| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 623 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 623 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "porcelain" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "predator" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 616 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal nearby." | | 1 | "Don’t run." | | 2 | "Hel portal. Fae realm. This isn’t Evan." | | 3 | "Run." | | 4 | "Evan’s ghost." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 572 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 14 | | Evan | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.276 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.623 | | wordCount | 616 | | matches | | 0 | "Not fast, but deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 19.87 | | std | 12.04 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something else—ozone, like before a storm." | | 1 | "The Grove’s time distortion was real; an hour inside could be minutes outside." | | 2 | "A shape shifted in the corner of her eye—a deer, or something taller, watching." | | 3 | "It held a hand, not human—long, skeletal fingers ending in claws." | | 4 | "Aurora saw movement in the trees—shadows shifting, too fast." | | 5 | "Aurora saw the crescent scar on its wrist—a mark she’d seen in her nightmares." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 461 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.013015184381778741 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0021691973969631237 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 5.98 | | std | 3.6 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 40.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.30097087378640774 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 1 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 2 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 3 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 4 | "She’d been here ten minutes." | | 5 | "She touched it, expecting warmth." | | 6 | "She moved faster, boots crunching" | | 7 | "She didn’t look back." | | 8 | "She approached, senses razor-sharp." | | 9 | "It wasn’t a man." | | 10 | "It held a hand, not" | | 11 | "She didn’t run." | | 12 | "She raised her hand, palm" | | 13 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 14 | "It pulsed again, a warning." | | 15 | "She’d faced worse." | | 16 | "She’d survived that." | | 17 | "She’d survive this." | | 18 | "she said, her voice low" | | 19 | "She stumbled back, tripping over" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 5.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "TheGrove’s stones stood like petrified" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, alias Rory, alias" | | 2 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed faintly, a" | | 4 | "A moth, impossible in this" | | 5 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 6 | "The path wound deeper, moss-slick" | | 7 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 8 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 9 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 10 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 11 | "The moon, a pale coin," | | 12 | "The Grove’s time distortion was" | | 13 | "She’d been here ten minutes." | | 14 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, a" | | 15 | "She touched it, expecting warmth." | | 16 | "*Hel portal nearby.* Her breath" | | 17 | "Evan’s ghost, or something worse?" | | 18 | "She moved faster, boots crunching" | | 19 | "The stones loomed closer, their" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice low" | | 1 | "she yelled, but her legs wouldn’t move" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she screamed (scream)" | | 3 | "she yelled (yell)" | | 4 | "the figure hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |