Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2DREZJG25XNZ5QZZTYD7

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant under her shirt, feeling the faint warmth press against her ribs. The deep crimson gem throbbed a heartbeat, as if listening for something beyond the park’s familiar hum. Nyx hovered at the edge of the clearing, their violet eyes flickering like candlelight caught in a draft. A soft whisper drifted from them, carried on a wind that seemed to bend around the ancient oak stones. “It feels like the world is holding its breath,” Nyx murmured, voice barely louder than rustling leaves. Aurora’s gaze lingered on the stones, each one a smooth, dark monolith etched with runes that pulsed faintly under the moon’s silver. She traced a finger over a rune, the skin of her wrist brushing the scar that curved like a crescent moon on her left wrist. The scar tingled, a reminder of a childhood accident that once stole her breath. “Stone circles never lie,” Isolde said, stepping into the glow of the wildflowers that seemed to bloom in perpetual spring. Her silver hair caught the moonlight, making her appear as a river of light. She spoke in a rhythm that felt like riddles, each word a puzzle piece. “The veil thins where the moon kisses the earth, and the night watches the unseen.” Aurora tilted her head, eyes bright blue reflecting the amber sky above. “What do you see, Isolde?” Isolde smiled, a faint curve that never touched her eyes. “A doorway wrapped in scent, a breath that smells of rain on stone. Follow the scent, and the path will reveal itself.” The air shifted, and a low hum rose from the ground, resonating through the soles of Aurora’s shoes. She could hear the faint clink of silver, like distant bells, and the subtle rustle of leaves that seemed to whisper secrets. Nyx slipped between the stones, their shadowy form dissolving into darkness, then coalescing again as if testing the limits of the space. “My foot lands on nothing, yet I feel the earth,” Nyx said, the words barely forming a ripple in the air. Aurora’s pulse quickened, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying, a soft red flare that painted her cheekbones. She reached for the Fae‑Forged Blade tucked in her satchel, its moonsilver surface cold to the touch. The dagger sang a faint note as she unsheathed it, a sound like a distant wind chime. “The blade sings in the night,” Isolde observed, eyes never leaving the ancient stones. “It knows the walls that bind worlds.” Aurora angled the dagger toward a low wall of vines that twisted around a stone archway. The vines shivered under the blade’s edge, parting like curtains. A narrow passage opened, revealing a tunnel of violet light that pulsed with the same faint glow as Nyx’s eyes. “The Veil is thin here,” Nyx whispered, voice echoing off the unseen walls. “You can see the seam between worlds.” A low, resonant hum filled the tunnel, a sound that seemed to vibrate through the bones. Aurora felt the cool breath of the tunnel on her face, a scent of ozone and wet stone. The Heartstone pulsed in rhythm, a heartbeat syncing with the tunnel’s song. “Do we go deeper?” Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the strange feeling that crawled up her spine. Isolde’s gaze fixed on the violet light, the lavender mist of her eyes shifting like liquid. “The path chooses the seeker. The seeker must choose the path.” Nyx drifted forward, their form flickering between solid and mist. Their outline blurred as they entered the tunnel, leaving behind a faint trail of violet light that lingered like a memory. The tunnel widened into a cavern, walls lined with crystals that refracted the violet glow into cascades of color. The floor was covered in a carpet of moss that glowed faintly, each blade pulsing with a soft green light. In the center stood a pool of water, still as glass, reflecting the swirling colors above. Aurora knelt beside the pool, her reflection merging with the strange light. She could see the faint outline of a doorway beyond the water, a portal framed by twisting vines and blooming nightflowers that emitted a perfume of sweet decay. “The portal… it looks like a mouth waiting to be fed,” Isolde mused, her voice a lyrical lilt that seemed to echo off the cavern walls. Nyx’s form dissolved into mist, drifting over the water’s surface, rippling the reflection. “The mouth opens for those who carry the heart that beats with flame.” Aurora lifted the Heartstone, the crimson gem now glowing a brighter scar, casting a warm light across the pool. The water trembled, and a ripple spread outward, distorting the reflections until a figure emerged—a silhouette of a man with a crown of thorns, his eyes hollow yet burning. “Prince Belphegor,” Nyx whispered, the name hanging in the air like a warning. “He watches the feast of gluttony.” Isolde’s hand brushed a wildflower that grew along the cavern wall, its petals shimmering with an inner luminescence. “He feeds on those who linger too long, who sip the excess without restraint.” Aurora felt the weight of the dagger in her hand, its cold bite a reminder of the Fae Courts’ promise. She pressed the blade against the pool’s edge, the metal humming in response, sending a crack of light across the cavern. “The blade can cut through wards,” Aurora said, her voice low, “but can it cut the hunger that drives him?” Nyx shifted, their form becoming more solid, eyes glowing brighter. “The hunger is a fire that burns within the Veil. It fears nothing that burns brighter.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed, the scar on her wrist catching a sliver of the pool’s light. She drew the dagger, its moonsilver edge reflecting the violet and green cascade. With a swift motion, she sliced through the water’s surface, a thin line of light cutting the reflection. The water erupted, sending droplets into the air, each droplet catching the violet light and turning into a miniature star that fell toward the cavern ceiling. The stars settled, forming a constellations that seemed to rearrange themselves, mapping a route beyond the portal. “The stars have shifted,” Isolde noted, her voice a hushed chant. “They guide the seeker through the feast.” Nyx hovered near the portal, their shadow stretching across the vines. “The portal opens only for those who carry the heart of the feast and the blade of the night.” Aurora stepped toward the portal, the Heartstone’s glow now a steady ember against her chest. She could feel the pull of the portal, a magnetic tug that resonated with the scar on her wrist, as if the wound itself recognized the ancient magic. “The veil trembles,” Isolde warned, her eyes scanning the cavern’s perimeter. “Time folds inside, and outside it drips like rain.” Aurora glanced at Nyx, whose form flickered like a candle in a draft. “Do we cross together?” Nyx’s whisper rustled like leaves. “We walk as shadows, but the night is ours.” The portal’s vines quivered, parting further, revealing a hallway of endless banquet tables laden with dishes that glimmered with otherworldly hue. The scent of spices, sweet fruits, and something metallic hung in the air, a perfume that made Aurora’s stomach churn with both hunger and dread. The tables stretched beyond sight, each dish a masterpiece of culinary excess—golden loaves that seemed to pulse, crystal fruits that sang when bitten, and platters of meat that glistened with a sheen of fire. In the distance, a faint clattering of silverware echoed like distant bells. “Feast of gluttony,” Nyx murmured, voice a low hum that merged with the clatter. Isolde’s lips curled, a faint smile that never reached her eyes. “The feast never ends for those who never fill.” Aurora felt the pulse of the Heartstone sync with the rhythm of the banquet, a low thrum that echoed in her bones. She lifted the blade, its cold edge reflecting the banquet’s glow, and felt a surge of resolve. “The blade will carve a path,” Aurora said, her voice steady. “The heart will guide us.” She stepped onto the first table, the surface cool under her boots, the dishes shivering as if alive. The taste of a golden loaf brushed her tongue, sweet and heavy, a reminder of the sin of gluttony that ruled this realm. She swallowed, feeling the weight of the excess settle in her stomach, a heaviness that threatened to anchor her. Nyx drifted beside her, their form merging with the shadows cast by the lanterns that hung from unseen ceilings. “Do not let the feast fill you,” Nyx warned, their voice a whisper that brushed Aurora’s ear like a cool breeze. Aurora’s scar tingled, a reminder of past injury, and she pressed the dagger to the table’s edge. The metal sliced a thin slice of the golden loaf, and a bright pulse of violet light erupted, cutting through the veil of indulgence. “The veil cracks,” Isolde observed, eyes alight with a mixture of wonder and caution. “The feast cannot feast on the unyielding.” As the blade cut, the dessert shivered, turning to ash that drifted away like smoke. The banquet’s glow dimmed, and the sound of clattering silverware softened to a gentle hum. The portal beyond the tables seemed to widen, a dark maw awaiting the brave. Aurora glanced at her companions, the Heartstone’s ember glowing brighter against her chest, Nyx’s violet eyes reflecting the flickering light, Isolde’s silver hair catching the last of the violet cascade. “The path is clear,” Aurora said, her voice steady, “but the feast still lingers.” Nyx’s shape wavered, their whisper a promise. “We walk together, and the darkness will not swallow us.” Isolde raised her hand, a faint lavender light surrounding her fingers. “The stone does not speak of endings, only of journeys.” The trio stepped forward, their shadows merging into one as they approached the portal. The vines seemed to pulse, alive with a heartbeat that matched Aurora’s own. The air grew cooler, the scent of the banquet fading into a fresh, crisp breath of night. As they crossed the threshold, the Heartstone’s glow flared, casting a warm aura that seemed to push against the darkness. The portal’s edge rippled, a shimmering distortion that flickered like a mirage. Aurora felt the veil thin further, the boundary between worlds a thin sheet that trembled under their weight. Nyx’s form dissolved into a spray of violet particles, scattering into the night, leaving a faint trail that lingered like a memory. Isolde’s voice rose, a melodic chant that resonated with the cavern’s stone. “The veil watches, the night listens, the heart beats.” The group entered the realm beyond, the world shifting beneath their feet, the sound of distant drums echoing through unseen halls. The Heartstone’s pulse steadied, its ember a steadfast guide as they vanished into the unknown.
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1813
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1813
totalAiIsms51
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count5
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count4
8
word"pulse"
count6
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count2
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count2
14
word"weight"
count3
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"magnetic"
count1
17
word"resonated"
count2
18
word"scanning"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count2
20
word"quivered"
count1
21
word"otherworldly"
count1
22
word"stomach"
count2
23
word"churn"
count1
24
word"crystal"
count1
25
word"echoed"
count2
26
word"resolve"
count1
27
word"maw"
count1
28
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"throbbed"
2"familiar"
3"whisper"
4"etched"
5"pulsed"
6"traced"
7"reminder"
8"pulse"
9"quickened"
10"echoing"
11"lilt"
12"echo"
13"trembled"
14"weight"
15"could feel"
16"magnetic"
17"resonated"
18"scanning"
19"flickered"
20"quivered"
21"otherworldly"
22"stomach"
23"churn"
24"crystal"
25"echoed"
26"resolve"
27"maw"
28"wavered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences93
matches
0"a surge of resolve"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1811
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1494
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone9
Pendant1
Aurora24
Blade1
Nyx19
Isolde13
Fae2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Blade"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"as if listening for something beyond the park’s familiar hum"
1"wind that seemed to bend around the ancient oak stones"
2"wildflowers that seemed to bloom in perpetual spring"
3"felt like riddles, each word a puzzle p"
4"leaves that seemed to whisper secrets"
5"as if testing the limits of the space"
6"sound that seemed to vibrate through the bones"
7"lilt that seemed to echo off the cavern walls"
8"constellations that seemed to rearrange themselves, mapping a route beyond the portal"
9"loaves that seemed to pulse, crystal fruits that sang when bitten, and platters of meat that glistened with a sheen of fire"
10"aura that seemed to push against the darkness"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1811
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
84.25% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean32.93
std14.65
cv0.445
sampleLengths
074
117
261
348
415
517
632
762
821
949
1021
1146
1220
1346
1418
1527
1631
1755
1840
1926
2026
2148
2219
2332
2441
2520
2626
2746
2843
2918
3030
3143
3220
3317
3414
3546
3646
3714
3820
3939
4016
4160
4240
4341
4421
4544
4630
4714
4817
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs245
matches(empty)
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences114
ratio0.018
matches
0"The water trembled, and a ripple spread outward, distorting the reflections until a figure emerged—a silhouette of a man with a crown of thorns, his eyes hollow yet burning."
1"The tables stretched beyond sight, each dish a masterpiece of culinary excess—golden loaves that seemed to pulse, crystal fruits that sang when bitten, and platters of meat that glistened with a sheen of fire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount839
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025029797377830752
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007151370679380214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
85.90% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean15.89
std5.79
cv0.365
sampleLengths
020
117
218
319
417
522
625
714
820
914
1014
1115
1212
135
1410
1522
1618
1722
1822
1921
2015
2117
2217
2314
247
2516
2610
2720
2813
297
3016
3118
3212
3318
3416
3511
3610
3721
3819
3920
4016
4112
4228
4326
4413
4513
4619
4729
4813
496
36.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.20175438596491227
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences93
matches
0"She traced a finger over"
1"Her silver hair caught the"
2"She spoke in a rhythm"
3"She could hear the faint"
4"She reached for the Fae‑Forged"
5"Their outline blurred as they"
6"She could see the faint"
7"She pressed the blade against"
8"She drew the dagger, its"
9"She could feel the pull"
10"She lifted the blade, its"
11"She stepped onto the first"
12"She swallowed, feeling the weight"
ratio0.14
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences93
matches
0"Aurora slipped the silver chain"
1"The deep crimson gem throbbed"
2"Nyx hovered at the edge"
3"A soft whisper drifted from"
4"Nyx murmured, voice barely louder"
5"Aurora’s gaze lingered on the"
6"She traced a finger over"
7"The scar tingled, a reminder"
8"Isolde said, stepping into the"
9"Her silver hair caught the"
10"She spoke in a rhythm"
11"Aurora tilted her head, eyes"
12"Isolde smiled, a faint curve"
13"The air shifted, and a"
14"She could hear the faint"
15"Nyx slipped between the stones,"
16"Nyx said, the words barely"
17"Aurora’s pulse quickened, the Heartstone’s"
18"She reached for the Fae‑Forged"
19"The dagger sang a faint"
ratio0.946
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount22
matches
0"The deep crimson gem throbbed a heartbeat, as if listening for something beyond the park’s familiar hum."
1"She traced a finger over a rune, the skin of her wrist brushing the scar that curved like a crescent moon on her left wrist."
2"She spoke in a rhythm that felt like riddles, each word a puzzle piece."
3"She could hear the faint clink of silver, like distant bells, and the subtle rustle of leaves that seemed to whisper secrets."
4"Nyx slipped between the stones, their shadowy form dissolving into darkness, then coalescing again as if testing the limits of the space."
5"Aurora’s pulse quickened, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying, a soft red flare that painted her cheekbones."
6"She could see the faint outline of a doorway beyond the water, a portal framed by twisting vines and blooming nightflowers that emitted a perfume of sweet decay…"
7"Isolde’s hand brushed a wildflower that grew along the cavern wall, its petals shimmering with an inner luminescence."
8"Nyx shifted, their form becoming more solid, eyes glowing brighter."
9"The water erupted, sending droplets into the air, each droplet catching the violet light and turning into a miniature star that fell toward the cavern ceiling."
10"The stars settled, forming a constellations that seemed to rearrange themselves, mapping a route beyond the portal."
11"She could feel the pull of the portal, a magnetic tug that resonated with the scar on her wrist, as if the wound itself recognized the ancient magic."
12"The portal’s vines quivered, parting further, revealing a hallway of endless banquet tables laden with dishes that glimmered with otherworldly hue."
13"The scent of spices, sweet fruits, and something metallic hung in the air, a perfume that made Aurora’s stomach churn with both hunger and dread."
14"The tables stretched beyond sight, each dish a masterpiece of culinary excess—golden loaves that seemed to pulse, crystal fruits that sang when bitten, and plat…"
15"She stepped onto the first table, the surface cool under her boots, the dishes shivering as if alive."
16"She swallowed, feeling the weight of the excess settle in her stomach, a heaviness that threatened to anchor her."
17"Aurora glanced at her companions, the Heartstone’s ember glowing brighter against her chest, Nyx’s violet eyes reflecting the flickering light, Isolde’s silver …"
18"As they crossed the threshold, the Heartstone’s glow flared, casting a warm aura that seemed to push against the darkness."
19"The portal’s edge rippled, a shimmering distortion that flickered like a mirage."
20"Nyx’s form dissolved into a spray of violet particles, scattering into the night, leaving a faint trail that lingered like a memory."
21"Isolde’s voice rose, a melodic chant that resonated with the cavern’s stone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Nyx murmured, voice barely louder than rustling leaves"
1"Nyx said, the words barely forming a ripple in the air"
2"Isolde observed, eyes never leaving the ancient stones"
3"Nyx whispered, voice echoing off the unseen walls"
4"Nyx whispered, the name hanging in the air like a warning"
5"Aurora said, her voice low,"
6"Isolde noted, her voice a hushed chant"
7"Isolde warned, her eyes scanning the cavern’s perimeter"
8"Aurora said, her voice steady"
9"Aurora said, her voice steady,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde observed (observe)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde noted (note)"
5"Isolde warned (warn)"
6"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
7"Nyx warned (warn)"
8"Isolde observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.486
64.5356%