Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2DTFJN0X5CQKDVRWWWPM

Run Details

Duration:
5.4s
Cost:
$0.000412
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bike’s tyres crunched over frost-bitten gravel as Rory killed the engine. The silence that followed wasn’t natural—no distant traffic, no rustling leaves, just the hollow echo of her own breath. She swung a leg over the saddle and stood, stretching her back. The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that made her nose wrinkle. Richmond Park at night was supposed to be empty. But this wasn’t the park. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots twisting like fingers into the ground. She’d seen them before, but never like this—never with the moonlight catching their bark in a way that made them look *alive*. The pendant around her neck pulsed once, a slow, deliberate throb against her collarbone. She didn’t touch it. Didn’t need to. The warmth was answer enough. *Wrong. This is wrong.* She stepped forward, boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The grove should’ve been quiet. Instead, the air hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth. She exhaled sharply, watching her breath fog in front of her face. Too cold. Too still. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from her left, near the edge of the clearing where the trees pressed in like a crowd of silent witnesses. She turned her head slowly, scanning the darkness. Nothing moved. No wind. No animals. Just the weight of something watching. She reached into her jacket pocket, fingers brushing the cold metal of her phone. No signal. Of course. The grove had never played by human rules. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud, too brittle. The word hung in the air, unanswered. Another snap. Closer this time. Her pulse kicked up, but she forced herself to stay still. Panic was a luxury she couldn’t afford. She’d come here for a reason—because the pendant had led her, because the dreams had started again, because something in this place *wanted* her here. But now, standing in the heart of the grove, she wasn’t sure if she was the hunter or the prey. A whisper slithered through the trees. Not a voice. Not quite. More like the sound of leaves rubbing together, but shaped into words she almost understood. Her skin prickled. The pendant burned hotter, searing through her shirt. *Move.* She didn’t question the instinct. Rory turned on her heel and strode toward the standing stones, her boots crushing brittle undergrowth. The air thickened with each step, pressing against her like an unseen hand. The whispers followed, weaving between the trees, just out of reach. Then she saw it. A figure stood between two of the oaks, tall and too still. Not a person. Not an animal. Its shape flickered at the edges, like a candle flame in a draft. One moment it was there—a gaunt, elongated silhouette with too many joints—and the next, it was gone, leaving only the impression of hollow eyes and a mouth that stretched too wide. Rory’s breath hitched. She didn’t run. Running would mean admitting fear, and fear was a door she refused to open. “Show yourself,” she said, her voice steady despite the ice in her veins. The figure reappeared, closer this time. The whispers sharpened into a single, hissing word: *Laila.* Her blood turned to sludge. No one had called her that in years. Not since Cardiff. Not since *him.* The pendant flared, casting crimson light across the grove. The figure recoiled, its form writhing like smoke in a gale. The whispers became a shriek—a sound that wasn’t sound, that vibrated in her bones. Rory didn’t wait to see what happened next. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the earth. The grove twisted around her, paths shifting, trees bending to block her way. The pendant’s glow was her only guide, a beacon in the suffocating dark. Behind her, the thing gave chase. Not with footsteps. Not with breath. It moved like a shadow given form, slipping between the trees, always just out of sight. The air grew heavier, pressing down on her lungs. Her vision swam. She skidded to a halt at the edge of the clearing. The standing stones were gone. In their place stood a door—tall, arched, made of blackened wood that pulsed with the same crimson light as the pendant. It hadn’t been there before. She was sure of it. The whispers coiled around her, a serpent’s tongue against her ear. *You were always meant to come back.* Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. The metal seared her palm, but she didn’t let go. She knew what this was. A choice. A test. The door creaked open. Beyond it, darkness yawned. Not the absence of light, but something deeper, something that *hungered.* She took a step forward. The thing behind her screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
81.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount801
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount801
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"echo"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"throb"
5"warmth"
6"vibrated"
7"scanning"
8"weight"
9"pulse"
10"whisper"
11"searing"
12"flickered"
13"pounding"
14"beacon"
15"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords17
totalWords792
ratio0.021
matches
0"alive"
1"Wrong. This is wrong."
2"wanted"
3"Move."
4"Laila."
5"him."
6"You were always meant to come back."
7"hungered."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount789
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Park1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
73.74% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.263
wordCount792
matches
0"Not the absence of light, but something deeper, something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean24
std20.06
cv0.836
sampleLengths
058
114
262
34
443
53
646
726
815
95
1063
116
1231
131
1445
154
1662
1720
1813
1914
201
2119
2234
2344
2440
2547
2611
277
2825
294
3015
315
325
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences98
ratio0.071
matches
0"The silence that followed wasn’t natural—no distant traffic, no rustling leaves, just the hollow echo of her own breath."
1"She’d seen them before, but never like this—never with the moonlight catching their bark in a way that made them look *alive*."
2"Instead, the air hummed—a low, resonant note that vibrated in her teeth."
3"She’d come here for a reason—because the pendant had led her, because the dreams had started again, because something in this place *wanted* her here."
4"One moment it was there—a gaunt, elongated silhouette with too many joints—and the next, it was gone, leaving only the impression of hollow eyes and a mouth that stretched too wide."
5"The whispers became a shriek—a sound that wasn’t sound, that vibrated in her bones."
6"In their place stood a door—tall, arched, made of blackened wood that pulsed with the same crimson light as the pendant."
92.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount798
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"over frost-bitten gravel"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.041353383458646614
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006265664160401002
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean8.08
std6
cv0.742
sampleLengths
012
119
212
315
49
55
614
722
814
94
103
115
121
133
1410
155
1612
1712
182
192
203
212
2224
238
242
252
262
276
2814
292
302
318
328
337
342
353
3611
377
3825
3920
406
413
422
4315
443
458
461
475
4816
4913
44.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3469387755102041
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead, the air hummed—a low,"
1"Just the weight of something"
2"More like the sound of"
3"Then she saw it."
ratio0.048
99.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences83
matches
0"She swung a leg over"
1"She’d seen them before, but"
2"She didn’t touch it."
3"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
4"She exhaled sharply, watching her"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"She reached into her jacket"
7"Her voice sounded too loud,"
8"Her pulse kicked up, but"
9"She’d come here for a"
10"Her skin prickled."
11"She didn’t question the instinct."
12"Its shape flickered at the"
13"She didn’t run."
14"she said, her voice steady"
15"Her blood turned to sludge."
16"She turned and ran, her"
17"It moved like a shadow"
18"Her vision swam."
19"She skidded to a halt"
ratio0.301
86.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences83
matches
0"The bike’s tyres crunched over"
1"The silence that followed wasn’t"
2"She swung a leg over"
3"The air smelled of damp"
4"Richmond Park at night was"
5"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
6"She’d seen them before, but"
7"The pendant around her neck"
8"She didn’t touch it."
9"The warmth was answer enough."
10"This is wrong.*"
11"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
12"The grove should’ve been quiet."
13"She exhaled sharply, watching her"
14"A twig snapped."
15"The sound had come from"
16"She turned her head slowly,"
17"She reached into her jacket"
18"The grove had never played"
19"Her voice sounded too loud,"
ratio0.747
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The silence that followed wasn’t natural—no distant traffic, no rustling leaves, just the hollow echo of her own breath."
1"The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that made her nose wrinkle."
2"One moment it was there—a gaunt, elongated silhouette with too many joints—and the next, it was gone, leaving only the impression of hollow eyes and a mouth tha…"
3"The grove twisted around her, paths shifting, trees bending to block her way."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the ice in her veins"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7251%