Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX2N5AGBBRWP0SGSA2RRRS

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Duration:
22.5s
Cost:
$0.011072
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement like a drumroll before the drop. Neon signs flickered in smeared halos across wet asphalt, their reflections trembling in oily puddles. Harlow Quinn sprinted through the deluge, her trench coat flaring behind her, water surging upward with each stride. Her breath came in tight bursts, sharp and controlled despite the ache in her ribs. The figure ahead—short coat, dark hood pulled low—veered sharply into an alley between two shuttered kebab shops, boots splashing through drainage grates. She didn’t hesitate. Quinn hit the alley’s mouth at full speed, shoulders hunched against the downpour, one hand braced against the brick wall as she pivoted. The scent of damp brick, fried grease, and something sharper—iron, maybe blood—clung to the air. Her fingers brushed the grip of her sidearm, but she didn’t draw. Not yet. Not in the open. Not with civilians potentially nearby. The suspect ducked between a rusted fire escape and a dumpster, then vanished down a narrow service stairwell that dropped beneath street level. Quinn slowed just long enough to peer over the railing. A metal door stood slightly ajar at the bottom, its paint long eaten by rust. A thin, pulsing blue light pulsed from within. No sound came up except the drip of water, the hum of distant electricity. She took the steps two at a time, her worn boots ringing on the metal. At the threshold, she pressed her back to the wall, drew her weapon, and nudged the door open with her boot. Empty. But warm. That was the first thing she noticed—the temperature. Below freezing outside, but here, the air was thick and humid, tinged with incense and ozone. The corridor stretched ten feet before opening into a dim, cavernous space lined with stone arches. The floor had been paved in cracked black tiles, worn smooth by centuries of unseen traffic. To her right, a skeletal escalator rose into darkness, its steps seized by corrosion. Quinn stepped inside, lowering her gun but keeping her finger along the trigger guard. Her eyes adjusted slowly. Stalls. Rows of them, crammed together under low-hanging paper lanterns that glowed amber and violet. Figures moved between them—hooded, cloaked, some with features too sharp, too still to be human. A woman with silver eyes bartered over a vial of swirling fog. A man with bark-like skin haggled for a bundle of dried feathers. She knew this place. She’d seen the sketches in Morris’s notebook. Pages filled with symbols she couldn’t read, scribbled warnings: *The Market moves. Never the same twice. They know when you’re not one of them.* The Veil Market. Real, then. Not madness. Not hallucination. And the man she’d chased—slim build, dark gloves, a patch of scarred skin above his collar—was already slipping toward a covered stall near the back, where a woman with chalk-white hair weighed something small and pulsing on a brass scale. Quinn moved fast, cutting between stalls. A vendor selling bottled shadows hissed as she passed. Another—a hunched figure in a moth-eaten overcoat—offered her a cracked monocle that “sees through lies.” She ignored them. Her pulse thudded in her jaw. The air grew heavier, thicker, as if she were wading through syrup. She caught a glimpse of the suspect’s sleeve vanishing behind a curtain of hanging beads. Then a hand caught her wrist. Not rough. Firm, warm. She spun, gun up, but stopped short. A man. Olive skin glistening under the lantern light, dark curls damp at the temples. A silver medallion hung at his throat—St. Christopher. He didn’t flinch from the barrel pointed at his face. “You don’t belong here,” he said, voice low and accented. “Then I suggest you let go.” She didn’t lower the weapon. His eyes flicked to her wrist—her watch. The leather strap worn through in two places, the face cracked but still ticking. Then back to her. “You’re Quinn. Harlow Quinn.” She froze. “Who the hell are you?” “Tomás Herrera. I knew your partner.” The words hit like a gut punch. Her finger twitched on the trigger. “Morris?” He nodded once. “He came here, too. Same night he disappeared.” A flicker behind her. The beads clattered. She turned just in time to see the suspect pull open a hatch in the floor and vanish. Quinn lunged forward, but Herrera caught her arm again. “Don’t.” “I’ve got a suspect—” “You’ve got a trap.” She stared at the open hatch. A ladder descended into darkness. No light below. No sound. “Morris went down there?” she asked. Herrera’s expression didn’t change, but his grip tightened. “Yes. He didn’t come back up.” “Then it’s even more important I go.” “You don’t understand what’s down there. This market—it’s not just a place. It’s alive. It watches. It remembers. And it *hates* intruders with badges.” Her jaw clenched. The watch on her wrist ticked too loud in the silence between them. “I don’t care what it hates,” she said. “That man was meeting someone. Probably the same someone who sold Morris the vial of ash he was carrying when they found his coat. The one they said was ‘too degraded’ to test.” Herrera’s eyes widened slightly. “You still have that?” “No. Evidence locker. But I remember the symbol on the pouch.” She reached into her coat, pulled out a folded square of notepad paper. Unfolded it. A crude sketch: a circle, three jagged lines, a crescent beneath. He exhaled sharply. “That’s a death sigil. Used in binding rituals. If Morris had that, he wasn’t here to investigate. He was here to *die*.” Quinn stared at him. “Then why didn’t anyone tell me?” “Because no one believed you’d survive knowing.” A low rumble shivered through the floor. The lanterns dimmed. From the edges of the market, figures turned their heads. Not toward her—but toward the hatch. Something was coming up. Herrera yanked her back as the ladder trembled. A hand emerged—skeletal, wrapped in blackened cloth. Then another. A figure climbed slowly into view, robed and faceless beneath a deep cowl. It carried a lantern with no flame, its glass filled with what looked like drowned stars. The market went silent. Herrera’s voice was urgent now, low against her ear. “That’s a Veil Warden. They don’t come out unless someone breaks the rules. Or unless they’re summoned.” Quinn didn’t move. Her gun stayed trained on the figure. “That man—I saw him drop something into the hatch. Before he climbed down.” “A token,” Herrera said. “Probably a bone token. Only way in. Without it, the Market ejects you.” “Then I’ll take one.” “You kill for it, you steal it, or you die trying. And even then—this place won’t let just anyone pass.” She holstered her weapon, reached instead for the switchblade in her belt. “I don’t need permission.” “You need *sense*.” He blocked her path as she stepped toward the hatch. “One more thing. Morris wasn’t just your partner. He was my friend. I treated his wounds when no one else would. And when he came here, I told him not to go down. He didn’t listen.” Quinn met his gaze. “Then help me do better.” For a long moment, he said nothing. Then, slowly, he reached beneath his shirt and pulled off the St. Christopher medallion. “Take it,” he said. “It won’t protect you from what’s down there. But it might remind you why you came.” She hesitated. Took it. Cold against her palm. She stepped past him, crouched at the hatch. The Warden stood motionless, watching. Without looking back, she gripped the top rung. Lowered herself into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count3
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulsed"
2"tinged"
3"pulse"
4"glistening"
5"flicked"
6"flicker"
7"jaw clenched"
8"silence"
9"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"know"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords18
totalWords1256
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Market moves. Never the same twice. They know when you’re not one of them."
1"hates"
2"die"
3"sense"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"For a long moment, he said nothing."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount945
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Quinn9
Morris1
Market2
Veil1
St2
Herrera6
Unfolded1
Warden1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Market"
3"Herrera"
4"Warden"
places
0"St"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like drowned stars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1256
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean19.03
std18.26
cv0.959
sampleLengths
080
13
261
323
447
536
61
72
870
972
104
1131
123
136
1440
1530
163
1733
186
1911
2033
2110
2211
2325
244
257
266
2714
2811
2925
309
311
324
334
3416
356
3614
377
3824
3916
4041
418
4237
4325
4410
457
4626
474
4846
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"been paved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs172
matches
0"were wading"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences141
ratio0.071
matches
0"The figure ahead—short coat, dark hood pulled low—veered sharply into an alley between two shuttered kebab shops, boots splashing through drainage grates."
1"The scent of damp brick, fried grease, and something sharper—iron, maybe blood—clung to the air."
2"That was the first thing she noticed—the temperature."
3"Figures moved between them—hooded, cloaked, some with features too sharp, too still to be human."
4"And the man she’d chased—slim build, dark gloves, a patch of scarred skin above his collar—was already slipping toward a covered stall near the back, where a woman with chalk-white hair weighed something small and pulsing on a brass scale."
5"Another—a hunched figure in a moth-eaten overcoat—offered her a cracked monocle that “sees through lies.”"
6"A silver medallion hung at his throat—St."
7"His eyes flicked to her wrist—her watch."
8"Not toward her—but toward the hatch."
9"A hand emerged—skeletal, wrapped in blackened cloth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount962
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"together under low-hanging"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.034303534303534305
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009355509355509356
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.91
std7.01
cv0.786
sampleLengths
010
115
218
315
422
53
623
715
812
92
104
115
1223
1310
1415
158
1614
1715
1821
191
202
218
2216
2316
2416
2514
2614
274
281
2914
3015
3112
3212
334
347
3512
364
378
383
392
402
412
4240
436
449
4515
463
476
4812
4915
55.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36879432624113473
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then a hand caught her"
1"Then back to her."
2"Then, slowly, he reached beneath"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her breath came in tight"
1"She didn’t hesitate."
2"Her fingers brushed the grip"
3"She took the steps two"
4"Her eyes adjusted slowly."
5"She knew this place."
6"She’d seen the sketches in"
7"They know when you’re not"
8"She ignored them."
9"Her pulse thudded in her"
10"She caught a glimpse of"
11"She spun, gun up, but"
12"He didn’t flinch from the"
13"he said, voice low and"
14"She didn’t lower the weapon"
15"His eyes flicked to her"
16"Her finger twitched on the"
17"He nodded once."
18"She turned just in time"
19"She stared at the open"
ratio0.298
61.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences94
matches
0"Neon signs flickered in smeared"
1"Harlow Quinn sprinted through the"
2"Her breath came in tight"
3"The figure ahead—short coat, dark"
4"She didn’t hesitate."
5"Quinn hit the alley’s mouth"
6"The scent of damp brick,"
7"Her fingers brushed the grip"
8"The suspect ducked between a"
9"Quinn slowed just long enough"
10"A metal door stood slightly"
11"A thin, pulsing blue light"
12"She took the steps two"
13"That was the first thing"
14"The corridor stretched ten feet"
15"The floor had been paved"
16"Quinn stepped inside, lowering her"
17"Her eyes adjusted slowly."
18"Rows of them, crammed together"
19"Figures moved between them—hooded, cloaked,"
ratio0.798
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"To her right, a skeletal"
ratio0.011
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted through the deluge, her trench coat flaring behind her, water surging upward with each stride."
1"The suspect ducked between a rusted fire escape and a dumpster, then vanished down a narrow service stairwell that dropped beneath street level."
2"Rows of them, crammed together under low-hanging paper lanterns that glowed amber and violet."
3"She caught a glimpse of the suspect’s sleeve vanishing behind a curtain of hanging beads."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low and accented"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.5724%