Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2FA72VMJNTKEPFAZH2DV

Run Details

Duration:
9.9s
Cost:
$0.000544
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest sign flickered like a dying ember against the damp Soho pavement. Rory Carter pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and old wood wrapping around her like a familiar coat. She’d been here a hundred times before—delivering takeaway orders, slipping in for a quick pint after a long shift—but tonight felt different. The air hummed with something she couldn’t name, a current just beneath the surface. She slid onto a stool at the bar, the leather cracked and worn beneath her palms. Silas Blackwood stood at the other end, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. His back was to her, the grey-streaked auburn of his hair catching the dim light. For a second, she hesitated. Then— “You’re late.” His voice cut through the murmur of the bar, low and rough as gravel. Rory’s fingers stilled on the counter. She hadn’t even seen him turn. “By five minutes,” she said, keeping her tone light. “And I’m not here for a lecture.” Silas set the glass down with a quiet *clink*. His hazel eyes flicked up, sharp as flint. “No. You’re here because you’re avoiding your flat.” She exhaled through her nose, a humourless laugh escaping. “You always did have a knack for stating the obvious.” He didn’t smile. Just studied her—the way her black hair fell straight past her shoulders, the way her left wrist twitched when she was lying. The crescent scar there, pale against her skin. She’d been seventeen the last time he’d seen it. “You’ve lost weight,” he said. “And you’ve lost your manners.” A beat. Then, the ghost of a smirk tugged at his mouth. “Fair.” He reached beneath the counter, pulled out a bottle of something amber and unlabelled. “Drink?” She should’ve said no. But the weight of the last few months pressed down on her—Evan’s voice still echoing in her skull, the way London had swallowed her whole after Cardiff. She nodded. Silas poured two fingers into a glass, slid it across the bar. The liquid burned going down, smooth and sharp all at once. Rory set the glass down harder than she meant to. “You look like hell,” he said. “Thanks.” “Not the compliment you think it is.” She dragged her thumb along the rim of the glass. “I know.” Silas leaned against the counter, arms crossed. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. “Last I heard, you were in Cardiff. Law school.” “Pre-law.” She corrected him automatically. “And I left.” “Why?” Because Evan had split her lip open the night before her final exams. Because Eva had shown up at her door with a train ticket and a look that said *get out now*. Because Rory had spent years pretending she was fine, and one day, she just wasn’t. She didn’t say any of that. “Change of scenery,” she lied. Silas’s gaze didn’t waver. “Bullshit.” The word hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory swirled the whiskey in her glass, watching the way it clung to the sides. “You always could spot a lie.” “Old habit.” He reached for the bottle again, topped her off. “You’re not the only one who’s changed.” She looked at him then—really looked. The lines around his eyes were deeper, the limp in his left leg more pronounced. The signet ring was still there, though. Always there. “You retired,” she said. “Something like that.” “MI6 let you go?” His laugh was a dry, humourless thing. “No one *lets* go in this line of work, Rory. You know that.” She did. She’d known it since she was fifteen, sneaking into his flat after school, listening to the stories he’d tell her—half-truths wrapped in cautionary tales. *This is what happens when you trust the wrong people. This is what happens when you stay too long.* “So what now?” she asked. “You run a bar and play at being a civilian?” His fingers tightened around the glass. “I run a bar. The rest is none of your business.” She should’ve dropped it. But the whiskey had loosened her tongue, and the weight of the last few years pressed down on her ribs. “You used to tell me everything.” “You used to listen.” The words landed like a punch. Rory set her glass down, the clink sharp in the quiet. “I *did* listen. I just didn’t—” She cut herself off. “Didn’t what?” *Didn’t want to end up like you.* The thought burned in her throat. She swallowed it down. Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “You think I don’t know what you’re running from?” Her fingers curled into fists. “You don’t know anything.” “Don’t I?” He leaned in, voice dropping. “You think I didn’t see the way you flinched when that bloke at the door brushed past you? You think I don’t recognise the look in your eyes when you walk into a room and check the exits first?” Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t realised she’d done it. Silas straightened, his expression unreadable. “You’re not the only one who’s had to learn how to survive, Rory.” The air between them thickened, charged with something unspoken. She wanted to ask him what he meant. Wanted to demand answers, to peel back the years and see what had really happened in Prague. But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she reached for her glass, drained the last of the whiskey. The burn grounded her. “Why’d you come back here?” Silas asked quietly. She set the glass down. “I didn’t have anywhere else to go.” For a long moment, neither of them spoke. The bar hummed around them—laughter from a corner booth, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of conversation. But in their little pocket of the world, it was just the two of them, the weight of time pressing down. Silas broke the silence first. “You’re staying upstairs?” She nodded. “Good.” He turned, reached beneath the counter, and pulled out a key. Slid it across the bar. “Back room’s still there if you need it.” Rory stared at the key. The metal was cold against her palm. “I don’t—” “Take it.” His voice left no room for argument. She pocketed the key, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. “Thanks.” Silas nodded, once. Then he turned, limping slightly as he moved down the bar to serve another customer. Rory watched him go, the weight of the key in her pocket like a promise. Or a warning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.043
86.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"weight"
count5
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"silence"
6"unreadable"
7"charged"
8"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords32
totalWords1089
ratio0.029
matches
0"clink"
1"get out now"
2"lets"
3"This is what happens when you trust the wrong people. This is what happens when you stay too long."
4"did"
5"Didn’t want to end up like you."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount842
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas10
Evan2
London1
Cardiff1
Eva1
Rory9
Prague1
Slid1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
6"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.906
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean18.78
std15.61
cv0.831
sampleLengths
075
151
22
326
416
525
619
742
85
95
1028
1133
1233
136
141
157
1612
1727
188
191
2048
216
225
235
2432
2518
2630
274
283
294
3020
3145
3215
3317
3430
354
3627
372
387
3910
4021
419
4246
439
4418
4541
4616
478
4812
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"been seventeen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences125
ratio0.056
matches
0"She’d been here a hundred times before—delivering takeaway orders, slipping in for a quick pint after a long shift—but tonight felt different."
1"Then—"
2"Just studied her—the way her black hair fell straight past her shoulders, the way her left wrist twitched when she was lying."
3"But the weight of the last few months pressed down on her—Evan’s voice still echoing in her skull, the way London had swallowed her whole after Cardiff."
4"She looked at him then—really looked."
5"She’d known it since she was fifteen, sneaking into his flat after school, listening to the stories he’d tell her—half-truths wrapped in cautionary tales."
6"The bar hummed around them—laughter from a corner booth, the clink of glasses, the low murmur of conversation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount851
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03407755581668625
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005875440658049354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean8.71
std6.12
cv0.703
sampleLengths
018
121
222
314
416
514
615
75
81
92
1014
116
126
139
147
159
168
178
189
1910
203
2122
228
239
245
255
262
2710
2815
291
304
3127
322
3312
3411
3510
366
371
387
3910
402
417
4211
439
445
453
461
4713
4820
4915
50.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.336
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just studied her—the way her"
1"Then, the ghost of a"
2"Instead, she reached for her"
3"Then he turned, limping slightly"
ratio0.049
68.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences82
matches
0"She’d been here a hundred"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"His back was to her,"
3"His voice cut through the"
4"She hadn’t even seen him"
5"she said, keeping her tone"
6"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
7"She exhaled through her nose,"
8"He didn’t smile."
9"She’d been seventeen the last"
10"He reached beneath the counter,"
11"She should’ve said no."
12"She dragged her thumb along"
13"She corrected him automatically"
14"She didn’t say any of"
15"He reached for the bottle"
16"She looked at him then—really"
17"His laugh was a dry,"
18"She’d known it since she"
19"His fingers tightened around the"
ratio0.378
63.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences82
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Rory Carter pushed through the"
2"She’d been here a hundred"
3"The air hummed with something"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"Silas Blackwood stood at the"
6"His back was to her,"
7"His voice cut through the"
8"Rory’s fingers stilled on the"
9"She hadn’t even seen him"
10"she said, keeping her tone"
11"Silas set the glass down"
12"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
13"She exhaled through her nose,"
14"He didn’t smile."
15"The crescent scar there, pale"
16"She’d been seventeen the last"
17"He reached beneath the counter,"
18"She should’ve said no."
19"Silas poured two fingers into"
ratio0.793
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Because Evan had split her"
1"Because Eva had shown up"
2"Because Rory had spent years"
ratio0.037
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned in, voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She corrected (correct)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
89.5110%