| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "single tear" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tended to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1302 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1007 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Glenfiddich | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Silas | 5 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 2 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.954 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1302 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 24.57 | | std | 20.7 | | cv | 0.843 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | |
| 64.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "It vibrated in her chest, pulling a memory from the archives of her childhood—card games in her father’s study, the scent of expensive cigars, and a man who laughed like thunder." | | 1 | "The ambient noise of the bar—the clinking of glasses, the murmur of conversation from a booth in the corner—seemed to fade into the background." | | 2 | "The air between them crackled with the weight of the unsaid—the years of silence, the secrets they were both keeping, the realization that the people they remembered no longer existed." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1014 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "young, vibrant operative she" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.027613412228796843 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006903353057199211 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 11.94 | | std | 8.31 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 45.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3302752293577982 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't intended to stop" | | 1 | "She needed noise." | | 2 | "She needed a crowd, even" | | 3 | "She unzipped her fleece, the" | | 4 | "She didn't look up." | | 5 | "She stared at the rows" | | 6 | "It vibrated in her chest," | | 7 | "His hair, once a vivid" | | 8 | "He moved with a deliberation" | | 9 | "He turned back, the amber" | | 10 | "His hazel eyes met hers," | | 11 | "His hand hovered over the" | | 12 | "It belonged to a different" | | 13 | "He leaned forward, planting both" | | 14 | "He looked older." | | 15 | "He tested the sound, rolling" | | 16 | "He pulled a rag from" | | 17 | "He gestured vaguely toward his" | | 18 | "He stopped wiping and looked" | | 19 | "His gaze traced the dark" |
| | ratio | 0.507 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign buzzed" | | 1 | "Rory shook her umbrella, sending" | | 2 | "The air inside smelled of" | | 3 | "She hadn't intended to stop" | | 4 | "The flat above was empty," | | 5 | "She needed noise." | | 6 | "She needed a crowd, even" | | 7 | "Rory slipped onto a stool" | | 8 | "The wood was cool under" | | 9 | "She unzipped her fleece, the" | | 10 | "The skin around it still" | | 11 | "She didn't look up." | | 12 | "She stared at the rows" | | 13 | "The voice was deep, gravel-edged," | | 14 | "It vibrated in her chest," | | 15 | "Rory’s head snapped up." | | 16 | "The man placing a coaster" | | 17 | "His hair, once a vivid" | | 18 | "He moved with a deliberation" | | 19 | "He turned back, the amber" |
| | ratio | 0.958 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "To speak about Evan would" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory shook her umbrella, sending a spray of cold water across the pavement before stepping inside The Raven's Nest." | | 1 | "It vibrated in her chest, pulling a memory from the archives of her childhood—card games in her father’s study, the scent of expensive cigars, and a man who lau…" | | 2 | "His hair, once a vivid auburn, was now streaked with heavy grey, tied back in a loose queue that did little to hide the lines etched deep around his mouth and e…" | | 3 | "He moved with a deliberation that bordered on painful, favouring his left leg as he turned to grab a bottle of Glenfiddich." | | 4 | "It belonged to a different girl, a girl who wore blazers and debated precedent, a girl who hadn't learned to sleep with a knife under her pillow." | | 5 | "The sharp intelligence in his eyes had calcified into something wary, assessing threats that weren't there." | | 6 | "Rory took a drink, the whisky burning a path down her throat, settling warm in her stomach." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory picked up, the liquid trembling slightly" | | 1 | "he said, his voice dropping an octave" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |