Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2KB5NK1WHY65CXMDAQPS

Run Details

Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.053376
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back with a sound like a breaking bone. I didn't bother checking the peephole. Eva had forgotten her keys again; she’d been texting me since her shift ended at the archives, lamenting the rain and the state of the Tube. If I didn't open up, she’d start kicking the wood, and the landlord downstairs—man possessed of a nose for trouble and a hatred for noise—would institute another rent hike. I swung the door wide. " You’d forget your own head if it wasn't—" The words died in my throat. It wasn't Eva. Lucien Moreau stood in the dimly lit hallway. The peeling beige wallpaper and the scent of cumin from the curry house downstairs should have made him look ridiculous. Instead, the tailored charcoal suit, the pristine white collar, and the ivory-handled cane resting in his gloved hand made the hallway look cheap. Unworthy. "Hello, Rory." His voice was a low purr, vibrating through the floorboards and straight up my shins. I slammed the door. Or I tried to. The tip of the cane, capped in silver, slid into the gap between the door and the frame. It didn't move fast, just precisely. I threw my weight against the wood, boots skidding on the cheap laminate flooring. "Go away, Lucien." "Rude." The door pushed back. Not hard. Just inexorable. Like a rising tide. "After I climbed all those stairs? The lift smells of urine and regret. I assumed you broke it to deter visitors." "Just this specific visitor." I gritted my teeth, digging my shoulder in. "How did you find me?" "You ordered takeout. Dumplings." The pressure on the door increased slightly. "Golden Empress? Really? Eating your own product is gauche, *ma chérie*." I slipped. The door flew open. Lucien didn't stumble. He simply stepped into the cramped hallway of Eva’s flat, filling the space with the scent of ozone and expensive leather. He looked around the chaotic living room—every surface buried under Eva’s occult research, stacks of dusty grimoires, and takeaway containers—with a look of mild distaste. "Quaint," he said. The singular amber eye glowed in the gloom, a stark contrast to the black void of his left eye. "It smells like wet dog and old magic." "It's a cat," I snapped, backing away until the back of my thighs hit the edge of Eva’s overcrowded desk. "And get out. I paid my debt." "Monetary debt, yes." Lucien shucked off his coat. He hung it on a pile of books as if it were a valet stand. "But we both know contracts in our world are rarely settled with just cash." "I’m not in the business anymore." "Just a delivery girl now?" He took a step forward. The silver tip of his cane tapped against the floor. *Click. Click.* "Wasting that sharp little mind running prawn crackers to tourists?" My heart hammered against my ribs. It wasn't fear, exactly. I’d survived Evan; I’d survived the streets of Cardiff. But Lucien was a different species of predator. He didn't break things; he acquired them. "I like the tips," I lied. "What do you want, Lucien? You don't come to Brick Lane for the scenery." He didn't answer immediately. He picked up a scroll from the sofa, inspecting the seal. "Tell me, does your friend Eva know she’s housing a fugitive? Or did you neglect to mention that the Court of Avaros has placed a bounty on your head?" The blood drained from my face. "That’s impossible. The artifact was returned." "Broken," he corrected. He dropped the scroll. It hit the floor with a heavy thud. "You returned it in pieces. The Duke was... displeased. He finds the fragmentation of his property to be a personal insult." "It was an accident." "Accidents are for children and amateurs." Lucien closed the distance between us. He moved with a supernatural grace, soundless despite the cane. "You are neither." I reached behind me, fingers scrabbling across the desk, searching for something heavy. A stapler. A paperweight. My hand brushed a ceramic mug of cold tea. "Don't," he warned softly. He was too close now. I could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the unnatural stillness of the black one. He radiated a cold heat, a paradoxical temperature that made the fine hairs on my arms stand up. "I’m not going back with you," I said, my voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding my veins. "I’m not working for the Court again." "No?" He tilted his head. He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near my face. I flinched, but he didn't strike. He traced the line of my jaw with a thumb, the leather soft against my skin. "A shame. You were my favorite investment." "I'm not an asset, Lucien." "Everything is an asset, Aurora. It’s simply a matter of depreciation." His gaze dropped to my left wrist, to the crescent-shaped scar peeking out from my sleeve. His thumb brushed over the pulse point there. It was racing. "You’re terrified." "I’m annoyed." "Liar." He smiled, revealing teeth that were slightly too sharp to be human. " You missed this. The adrenaline. The stakes. You’re bored, *petite*. You’re rotting in this flat, waiting for a life that will never fit you." I slapped his hand away. "I’d rather rot than be your pet human." Lucien laughed, a dry, dark sound. "Pet? No. Pets are for comfort. You are for... complications." A low growl rumbled from the top of the bookshelf. Ptolemy, Eva’s massive tabby, stared down at Lucien with slit pupils. The half-demon didn't even look up. "If you’re here to collect the bounty," I said, eyeing the cane where his hand rested near the concealed blade’s release, "just get on with it. I’ll make a mess on the carpet. Eva will kill you for that." "If I wanted to collect, you’d be bound and gagged in the boot of a car by now." He turned, pacing a small circle in the only clear patch of floor. "The Duke has sent trackers. Not the polite kind. Not the kind who knock." "And you?" "I am the intermission." He stopped, turning back to me. The playfulness vanished from his face, replaced by a crystalline hardness. "I told them I would handle you. That I would bring you in." "And when I refuse?" "Then they burn this building down with you inside." The air in the room seemed to vanish. I looked at the window. The rain lashed against the glass, blurring the streetlights of Brick Lane into smears of orange and red. "Eva..." "Is safe, provided she doesn't come home in the next hour," Lucien said. He checked a pocket watch—gold, intricate face. "Which gives us roughly four minutes to vacate the premises before the first wave arrives." "First wave?" I grabbed my jacket from the back of the chair. "You led them here?" "I delayed them here." He extended a hand toward the door. "We leave. Now. My car is around the corner." "I’m not getting in a car with you." "Aurora." His voice dropped, losing the affectation, becoming something ancient and tired. "Look at the window." I looked. Down on the street, through the rain-streaked glass, three figures stood under the glow of the curry house sign. They didn't move like people waiting for a table. They stood perfectly still, faces turned upward, looking straight at the third-floor window. Even from here, I could feel the malice radiating off them—a heavy, greasy feeling that coated the back of my throat. One of them stepped forward. The streetlight caught the edge of a blade—not steel, but something obsidian and jagged. "Hellhounds," I whispered. "In human skin," Lucien agreed. He moved to my side, his presence a sudden, solid wall against the horrors outside. "Shoddy disguises, really. The smell gives them away." I looked at him. "Why help me?" He adjusted his cufflinks, verifying the silver gleaming at his wrists. "Because you owe me, Aurora. And I never let a debt go unpaid." "I thought I paid it." "You paid the interest." He held out his hand again. This time, the cane was tucked under his arm, the blade handle accessible. "The principal is still outstanding." Glass shattered downstairs. A scream—human, terrified—ripped through the floorboards. "Time's up," Lucien said. He didn't wait for my answer. He grabbed my wrist—the scarred one—and yanked me toward the door. I grabbed my bag as I stumbled after him. "Ptolemy!" "The cat is smarter than you. He’s already gone." Lucien kicked the front door open. We burst into the hallway just as the stairwell door below exploded inward. The sound of heavy, wet boots thundered on the wooden steps. Two at a time. Fast. Lucien looked at me, his heterochromatic eyes blazing with a terrifying delight. "Run."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"The door pushed back [back]"
1"the door increased slightly [slightly]"
2"he warned softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.771
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.086
76.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"gleaming"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"thundered"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"weight"
2"chaotic"
3"gloom"
4"stark"
5"predator"
6"traced"
7"pulse"
8"racing"
9"crystalline"
10"intricate"
11"could feel"
12"gleaming"
13"shattered"
14"thundered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
78.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1464
ratio0.003
matches
0"ma chérie"
1"Click. Click."
2"petite"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount970
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Eva6
Moreau1
Lucien12
Evan1
Cardiff1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.881
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.683
wordCount1464
matches
0"not steel, but something obsidian"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean21.22
std15.82
cv0.746
sampleLengths
012
161
214
36
43
552
617
74
842
93
1034
1117
1222
136
1449
1530
1627
1737
186
1932
2034
2120
2244
2312
2436
254
2625
2726
284
2941
3024
3144
325
3340
342
3538
3613
3716
3827
3939
4045
412
4234
434
449
4531
461
4735
4816
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was racing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences153
ratio0.065
matches
0"Eva had forgotten her keys again; she’d been texting me since her shift ended at the archives, lamenting the rain and the state of the Tube."
1"If I didn't open up, she’d start kicking the wood, and the landlord downstairs—man possessed of a nose for trouble and a hatred for noise—would institute another rent hike."
2"He looked around the chaotic living room—every surface buried under Eva’s occult research, stacks of dusty grimoires, and takeaway containers—with a look of mild distaste."
3"I’d survived Evan; I’d survived the streets of Cardiff."
4"He didn't break things; he acquired them."
5"He checked a pocket watch—gold, intricate face."
6"Even from here, I could feel the malice radiating off them—a heavy, greasy feeling that coated the back of my throat."
7"The streetlight caught the edge of a blade—not steel, but something obsidian and jagged."
8"A scream—human, terrified—ripped through the floorboards."
9"He grabbed my wrist—the scarred one—and yanked me toward the door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount986
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02738336713995943
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010141987829614604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean9.57
std6.93
cv0.724
sampleLengths
012
16
226
329
45
59
66
73
88
920
1023
111
1217
134
144
1518
166
1714
183
195
202
212
224
2321
2412
255
2611
2711
282
294
303
3121
3225
333
3419
358
3620
377
388
3915
4014
416
4210
4310
441
4511
466
474
489
498
59.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.39869281045751637
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners61
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Instead, the tailored charcoal suit,"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences94
matches
0"I didn't bother checking the"
1"I swung the door wide."
2"It wasn't Eva."
3"His voice was a low"
4"I slammed the door."
5"It didn't move fast, just"
6"I threw my weight against"
7"I gritted my teeth, digging"
8"He simply stepped into the"
9"He looked around the chaotic"
10"I snapped, backing away until"
11"He hung it on a"
12"He took a step forward"
13"My heart hammered against my"
14"It wasn't fear, exactly."
15"I’d survived Evan; I’d survived"
16"He didn't break things; he"
17"He didn't answer immediately."
18"He picked up a scroll"
19"He dropped the scroll."
ratio0.596
7.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences94
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back"
1"I didn't bother checking the"
2"Eva had forgotten her keys"
3"I swung the door wide."
4"The words died in my"
5"It wasn't Eva."
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"The peeling beige wallpaper and"
8"His voice was a low"
9"I slammed the door."
10"The tip of the cane,"
11"It didn't move fast, just"
12"I threw my weight against"
13"The door pushed back"
14"I gritted my teeth, digging"
15"The pressure on the door"
16"The door flew open."
17"Lucien didn't stumble."
18"He simply stepped into the"
19"He looked around the chaotic"
ratio0.904
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"If I didn't open up,"
1"Even from here, I could"
ratio0.021
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He hung it on a pile of books as if it were a valet stand."
1"He radiated a cold heat, a paradoxical temperature that made the fine hairs on my arms stand up."
2"Even from here, I could feel the malice radiating off them—a heavy, greasy feeling that coated the back of my throat."
3"He adjusted his cufflinks, verifying the silver gleaming at his wrists."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I said, my voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding my veins"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
1"I lied (lie)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"he warned softly (warn)"
4"I whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.157
leniency0.314
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.171
80.6194%