crossed the deer gate into Richmond Park, fine needles of it stinging her cheeks. She pulled her coat tighter, the collar damp against her neck. The Heartstone Pendant weighed against her sternum, its usual warmth now a dull throb beneath her fingers where she’d clutched it through her shirt. The map Yu-Fei had scrawled on the back of a takeout menu was smudged, ink bleeding at the edges, but she didn’t need it anymore. The grove called to her. The pendant pulsed. Not warm. Not comforting. A slow, uneven beat—like a heart buried under ice. She stepped off the path. The trees crowded in. Oaks, ancient and bowed, their bark split like old leather. Between them, the ground rose unevenly, carpeted in moss so thick it muffled her footsteps. The air was too still. No wind. No rustling. Even the rain didn’t touch her here. A gap between two trunks. A breath of wild jasmine. The Fae Grove. She paused at the threshold. The standing stones ringed the clearing—massive, barkless oaks with trunks so wide they looked carved from the land itself. Their roots coiled like petrified serpents, and where their branches met overhead, a pale, silvery light filtered down, not from moon or stars, but from the grove itself. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—purple foxgloves, white snowdrops, fire-orange poppies—all thriving in a December midnight. The air smelled of damp soil and something bitter underneath. Like iron, or old coins. Rory’s wrist ached—the crescent scar tingling as if scraped fresh. She stepped inside. The temperature didn’t change. But the silence did. Not silence. A hum. Low, sub-audible. It pressed against the base of her skull, vibrated in her molars. She swallowed, and the sound echoed in her own throat like it had traveled too far. “Hello?” she called. Her voice didn’t carry. It collapsed into the moss, strangled by the trees. The pendant thumped once. She walked toward the center of the grove, where a ring of foxgloves bloomed unnaturally close together, their bell-shaped flowers trembling despite the absence of wind. Kneeling, she pulled the backpack from her shoulders, unzipped it, and withdrew the jade box Yu-Fei had entrusted to her. Carved with spirals and half-formed faces, it felt heavier than stone. The lid didn’t open—no hinge, no seam—only a single indentation shaped like a teardrop. Like the Heartstone. She hesitated. The map hadn’t mentioned this. Only that she must bring the box *to* the grove. Not what to do with it. The pendant flared. Warmth this time. Sharp. Insistent. She lifted it from its chain, slipped it into the indentation. It fit. A crack split the air—not loud, but deep. Like ice giving way beneath a lake. The box opened. Not by parting, but by *unfolding*, petals of jade peeling back like a flower blooming in reverse. Inside, nothing. Just a hollow lined with black silk. Then a sound. A whisper. Not in her ears. In her *mind*. A voice made of smoke and thorns. *You are not the one.* Rory jerked back. The box remained open. Silent. She glanced over her shoulder. Nothing. The standing stones stood like sentinels. The flowers did not stir. But her shadow—long and thin in the grove’s eerie light—wasn’t hers. It crouched lower than she did. Elbows bent too far backward. Fingers too long, dragging in the moss. She stood. The shadow stayed. She stepped left. It didn’t move. She took two hard steps forward, into the foxglove ring. The shadow stayed behind. And slowly, it raised its head. She didn’t look back. Her breath came fast. Shallow. She forced it slow. Analyze. Observe. Eva’s voice in her head: *Fear makes bad plans.* But this wasn’t fear. This was older. A deep, animal knowledge that she had stepped into a place that was never meant for her. Something brushed her ankle. She looked down. A vine? No. Too smooth. Too deliberate. It slithered around her boot, thin and dark as a root. It pulsed, once. She kicked. It unraveled, melting into the moss. Another whisper. Not in her head this time. From the stones. *You don’t belong.* She turned. Behind the nearest standing oak, something stood. Tall. Too tall. Slender. Its limbs were long, arms hanging past its knees. It wore no clothes, but its skin shimmered like oiled bark, patterned with swirls that moved when she wasn’t looking directly at them. Its face—she couldn’t see its face. Only a dip where eyes should be, and a slit of darkness beneath. It didn’t move. It didn’t need to. She backed away. Her heel struck something soft. She turned. The jade box was gone. In its place, the Heartstone Pendant lay in the moss, glowing crimson. She knelt to grab it. A hand—blackened, twig-fingered—sank through the earth and closed around her wrist. She screamed. The sound didn’t echo. It was *swallowed*. The thing behind the stone stepped forward. Just one step. Noiseless. Another emerged from behind a second stone. Then a third. They didn’t walk. They *unfolded*, limbs extending like joints on a spider’s legs. Their heads tilted, listening. Not with ears. With their skin. Rory wrenched her arm free. The hand dissolved into roots. She snatched the pendant, shoved it back around her neck. Run. She bolted toward the gap in the stones. But the path wasn’t there. The trees had shifted. The opening sealed shut with ivy as thick as rope. She turned. They circled now, slow, methodical. Silent. The pendant pulsed—warm, frantic. One of them raised a hand. Not toward her. Toward the foxglove ring. The flowers convulsed. Petals blackened. Curled. Shriveled to ash. From the center of the ring, the earth split. A column of darkness rose—smooth, polished, like obsidian. Taller than the trees. Wider than a house. It had no features. No opening. But she felt it *breathe*. The pendant screamed against her skin. Not a sound. A vibration. A warning. She stumbled back. And tripped. Fell hard on her side. The breath left her. For a moment, she saw stars. Then the grove returned—worse. The standing stones were no longer trees. They were *bodies*. Twisted. Fused. Their bark peeled back to reveal muscle and sinew, their roots dragging through the earth like entrails. Eyes opened in their trunks. Hundreds of them. All fixed on her. The obsidian monolith pulsed. A low, resonant tone filled the air. Not sound. *Pressure.* It pressed into her ears, her chest, her bones. Words formed in the dark. *You were not invited.* Behind her, something moved in the moss. Small. Quick. Skittering. She didn’t turn. She couldn’t. The monolith’s surface rippled. An opening formed—vertical, lipless. A mouth. Or a door. From within, a light. Not silver. Not orange. Green. Flickering. Familiar. Like the neon sign above Silas’ bar. Home. Her breath caught. A way out? She took a step. The figures in the clearing raised their hands. Not to stop her. To *beckon*. She hesitated. The pendant burned. She looked down. Her hands—her real hands—were covered in moss. Thin tendrils creeping up her wrists, lacing over her fingers. The crescent scar pulsed, black at the edges. She wasn’t alone. She never had been. Something lived inside the grove. And it had been waiting. For her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count5
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"sentinels"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"methodical"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"throb"
2"pulsed"
3"comforting"
4"footsteps"
5"silence"
6"vibrated"
7"echoed"
8"silk"
9"whisper"
10"sentinels"
11"shimmered"
12"echo"
13"methodical"
14"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences224
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences224
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords25
totalWords1208
ratio0.021
matches
0"to"
1"unfolding"
2"mind"
3"You are not the one."
4"Fear makes bad plans."
5"You don’t belong."
6"swallowed"
7"unfolded"
8"breathe"
9"bodies"
10"Pressure."
11"You were not invited."
12"beckon"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1205
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Like"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Yu-Fei2
Fae1
Grove1
December1
Home1
Like4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Like"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"December"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.483
wordCount1208
matches
0"not from moon or stars, but from the grove itself"
1"not loud, but deep"
2"Not by parting, but by *unfolding*, petals of jade peeling back like a flower bl"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs126
mean9.59
std13.58
cv1.417
sampleLengths
085
13
213
35
445
510
63
75
877
910
103
118
124
1330
143
1513
164
1771
183
192
2021
213
225
2311
242
2515
263
2726
283
292
3014
315
323
335
345
3512
3611
3718
382
393
403
413
4210
434
446
454
4620
4724
484
493
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences224
matches
0"was smudged"
1"was gone"
2"was *swallowed"
3"were covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs214
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences224
ratio0.063
matches
0"A slow, uneven beat—like a heart buried under ice."
1"The standing stones ringed the clearing—massive, barkless oaks with trunks so wide they looked carved from the land itself."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—purple foxgloves, white snowdrops, fire-orange poppies—all thriving in a December midnight."
3"Rory’s wrist ached—the crescent scar tingling as if scraped fresh."
4"The lid didn’t open—no hinge, no seam—only a single indentation shaped like a teardrop."
5"A crack split the air—not loud, but deep."
6"But her shadow—long and thin in the grove’s eerie light—wasn’t hers."
7"Its face—she couldn’t see its face."
8"A hand—blackened, twig-fingered—sank through the earth and closed around her wrist."
9"The pendant pulsed—warm, frantic."
10"A column of darkness rose—smooth, polished, like obsidian."
11"Then the grove returned—worse."
12"An opening formed—vertical, lipless."
13"Her hands—her real hands—were covered in moss."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1150
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03739130434782609
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00608695652173913
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences224
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences224
mean5.39
std4.82
cv0.893
sampleLengths
020
111
224
325
45
53
62
72
89
95
104
1110
1215
135
142
152
167
175
185
193
205
2119
2228
2315
2410
255
2610
273
284
294
302
312
322
3312
3416
353
364
379
384
3926
4020
4111
4214
433
442
455
4610
476
483
493
50.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3482142857142857
totalSentences224
uniqueOpeners78
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences165
matches
0"Even the rain didn’t touch"
1"Only that she must bring"
2"Just a hollow lined with"
3"Then a sound."
4"Only a dip where eyes"
5"Just one step."
6"Then a third."
7"Then the grove returned—worse."
8"All fixed on her."
ratio0.055
93.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences165
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"She stepped off the path."
2"She paused at the threshold."
3"Their roots coiled like petrified"
4"She stepped inside."
5"It pressed against the base"
6"She swallowed, and the sound"
7"Her voice didn’t carry."
8"It collapsed into the moss,"
9"She walked toward the center"
10"She lifted it from its"
11"*You are not the one.*"
12"She glanced over her shoulder."
13"It crouched lower than she"
14"She stepped left."
15"It didn’t move."
16"She took two hard steps"
17"She didn’t look back."
18"Her breath came fast."
19"She forced it slow."
ratio0.315
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences165
matches
0"Rain had started just as"
1"She pulled her coat tighter,"
2"The Heartstone Pendant weighed against"
3"The map Yu-Fei had scrawled"
4"The grove called to her."
5"The pendant pulsed."
6"A slow, uneven beat—like a"
7"She stepped off the path."
8"The trees crowded in."
9"Oaks, ancient and bowed, their"
10"The air was too still."
11"A gap between two trunks."
12"A breath of wild jasmine."
13"The Fae Grove."
14"She paused at the threshold."
15"The standing stones ringed the"
16"Their roots coiled like petrified"
17"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—purple"
18"The air smelled of damp"
19"Rory’s wrist ached—the crescent scar"
ratio0.709
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Thin tendrils creeping up her wrists, lacing over her fingers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0162%