| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 495 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 495 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 488 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told herself, a trick of the mind." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 488 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trap" | | 1 | "silhouette that seemed to absorb the moonlight" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 2.049 | | wordCount | 488 | | matches | | 0 | "not towards her, but away, melting back into the darkness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 3 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.27% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 44 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a pressure in the air, thick and smelling of damp earth and something older—rotted wood, perhaps, or the memory of blood." | | 1 | "The usual nocturnal sounds—owl, cricket, distant traffic—were absent, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated in her bones, like a heartbeat too slow and too deep to be natural." | | 2 | "She’d checked the pendant around her neck—the Heartstone, given by a stranger who’d vanished as quickly as he’d appeared." | | 3 | "But the Grove wasn’t just woods; it was a memory, a place where her father’s law office had stood, where his stern face had loomed over her, demanding she choose a path she’d never wanted." | | 4 | "A faint, metallic tang touched her nostrils—copper, old blood." | | 5 | "She’d faced worse—Evan’s fists, the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations." | | 6 | "The Grove wasn’t just silent; it was listening." |
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| 99.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 495 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.04040404040404041 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00808080808080808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 44 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 44 | | mean | 11.09 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 |
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| 43.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3409090909090909 | | totalSentences | 44 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a pressure in" | | 1 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 2 | "She’d come for a reason," | | 3 | "She’d left her phone behind," | | 4 | "She’d checked the pendant around" | | 5 | "It pulsed faintly, a deep" | | 6 | "It had led her here," | | 7 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 8 | "She took a step forward," | | 9 | "It wasn’t a tree." | | 10 | "It was something else, something" | | 11 | "It watched her, a silhouette" | | 12 | "She’d faced worse—Evan’s fists, the" | | 13 | "She was standing on one." | | 14 | "She stumbled back, tripping over" | | 15 | "She pushed herself up, heart" |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove’s silence wasn’t silence." | | 1 | "It was a pressure in" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, alias Rory, stood" | | 3 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 4 | "She’d come for a reason," | | 5 | "The usual nocturnal sounds—owl, cricket," | | 6 | "She’d left her phone behind," | | 7 | "The Grove existed in a" | | 8 | "She’d checked the pendant around" | | 9 | "It pulsed faintly, a deep" | | 10 | "It had led her here," | | 11 | "The thrumming grew louder, a" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 13 | "The scar on her left" | | 14 | "A reminder of the cage" | | 15 | "She took a step forward," | | 16 | "The air grew colder, denser." | | 17 | "A faint, metallic tang touched" | | 18 | "A shadow detached itself from" | | 19 | "It wasn’t a tree." |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual nocturnal sounds—owl, cricket, distant traffic—were absent, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated in her bones, like a heartbeat too slo…" | | 1 | "The thrumming grew louder, a subsonic pulse that made the hairs on her arms stand on end." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |