| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The door pushed back [back]" | | 1 | "the door increased slightly [slightly]" | | 2 | "he warned softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.771 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.086 | |
| 76.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1478 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1478 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pristine" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "gleaming" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "thundered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1464 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "ma chérie" | | 1 | "Click. Click." | | 2 | "petite" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.14% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 970 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.881 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.683 | | wordCount | 1464 | | matches | | 0 | "not steel, but something obsidian" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 21.22 | | std | 15.82 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had forgotten her keys again; she’d been texting me since her shift ended at the archives, lamenting the rain and the state of the Tube." | | 1 | "If I didn't open up, she’d start kicking the wood, and the landlord downstairs—man possessed of a nose for trouble and a hatred for noise—would institute another rent hike." | | 2 | "He looked around the chaotic living room—every surface buried under Eva’s occult research, stacks of dusty grimoires, and takeaway containers—with a look of mild distaste." | | 3 | "I’d survived Evan; I’d survived the streets of Cardiff." | | 4 | "He didn't break things; he acquired them." | | 5 | "He checked a pocket watch—gold, intricate face." | | 6 | "Even from here, I could feel the malice radiating off them—a heavy, greasy feeling that coated the back of my throat." | | 7 | "The streetlight caught the edge of a blade—not steel, but something obsidian and jagged." | | 8 | "A scream—human, terrified—ripped through the floorboards." | | 9 | "He grabbed my wrist—the scarred one—and yanked me toward the door." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 986 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02738336713995943 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010141987829614604 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 9.57 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 59.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.39869281045751637 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 35.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the tailored charcoal suit," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "I didn't bother checking the" | | 1 | "I swung the door wide." | | 2 | "It wasn't Eva." | | 3 | "His voice was a low" | | 4 | "I slammed the door." | | 5 | "It didn't move fast, just" | | 6 | "I threw my weight against" | | 7 | "I gritted my teeth, digging" | | 8 | "He simply stepped into the" | | 9 | "He looked around the chaotic" | | 10 | "I snapped, backing away until" | | 11 | "He hung it on a" | | 12 | "He took a step forward" | | 13 | "My heart hammered against my" | | 14 | "It wasn't fear, exactly." | | 15 | "I’d survived Evan; I’d survived" | | 16 | "He didn't break things; he" | | 17 | "He didn't answer immediately." | | 18 | "He picked up a scroll" | | 19 | "He dropped the scroll." |
| | ratio | 0.596 | |
| 7.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked back" | | 1 | "I didn't bother checking the" | | 2 | "Eva had forgotten her keys" | | 3 | "I swung the door wide." | | 4 | "The words died in my" | | 5 | "It wasn't Eva." | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 7 | "The peeling beige wallpaper and" | | 8 | "His voice was a low" | | 9 | "I slammed the door." | | 10 | "The tip of the cane," | | 11 | "It didn't move fast, just" | | 12 | "I threw my weight against" | | 13 | "The door pushed back" | | 14 | "I gritted my teeth, digging" | | 15 | "The pressure on the door" | | 16 | "The door flew open." | | 17 | "Lucien didn't stumble." | | 18 | "He simply stepped into the" | | 19 | "He looked around the chaotic" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "If I didn't open up," | | 1 | "Even from here, I could" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He hung it on a pile of books as if it were a valet stand." | | 1 | "He radiated a cold heat, a paradoxical temperature that made the fine hairs on my arms stand up." | | 2 | "Even from here, I could feel the malice radiating off them—a heavy, greasy feeling that coated the back of my throat." | | 3 | "He adjusted his cufflinks, verifying the silver gleaming at his wrists." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I said, my voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding my veins" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "I lied (lie)" | | 2 | "he corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "he warned softly (warn)" | | 4 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Lucien agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.157 | | leniency | 0.314 | | rawRatio | 0.545 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |