Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX25A1RCP6SKTTANB44VAA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.175830

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass bell above the door chimed as Aurora pushed into The Raven's Nest, shaking rain from her delivery jacket. The familiar smell of wood polish and whiskey wrapped around her like an old blanket. She nodded to Silas behind the bar, who raised an eyebrow at her early return. "Kitchen flooded at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei sent everyone home." She slumped onto a barstool, water dripping from her sleeves onto the worn mahogany. Silas poured her usual—gin and tonic, heavy on the gin—without asking. The bar sat mostly empty at three in the afternoon, just two regulars nursing pints in the corner booth beneath a yellowed map of Prague. Aurora traced the rim of her glass, watching condensation bead on the surface. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the amber light from the Edison bulbs overhead. She'd been running deliveries for six months now, each day bleeding into the next, each pound she earned going straight to rent for the flat upstairs. The door chimed again. A woman entered, designer heels clicking against the hardwood, Burberry trench coat perfectly pressed despite the downpour. She paused at the threshold, scanning the dim interior. Aurora's hand froze on her glass. "Laila?" The woman's gaze snapped to her. Those grey eyes—she'd know them anywhere, even after seven years. Even with the expertly applied makeup and the blonde highlights that had replaced mousy brown curls. "My God. Rory." Neither moved. Silas, polishing a glass with practiced nonchalance, glanced between them. "I'll be in the back room if you need me." He limped toward the bookshelf, silver signet ring catching the light as he pressed the hidden latch. Laila approached slowly, each step measured. Up close, Aurora catalogued the changes: the sharp cheekbones that spoke of expensive gym memberships, the manicured nails, the subtle botox that kept her forehead unnaturally smooth. "You look..." Laila paused, taking in Aurora's damp delivery uniform, the shadows under her bright blue eyes. "Different." "Yeah, well. We can't all marry investment bankers." The words came out sharper than intended. Laila flinched but recovered quickly, sliding onto the adjacent barstool with practiced grace. "Gin martini. Hendrick's. Extra dry." She addressed the empty bar, then seemed to remember. "Is there—?" "Silas owns the place. He'll be back." Aurora drained half her gin and tonic in one swallow. "Still living in Chelsea?" "Notting Hill now. Richard got promoted to senior partner last year." Of course he did. Aurora remembered Richard from university—all cologne and confidence, the type who wore boat shoes unironically and called women "birds." Laila had met him their final year, right when everything started falling apart. "And you? Still in Cardiff?" "London. About a year now." "A year?" Laila's voice pitched higher. "You've been here a whole year and didn't—" "Didn't what? Call? With what number? Show up at your townhouse in my delivery uniform?" Silence stretched between them, filled only by the rain hammering against the windows. The green neon from the sign outside cast strange shadows across Laila's face, making her look like a stranger wearing her best friend's skin. "I heard about Evan." Aurora's knuckles went white around her glass. "Eva has a big mouth." "She was worried. We all were." "Were you?" The laugh that escaped Aurora's throat tasted bitter. "Must have been worried sick, what with all the texts and calls." "That's not fair." "Isn't it?" Laila's designer bag crinkled as she pulled out her phone, checking the time with movements too casual to be genuine. "I should have reached out. I know that." "But Richard wouldn't have approved. Can't have the future Mrs. Pemberton associating with the dropout who defended herself against her psycho ex." "You didn't drop out. You left." "Same difference to our lot, isn't it?" Silas emerged from the back room, moving with his characteristic limp to fix Laila's martini. He worked in silence, professional distance written in every line of his body. The drink appeared before her like magic—olive speared just so, glass frosted, gin measured to perfection. Laila sipped delicately. "I work now, you know. PR for a sustainable fashion brand." "Let me guess. Four days a week, flexible hours, company card for client lunches?" "It's real work." "I'm sure it is." Aurora flagged Silas for another gin and tonic. Her delivery jacket dripped steadily onto the floor, forming a small puddle she didn't bother to acknowledge. "Do you remember," Laila started, then stopped. She tried again. "Do you remember that night in second year? When we snuck into the law library after hours?" Despite herself, Aurora's mouth twitched. "You mean when you snuck us in. I was ready to go home." "But you didn't. You stayed up all night helping me prep for Constitutional Law." "You were going to fail otherwise." "I was drowning." Laila's voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "In all of it. The pressure, the expectations. You were the only one who saw it." "Fat lot of good it did either of us." The rain had softened to a steady patter. One of the regulars shuffled to the jukebox, and soon Johnny Cash's voice filled the bar with appropriate melancholy. "I was at Harrods last month," Laila said suddenly. "In the food hall. This woman was giving the staff absolute hell about some imported cheese. Going on and on about her dinner party, how everything would be ruined. And I thought—Rory would have destroyed her. Just eviscerated her with that calm voice you do." "Did." "What?" "The calm voice I did. Past tense." Laila's martini sat barely touched. She twisted her wedding ring—platinum, naturally, with a stone large enough to have its own postcode. "Eva said you're working as a delivery driver?" "Pays the bills." "But your degree—" "Is worthless without completing final year. Turns out law firms aren't keen on hiring someone who left university under 'mysterious circumstances.'" "It wasn't mysterious. Anyone who knew Evan knew what he was capable of." "Anyone who wanted to know." Aurora met her eyes directly for the first time. "The rest found it easier to believe I was hysterical. Overreacting. You know how women get." Laila's face flushed beneath her foundation. "I never said that." "You never said anything. That was the point." The bell chimed again. A couple entered, shaking umbrellas, bringing the smell of wet pavement and possibility. Silas moved to serve them, leaving Aurora and Laila in their bubble of shared history and present distance. "I'm getting married next month," Laila said quietly. "Congratulations." "Small ceremony. Richard's family estate in the Cotswolds." She paused. "I wanted to invite you." "But?" "But Richard doesn't know about... He knows I have friends from uni, but not the specifics. It would raise questions." "Right. Wouldn't want to explain why the maid of honor is serving canapés instead of giving speeches." "You were going to be my maid of honor?" The question hung between them, fragile as spun glass. Aurora remembered late nights planning imaginary weddings, drunk on cheap wine and possibility. Before Evan. Before Richard. Before the world showed them exactly how much their friendship was worth when tested. "Yeah, well. Plans change." Laila reached for her purse, fingers fumbling with the clasp. "I should go. Richard's expecting me." "Of course he is." She stood, smoothing her trench coat, every movement rehearsed for an audience that wasn't there. At the door, she turned back. "I'm sorry, Rory. For all of it." Aurora raised her glass in a mock toast. "Bit late for that, isn't it?" The door closed with a final chime, leaving Aurora alone with her gin and the weight of everything unsaid. Silas returned, moving with quiet efficiency to clear Laila's barely touched martini. "Old friend?" "Something like that." He nodded, understanding more than she'd said. That was Silas's gift—knowing when to push and when to let the silence speak for itself. Aurora finished her drink and stood, water still dripping from her jacket. Upstairs, her flat waited—small and cramped and nothing like the life she'd planned. But it was hers, earned with every delivery, every pound saved, every day survived. The brass bell chimed softly as she headed for the stairs, leaving only the puddle beneath her barstool as evidence she'd been there at all.
total_cost0.17583

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Laila started then [then]"
1"Laila said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"Laila said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.086
78.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"suddenly"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"measured"
count2
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"eyebrow"
2"traced"
3"scanning"
4"measured"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1374
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount845
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Laila"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Laila"
discoveredNames
Aurora17
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
Prague1
Edison1
Burberry1
Laila18
Richard2
Silence1
Johnny1
Cash1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Edison"
4"Laila"
5"Richard"
6"Silence"
7"Johnny"
8"Cash"
9"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"Burberry"
globalScore0.435
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1374
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean16.76
std13.3
cv0.794
sampleLengths
050
124
236
355
430
56
61
732
83
912
1027
1133
1218
138
1420
1516
1621
1711
1836
195
205
2114
2215
2337
244
257
265
276
2822
293
302
3128
3222
336
347
3544
3614
3714
383
394
4025
4127
4218
4314
446
4527
469
4727
4854
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences129
ratio0.054
matches
0"Silas poured her usual—gin and tonic, heavy on the gin—without asking."
1"Those grey eyes—she'd know them anywhere, even after seven years."
2"Aurora remembered Richard from university—all cologne and confidence, the type who wore boat shoes unironically and called women \"birds.\" Laila had met him their final year, right when everything started falling apart."
3"The drink appeared before her like magic—olive speared just so, glass frosted, gin measured to perfection."
4"She twisted her wedding ring—platinum, naturally, with a stone large enough to have its own postcode."
5"That was Silas's gift—knowing when to push and when to let the silence speak for itself."
6"Upstairs, her flat waited—small and cramped and nothing like the life she'd planned."
91.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.044548651817116064
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.02579132473622509
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean10.65
std7.37
cv0.692
sampleLengths
020
115
215
324
411
525
613
716
826
94
1017
119
126
131
146
1510
1616
173
182
1910
2027
216
2227
2317
241
258
267
2713
2814
292
3017
314
3211
334
3432
355
365
376
388
3915
4013
4124
424
437
445
456
4610
4712
483
492
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4186046511627907
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners54
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Of course he did."
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences69
matches
0"She nodded to Silas behind"
1"She slumped onto a barstool,"
2"She'd been running deliveries for"
3"She paused at the threshold,"
4"He limped toward the bookshelf,"
5"She addressed the empty bar,"
6"He worked in silence, professional"
7"Her delivery jacket dripped steadily"
8"She tried again."
9"She twisted her wedding ring—platinum,"
10"She stood, smoothing her trench"
11"He nodded, understanding more than"
ratio0.174
25.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences69
matches
0"The brass bell above the"
1"The familiar smell of wood"
2"She nodded to Silas behind"
3"She slumped onto a barstool,"
4"Silas poured her usual—gin and"
5"The bar sat mostly empty"
6"Aurora traced the rim of"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"She'd been running deliveries for"
9"The door chimed again."
10"A woman entered, designer heels"
11"She paused at the threshold,"
12"Aurora's hand froze on her"
13"The woman's gaze snapped to"
14"Those grey eyes—she'd know them"
15"Silas, polishing a glass with"
16"He limped toward the bookshelf,"
17"Laila approached slowly, each step"
18"Laila paused, taking in Aurora's"
19"The words came out sharper"
ratio0.87
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Even with the expertly applied"
1"Before the world showed them"
ratio0.029
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Up close, Aurora catalogued the changes: the sharp cheekbones that spoke of expensive gym memberships, the manicured nails, the subtle botox that kept her foreh…"
1"The green neon from the sign outside cast strange shadows across Laila's face, making her look like a stranger wearing her best friend's skin."
2"She stood, smoothing her trench coat, every movement rehearsed for an audience that wasn't there."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She slumped, water dripping from her sleeves onto the worn mahogany"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She addressed (address)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.086
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.029
85.3086%