Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2K2QZ06J0VGHYJ0CBSNS

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.007245
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain-slicked pavement caught the green neon from The Raven’s Nest, bleeding emerald streaks into the London gutters. Aurora shook her umbrella, the spray hitting the brickwork in a rhythmic splatter. She nudged the heavy oak door. Inside, the air tasted of cedar, old paper, and the sharp, medicinal bite of gin. Silas hunched over the bar, his silver signet ring tapping a slow cadence against a crystal tumbler. He looked up, his hazel eyes tracking her movement with the practiced alertness of a man who never truly retired. The door creaked again before the latch could fully catch. A man stepped in, shedding the damp chill like a second skin. He wore a charcoal wool coat that looked more expensive than Aurora’s flat. He scanned the room, his gaze snagging on the maps lining the walls before landing on the stool next to her. "This place hasn't changed its smell in thirty years." Aurora froze. That voice carried the gravel of a North Wales quarry, smoothed over by decades of expensive education and courtroom performance. She turned her head slowly. "Dad?" Brendan Carter paused, his hand halfway to the collar of his coat. He looked older, the lines around his eyes etched deep like fissures in granite, but his posture remained the rigid pillar she remembered from her childhood in Cardiff. He stared at her, the shoulder-length black hair, the delivery jacket dusted with flour from the Golden Empress, the way she gripped her glass. "Rory." He took the seat beside her. The wood groaned under his weight. Silas moved toward them, his limp dragging slightly on the floorboards behind the bar. He didn't ask questions. He merely set a clean glass down and waited. "A double Scotch. Neat," Brendan said. Silas poured. The amber liquid swirled. Brendan didn't touch it. He kept his eyes on the reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. "I spent three months looking for you after you left the university. Your mother stopped sleeping. She sat by the window in the kitchen until the sun came up, every single night for a year." The ice in Aurora’s drink shifted. "She knew where to find me if she really wanted to look. I sent the postcards from London. I told her I was safe." "Safe." Brendan finally turned his head, his gaze sweeping over her worn sleeves. "You were meant to be at the Inner Temple, Aurora. You had the highest marks in your year. You had a trajectory. Instead, I find you in a Soho dive, smelling of MSG and rain." Aurora leaned back, let the stool creak. "I smell like work. It’s a novel concept, I know. Not everyone gets to sit in a mahogany chair and decide whose life is worth a billable hour." Brendan winced, a tiny flicker of muscle in his jaw. "That venom was always your finest trait. It’s what would have made you a titan in the courtroom. You could dismantle an argument before the witness even took the stand. Now you waste it on your father in a room full of ghosts." She glanced at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, white against her pale skin. "I'm not wasting it. I’m using it to survive the conversation. Why are you here, Dad? You don't just happen to stumble into a bar in the back alleys of Soho on a Tuesday night." Brendan picked up his Scotch. He didn't drink. He just watched the light play through the glass. "I had a hearing at the Royal Courts. It ran late. I remembered Silas mentioned this place once, back when we were boys in the valley. I didn't think I’d actually find you here. I didn't think you’d still be hiding." "I'm not hiding. I live here." She pointed toward the ceiling. "Above the bar. It’s quiet. No one asks me for a legal brief. No one tells me I’m 'squandering my potential' because I’d rather deliver noodles than defend a landlord." "And Evan?" The name hung in the air like a foul odor. Silas, sensing the shift, moved to the far end of the bar to polish a glass he’d already cleaned twice. "He’s a ghost too," Aurora said, her voice dropping an octave. "One I managed to exorcise without your help." "You wouldn't let me help. I could have had him barred from the city. I could have broken him professionally, Rory. I have the reach." "You have a gavel. Not a sledgehammer. And I didn't want a legal solution to a visceral problem. I wanted out." Brendan finally took a sip of the Scotch. He closed his eyes as it burned down. "Your mother misses the girl who played the cello in the garden. She doesn't understand who this person is. This... delivery girl." "That girl died of boredom in a lecture hall three years ago," Aurora snapped. She stood up, her stool scraping harshly against the floor. "The woman standing here is the one who survived London on forty quid a week. She’s the one who learned how to navigate this city without a map or a trust fund. If you can’t look at me without seeing a disappointment, then finish your drink and go back to Cardiff." Brendan reached out, his hand hovering near her sleeve but never quite making contact. He looked at the signet ring on Silas’ hand, then back at his daughter. The rigid barrister seemed to deflate, the expensive wool of his coat suddenly looking too heavy for his frame. "I don't see a disappointment, Rory. I see my own stubbornness reflected back at me, and it’s terrifying. I spent my life building a path for you, never bothering to check if you wanted to walk it." "The path was a treadmill, Dad. I was running as fast as I could and staying in the same place." He looked around the room, at the maps of places Silas had likely bled in, at the black-and-white photos of men who didn't exist on any official record. "Is this what you wanted? This life of shadows and grease?" Aurora gripped the edge of the bar. "It’s mine. Every bit of it. The tired feet, the cold bike rides, the flat that leaks when it storms. It belongs to me. Not to the firm. Not to the Carter legacy." Brendan set the glass down. It was still half full. He stood up, his height momentarily dominating the small space, but his eyes lacked the fire they usually held in the courtroom. He looked at her, truly looked at her, noting the sharpness in her jaw and the way she didn't flinch under his scrutiny. "You look like your grandmother," he whispered. "She had that same look when she left the farm. She never went back, either." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a card, laying it on the wood near her hand. It wasn't his office card. It was a slip of paper with a handwritten phone number. "Your mother's private line. Not the house phone. Just hers. If you ever find that the rain is too much." Aurora didn't pick up the paper. She didn't move. "Tell her I’m okay, Dad." "I have been telling her that for three years," Brendan said, turning toward the door. "I just didn't believe it until ten minutes ago." He walked out, his limp nearly imperceptible, a mirror of the man behind the bar. The green neon flickered as the door shut, leaving the room in a momentary, pulsing darkness. Silas drifted back over. He took the half-empty Scotch and dumped it into the sink. "He’s got a heavy stride," the old man remarked, his voice like dry leaves. "Takes a lot of energy to carry that much regret around." Aurora picked up the slip of paper. She tucked it into her pocket, the edges sharp against her thumb. "He’s always liked the weight of it. Makes him feel like he’s accomplishing something." "And you?" She looked at her reflection in the darkened window, the green light turning her black hair into a shadowy halo. "I’m just trying to keep my head above water, Silas. I don't have time for regret. I have a shift in six hours." She turned away from the bar and headed toward the narrow staircase in the back. Each step creaked under her boots, a familiar, steady sound that echoed in the quiet of the Nest. Upstairs, the rain hammered against the glass, a constant, erratic reminder of the world outside, but down in the belly of the bar, the maps stayed still, and the ghosts remained silent. Aurora sat on her unmade bed, the smell of the bar still clinging to her skin. She pulled the paper from her pocket and smoothed it out on her knee. The handwriting was precise, the ink dark and unwavering. She stared at the digits until they blurred, until the green light from the street below faded into the grey smudge of a London dawn. The city was waking up. The Golden Empress would be prepping the fryers. The streets would fill with people who knew exactly where they were going and people who were desperately trying to forget where they’d been. Aurora stood, walked to the small kitchenette, and filled the kettle. The whistle of the steam cut through the silence of the flat, sharp and demanding. She poured the water into a chipped mug, the heat seeping into her palms. Through the floorboards, she heard the muffled sound of Silas moving furniture, the morning ritual of a man who lived in the gaps between the lines. She took a sip of the tea, the bitterness grounding her. The phone number sat on the counter. She didn't dial it. She didn't throw it away. She simply watched the steam rise and dissipate into the cold air of the room, a ghost of a conversation that wasn't finished, a bridge that was neither burnt nor crossed. Downstairs, the heavy oak door opened for the first delivery of the morning. The sound of life, messy and unscripted, rose up to meet her. Aurora set the mug down, pulled her hair back into a tight knot, and reached for her jacket. The world was waiting, and she had places to be.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:12:56.796Z" 2/19/2026, 12:12:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"navigate"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"crystal"
2"chill"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"potential"
8"navigate"
9"flickered"
10"familiar"
11"echoed"
12"reminder"
13"unwavering"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1718
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1054
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Brendan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London2
Aurora13
North1
Wales1
Carter1
Cardiff1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas7
Scotch3
Brendan10
persons
0"Nest"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
5"Brendan"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"North"
3"Wales"
4"Cardiff"
5"Golden"
globalScore0.883
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.582
wordCount1718
matches
0"neither burnt nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean29.12
std19.98
cv0.686
sampleLengths
088
156
29
327
41
564
61
739
86
923
1035
116
1224
1348
147
1528
1610
1743
1815
1935
2017
2141
2241
232
2430
2519
2625
2721
2816
2922
3075
3147
3237
3320
3428
3511
367
3733
3855
3922
4034
4120
429
435
4424
4531
4615
4725
4819
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
83.72% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was waking"
1"were going"
2"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences118
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount649
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.040061633281972264
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012326656394453005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean14.56
std9.8
cv0.673
sampleLengths
017
113
26
315
417
520
610
712
813
921
109
112
1220
135
141
1512
1628
1724
181
196
206
2114
224
239
246
252
264
274
2813
2935
306
3124
3213
3335
347
3528
3610
3743
3815
3935
405
413
429
4341
4411
4530
462
4710
4820
4911
38.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.23728813559322035
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences84
matches
0"She nudged the heavy oak"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"He wore a charcoal wool"
3"He scanned the room, his"
4"She turned her head slowly."
5"He looked older, the lines"
6"He stared at her, the"
7"He took the seat beside"
8"He didn't ask questions."
9"He merely set a clean"
10"He kept his eyes on"
11"She glanced at the crescent-shaped"
12"He didn't drink."
13"He just watched the light"
14"She pointed toward the ceiling"
15"He closed his eyes as"
16"She stood up, her stool"
17"He looked at the signet"
18"He looked around the room,"
19"It was still half full."
ratio0.452
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences84
matches
0"Aurora shook her umbrella, the"
1"She nudged the heavy oak"
2"Silas hunched over the bar,"
3"He looked up, his hazel"
4"The door creaked again before"
5"A man stepped in, shedding"
6"He wore a charcoal wool"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"That voice carried the gravel"
9"She turned her head slowly."
10"Brendan Carter paused, his hand"
11"He looked older, the lines"
12"He stared at her, the"
13"He took the seat beside"
14"The wood groaned under his"
15"Silas moved toward them, his"
16"He didn't ask questions."
17"He merely set a clean"
18"The amber liquid swirled."
19"Brendan didn't touch it."
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He scanned the room, his gaze snagging on the maps lining the walls before landing on the stool next to her."
1"Brendan reached out, his hand hovering near her sleeve but never quite making contact."
2"He looked around the room, at the maps of places Silas had likely bled in, at the black-and-white photos of men who didn't exist on any official record."
3"Each step creaked under her boots, a familiar, steady sound that echoed in the quiet of the Nest."
4"She simply watched the steam rise and dissipate into the cold air of the room, a ghost of a conversation that wasn't finished, a bridge that was neither burnt n…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice dropping an octave"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora snapped (snap)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.108
79.1821%