Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX28WCXPKTJWK36JD03G5K

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1m 23s
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AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, a low, electric hum that barely registered over the drum of heavy rain against the Soho pavement. Rory shook her umbrella, sending a spray of cold water across the pavement before stepping inside The Raven's Nest. The air inside smelled of stale tobacco, lemon polish, and the sharp, metallic tang of gin. She hadn't intended to stop here. The flat above was empty, and the silence up there was getting louder by the day. She needed noise. She needed a crowd, even if it was just the sad scatter of regulars hunched over their pints on a Tuesday night. Rory slipped onto a stool at the far end of the mahogany bar. The wood was cool under her elbows. She unzipped her fleece, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she pushed her sleeve up. The skin around it still pulled tight when she flexed her hand, a permanent reminder of a window latch that had refused to give. "Whisky. Single. No ice." She didn't look up. She stared at the rows of inverted bottles lining the shelves behind the bar, watching the distorted reflection of the room. "Coming up." The voice was deep, gravel-edged, and stopped her cold. It vibrated in her chest, pulling a memory from the archives of her childhood—card games in her father’s study, the scent of expensive cigars, and a man who laughed like thunder. Rory’s head snapped up. The man placing a coaster on the bar wasn't the young, vibrant operative she remembered from the Cardiff embassy parties years ago. His hair, once a vivid auburn, was now streaked with heavy grey, tied back in a loose queue that did little to hide the lines etched deep around his mouth and eyes. He moved with a deliberation that bordered on painful, favouring his left leg as he turned to grab a bottle of Glenfiddich. He turned back, the amber liquid splashing into the heavy bottomed glass. His hazel eyes met hers, and the movement froze. His hand hovered over the bottle, a silver signet ring catching the dim light. "Aurora?" The name landed like a stone in a still pond. It belonged to a different girl, a girl who wore blazers and debated precedent, a girl who hadn't learned to sleep with a knife under her pillow. Rory cleared her throat, her fingers tightening around the edge of the bar. "It's Rory now." Silas set the bottle down on the counter with a heavy thud. He leaned forward, planting both hands on the wood. The silver ring glinted. He looked older. Harder. The sharp intelligence in his eyes had calcified into something wary, assessing threats that weren't there. "Rory." He tested the sound, rolling the single syllable around his mouth like a pebble. "It's been a long time. Six years? Seven?" "Seven." "Your father mentioned you moved to London. Pre-Law, wasn't it?" "I dropped out." Rory picked up the glass, the liquid trembling slightly. "Life got in the way." Silas nodded slowly. He pulled a rag from his apron pocket and began to wipe a spot on the counter that was already clean. "Life has a habit of doing that. Prague taught me that." He gestured vaguely toward his knee. Rory hadn't noticed it at first, the way he kept his weight shifted, but now the limp was obvious. A permanent souvenir from a botched operation, her father had whispered once at a dinner party, the night before Silas vanished from the social circuit entirely. "You opened a bar." "Needed something to do with my hands." He stopped wiping and looked at her, really looked at her. His gaze traced the dark circles under her eyes, the too-sharp angle of her jawline, the defensive set of her shoulders. "You look tired, Rory." "I deliver food for a living now. It’s tiring work." "That’s not what I meant." The silence stretched, taut and uncomfortable. The ambient noise of the bar—the clinking of glasses, the murmur of conversation from a booth in the corner—seemed to fade into the background. Rory took a drink, the whisky burning a path down her throat, settling warm in her stomach. "You look like you've seen a ghost, Si." "Maybe I have." He poured himself a measure of water, no ice, and leaned his hip against the register. "The last time I saw you, you were arguing about the ethics of corporate law at a garden party. You had fire in your eyes. Now..." "Now what?" "Now you look like you're waiting for the other shoe to drop." Rory swirled the remaining whisky in her glass. She pulled her sleeve down, covering the scar on her wrist. "People change, Silas. We get older. We get bruised." "Some bruises don't come from the outside." She didn't respond. She couldn't. To speak about Evan would be to let him win, to give oxygen to the fear that had driven her out of Cardiff and into this dim, anonymous city. She had run to London on Eva’s advice, seeking a fresh start, but she had just swapped one cage for another, albeit one with an open door. Silas tapped the silver ring against the counter. *Click. Click. Click.* "I remember when you were twelve," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "You climbed that massive oak in your garden because you wanted to see if you could spot the coast. You fell ten feet. Broke your arm. Didn't cry a single tear until your mother saw the blood." "I was stupid." "You were brave. There's a difference." "Bravery gets you hurt. Caution keeps you alive." Silas studied her face, his expression unreadable. He reached out, his hand hovering near hers for a fraction of a second before he pulled it back. The air between them crackled with the weight of the unsaid—the years of silence, the secrets they were both keeping, the realization that the people they remembered no longer existed. "So, delivery girl," he said, the corner of his mouth twitching in a ghost of a smile. "Do you deliver to local businesses?" "Depends on the order." "I have a request." He gestured toward the back of the bar, where a wall of old maps covered the passageway to the toilets. Or so it seemed. Rory knew a blind spot when she saw one. "Stay away from the bookshelf in the back room. It bites." "Noted." "And Rory?" She looked up, meeting his gaze. The hazel eyes were soft now, filled with a quiet regret that mirrored her own. "If you need a place that doesn't ask questions... you know where I am." "I live upstairs, Si. I think the questions already started." He chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. "Fair point. But the offer stands. You're not the only one hiding from the past." Rory finished her drink and slid the glass across the wood. The warmth had spread to her fingers, chasing away the chill of the rain. She stood up, zipping her fleece against the draft of the door opening behind her. "I'll keep that in mind." She turned to leave, the weight of his eyes on her back. She stopped at the doorway, her hand on the frame. "You should fix that sign," she said without turning around. "The buzz is annoying." "It keeps the rats away," he replied, his voice already fading as he moved to serve another customer. Rory stepped out into the London rain. The neon green sign flickered above her, casting a sickly glow on the wet pavement. She looked up at the dark windows of the flat above, then back at the opaque glass of the bar door. For the first time in seven years, the silence waiting for her upstairs didn't feel quite so heavy.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1309
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"single tear"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"silence"
2"reminder"
3"vibrated"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"traced"
7"stomach"
8"single tear"
9"unreadable"
10"warmth"
11"chill"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1302
ratio0.002
matches
0"Click. Click. Click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.38% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1007
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Cardiff2
Glenfiddich1
Rory11
Silas5
Evan1
London2
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1302
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.57
std20.7
cv0.843
sampleLengths
058
147
265
34
425
52
640
74
876
935
101
1137
1216
1345
1423
151
1610
1717
1835
1951
204
2143
2210
235
2447
258
2645
272
2812
2928
307
3161
3211
3350
343
356
368
3756
3823
394
4048
411
422
4321
4414
4510
4621
4740
485
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was getting"
64.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences109
ratio0.028
matches
0"It vibrated in her chest, pulling a memory from the archives of her childhood—card games in her father’s study, the scent of expensive cigars, and a man who laughed like thunder."
1"The ambient noise of the bar—the clinking of glasses, the murmur of conversation from a booth in the corner—seemed to fade into the background."
2"The air between them crackled with the weight of the unsaid—the years of silence, the secrets they were both keeping, the realization that the people they remembered no longer existed."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"young, vibrant operative she"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.027613412228796843
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006903353057199211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.94
std8.31
cv0.695
sampleLengths
023
119
216
36
416
53
622
713
87
921
1024
114
124
1321
142
159
1631
174
1822
1932
2022
2112
229
2314
241
2510
2627
2713
283
2912
309
314
323
331
3416
3515
368
371
3810
3912
405
413
4221
4311
446
4519
4626
474
4818
4921
45.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3302752293577982
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences71
matches
0"She hadn't intended to stop"
1"She needed noise."
2"She needed a crowd, even"
3"She unzipped her fleece, the"
4"She didn't look up."
5"She stared at the rows"
6"It vibrated in her chest,"
7"His hair, once a vivid"
8"He moved with a deliberation"
9"He turned back, the amber"
10"His hazel eyes met hers,"
11"His hand hovered over the"
12"It belonged to a different"
13"He leaned forward, planting both"
14"He looked older."
15"He tested the sound, rolling"
16"He pulled a rag from"
17"He gestured vaguely toward his"
18"He stopped wiping and looked"
19"His gaze traced the dark"
ratio0.507
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences71
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory shook her umbrella, sending"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"She hadn't intended to stop"
4"The flat above was empty,"
5"She needed noise."
6"She needed a crowd, even"
7"Rory slipped onto a stool"
8"The wood was cool under"
9"She unzipped her fleece, the"
10"The skin around it still"
11"She didn't look up."
12"She stared at the rows"
13"The voice was deep, gravel-edged,"
14"It vibrated in her chest,"
15"Rory’s head snapped up."
16"The man placing a coaster"
17"His hair, once a vivid"
18"He moved with a deliberation"
19"He turned back, the amber"
ratio0.958
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"To speak about Evan would"
ratio0.014
20.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory shook her umbrella, sending a spray of cold water across the pavement before stepping inside The Raven's Nest."
1"It vibrated in her chest, pulling a memory from the archives of her childhood—card games in her father’s study, the scent of expensive cigars, and a man who lau…"
2"His hair, once a vivid auburn, was now streaked with heavy grey, tied back in a loose queue that did little to hide the lines etched deep around his mouth and e…"
3"He moved with a deliberation that bordered on painful, favouring his left leg as he turned to grab a bottle of Glenfiddich."
4"It belonged to a different girl, a girl who wore blazers and debated precedent, a girl who hadn't learned to sleep with a knife under her pillow."
5"The sharp intelligence in his eyes had calcified into something wary, assessing threats that weren't there."
6"Rory took a drink, the whisky burning a path down her throat, settling warm in her stomach."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory picked up, the liquid trembling slightly"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.4042%